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Imperative #1
Imperative: A Tale of Pride and Prejudice, Volume 1
Fitzwilliam Darcy is a man with a great many secrets to keep, one involves his sister, and the other involves his heart. The problem is, he cannot just keep the secrets. They demand attention, and action, and in hopeless times, a good man does not always think things through, even when he is desperately trying to do the right thing for the two most important women in his life. In Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, Fitzwilliam Darcy arrived in Ramsgate before his sister could leave with George Wickham. Things are not so easily remedied in this two-volume variation. This story contains scenes of a mature nature between a happily married couple.
796 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2012
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Linda Wells
10 books92 followersWelcome to my author page; let me tell you a little about myself. I worked for years in the environmental engineering world until I traded my career as a geographer for one as a mom to a challenging and really great son. One day, I saw the 2005 production of Pride and Prejudice, and I was fascinated. I bought a copy of Jane Austen's novel and read it so many times, falling under the spell of her unforgettable characters and story, and I could not help but wonder what happened next for them. That led me in search of Jane Austen Fan Fiction.
I read many stories and then one of my own started nagging at me. So, I found an old notebook and started writing it down. Without it even being finished, I took the plunge and started posting. It was, and continues to be, a fantastic and rewarding experience to watch a story take shape while so many readers follow along. I have many ideas for new stories, and with luck and lots of imagining, they will be written too.
If you would like to email me, I would love to hear from you! Lindawellsbooknut@gmail.com
Books by Linda Wells:
Chance Encounters
Fate and Consequences
Perfect Fit
Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions
Memory: Volume 2, Trials to Bear
Memory: Volume 3, How Far We Have Come
Imperative Volumes 1 and 2
I read many stories and then one of my own started nagging at me. So, I found an old notebook and started writing it down. Without it even being finished, I took the plunge and started posting. It was, and continues to be, a fantastic and rewarding experience to watch a story take shape while so many readers follow along. I have many ideas for new stories, and with luck and lots of imagining, they will be written too.
If you would like to email me, I would love to hear from you! Lindawellsbooknut@gmail.com
Books by Linda Wells:
Chance Encounters
Fate and Consequences
Perfect Fit
Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions
Memory: Volume 2, Trials to Bear
Memory: Volume 3, How Far We Have Come
Imperative Volumes 1 and 2
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April 23, 2018
4/18/2018 - Just finished reading this for the 4th time. Still love it! On to Volume 2!
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5/31/16 -
I really love this book and have read it multiple times. This is at least my 3rd time through. Despite how excellent it is overall, there are valid criticisms in other reviews that I have to concur with.
As Claudine and I have agreed, the start of this book is probably the best in JAFF and immediately grabs you by the heart. It has wonderfully compelling writing, beginning to end. You like chemistry and romance between Darcy and Elizabeth? This is chock full of it. I love all their dialogue, where you really sense how well matched they are to each other. The plot is engrossing, with storylines for various major characters that overlap and enhance each other, with a mystery element in the mix, too.
The negatives are that this is very, very long (and there's a second long book to follow) and somewhat repetitious in areas not essential to keep the major plot points rolling. This time through, I noticed how often Darcy tells Elizabeth that he doesn't know how he would get through his trials without her, that she's his lynchpin, that he can't live without her, or something similar. Usually this precedes an episode of romantic but explicit sexual activity, which happens often. Okay, they're newlyweds and deeply in love, which can somewhat excuse it, but there's no doubt it would be a better book if all this repetition was edited out. Also, the identity of the villain behind Wickham's seduction of Georgiana and attempts on Darcy's life doesn't exactly feel credible, even though it makes for a whopping good story.
Obviously, I highly recommend this despite these reservations. It just grabs me every time and doesn't let go until I finish. And isn't that what a great book is supposed to do?
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5/31/16 -
I really love this book and have read it multiple times. This is at least my 3rd time through. Despite how excellent it is overall, there are valid criticisms in other reviews that I have to concur with.
As Claudine and I have agreed, the start of this book is probably the best in JAFF and immediately grabs you by the heart. It has wonderfully compelling writing, beginning to end. You like chemistry and romance between Darcy and Elizabeth? This is chock full of it. I love all their dialogue, where you really sense how well matched they are to each other. The plot is engrossing, with storylines for various major characters that overlap and enhance each other, with a mystery element in the mix, too.
The negatives are that this is very, very long (and there's a second long book to follow) and somewhat repetitious in areas not essential to keep the major plot points rolling. This time through, I noticed how often Darcy tells Elizabeth that he doesn't know how he would get through his trials without her, that she's his lynchpin, that he can't live without her, or something similar. Usually this precedes an episode of romantic but explicit sexual activity, which happens often. Okay, they're newlyweds and deeply in love, which can somewhat excuse it, but there's no doubt it would be a better book if all this repetition was edited out. Also, the identity of the villain behind Wickham's seduction of Georgiana and attempts on Darcy's life doesn't exactly feel credible, even though it makes for a whopping good story.
Obviously, I highly recommend this despite these reservations. It just grabs me every time and doesn't let go until I finish. And isn't that what a great book is supposed to do?
January 4, 2022
After waiting to read this book for a long time, my take away is -
Proposal, marriage, talk about sex, lots of lusting.
georgiana is pregnant, evil uncle.
sex sex sex falacio sex sex
evil aunts.
falacio sex sex
chrismas, mean Georgiana, Wickham is held prisoner.
sex sex sex sex sex and talk about sex
carriage accident, Darcy almost dies.
minor sex after some recuperation
Longbourn, Mr Bennet is dying, Mary marries.
sex sex sex, falacio falacio
London, Elizabeth is perfect, always knows what to say to everyone on the face of the planet.
sex sex sex sex sex sex sex a falacio
Pemberley, blah blah blah and Finally on their way to Scotland.
Is the second book like this one too? sigh....
