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Cold. Confusion. Fear. This is how it all begins.

Waking up without your memory in a cell and bound by chains is terrifying.

Two nameless strangers, a man and a woman, find themselves imprisoned together. With no memories of their own identities, let alone their captor and tormentor, escape is the only option. The pair faces a bizarre labyrinth of rooms and clues that confuse more than they explain. Every discovery only brings more questions.

Who captured them? Why were they taken? What does their captor want from them? What can the riddles mean?

Who are they?

Lacking allies and options, the duo must learn to trust one another. Mazes, puzzles, and even strange, lurking creatures force them to rely on their wits--and each other--for survival. But survival isn’t enough. They need answers.

Will the answers be enough? Will the truth bring them closer together, or drive them forever apart? Will discovering their identities finally bring them home?

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Becca J. Campbell

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Becca writes New Adult (college age) fiction that's typically Urban Fantasy but often ranges anywhere from Science Fiction to Thrillers. Her writing typically involves a bit of the fantastical with an emphasis on relationships. She is addicted to thinking up cool, super-human abilities and the tragic downsides that go along with them.

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1,293 reviews306 followers
November 11, 2013
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Book Info: Genre: Psychological Suspense/Science Fantasy
Reading Level: Adult

My Thoughts: Wow! I had no idea what to expect when I read this book, having never read anything by Ms. Campbell before, and I was just … blown away! I literally could not stop reading this book until I finished it – to the point where I even had my husband grab my medication for me to take so I wouldn’t have to get up. When I first started reading this, I was thinking to myself that the basic premise has been done – waking up in a room, no memories, no idea who you are; I even played a D&D game like that once. But after that, it’s like stepping through the looking glass – or flying over the rainbow, a more apt metaphor, considering the frequent references to Oz throughout the book.

I can’t tell you more about the plot, because I don’t want to ruin the surprise, but it does wander off into a sort of science/fantasy world. But don’t worry, it all makes sense, and it was a sheer delight to read! Underneath it all was a wonderful love story, too, about making things work even when it already seems it has all fallen apart. Ms. Campbell is obviously quite a romantic, in addition to having a terrific imagination and writing style. I think this book will appeal to a wide variety of people – those who enjoy solving puzzles, mystery lovers, those who enjoy a bit of fantasy and/or science fiction in their stories, those who enjoy a touch of a love story... it all boils down to a wonderful story that is sure to please. Check it out, and check out my post regarding the blog tour (posted early Thursday), as well as my post regarding the giveaway of this book, and how to get a free copy of her short story, Not the Norm.

Disclosure: I received a free ebook ARC edition of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. I have been asked to take part in a blog tour to promote this book, and my entry will basically be this review.

Synopsis: Cold. Confusion. Fear. This is how it all begins.

Waking up without your memory in a cell and bound by chains is terrifying.

Two nameless strangers, a man and a woman, find themselves imprisoned together. With no memories of their own identities, let alone their captor and tormentor, escape is the only option. The pair faces a bizarre labyrinth of rooms and clues that confuse more than they explain. Every discovery only brings more questions.

Who captured them? Why were they taken? What does their captor want from them? What can the riddles mean?

Who are they?

Lacking allies and options, the duo must learn to trust one another. Mazes, puzzles, and even strange, lurking creatures force them to rely on their wits – and each other – for survival. But survival isn’t enough. They need answers.

Will the answers be enough? Will the truth bring them closer together, or drive them forever apart? Will discovering their identities finally bring them home?
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Author 11 books5 followers
April 16, 2012
As I began to read Foreign Identity, I realized this is unlike any other book I have ever read before. I'm not a huge reader of SCI-FI but this book was top notch. We begin in a woman's head, a woman who doesn't know who she is, where she is, or what has happened up until this point in her life. When she opens her eyes she realizes she's chained up by her ankles and wrists in an ominous white room. Everything changes, though, when she realizes she's not alone. Not by a long shot.

Becca Campbell masterfully created characters out of nothing (no memories, no back story, literally nothing). The two main characters are real, lovable, and relatable, especially as the book progresses. What really makes this book is the creation of the scenes around the characters. They are lush, easy to read, and make you feel like you're there with them.

Bottom line: I could not put this book down. I absolutely had to know what was going to happen. I finished this book within 24 hours and wanted more.
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Author 2 books16 followers
April 15, 2012
The mark of a well written novel is one that leaves you thinking about the story when you're not reading it - and Foreign Identity does just that.

This novel captured my interest from the first sentence and held it right to the end. In fact, I ended up reading it in one day. I just couldn't put it down!

