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231 pages, Paperback
Published July 19, 2023
This straightforward narrative describes Mary Tudor’s early life from a third person point of view bias to Mary’s thoughts and feelings, unlike other Mary Tudor novels (Plaidy, Arnopp, and Lewis) that describe Mary’s life as a remembering later in life. This fresh approach presents Mary’s view of life and the harshness endured by her father’s need for a male heir until her coronation at 37. The reader becomes part of Mary’s life as she moves from “the pearl of [Henry’s] world” to a mistreated servant. Ms. Schiavo allows readers to feel how Mary was loved and cherished and thrown away because she was a diplomatic tool and promised to several of her father’s allies. The book focuses on Mary’s relationships with her half-sister, Elizabeth, and Lady Margaret. The bond between Mary and Margaret is a genuine, long-lasting friendship with its ups and downs. Mary’s bitterness, jealousy, and anger result from her father’s abuse. Mary’s relationships with Elizabeth and Lady Margaret keep the reader wanting more.
Reviews are subjective and depend entirely on the reader. In Her Own Right – A Novel of Lady Mary Tudor is a historical fiction novel, and the author explains this. Still, there are a few challenges this reader encountered. I struggled with Chapter 1, 1518, when Mary was two. While it is well-documented that the dialogue between Mary and the French ambassador took place and that she was a gifted child, the rest of Mary’s dialogue and actions in this chapter portray a much older child. A two-year-old child has limits, and there are certain developmental milestones for creating a believable character. At two years of age, a child is not receiving a “rigorous education” because they are incapable of thinking or speaking critically; they begin to understand other people and have thoughts and feelings that are different than their own.
The author made a judgment call balancing the sense of history with enough modernity in dialogue to be understandable for a modern reader. There are anachronisms used in the narrative and characters’ dialogue that the English people of the novel’s setting would have been doubtful to say. For example. ‘holler’ is an American word used in the late 1670s. The term’ jilt’ is a 17th-century word, and ‘jellyfish,’ used figuratively for a person of weak character, was not in use until later. There are many medieval insults Henry VIII would have used instead.
Moreover, when speaking with a king/queen, one tends to use formal language and would not use idioms, ‘been down this road before.’ Some conversations spoke too much like a modern person or someone from the recent past, not 16th-century royal England. For a well-read logophile, there are parts where I stopped and questioned the language used. However, other readers may keep reading because the dialogue is not usual enough to pull them out of the story. Depending on the target audience, language immerses the reader in the story.
A three-star book is a good read. I recommend you read the novel for a new approach to Mary Tudor’s early life.