Proposal, marriage, talk about sex, lots of lusting.
georgiana is pregnant, evil uncle.
sex sex sex falacio sex sex
evil aunts.
falacio sex sex
chrismas, mean Georgiana, Wickham is held prisoner.
sex sex sex sex sex and talk about sex
carriage accident, Darcy almost dies.
minor sex after some recuperation
Longbourn, Mr Bennet is dying, Mary marries.
sex sex sex, falacio falacio
London, Elizabeth is perfect, always knows what to say to everyone on the face of the planet.
sex sex sex sex sex sex sex a falacio
Pemberley, blah blah blah and Finally on their way to Scotland.
Is the second book like this one too? sigh....
December 4, 2015
4.5 stars
At 791 pages this is a book that you may want to make sure you have some time carved out to give it the attention it will needs before starting it. I bought this book in July of 2012 in paperback as I didn't have a kindle at that time. So when I retired and began posting reviews decided to go back and re-read all my older books in order to post more succinct comments. I have other of Linda Wells' books and have always enjoyed them. Chance Encounters' first chapter is a favorite re-read of mine and Memory is endearing.
In this book we are hit first thing with the main premise - there is no building up and setting the stage. Several paragraphs tell of Darcy in church at the altar for his wedding. BACK FLASH then as to how he got there...again, not many words in and he is pulling Elizabeth into his arms and without much ado is kissing her as Bingley and others (Yes, Caroline is there) walk in on the couple in Netherfield's library. As Darcy whispers in her ear to trust him we read of Elizabeth’s mixed thoughts of how to react to this completely astonishing action on his part.
As I read of Darcy’s thoughts about the two women he cares most about I had a lot of mixed responses on my own. Georgiana seems to take first place and for that I was not ready to forgive him. His marriage was going to center around how to protect her and give her a perfect future. And he plans to treat Elizabeth…HOW? No, no, no: thank goodness for Elizabeth’s answer to his proposed strategy. But even though she gives him her expectation for the start of their married life she does not yet have all the loose ends tied up concerning the “problem”. That doesn’t come until Volume II, which I have also read.
Mr. Bennet is a different man here and I was pleased that not only Darcy but also Elizabeth confronted him with how weak and irresponsible he has been as a father and as the manager of an estate. You will learn that Darcy knew of how despicable one of Mr. Bennet’s decisions was concerning his heir and the plan for Mr. Collins to marry a daughter and thus keep Longbourn “in the family”.
Darcy soon realizes just how unrealistic his plans for his relationship with Elizabeth were and thus be warned that there are some hot and heavy “bedroom” scenes depicted herein. We also (as in canon) read of Elizabeth’s reception by his family. Plus, there are new family members in this story: several are very significant. We have a Judge Harding Darcy, his son, Samuel, and his wife, Susan, who live on Pemberley’s grounds. Their personal history has major weight in the happenings. A cousin, Viscount, Albert Fitzwilliam, the Colonel's older brother and the judge have drug use which leads to dependency and for one leads to hallucinations and violence. Wickham’s evil tendencies are used by another and we have a near-death event for ODC in this saga. Plus, we have members of the Fitzwilliam family attempting to marry Darcy off to one daughter or another…not one, but two!
I got a little frustrated with the delay in plans to “honeymoon” in Scotland. I was leery of the time delay as the evidence of one young lady’s condition was becoming more and more evident, not only to those in the family and household but to other’s who then overhear a gossiping maidservant.
This book is full of angst, drama, sexual chemistry, plotting, mystery and tension with nods to Darcy attempting, again, to take care of all within his circle.
This is NOT a stand-alone book. The last words are “to be continued…” and you are left in the lurch.
At 791 pages this is a book that you may want to make sure you have some time carved out to give it the attention it will needs before starting it. I bought this book in July of 2012 in paperback as I didn't have a kindle at that time. So when I retired and began posting reviews decided to go back and re-read all my older books in order to post more succinct comments. I have other of Linda Wells' books and have always enjoyed them. Chance Encounters' first chapter is a favorite re-read of mine and Memory is endearing.
In this book we are hit first thing with the main premise - there is no building up and setting the stage. Several paragraphs tell of Darcy in church at the altar for his wedding. BACK FLASH then as to how he got there...again, not many words in and he is pulling Elizabeth into his arms and without much ado is kissing her as Bingley and others (Yes, Caroline is there) walk in on the couple in Netherfield's library. As Darcy whispers in her ear to trust him we read of Elizabeth’s mixed thoughts of how to react to this completely astonishing action on his part.
As I read of Darcy’s thoughts about the two women he cares most about I had a lot of mixed responses on my own. Georgiana seems to take first place and for that I was not ready to forgive him. His marriage was going to center around how to protect her and give her a perfect future. And he plans to treat Elizabeth…HOW? No, no, no: thank goodness for Elizabeth’s answer to his proposed strategy. But even though she gives him her expectation for the start of their married life she does not yet have all the loose ends tied up concerning the “problem”. That doesn’t come until Volume II, which I have also read.
Mr. Bennet is a different man here and I was pleased that not only Darcy but also Elizabeth confronted him with how weak and irresponsible he has been as a father and as the manager of an estate. You will learn that Darcy knew of how despicable one of Mr. Bennet’s decisions was concerning his heir and the plan for Mr. Collins to marry a daughter and thus keep Longbourn “in the family”.
Darcy soon realizes just how unrealistic his plans for his relationship with Elizabeth were and thus be warned that there are some hot and heavy “bedroom” scenes depicted herein. We also (as in canon) read of Elizabeth’s reception by his family. Plus, there are new family members in this story: several are very significant. We have a Judge Harding Darcy, his son, Samuel, and his wife, Susan, who live on Pemberley’s grounds. Their personal history has major weight in the happenings. A cousin, Viscount, Albert Fitzwilliam, the Colonel's older brother and the judge have drug use which leads to dependency and for one leads to hallucinations and violence. Wickham’s evil tendencies are used by another and we have a near-death event for ODC in this saga. Plus, we have members of the Fitzwilliam family attempting to marry Darcy off to one daughter or another…not one, but two!
