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266 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2012
From the sky, it was impossible to tell who was legal and who was illegal and where one zone finished and the next began. OK, that might seem like a trite and sentimental observation worthy of one of John's disciples to be followed by a hippy hymn, but tell me I'm wrong, if you can."I liked it for the most part. Valentina reminded me of a dystopian version of Sophie FitzOsborne in A Brief History of Montmaray but occasionally a bit childish with unfortunate echoes of Marguerite's cliched sarcasm in A Thousand Pieces of You. She did, though, win over the reader with passages like "At this point, I wish I could relate some danger that did befall us, or a growing sense of danger and threat, a darkening of the sky, an unshakeable feeling of foreboding. The truth is that for the rest of the morning we drove leisurely across the mountains, where the only living things we saw were some sheep and a herd of ponies...." or this:
"I knew I was heading into dangerous waters where thousands of girls had perished before.I really understand him. He's not as bad as people say. I see the real him. I can save him.
Yeah, sister, believe that if you must. But I think two paracetemol and a large dose of reality might be a better bet
"The Valley of the Thrushes was a communication-free zone and I didn't look forward to a week without my beautiful, mobile technological friendOkay, so we get the fact that Valentina is selfish and spoiled, and in fact, McDermott does her character quite well. She understands herself better than her older counterparts like Tris. And of course,
"It wasn't exactly a riot of colour up there in the Valley of the Thrushes"There were also times I couldn't understand whether she was being sarcastic or not during her visit to the Valley of the Thrushes ( I also did not understand why she went there in the first place though that was more me than the book I think)
"You could explore your inner creativity through creative writing, healing dance, healing art, 'finding your inner voice', traditional drumming. Or you could do yoga or meditation. Wow, I could hardly contain my excitement! Group meditation, individual meditation.... walking meditation. The last one meant you walked around on your own and thought deep thoughts. That appealed to meOkay, so if she was being sarcastic, why did McDermott use an exclamation mark. If she wasn't, well, what self-respecting fourteen year old girl gets excited over meditation?