I'm always pleased when there is a good book out for NZ boys. I really felt this could have been a great book, the relationships between the main character and his grandparents is just great, same with his Dad, even the relationship with his best friend is great. Loved Hex the cow! There are great passages in it, especially when Will is alone in the hills with his thoughts. Then it has some moments where a big red pen could have slashed and burned the conversations between the teenagers, and the conversations with the Mum as wel,l and the journal. Will himself is great, his thoughts, his attitudes are really well done but the constant jarring and irritating intrusion of the journal meant that I skipped all that. It wasn't necessary for the story and it made me cranky.
A book that had huge potential and which I bought because Kate de Goldi recommended it, left me disappointed that it wasn't consistent enough. What a shame. This authors next book though, I'm sure, will be much much better because he can write for teenagers, he perhaps needs to run the book past some current (and critical) teenagers to check it for it's teenage conversation first. Disappointed.