I got a little frustrated with the delay in plans to “honeymoon” in Scotland. I was leery of the time delay as the evidence of one young lady’s condition was becoming more and more evident, not only to those in the family and household but to other’s who then overhear a gossiping maidservant.
This book is full of angst, drama, sexual chemistry, plotting, mystery and tension with nods to Darcy attempting, again, to take care of all within his circle.
This is NOT a stand-alone book. The last words are “to be continued…” and you are left in the lurch.
January 2, 2024
A Different Proposal
Reviewed in Canada on April 22, 2019
Great opening to the book, and a surprising variation to the usual tale of Georgiana and Wickham. I love the love story. Proofreading still needs work, especially if the book is offered outside Kindle Unlimited.
January 23, 2021 Update
In the process of moving my Amazon reviews to my Goodreads record, I am discovering I wrote some awful reviews in 2019. This one is rather lacking and embarrassing. I’ve read all of this author’s books multiple times and love them all—certainly more than this review would indicate.
Reviewed in Canada on April 22, 2019
Great opening to the book, and a surprising variation to the usual tale of Georgiana and Wickham. I love the love story. Proofreading still needs work, especially if the book is offered outside Kindle Unlimited.
January 23, 2021 Update
In the process of moving my Amazon reviews to my Goodreads record, I am discovering I wrote some awful reviews in 2019. This one is rather lacking and embarrassing. I’ve read all of this author’s books multiple times and love them all—certainly more than this review would indicate.
April 5, 2021
One of the best Lizzy and Darcy proposals ever!
Reread: I need more books by Linda Wells. Hoping she is writing more? One of my fave book series by her.
Reread again! I love this book so much.
Reread: Love that first scene!
Reread: First scene! Still love this book.
Reread: I need more books by Linda Wells. Hoping she is writing more? One of my fave book series by her.
Reread again! I love this book so much.
Reread: Love that first scene!
Reread: First scene! Still love this book.
March 28, 2012
Linda Wells has become an auto-buy author for me when it comes to her fantastic Pride and Prejudice 'What-if' novels. Each book has taken a different unique approach to the original story.
In this one, she asks: What if Wickham had succeeded in seducing Georgianna and what if he had help? What if Darcy came up with an incredible, shocking plan to rescue his sister and family's reputation from ignominy? What if Mr. Bennet actually supports the idea of Lizzy being married to Collins for the sake of keeping the estate in the family for secret reasons?
She takes those questions and answers them in an exciting, poignantly romantic way that leads in utterly new directions to get the answers.
The plot is well done and kept me turning the pages breathlessly in certain parts, smiling in others, and tear filled eyes were the result of yet other parts. Once in awhile the pace would drag a bit in Darcy and Lizzy's myriad of tender moments, but they are so good together and for each other that I would not go so far as to say it got boring- just slow occasionally.
The plot has many story lines to follow and does amazingly well not confusing the reader. I like getting several points of view including the villains (and I do not just refer to Wickham).
There are wonderful new characters blended with the old. This tale also assumes that Darcy and Georgie have close Darcy relations in their father's younger brother and his family. There is a larger group of Fitzwilliam relations than just the De Bourghs and Colonel Fitzwilliam from the original. This story includes the Colonel's family too. But more relations does not mean more support for the 'pollution of Pemberley' that Lizzy represents to Lady Catherine, Judge Darcy, and Lord and Lady Matlock who all scheme to marry Darcy and Georgie into their families for their own gain. My favorite new character so far is Darcy's cousin, Samuel Darcy and the character that I most pitied was Albert Fitzwilliam, the Colonel's older brother who wrecked his own life with dissipation. I like the deeper character sketch that Col. Fitz is given. He is so larger than life- amusing, but yet dutiful and loyal. Oh, and I just loathe Wickham in this one. The Bingleys, Hursts, and Bennets are all true to form bringing the most comical relief.
I cannot praise this book enough though I should warn any Austen purists out there that this is probably not the book for you. And for those who blush easily, Darcy and Lizzy are a very passionate couple- get me?
Now, thankfully I was bright enough to buy v. 2 at the same time so I do not have to wait to see what happens next.
In this one, she asks: What if Wickham had succeeded in seducing Georgianna and what if he had help? What if Darcy came up with an incredible, shocking plan to rescue his sister and family's reputation from ignominy? What if Mr. Bennet actually supports the idea of Lizzy being married to Collins for the sake of keeping the estate in the family for secret reasons?
She takes those questions and answers them in an exciting, poignantly romantic way that leads in utterly new directions to get the answers.
The plot is well done and kept me turning the pages breathlessly in certain parts, smiling in others, and tear filled eyes were the result of yet other parts. Once in awhile the pace would drag a bit in Darcy and Lizzy's myriad of tender moments, but they are so good together and for each other that I would not go so far as to say it got boring- just slow occasionally.
The plot has many story lines to follow and does amazingly well not confusing the reader. I like getting several points of view including the villains (and I do not just refer to Wickham).
There are wonderful new characters blended with the old. This tale also assumes that Darcy and Georgie have close Darcy relations in their father's younger brother and his family. There is a larger group of Fitzwilliam relations than just the De Bourghs and Colonel Fitzwilliam from the original. This story includes the Colonel's family too. But more relations does not mean more support for the 'pollution of Pemberley' that Lizzy represents to Lady Catherine, Judge Darcy, and Lord and Lady Matlock who all scheme to marry Darcy and Georgie into their families for their own gain. My favorite new character so far is Darcy's cousin, Samuel Darcy and the character that I most pitied was Albert Fitzwilliam, the Colonel's older brother who wrecked his own life with dissipation. I like the deeper character sketch that Col. Fitz is given. He is so larger than life- amusing, but yet dutiful and loyal. Oh, and I just loathe Wickham in this one. The Bingleys, Hursts, and Bennets are all true to form bringing the most comical relief.