A fantastic blend of science fiction and suspense with a touch of romance. Foreign Identity has easily become one of my favourite novels of 2012!
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Author 45 books115 followers
August 2, 2012
I would classify FOREIGN IDENTITY as a sci-fi romance -- or rather a sci-fi not-quite-romance considering the odd situation between "Jax" and "Kel," the only human characters in the novel. This is a mysterious and unique story about a man and woman plucked from their lives and dumped in a strange, claustrophobic setting with what appears to be a set of clues to lead them out.

But as soon as you think you have a handle on the direction of the plot, the author surprises you with one 90-degree turn after another. In the opening pages I was strongly reminded of the movie SAW in that two people wake up in a room, chained and groggy, confused about how they had got there. There are other similar "how did we get here?" movies, notably CUBE, but readers should know that the similarity to these movies ends just a few pages in. And (spoiler alert) when they finally escaped from the maze of corridors and hid out in the woods, I was happily mystified as to where this was headed next.

There are hints of LOST's smoke monster, although in a different but equally sinister form.

I enjoyed the smooth, solid writing, and the unusual, unpredictable plot. I felt that one scene toward the end could have been a little "bigger" and more dramatic, with less discussion before and after, but ultimately I was satisfied. The closing scene was exactly what I was hoping for, so that sat well with me. There's plenty to think about after the last page, but at the same time the story is nicely finished and wrapped up. It's good to leave the reader musing to some degree.

A thought-provoking novel that would work well both as a stage play and a TV show or modest-sized movie.
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2 reviews
May 4, 2012
I just have to say that Foreign Identity by Becca J. Campbell is my new favorite book right next to Ted Dekker's Circle Trilogy! It has all the suspense and crazy twists and turns that Dekker weaves into his stories. One book reviewer mentioned that Foreign Identity is like the tv series LOST and I would have to agree, except the ending is way better than the ending to Lost :)

I don't want to say too much to spoil the story for anyone- just know that it is an awesome read that you wont want to put down! You'll probably end up neglecting kids, house and husband until you finish it because you wont want to put it down! I know I did!! What I loved the most about the story and Campbell's writing style is that I felt like I was right there with Jax and Kel! When I wasn't reading the book I couldn't stop thinking about what would happen next! Best page turner I've read this year!

***I received a free advanced reader copy of this story in exchange for an honest review***
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Author 3 books2 followers
April 13, 2012
Foreign Identity was amazing! I fell in love with the characters right away. The plot was suspenseful and intense, but had a love story, which is perfect for a romantic like me. I couldn't put it down-- it only took a couple days for me to read it, which is fast for me. I would definitely recommend this book. Five out of five stars and two thumbs up. Just one question: is there a chance for a sequel? (fingers crossed)
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May 15, 2012
I loved this book!! It was full of twist and turns. It kept me on the edge, wanting more. Every time I thought I was getting to a part where I could put the book down something would happen and I'd have to keep reading. Would highly recommend for someone who likes Sci-fi with a little bit of romance.
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8 reviews2 followers
May 9, 2012
Twilight Zone meets Lost meets Star Trek with a little romance for good measure. I kept turning the pages to see if my theories as to what was going on were correct. I wasn't disappointed even when I wasn't right. It was hard to put it down yet bittersweet to finish. I can't wait to read more from Becca.
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2 reviews1 follower
April 29, 2012
This book had me enthralled from the beginning and kept me guessing the whole way through (not always an easy thing to accomplish!). I fell in love with the characters and really cared what happened to them. This book was very imaginative and a quick read (since I couldn't put it down!). Sequel?
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Author 9 books42 followers
May 19, 2012
A man and a woman wake-up in a concrete cell, chained to the floor. They have no idea who they are or how they got there. And so begins Foreign Identity by Becca J. Campbell.
From the beginning, the minute I picked up this book, I could not put it down. It is so compulsively addictive that it is the only thing I did for three days until I finished it. This book was so mysterious and so thrilling to read, I was compelled to keep reading until the end.

Ms. Campbell has a way with the characters in this book. This is her strong point. Character is a hard thing to get right. Many try and many fail. However Ms. Campbell seems to know her characters intimately. My personal belief is that books hinge on character and without good ones, books fail miserably. I will put them down in a second. Ms. Campbell has a great grip on Kel and Jax, her characters and I felt like I knew them.

