I really don't like giving less than my standard 3-stars rating. Honestly. Not because I want to spare the author's feeling, but because I think whatever attempt to actually create/produce something should be commended somehow. Even with movies, I apply the same thing. So, it pains me to give this 2-stars rating, especially since I like Mr. Koehler's stories before.
Here are the reasons why this one doesn't work for me
+ The MCs, Henry and Cameron, and their supposed-tell-to-find-love are left to be desired. I find them unspiring. Henry and Cameron spend most of their time in the book to be with their friends rather than actually interacting. So they meet a couple of times, without really talking or connecting, and I suppose to believe that they start to have feeling for each other, which results in a couple of imaginary sex scenes (totally NOT one of my favorite things in stories), and then fall in love? Uhm, no, sorry. That doesn't work for me.
+ The secondary characters are actually more interesting compared to the MCs. Henry's friend, Darren or Cameron's friends, Van and Thad, and even Cameron's mother, Herculine (!) ... they seem to have more fun and more alive than either Henry and Cameron. A story where secondary characters steal the spotlight from both the MCs, where I actually prefer reading about them than the MCs, is never a good sign for me, particularly.
+ The plot with one of Cameron's friends, Simon, is one that I don't find important. So Cameron said he had a crush on him. I couldn't understand why, exactly. Plus Simon seemed to be a condescending character. It'll be nice to actually have Cameron and Henry interact rather than reading about how Cameron thinks about Simon (see point #1).
+ Similar with the plot with Cameron's nephew, Erik. See point #1 and #3
+ Oh, and I'm also so very annoyed with how Cameron calls his own mother, That Woman. Once or twice, it sounds funny. But not 67 times!!! And I counted this using my Adobe Reader search function. Reading 67 reference of "That Woman" in dialog or description is aggravating for me.
This story might work for other readers, and I always think you should make up your own opinion. But this is definitely a disappointment for yours truly.