I cannot praise this book enough though I should warn any Austen purists out there that this is probably not the book for you. And for those who blush easily, Darcy and Lizzy are a very passionate couple- get me?
Now, thankfully I was bright enough to buy v. 2 at the same time so I do not have to wait to see what happens next.
February 2, 2021
It's everything great I've ever heard about it. I loved it. No, it isn't perfect. Those who don't like their JAFF sizzling hot, find something else. As for that I didn't find any of it gratuitous, the relations were between ODC were out of love. Those who demand complete Regency accuracy, find something else. I agree, but don't care that the story is drawn out. After years of putting it off I finally decided to get to it and I'm very glad I did. Even with 790 pages I believe I'll be reading this again in the future. On to Book Two.
Last year (2020) I saw a Facebook post by a noted JAFF author what most memorable scenes from JAFF readers could recall as their favorites. At least four people named scenes from Linda Wells books and Imperative in particular. This gave me the conviction to get it on my 2021 reading list.
I recommend this to JAFF readers who will take the time to read about the premise and some reviews to know what they are in for.
Last year (2020) I saw a Facebook post by a noted JAFF author what most memorable scenes from JAFF readers could recall as their favorites. At least four people named scenes from Linda Wells books and Imperative in particular. This gave me the conviction to get it on my 2021 reading list.
I recommend this to JAFF readers who will take the time to read about the premise and some reviews to know what they are in for.
March 27, 2013
If this book had a rating it would be NC-17. There are many explicit love scenes between the happy couple.
This is a very different and slightly dark twist on Pride and Prejudice. It is also one of a two book series so the end of the book is only the middle of the story.
But this book is so much more than an erotic P & P retelling and that makes the excessive and graphic sex scenes the more tedious. There is a mystery, someone close to Darcy is working with Wickham, someone wants him dead and everyone wants his money. There is really great character development of Jane, Mary, Georgiana, Anne deBourgh, and new characters; Darcy's paternal Uncle, his wife and son who move the story forward.
But with god as my witness I never wanted to think about regency condoms.
This is a very different and slightly dark twist on Pride and Prejudice. It is also one of a two book series so the end of the book is only the middle of the story.
But this book is so much more than an erotic P & P retelling and that makes the excessive and graphic sex scenes the more tedious. There is a mystery, someone close to Darcy is working with Wickham, someone wants him dead and everyone wants his money. There is really great character development of Jane, Mary, Georgiana, Anne deBourgh, and new characters; Darcy's paternal Uncle, his wife and son who move the story forward.
But with god as my witness I never wanted to think about regency condoms.
August 24, 2016
My Rating: 4.5 Stars
Wow! What a beginning that grabs and holds you. I had a hard time putting this book down and enjoyed all the familiar characters as well new and different ones that are incorporated into this story. As other have gone into more explanation of the plot line, I wont here. This is definitely not to canon and takes place after Ramsgate when Georgiana is found after going off with Wickham.
Darcy is a tortured soul and must take action quickly if he is to save his sister. Elizabeth is nursing her sister, Jane, at Netherfield when Darcy makes an unexpected move which results in them quickly marrying. Darcy asks Elizabeth to 'trust me'...what ensues is a tale of love, betrayal, heartache, secrets, and lies.
As the book description indicates, there is a definite mature theme running through this book. Though it is between a newly married couple, I felt it broke up the story just too much. Some of these scenes could have been left to one's imagination and would have worked better rather than explicit detail.
Wow! What a beginning that grabs and holds you. I had a hard time putting this book down and enjoyed all the familiar characters as well new and different ones that are incorporated into this story. As other have gone into more explanation of the plot line, I wont here. This is definitely not to canon and takes place after Ramsgate when Georgiana is found after going off with Wickham.
Darcy is a tortured soul and must take action quickly if he is to save his sister. Elizabeth is nursing her sister, Jane, at Netherfield when Darcy makes an unexpected move which results in them quickly marrying. Darcy asks Elizabeth to 'trust me'...what ensues is a tale of love, betrayal, heartache, secrets, and lies.
As the book description indicates, there is a definite mature theme running through this book. Though it is between a newly married couple, I felt it broke up the story just too much. Some of these scenes could have been left to one's imagination and would have worked better rather than explicit detail.
January 27, 2020
Epic variation of Pride and Prejudice
Compelling, thrilling, substantial book with a mystery twist and several steamy interludes.
A forced marriage scenario while the Bennet sisters stayed at Netherfield.
Darcy was in a desperate need of a wife after his sisters lengthy Ramsgate affair and begged Elizabeth to marry and trust him.
She decided to acquiesce to both requests and the love between our dear couple developed early in this book. The drama was by no means over as outside forces were working against them...
This is the first installment of two books, meaning that the mystery is not resolved in this book but continues in the second volume.
Heartily recommend this book.
Rated: Mature
Compelling, thrilling, substantial book with a mystery twist and several steamy interludes.
A forced marriage scenario while the Bennet sisters stayed at Netherfield.
Darcy was in a desperate need of a wife after his sisters lengthy Ramsgate affair and begged Elizabeth to marry and trust him.
She decided to acquiesce to both requests and the love between our dear couple developed early in this book. The drama was by no means over as outside forces were working against them...
This is the first installment of two books, meaning that the mystery is not resolved in this book but continues in the second volume.
Heartily recommend this book.
Rated: Mature
March 5, 2019
Quite the epic of troubles
Reading a novel such as this is a balm. It is so well written, so serious, so real so meaningful that it shines a light on how good a P&P variation can be.