Another strong point is the mystery of the situation. Kel and Jax have no idea who they are. they are even guessing about the names Kel and Jax ( but I won't say why). Campbell did a great job dragging me along for the ride while she weaved a very effective mystery concerning the reason Kel and Jax are trapped in the place that they find themselves. Even the place that they are is a great mystery. In this way, as I saw mentioned in another review, it does remind me of LOST. It is the mystery of the unknown in "Foreign Identity" that kept me glued to my e-reader.

If I had any complaint, it would be that I felt that some things were revealed to quickly. But, honestly, it was a minor thing and in the end it didn't effect my satisfaction for the over-all book. "Foreign Identity" is a great roller-coaster of a read and I had a lot of fun reading it. I look forward to so much more from Becca Campbell. She has herself a new fan in me
Profile Image for Brian Clopper.
Author 75 books41 followers
January 7, 2013
What would you do if you had a chance to forge a new identity? What if that new identity was threatened when you find out about your old life, that you're not a blank slate? Just how easy is it to unravel oneself? Finally, who would've thought an easel could deliver such unease?

Foreign Identity is about the search for identity as an individual and within a relationship. It couches this exploration in science fiction trappings to good effect. Kel and Jax are awakened through a series of trials that test their identities and faith in each other.

It's a testament to Becca Campbell that she keeps the story propelling forward at a good clip, employing deft description alongside volatile action. She also stretches her characters, bending and twisting them to see how far they can go and still spring back to their core identities.

The work mines similar plot points found in Lost and Saw, but crafts them in a new light.

One quibble, I would like to have seen more development of the third character that figures into the last section of the book. It feels very secondary and underdeveloped. I wanted to understand more of its perspective and what shaped its rebellious perspective.

Overall, a sparkling read that delivers action, mystery, and intimate character development.

I am eager to read Campbell's next work. Her writing is fresh and versatile, giving her the opportunity to work in many genres. Part of me wants to see her tackle more science fiction, but then another wonders what she would do with a psychological thriller. Or maybe, she'll continue her devious blending of genres.
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802 reviews24 followers
May 25, 2012
Kel and Jax awake in a small room. They are both chained to the wall and each other. Working together, they are able to escape the room that is their prison. One thing missing is their identity. Neither one knows who they are, where they are or what life was like before. Once out of the room, it seemed their only way to escape was through a series of tests. During these tests, Kel finds she has abilities Jax doesn't, and he's unsure of whether she can be trusted or not. They seem to be running on instinct. Bits and pieces of things coming back to them but not enough to create a whole picture. Each of them relearning about themselves and each other with each step they take. Once away from the room, they get away and find a cabin. In and around the cabin is everything they could need to survive. It takes a huge leap of faith for both of them to regain trust in the other. After awhile, they realize their memories and the information about their lives is in the building they escaped from. Are they brave enough to face what lives there to find out who they are?


FANTASTIC! It seems like a simple word but it thoroughly describes this book. Becca J Campbell created a story that is as psychological as it is interesting. I loved that this couple had to work together to solve all the mysteries surrounding them. I must say I was surprised at what they found too. Easy to read and one you'll be hooked on right away! I recommend this book for your library. Kiss seal of approval here!


I found no issues with this one.


I gave this one 5 out of 5 books because it kept me guessing until the end and I LOVED it!
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125 reviews
May 13, 2013
"(Disclaimer: I received this book from the author for an honest review.)

I was intrigued by the premise of this book. Two strangers wake up in a room together while chained to the wall. They then have to work together to break away from their prison. They also have total memory loss so they go by the names "Jax" and "Kel".

At first I couldn't quite get into the story. The writing was well done, but at times it felt repetitive. The same descriptive words were used over and over. Somewhere around mid-book the story picked up speed and I enjoyed reading it.

At the conclusion, I felt as though there were still questions to be answered. You are given a little insight about the characters lives before their abduction, but only from one point of view. What exactly were their jobs before? Why was Jax such a workaholic? I also felt the romance in the story was forced and the female character was annoying.

If you are interested in mixed genres then this is a decent story and worth reading. It has adventure, sci-fi and some romance. This author a great imagination with a lot of potential! Happy reading!
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Author 2 books79 followers
May 27, 2012
Honestly, I had no idea what to expect from this book. It's listed as science fiction and there are those elements, but it is so much more than that. It really transcends any one genre.

I love puzzles and mysteries; Foreign Identity is constructed like a labyrinth. When you finally reach the center and discover the truth, it's a real revelation.

I started to really care about the characters, which is a feat since the book begins with them not even knowing their own names. They are flawed and nuanced and their love story is believable. You really root for them.

I actually read it in one sitting. Fortunately, I am a fast reader, but I stayed up late to finish.

