In a word? Torture.
For the first book, I expected a bit more clarification about the world itself, the structure of her new status etc. It is clear that it is a Victorian setting, but the order is still unclear. There are Fates, Elders, counselors, lieutenants, trackers and reapers as well as other positions. I do not understand why she is a reaper if she hates it so much. Why was she chosen? Why hasn't she asked for another job if it is possible? If she is so miserable and sad while doing it, then why not just ask them to let her truly die? The story just gives me more and more unanswered questions.
The plot is disappointing. I expected some real action and mystery. But mostly it is just about the heroine's "relations" and her whining about her life. Boring.
The heroine is truly awful. She is whiny and annoying. First she says she is STILL absolutely in love with her Scottish lover, then she is hurt, because she was (is?) in love with Jack an he didn't share his secrets with her, then she is absolutely sure she is in love with Mason, but still has feeling for her Scottish lover. For the love of.. Can you just decide, please?! I am sure it was meant to portray her sensibility and loving nature, but right now all I can say is that she is falling in "love" with every man she sleeps with, because she is a weak person who needs a man "to hold her"and "protect her", which is the annoying part. It is a real mockery of "love". The whiny part comes when she is whining instead of helping with the investigation. She doesn't say anything she has seen (so why is she surprised when they extract it by force?), she doesn't help, instead just being whiny and weak - "Oh, I am so tired", "Oh, I don't want to see this", "Oh I hate my job" and of course "Oh, my heart won't survive this" and "Oh, my heart won't survive that". Gag.
The hero (Mason) is almost perfect. In the beginning it is very clear that he is in love with her and tends to her every whim. But then suddenly he is in denial about his feelings. Like one moment he is all "from the first moment I saw her I know she would bring me nothing but heartache, but I want her body and soul" and then suddenly "this is just casual relations, no heart involved ". He keeps switching from her being the love of his life to her being just a hookup. Totally unnecessary. Or just badly written. Depends on how you look at it, I guess.
So to sum up, I did not enjoy this book. It annoyed me more than entertained me.
Cover - 4
Plot - 1
Heroine - 1
Hero- 3.5
Romance - 1
Avoiding cliche - 2
Fluency - 2
Ending - 2
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Overall - 2.0625