It’s the first of two books but really 2 or 3 books in itself. Stepping back from it, it is a good primer how everyone should be conscious about how overpowering hard drug addiction is.
A really good story. I recommend this book highly.
Reading a novel such as this is a balm. It is so well written, so serious, so real so meaningful that it shines a light on how good a P&P variation can be.
It’s the first of two books but really 2 or 3 books in itself. Stepping back from it, it is a good primer how everyone should be conscious about how overpowering hard drug addiction is.
A really good story. I recommend this book highly.
March 8, 2018
The old saying of not judging a book by it's cover truly applies here. It felt like a ," You've been called to the principle's office" feel. What lies inside is much better.
I read Chance Encounters a couple weeks ago and was really intriqued to read more by the author. She definetly gives you your moneys worth. Her books are longer than most written now and I love that! Mr. Bennet was so much better in this book than in her last book. I also love how she brings D&E together so much sooner than many other variations do. They may not have consumated the wedding right away but there was plenty of affection shared. In this book Darcy compromises Lizzy in front of an audience and he proposes marriage to her and is accepted. A much different personality than in the original.
Darcy also had a make over but he was very tolerable I can guarentee you that. I did question Elizabeth's reaction on their wedding night. I felt her being an innoscent should have made her more bashful but instead she acted as though she saw naked men all the time not to mention she fondled him as though it was a normal Saturday activity with no surprise from him. I just felt it took you out of the time period to steal away that innoscents. Woman just were'nt informed on such delicate matters before the marriage bed in the time period unless you were a loose woman. Elizabeth was definetly not that but that was truly the only matter I found troublesome the rest was a pleasure to read and I look forward to reading the next in the series.
I read Chance Encounters a couple weeks ago and was really intriqued to read more by the author. She definetly gives you your moneys worth. Her books are longer than most written now and I love that! Mr. Bennet was so much better in this book than in her last book. I also love how she brings D&E together so much sooner than many other variations do. They may not have consumated the wedding right away but there was plenty of affection shared. In this book Darcy compromises Lizzy in front of an audience and he proposes marriage to her and is accepted. A much different personality than in the original.
Darcy also had a make over but he was very tolerable I can guarentee you that. I did question Elizabeth's reaction on their wedding night. I felt her being an innoscent should have made her more bashful but instead she acted as though she saw naked men all the time not to mention she fondled him as though it was a normal Saturday activity with no surprise from him. I just felt it took you out of the time period to steal away that innoscents. Woman just were'nt informed on such delicate matters before the marriage bed in the time period unless you were a loose woman. Elizabeth was definetly not that but that was truly the only matter I found troublesome the rest was a pleasure to read and I look forward to reading the next in the series.
February 24, 2017
The plot is very entertaining. But sometimes I felt that the story was so long and prolixly that I almost forgot about what I was reading. And, oh, this has a second volume!
March 18, 2012
Another great book from Linda Wells. I appologise for not writing this review sooner as I just had to go and start reading Vol 2. What can I say!! This alternative story was well done and Darcy is Darcy in every page with Elizabeth. The scene from P&P 2005 with Darcy asking Elizabeth to marry him the 2nd time is so wonderful that I think we all swoon just thinking about it. Anyway I feel that way throughout this book. There's a great story but the romance is still there and I loved every minute of it!!
This alternative starts out in Hertshire with Elizabeth helping her sister get well at Netherfield. The difference is that Darcy is brooding because he did not recover Georgina in time. It took him 4mo to find and recover her. Anyway he is trying to keep her secret and save her reputation. He has feelings for Elizabeth but like the original he tries to deny it but in the end he realises he needs her to help him with Georgiana and to save the Darcy name. This is where the story takes off. We are introduced to new characters and the road is long and very interesting. Lots of intrigue and this story ends just where it should to lead you into the 2nd book. I'm half way into the next book and so far it's still wonderful. That's what so good about a good BOOK, you never want it to end and thank goodness Linda knows how to write a nice long story!!! :) I highly recomend to Jane Austen fans.
This alternative starts out in Hertshire with Elizabeth helping her sister get well at Netherfield. The difference is that Darcy is brooding because he did not recover Georgina in time. It took him 4mo to find and recover her. Anyway he is trying to keep her secret and save her reputation. He has feelings for Elizabeth but like the original he tries to deny it but in the end he realises he needs her to help him with Georgiana and to save the Darcy name. This is where the story takes off. We are introduced to new characters and the road is long and very interesting. Lots of intrigue and this story ends just where it should to lead you into the 2nd book. I'm half way into the next book and so far it's still wonderful. That's what so good about a good BOOK, you never want it to end and thank goodness Linda knows how to write a nice long story!!! :) I highly recomend to Jane Austen fans.
April 26, 2018
I finally read it. It had been on my TBR shelf for about 6 years, but I did it, and I'm so glad that I did. It was very well written with an engaging storyline. I've read quite a bit of JAFF and this is one of the best written stories I've come across. There's no way I could rate it less than 5 stars with the quality of the writing.
With that in mind, I have to say that it was insanely long. Basically every conversation Elizabeth and Darcy have with each other, and others, is documented in this first volume, and I don't think it was completely necessary. There's a lot of conversations.
The characterization is good, but I did find that Darcy and Lizzy are very much an idealized version. There's no arguments, Darcy is this social being now, and Lizzy has lost her judgey ways. There's so much drama happening elsewhere in the story that I can see why there was no drama written between the couple themselves, but that's not really the D&E we know.
With that in mind, I have to say that it was insanely long. Basically every conversation Elizabeth and Darcy have with each other, and others, is documented in this first volume, and I don't think it was completely necessary. There's a lot of conversations.
The characterization is good, but I did find that Darcy and Lizzy are very much an idealized version. There's no arguments, Darcy is this social being now, and Lizzy has lost her judgey ways. There's so much drama happening elsewhere in the story that I can see why there was no drama written between the couple themselves, but that's not really the D&E we know.