If you love the television show "Lost", if you like your books with many layers that are peeled away, you will absolutely adore Foreign Identity>.Foreign IdentityBecca J. Campbell
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Author 14 books97 followers
December 30, 2012
I defy anyone not to be hooked from page 1. There is a seriously compelling mystery in this book that you just have to keep reading to solve it. The plot is an intriguing self discovery from the perspective of one man and one woman who wake up chained together and no memories, even of their names. Throughout the book, clues trigger flashes of memory, but never enough for them (or the reader) to know what is going on.

It reminded me somewhat of "The Village" movie and the TV series "Lost", but thankfully much better than the Village and not infuriating like Lost.

I had formed all sorts of opinions as to the truth, but wasn't expecting what really happened. Good.

A couple of spots where it moved a little too slow for me, but still an excellent read. At the end, I found myself looking back over all that had happened, and the complex relationship between the man and woman, and began to appreciate the deep emotional undertone of the book. Very satisfying.
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1,965 reviews218 followers
April 25, 2013
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This was free for review by the author. I had forgotten that it was already on my list for ages. I am sorry, Becca. But once I opened it, I couldn't stop reading. At 4:30 this morning I was at 70% finished. I know I needed to sleep so I nearly had to surgically remove it from my hands. Even then I had a hard time letting the story go in my brain. First thing when I woke, four hours later I had to get back into the book. It was THAT good. Very exciting! It felt a bit Twilight Zonish or Outer Limitish to me. And there were several sub-plots that kept you guessing what would happen next, and what would I do if I were in this situation.

This is a must read for sci-fi buffs!
6 reviews7 followers
May 21, 2013
Incredibly well done. Took ahold of me from page one and never let go. Every element was done with skill. The suspense had me on the edge of my seat, the mystery had me guessing and the romance was tender and genuine. This book was completely engrossing and engaging. I loved every second of it, though I alternated between not wanting it to end because I loved the world she created, and wanting to read as fast as I could so I could figure out what was going on! As another reviewer said, I could not stop thinking about it when I was not reading it. It was very real for me. Becca nailed that elusive, difficult task which is to make a fantastic new reality that is still believable and that I can connect with. Favorite book so far of 2013.
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3,012 reviews424 followers
September 12, 2015
I was asked to review this book by the author and give an honest review.
The book is a story of two strangers who find themselves in an unfamiliar room together and both have no memory of how they got there or who they are.

When I read the brief synopsis of the book I instantly wanted to read more. The book draws you in from the start and there is plenty of mystery, suspense and a touch of romance for good measure. After an excellent start I did feel that the book failed to continue the suspense throughout. The story did improve at the end to reach a good climax.

The concept is very interesting and makes the book a worthwhile read. It is an enjoyable and easy read.

Overall I thought it was a very good effort and I will be reading more from this author in the future.
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Author 29 books173 followers
May 30, 2012
Foreign Identity is a light sci-fi puzzler. If I had to categorize it, I might call it romantic suspense. It’s Lost and The Truman Show rolled up in one. It’s a strange world, a living mystery, and two very ordinary people caught up in an unbelievable mystery.

The science fiction and mystery elements keep the story moving, but the real power of the book is entirely in the relationship between the protagonists, the conflict of true character, and the painful struggle to find a companion when you really, really need one.

It’s brilliant. It’s exciting fun trapped in the microcosm of two frightened people all alone. It’s a story well worth reading.
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Author 5 books68 followers
April 12, 2012
I was lucky enough to read this as an advance reader, and I couldn't put it down! It was a great page turner.

While fitting in the Science Fiction genre, this book exceeds the genre in my opinion in several ways. The characters are ultimately on a journey of discovery about themselves and each other, a journey forced on them by very extenuating circumstances, but it's the journey and the discovery that takes center stage, while keeping the reader waiting with bated breath to see what happens next.

This book is a fantastic blend of heart, action, and suspense.
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8 reviews1 follower
May 22, 2012
Do you like Mysteries, sci-fi, or adventure books? This one is all three. I really liked the characters discovering who they were and what was happening to them through all sorts of strange events and twists. This book grabs you and keeps you engaged through the entire thing. And get this, just when you think you have it figured out, you probably don't. There are great twists and turns that all make for a rather satisfying read. Keep Becca J. Campbell on your reading list, she is sure to have many more awesome books in store!
33 reviews2 followers
May 23, 2013
Disclaimer: I received a free e-book edition of Foreign Identity in exchange for an honest review. Review is of the whole book, but I have tried to keep it free of major spoilers.