June 29, 2020
Seeing all the good reviews this book has and considering that I liked another book from this author well enough, I was really looking forward this one. Sadly it's been disappointing. The beginning felt flat and really forced. I think another reviewer commented on it as well. I think a prologue showing Darcy's thought and how he came to think about a compromise would have been good and the flow would have been better and not so abrupt.
Another thing that I couldn't get past was Elizabeth's "realization" of her feelings for Darcy. She just looks into his eyes and later he tells her that she must like him so that's it? Perhaps this doesn't bother others so much but I really hated it. To me it seems that a lot of vital things in the firsts chapters were "resolved" in a simple way and too fast and other more redundant and secondary matters were dragged and over explained. In the same pattern, the way Elizabeth accepted the proposal was too OOC for me.
I tried to keep reading to see If it would get better as so many people seem to enjoy it but sadly it became worse. I started skipping entire pages (something I don't really do). Darcy's solution for the "problem" and attitude bothered me so much that I wanted to put the book down (I was so offended on Elizabeth's behalf). I skipped more parts to see how it would develop and, even though Elizabeth's idea is better it still left a bitter taste in my mouth. As I said, maybe this things doesn't bother other people so much but considering that instead of feeling better with the plot as it progresses I felt worse and started to accumulate one bad opinion over another and the book *really* dragged on and on, I can't recommend this book at all.
I'm really disappointed because I wanted to love it and was looking forward a long reading but this one (and the sequel from what I have read from the other reviews) is not for me and not worth the money I paid. Hope that I can enjoy other books from this author but I will be more cautious all things considered.
Another thing that I couldn't get past was Elizabeth's "realization" of her feelings for Darcy. She just looks into his eyes and later he tells her that she must like him so that's it? Perhaps this doesn't bother others so much but I really hated it. To me it seems that a lot of vital things in the firsts chapters were "resolved" in a simple way and too fast and other more redundant and secondary matters were dragged and over explained. In the same pattern, the way Elizabeth accepted the proposal was too OOC for me.
I tried to keep reading to see If it would get better as so many people seem to enjoy it but sadly it became worse. I started skipping entire pages (something I don't really do). Darcy's solution for the "problem" and attitude bothered me so much that I wanted to put the book down (I was so offended on Elizabeth's behalf). I skipped more parts to see how it would develop and, even though Elizabeth's idea is better it still left a bitter taste in my mouth. As I said, maybe this things doesn't bother other people so much but considering that instead of feeling better with the plot as it progresses I felt worse and started to accumulate one bad opinion over another and the book *really* dragged on and on, I can't recommend this book at all.
I'm really disappointed because I wanted to love it and was looking forward a long reading but this one (and the sequel from what I have read from the other reviews) is not for me and not worth the money I paid. Hope that I can enjoy other books from this author but I will be more cautious all things considered.
February 2, 2014
G was tricked by W into thinking they were married and ended up getting pregnant. Then he abandoned her. D needs to save his sister and realized his love for E. In autumn at Netherfield, when E and J are visiting, he impulsively asks her to marry him and she agrees. The plan is to pass the baby off as their own, although E comes up with another plan. In this book, you meet many characters and it is sometimes difficult to determine who is friend, family or foe.
The story is not bad, but I didn't enjoy reading this book. It is very long, but not in that great epic novel where you enjoy living alongside the characters for a few extra days while devouring the book. This book is tedious to read. For one, during conversations, Ms. Wells chooses not to credit who is saying what. Many times I found myself in the middle of a conversation only to realize I incorrectly guessed who said what. I have to go back to the beginning and reread the passage, spending lots of time trying to decipher the scene. Additionally, without helpful adverbs to describe the tone of a conversation, I've found myself confused after an exchange to suddenly realize I just read an argument. Again, I have to reread an exchange a second time with a different perspective. Isn't 90%of communication nonverbal? This author doesn't help the reader by descriing the scene during exchanges.
It is difficult for me to give up in the middle of a book... so I trudged through this one. But this book is only the first volume of 2. And unfortunately, the first volume doesn't have enough of a satisfying conclusion to avoid the second. So I might decide to give up on this one. My time is too precious to try to make it through another 700+ page book written by this author.
The story is not bad, but I didn't enjoy reading this book. It is very long, but not in that great epic novel where you enjoy living alongside the characters for a few extra days while devouring the book. This book is tedious to read. For one, during conversations, Ms. Wells chooses not to credit who is saying what. Many times I found myself in the middle of a conversation only to realize I incorrectly guessed who said what. I have to go back to the beginning and reread the passage, spending lots of time trying to decipher the scene. Additionally, without helpful adverbs to describe the tone of a conversation, I've found myself confused after an exchange to suddenly realize I just read an argument. Again, I have to reread an exchange a second time with a different perspective. Isn't 90%of communication nonverbal? This author doesn't help the reader by descriing the scene during exchanges.
It is difficult for me to give up in the middle of a book... so I trudged through this one. But this book is only the first volume of 2. And unfortunately, the first volume doesn't have enough of a satisfying conclusion to avoid the second. So I might decide to give up on this one. My time is too precious to try to make it through another 700+ page book written by this author.
October 10, 2016
This two book set is one of my top five P&P variations, and Linda Wells is in my top five favorite authors, both in JAFF and in general. This story has it all, humour, action and adventure, love and romance, and while there is plenty of angst, it is not between our dearest couple, and only serves to strengthen their love and relationship. In terms of character development, the main core characters are all well developed. The story starts off with a cannon blast to canon, hooking you in from the very beginning, and keeps a strong hold of your heartstrings throughout. The first book covers only the first few months of their relationship, but you are pulled in so completely into Darcy's and Elizabeth's world.
May 12, 2023
Hated this.
Read
October 23, 2023DNF. The beginning of this story is so far-fetched, not to say ridiculous, that I couldn’t continue reading it beyond more than a few pages. It didn’t improve.
April 6, 2024
Entertaining
This variation can be intense and insightful and fun and emotional. I have enjoyed reading it. Ms. Well's has taken the initial premise and been able to add a real-life experience to her writing. The well developed storyline is entertaining.
This variation can be intense and insightful and fun and emotional. I have enjoyed reading it. Ms. Well's has taken the initial premise and been able to add a real-life experience to her writing. The well developed storyline is entertaining.
July 28, 2015
This is another Linda Wells book where it was five stars for about 50% of the book. Then the pacing slows, and gets so bogged down that I get frustrated and start skipping parts. Conversations began repeating, no progress was made, and by the end I felt little was achieved in nearly 800 pages.
In this variation, Georgiana elopes with Wickham. He goes through a sham ceremony so she believes they are really married, but they, of course, aren't. They spend 4 months as husband and wife and by the time Darcy and the Colonel retrieve her, she is pregnant.
While Darcy is in Netherfield, he learns that Mr Bennet plans to practically force Elizabeth to marry Collins. Frustrated and desperate he purposely compromises Elizabeth while she's there with Jane, seeing it as a way to save her from Collins, and with the idea that they can fake Georgiana's baby as their own.
Pros: I am definitely finding that I prefer the books that Elizabeth discovers her love for Darcy early. This was a very sweet and romantic book. I also liked the mystery part of it. I was unsure what was happening at first and who was bad! That was fun. I enjoy all the new characters. Linda Wells is definitely very talented in creating new characters and implementing them in the storyline. I am mostly tempted to pick up the second volume simply because I want to find out what happens to the judge, Susan, and Samuel. I also find it interesting that this one of the few books that I managed at least a little sympathy for Wickham! He and others are more shades of grey, rather than black or white. I liked that complexity.
Con: Like Wells' other books there was a lot of sex. I do not mean to complain about that altogether, because sometimes they seemed so sweet and lovely, and I think it makes the book even more exciting. It's just the sheer volume of of sex scenes. This book could be half the size if they could eliminate just some of them! Then there's the sheer volume of repeat conversations. Sometimes Elizabeth would have s conversation with Darcy then with Jane then with her father, and we'd have to read it each time. It got repetitive. Georgiana's character annoyed me greatly as well in this variation. Finally, because, perhaps, this is only a volume one, I felt like I read those 800 pages with very little conclusions. Everything is still up in the air it feels. They have a better plan than the initial plan for Georgiana and Wickham's baby, but I still don't think it's a great plan...so I don't know. Is it worth purchasing the second book to find out? Looking at the reviews for it, I'm seeing a lot of the same complaints I have for this book. So I just don't know!
In this variation, Georgiana elopes with Wickham. He goes through a sham ceremony so she believes they are really married, but they, of course, aren't. They spend 4 months as husband and wife and by the time Darcy and the Colonel retrieve her, she is pregnant.
While Darcy is in Netherfield, he learns that Mr Bennet plans to practically force Elizabeth to marry Collins. Frustrated and desperate he purposely compromises Elizabeth while she's there with Jane, seeing it as a way to save her from Collins, and with the idea that they can fake Georgiana's baby as their own.
Pros: I am definitely finding that I prefer the books that Elizabeth discovers her love for Darcy early. This was a very sweet and romantic book. I also liked the mystery part of it. I was unsure what was happening at first and who was bad! That was fun. I enjoy all the new characters. Linda Wells is definitely very talented in creating new characters and implementing them in the storyline. I am mostly tempted to pick up the second volume simply because I want to find out what happens to the judge, Susan, and Samuel. I also find it interesting that this one of the few books that I managed at least a little sympathy for Wickham! He and others are more shades of grey, rather than black or white. I liked that complexity.
Con: Like Wells' other books there was a lot of sex. I do not mean to complain about that altogether, because sometimes they seemed so sweet and lovely, and I think it makes the book even more exciting. It's just the sheer volume of of sex scenes. This book could be half the size if they could eliminate just some of them! Then there's the sheer volume of repeat conversations. Sometimes Elizabeth would have s conversation with Darcy then with Jane then with her father, and we'd have to read it each time. It got repetitive. Georgiana's character annoyed me greatly as well in this variation. Finally, because, perhaps, this is only a volume one, I felt like I read those 800 pages with very little conclusions. Everything is still up in the air it feels. They have a better plan than the initial plan for Georgiana and Wickham's baby, but I still don't think it's a great plan...so I don't know. Is it worth purchasing the second book to find out? Looking at the reviews for it, I'm seeing a lot of the same complaints I have for this book. So I just don't know!
October 10, 2013
After reading Linda Wells' Memory series, I was anxious to read something new by her. Last year when I found out she had a new series, out I was cautious to start it so soon. One reason was because anytime I read any JAFF, I fall into the Regency world and it is difficult for me to get out of it. Secondly, Linda Wells' stories are so long, that they take some dedication to get through them. With my Nursing School schedule, it his hard to dedicate so much time to reading them. But alas I was missing my Pride and Prejudice friends and finally gave in and purchased both books.
I have to admit that the story started off on a kind of weird note. I beginning did not flow, and it just immediately jumped right in to to Darcy kissing Lizzy at Netherfield, and Lizzy immediately agreeing to marry him, since she was "compromised." Yes it started the action off right away, but I would have liked to seen a little more build up in the beginning. Mr Darcy, is eager to marry right away, since in this version, he was not able to stop Wichkam and his sister in time at Ramsgate, and his sister is now with child. He is hoping to marry right away and raise his sister's baby as his own.