I have given the book 3 out of 5 stars on Goodreads, but would ideally have given it 3.5.


The premise is a familiar one – two strangers find themselves imprisoned and must work together to escape. However, it is soon clear that the true tale lies in the characters’ struggle to recover their identities.


Campbell’s characterisation is immediately gripping; she feeds the reader just enough information to allow us to deduce the characters’ personalities, so that even if they don’t know who they are, we get a real sense of who they could be. Jax, our male protagonist, is immediately portrayed as the calmest of the pair – he knows how to keep his head under pressure and will logically work through all options until a solution is found. His female counterpart, Kel, is feisty but overly emotional – she finds it difficult to trust and works on instinct over logic. Together, they balance each other out nicely, and Campbell lays the hints to their relationship right from the opening scene. Unfortunately, Kel soon began to grate as she became more whiny and petulant, and I found her very annoying and a little clichéd by the end of the book, which made it very difficult to sympathise with her plight. Perhaps because we are less privy to his thoughts, I found Jax much easier to relate to, and he felt a well-rounded character with realistic character flaws that did not detract from his overall personality.


Campbell’s world-building is also to be admired. Although the landscapes she paints throughout Foreign Identity are very familiar – the woods and the cabin, in particular – her writing is such that we always have a sense that there is more than meets the eye, and the action continues to move along at a swift pace, regardless of location. There is one section near the beginning where the characters encounter a series of themed rooms within their prison; I found this concept extremely original and intriguing, and Campbell’s writing was skilful enough to bring each scene within the prison complex vividly to life.
The story itself was highly enjoyable, full of high-paced action and interesting revelations. Campbell seems to delight in twists and turns; her writing shines whenever we encounter a new, often significant development. However, I didn’t feel that Campbell pushed the boundaries of her world far enough. Throughout the novel, I persistently felt that the experience of Campbell’s world was limited by her characters’ perspectives, that there was much more to be uncovered beneath the surface, but the characters were holding the reader back slightly. I felt that some of the later character developments could have been left out in exchange for more time exploring the wonderful world Campbell has created.


Whilst enjoyable as a whole, there were some elements of Foreign Identity that jarred for me. Jax’s photographic memory, for example, was a convenient tool for explaining why the characters didn’t get lost in the maze of corridors in their prison, but seemed to serve no other purpose and apparently required no explanation as to why he had such a gift. Similarly, Kel’s period of severe withdrawal felt a little shoehorned in; it is never explained what she was addicted to, nor how that links with what we later learn of their previous lives, so it is unclear why this becomes such an important part of her characterisation in the middle of the book.


Overall, Foreign Identity is a thrilling, character-driven novel, with elements of romance and science fiction woven throughout. Opening with characters who know nothing about themselves, it is a testament to Campbell’s characterisation that the reader grows to care so much for them by the end of the novel. I frequently found myself thinking about the novel when I wasn’t reading it, mulling over the world Campbell has created and imagining what the end of the journey would reveal. More than anything, this is a novel about self-exploration and learning from past mistakes. I unfortunately found myself disappointed by the lack of depth and unresolved questions, so could only give 3.5 stars out of 5. However, I would not hesitate to recommend this book to anyone looking for an enjoyable read by a promising author. I will definitely read more of Campbell’s work in future.

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July 27, 2013
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This felt at times like reading two books. The first part felt a little rushed. It was good, entertaining, but not great. The second part was pretty great. Once you hit the twist (which made me go OH MY GOD THAT'S SO COOL AND CLEVER) you can really see the genius that made Gateway to Reality such a unique read. When it comes to sci-fi, Campbell has a mind fit to write Doctor Who. What I wanted more of was characterization and building-up. The first part goes so fast that I'm left to assume a lot of things about the characters and take their word for what they say they feel, rather than watching it develop. When Campbell slows down in the second half, I felt much more involved and could really feel connected. Overall, it's a light read with a pretty awesome concept.



plot . 3/5
Again, there was a split for me. The first few chapters were great. I liked watching the Jax and Kel figure out their weird prison and encounter all of the creepy rooms. I thought they were a little thin, though, as it went on. A lot of time went out the window. Two weeks were gone. I didn't get to see them interacting, bonding, developing the feelings that are so strongly portrayed later. Then comes the turning point. Once we hit the twist, it's strong, tight pacing and some really exciting twists and turns. There's plenty to love about this book and it's a quick, fun read, but I wish Campbell had slowed down in the beginning and established the characters more firmly.

concept . 5/5
I honestly love the concept. It was the selling-point of this book, for me. Campbell may need to grow in some areas, but she kills when it comes to unique sci-fi concepts. I don't want to give it all away, but let's say it's a blow-your-mind twist. It has flavors of H.G. Wells' The Time Machine but I can honestly say I've never encountered something like it before.

characters . 3/5
I wasn't thrilled about the characters, at least at times. What bothered me was that Jax was incredibly capable and had a variety of useful talents, while Kel seemed pretty stereotypical damsel-in-distress. Your typical savior-man, weak woman. This wasn't always the case, to be fair. There were times when Kel felt stronger and I could see Jax's flaws, especially in the second half. I liked them more as I got to know them, which is important because you really need to care about them to appreciate this story. Like my comments on other aspects, I think they were more strongly portrayed in the second part. However, I do think I'm nitpicky on this and I can see other readers connecting with them immediately. What didn't work for me was how quickly they developed certain feelings and traits and how quickly their confusion dissipated. I wanted more in that first part to make them feel as real as they did in the second part.

style . 4/5
Clean and concise, for the most part. Campbell has a way of creating lush descriptions that stick you right into the story. What I didn't like was the character voice. Campbell's use of voice in Gateway to Reality was so spot-on that I found myself wanting more here. Jax and Kel seemed pretty generic at times as far as voice, and some of their dialogue and internal monologue struck me as typical. Typical stock phrases, especially with the romantic scenes. However, get into the sci-fi part with the wave creatures and suddenly it's vibrant. I think Kel's diary was some of her strongest voice.

mechanics . 4/5
The polishing was great. Nothing to complain about. The length was my only issue. As mentioned, I would have liked much more meat in the first part to support the very cool second part.


take home message
A clever science-fiction that draws from H.G. Wells and your classic thriller/mystery.
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543 reviews38 followers
July 19, 2012
Foreign Identity is a novel by Becca J. Campbell. I read it a couple days ago. I enjoyed it. I picked it up partly because I like sci-fi, but mostly because I have gotten to know the author a bit (she lives less than 5 minutes from me - yet we've only met online!) and I think she's pretty cool. I purchased the book on sale for my Kindle and finished it in a day. That is not necessarily unusual for me, but I would assume most people would want to finish it quickly to find out what happens. :)

The book starts with a man and a woman who wake up in a room, chained to the walls, with no memory at all. By working together, they uncover a puzzle that frees them from the room, but only releases them into a maze with more puzzles. Throughout the story they seek to escape and to find help with a desire to find home - even though they don't know where that is. They have to, somehow, work together and trust each other in order to be free.

The Breakdown:

I loved how she worked the amnesia. I've seen it used several times as a way to drive the plot, and that really bugs me. Becca, however, totally wiped their personal memories and left them that way. There's never a 'Oh! I remember that!' moment at a critical time to push the plot forward. That said, she has her characters have feelings or instincts for certain things - which they cleverly don't know if they should trust - which add depth to the character, both in what they remember and what they don't as well as how they react to it. Very fun!

The characters. I really liked them. They were believable and consistent. I enjoyed getting to know them even as they got to know themselves. And after the little bit of the past we learn about their lives, they are even more relatable and understandable.

The Sci-Fi aspect. (I love sci-fi, fantasy, etc in case you didn't know) The aliens (I hope that's not a spoiler) are fun and different. I would have liked them to be a little more prevalent and explained a little more in-depth, but they were an interesting puzzle. This is definitely LIGHT sci-fi. It's much more of a mystery/adventure/romance-ish with a sci-fi twist. I have so many questions about her aliens and how they interact and why the problem occurred... It just wasn't that book. They were fun though. I liked Zap. :)

The puzzles. I found them to be fairly simple. That doesn't mean they're not interesting for the characters to figure out, but they weren't fascinating and intricate for ME to figure out. (just fyi, I LOVE puzzles and I'm fairly good at them, and I read a lot of sci-fi, so the twists that may seem shocking to someone else, were fairly expected to me). That doesn't diminish from her writing, it just made it a really light read for me. Like I said, it was fun to see them figure some of the things out. (Although, sometimes one of them seemed a little too dense...the squares? Really? Didn't get that one? So the balance between the characters was a lot slanted most of the time.)

The plot. Was it completely shocking? No. Did I know exactly what would happen? No. I had several guesses, some of which were fairly close to the mark, while others not so much. It was fun to guess, and just because I got close didn't mean it wasn't fun to find out what was happening. It was both fun and interesting.