Linda Wells' introduces us to some new characters, that I felt enhanced the story beautifully. But one thing that she does in this book, which she had also done with her Memory series, she dampens the relationship between Mr. Bennet and Lizzy. I believe that is one relationship that you can not alter. It was an enjoyable 791 pages. Not my favorite JAFF, as that lies with the Darcy Saga by Sharon Lathon. But I am eager to start the 2nd book.
I have to admit that the story started off on a kind of weird note. I beginning did not flow, and it just immediately jumped right in to to Darcy kissing Lizzy at Netherfield, and Lizzy immediately agreeing to marry him, since she was "compromised." Yes it started the action off right away, but I would have liked to seen a little more build up in the beginning. Mr Darcy, is eager to marry right away, since in this version, he was not able to stop Wichkam and his sister in time at Ramsgate, and his sister is now with child. He is hoping to marry right away and raise his sister's baby as his own.
Linda Wells' introduces us to some new characters, that I felt enhanced the story beautifully. But one thing that she does in this book, which she had also done with her Memory series, she dampens the relationship between Mr. Bennet and Lizzy. I believe that is one relationship that you can not alter. It was an enjoyable 791 pages. Not my favorite JAFF, as that lies with the Darcy Saga by Sharon Lathon. But I am eager to start the 2nd book.
August 1, 2021
Unfortunately, I decided to bail on this story because it is sorely in need of an editor. If this didn’t start as fan fiction, the author is certainly falls into one of its pitfalls - so much writing and very little story or plot. There are pieces of a really interesting story here, but it is FAR too long. There are COUNTLESS scenes that are entirely unnecessary to the plot, so the story moves at an absolutely glacial pace. There were also several conversations that were so absurdly inappropriate, they would not occur in polite society today, let alone 200 years ago when polite conversation was far less frank. Together with the length and sheer number of these scenes, I just couldn’t do it.
I saw some reviewers thought this amounted to porn. I disagree with that sentiment. I think there is certainly passion here between a married couple, but that wasn’t my issue. I know some purists want things chaste or to fade to black, but I certainly didn’t think this was anything beyond tame romance levels. There may have been a lot of intimate scenes, but that is just because it needs edited down like the rest of the story IMO.
I kept reading because I think there is a very interesting story buried somewhere, but after hours of nothing really happening and endless conversations that seemed wholly inconsistent with the era, I had to give up. There is a good mystery, but I just didn’t have the patience to get to the end of this book and a Vol. 2.
I saw some reviewers thought this amounted to porn. I disagree with that sentiment. I think there is certainly passion here between a married couple, but that wasn’t my issue. I know some purists want things chaste or to fade to black, but I certainly didn’t think this was anything beyond tame romance levels. There may have been a lot of intimate scenes, but that is just because it needs edited down like the rest of the story IMO.
I kept reading because I think there is a very interesting story buried somewhere, but after hours of nothing really happening and endless conversations that seemed wholly inconsistent with the era, I had to give up. There is a good mystery, but I just didn’t have the patience to get to the end of this book and a Vol. 2.
September 9, 2012
Let me preference this by saying I have truly enjoyed all of Linda Wells previous offerings set in Regency times, however I struggled to read this particular story and ended up skipping large chunks to get to the end.
This story is not badly written in any way, but to me, it was too bogged down in original characters and plot for me to truly enjoy the story. I found it dragged more often than not, making it difficult to read through to the end. I really wish I could have liked this novel better, but honestly, it was just too much detail and too slow pacing for me to really enjoy.
This story is not badly written in any way, but to me, it was too bogged down in original characters and plot for me to truly enjoy the story. I found it dragged more often than not, making it difficult to read through to the end. I really wish I could have liked this novel better, but honestly, it was just too much detail and too slow pacing for me to really enjoy.
November 12, 2016
Book was good extremely long and contains a lot of graphic sex
April 7, 2018
The beginning was definitely a 5 stars, and has grown to become one of my favorites of all the JAFF
May 23, 2020
This has always been my "go to" Regency Pride & Prejudice variation. It's like an old friend to me, and when I want something familiar to read, a JAFF that will give me the warm fuzzies, I always turn to this story. I love this Darcy - his passion, his strength, his manliness - but also the way he is so in love with Elizabeth, and is completely undone by her. And Elizabeth is bold and strong - the obstinate, headstrong girl we all love - who is fiercely protective of Darcy. They have a passionate, steamy relationship, but they also tease and play and argue and apologize, like any newlywed couple. I love that they come together rather quickly at the start of the story, and the angst (there is plenty) is not between them, but rather, against them. This is a must read for any Regency JAFF fan.
June 5, 2023
What an incredibly well written and thought out story. The emotional anguish is low but throughout the whole book. This authors detailing of events and characters kept me wanting to know more. I highly recommend this dtory, with the understanding of it having mature scenes within the context.
Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship is truly tested time and time again. Mr Bennet is downright awful as is most of the family. The Fitzwilliam family is just as bad, surprisingly the relationship between colonel Fitzwilliam and Darcy surprised me.
Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship is truly tested time and time again. Mr Bennet is downright awful as is most of the family. The Fitzwilliam family is just as bad, surprisingly the relationship between colonel Fitzwilliam and Darcy surprised me.
November 22, 2023
Well- crafted and satisfying
I thoroughly enjoyed this compelling and complex story as well as the beautiful intimate and mature connection between Elizabeth and Darcy. I enjoyed the various characters in the story and how they changed and developed through book and look forward to seeing them develop further in the sequel.
Occasionally I had difficulty following some of the dialogue in terms of who was speaking, But this was but a small detraction from my overall enjoyment.
I thoroughly enjoyed this compelling and complex story as well as the beautiful intimate and mature connection between Elizabeth and Darcy. I enjoyed the various characters in the story and how they changed and developed through book and look forward to seeing them develop further in the sequel.
Occasionally I had difficulty following some of the dialogue in terms of who was speaking, But this was but a small detraction from my overall enjoyment.
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