My Favorite Bit: The idea of a new beginning. That at any point, no matter what has happened, no matter how hard life has been, you can start over. You can choose to do things differently, better. Life is not stuck in some rut that you can't get out of - if you just have the perspective to see the rut, you can climb out and start over.

The end was very satisfying. I really enjoyed it. The themes of trust and faithfulness were beautifully done. I recommend it.
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268 reviews1,602 followers
August 31, 2013
LINDA'S REVIEW

I am giving this one a 3.9 for it's wonderful originality and creativity! Looking back, I'm not quite sure what I was expecting, but this story does fit the bill for bizarre intrigue.

What I loved was that Kel & Jax are very thought provoking characters for about 3/4 of the novel. They are not only placed in dire circumstances together, they have no memory of their past or each other! This, in my opinion, was a brilliant way to begin the story. With every discovery being a fresh, new experience for the characters, Becca Campbell does a terrific job drawing us in to become personally involved. I imagined myself a few times trying to determine if I would be able to trust a complete stranger with my life/safety.

Strangely, the "No Memory" angle made both Jax and Kel all the more appealing. The best part was not being sure which direction the story would ultimately take ...I love suspense!

There were also a few non-human elements/characters that enhanced the narration by virtue of their uniqueness! So if you are looking for something a little off the beaten path "Foreign Identity" fits the bill nicely!

What I wasn't crazy about: In a nutshell, Miranda and Noah. I found them to be so lackluster and ordinary that I almost couldn't believe that the same author wrote these characters. Maybe I just found them too disruptive to the excellent pace of the story prior to their arrival, or maybe they just didn't have enough depth for me to care about them! Either way, I think there was such a beautiful foundation written that the mediocrity of these two people was a hindrance for me to enjoy the conclusion.

All in all, I enjoyed the story with all it's puzzle solving opportunities! If you are a person who likes the challenge of putting all the pieces together then you'll have a good time with Jax & Kel as they use their wits during this journey!

SAFFRON'S REVIEW

2 STARS


This book had an excellent premise; two people completely lost, without their memories, in some kind of puzzle maze. Here I was expecting some kind of Saw experience, or at least some good problem solving, unfortunately that’s not what I got.

The first scene met my initial expectations; a strange room with many doors and locks and keys but from there the momentum plateaued.

I found the characters quite shallow and inconsistent and the helpless whining female character made me want to put the book aside (a pet peeve). Very little of the story actually took place in any kind of puzzle maze and in the end the book was actually more sci-fi than mystery.

However, even as a fan of sci-fi I wasn’t overly impressed. The story was confusing and it’s not until the very end that you find out what’s actually happening. Unfortunately while that’s kind of what you’d expect from a mystery book I don’t think it worked for this one, it felt very contrived and incongruous.

So only 2 stars from me for this one; a great premise but poorly executed.
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152 reviews5 followers
June 4, 2012
Contemporary Americans live in a fascinating time. A time when audiences are notoriously hard to trick, surprise, or frighten. Authors everywhere are enduring a constant struggle to keep readers on their toes and shock them with a twist ending they never expected. This struggle is nicely battled in Becca J. Campbell’s novel, Foreign Identity, where suspense and horror are balanced with genuine human emotion and an overwhelming sense of mystery. The novel is, in short, steeped in the unexplainable, bringing to mind some of the most entertaining episodes of The X-Files and psychological suspense movies like Shutter Island.
In Foreign Identity, the two heroes (a man and a woman) are thrown unceremoniously into a horrific maze of vaguely familiar circumstances, which they must work together to put in context. The characters are very real entities, with real, human problems that are eked out in front of the backdrop of an eerily perfect landscape. This setting throws the drama of human relation into stark contrast, complemented masterfully with the slow progression of the characters’ recovering memories of their past relationship.
So how can this book really be classified? On the surface it might seem like a simple science-fiction adventure, but the complicated drama surrounding the romantic relationship between the heroes belies the genre. This could easily be a story taken out of its fantastic context and still found emotionally evocative. Yet the sci-fi elements are not underdone. The characters are consistently pursued by otherworldly entities made up of supernatural elements, put in strange situations of pursuit and capture, and forced to confront not only their personal struggles, but the technology (or miraculous occurrences) that lead to their capture and provide the potential for their demise. They must fight, not only for their lives, but for their essential humanity, and it is this which is most thrilling for the reader.
These elements come together to provide the reader with a thoroughly enjoyable reading experience that ends in an exciting and emotionally satisfying conclusion. This book is ideal for readers teenaged and above, and the perfect suspense story for both a sunny day at the beach or a cozy night and a thunderstorm. Enjoy!
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Author 3 books8 followers
May 30, 2013
Foreign Identity is a book that grew on me as I read it. I was intrigued in the very beginning by the hook: two strangers are thrown together in a strange labyrinth of rooms, and their only hope of escape depends on their figuring out clues related to their identity and to the identity of their captors. My interest sagged just a bit when I quickly guessed one major plot line. Also, the writing in the beginning of the book, as one reviewer commented, was mostly well done, but a little repetitive. I thought there were places where the author would have done well not to drive each conclusion of a character's thought home quite so neatly.

In further reading, I discovered that it didn't matter that I had so immediately figured out a pivotal element of the story. The beauty of the book is in the two main characters and their developing relationship, as well as in the way their respective understanding of their situation builds. I think we are meant to be a step ahead of them in figuring out certain things, for that adds poignancy to our desire for them to understand. Also, there are many elements of mystery in the story, so knowing one of them doesn't dim the suspense created by the other puzzles. There are some predictable moments, but there is also much that is unique and creative about the work, as well.

Kudos to Ms. Campbell for creating a science fiction story with attention to both character development and plot. Kudos to her, too, for writing science fiction with a wholesome romantic theme. Since the two main characters carry the weight of the book, Foreign Identity is somewhat like "Moon" in that regard. The stark setting forces the characters to dig into the puzzle of who they are internally.

I have already read one short story by Ms. Campbell, and I certainly look forward to reading more of her work.

Please note that I was given an electronic review copy of Foreign Identity in exchange for an unbiased review.
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374 reviews8 followers
September 20, 2016
What a different and unique book for sure.
These two character's with no memory of themselves or eachother have to struggle and fight and figure out some puzzles and riddles to figure out who and what they are.
Full of mystery, monsters and intrique while they figure out what is going on.
A very good read for any young adult reader.
4 stars
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Author 6 books54 followers
July 11, 2012
Foreign Identity by Becca J. Campbell
★★★★☆

When the Protagonist’s woke up locked in a dungeon, they had no memory of who they were. They had to work together to escape, which gave them the names Jax and Kel. They navigated their way through a labyrinth of different rooms until they escaped outside. With no knowledge of where they were or how to get home, they adapted to their situation and stayed together for survival. Jax scoured for a way out. With his incredible memory he was able to map the area. He wanted to find out who he and Kel were and why they were captured. The only times they figured things out about themselves was when they stumbled upon things that felt familiar, like the tug they felt towards each other.

Foreign Identity was a fantastic, fast-paced novel; I was surprised when I turned the last page that I had finished the entire book so fast. I had expected it to take me longer when I saw how many pages it was, but that was not the case. I wanted to find out what would happen next, which kept me reading without putting the book down. I always love it when a book can do that.

The author has a fluid writing style making it an easy, enjoyable read. She creates an intriguing story and world that you will get lost in. She creates lifelike characters that you will identify with, which I liked. I also love that she wrote the story with both Jax and Kel’s points of view. I usually enjoy being able to see what the two prominent, and, in this case, two main, characters are thinking. I feel like I get to know both of them on a more personal level this way.

This book was filled with adventure, mystery, science fiction, and a little romance. It was a perfectly balanced combination. Extremely enjoyable. It was different than what I typically read, which made me even more excited that I liked it so much. I would recommend it to anyone who would like to read an interesting adventure.

I received this book from the author for review.
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61 reviews8 followers
September 21, 2013
(Disclaimer: I received this book from the author for an honest review.)

If you want a book in which you have no idea where you or the characters will end up, then this is the book for you. When the book begins a man and woman wake up in chains with no idea who they are or how they got there. As they slowly find their way out of captivity, still with no hint of who their captor may be, they come across themed rooms that appear to have been designed to appeal to certain scenes. I loved this part of the book, as the characters try to put the pieces of the rooms together to find clues about their situation. Through one puzzle after another, they finally escape captivity. . . but they can't escape their situation.

I spent the book predicting who Jax and Kal (as they came to call themselves) were, where they had been taken, and why, but I always ended up with more questions than answers and my predictions were never close to being right. Every time I though I had something figured out, my grasp on reality slipped away. I was, in every way, experiencing the story with Jax and Kal, it's an extremely personal story.

Although every puzzle leads to a new one in a seemingly endless string of events, the story is never dull or repetitive. It's fast paced and dynamic with elements of romance, mystery, adventure, and science fiction. If you're a fan of any of these genres, I'd encourage you to check out this book.
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