3.5 stars
I requested this ARC because the title nostalgically reminded me of books and series I read years ago. Also, I recently read Ashes of Glass by the same author, and while it wasn’t the best I’ve ever read, I hoped her writing had improved by her third novel. Unfortunately, while I did still enjoy it, there were many things about Aliyah Serin and the Box of Zenas that were disappointing. It’s been a very long time since I read Harry Potter, but this book seemed uncannily similar to me. The spirit of imitation pervaded this book. If lack of originality bothers you, then you may not want to read it.
Characters: I wasn’t overly impressed by the characters. Perhaps I was expecting too much, and MG books of this sort never have lifelike, interesting characters–it’s been a while since I’ve read any–but I was hoping for at least a little development. I kept waiting for Aliyah to develop a personality, but she never did so. The side characters, including Aliyah’s friends, were fairly bland as well. However, I’m sure most readers in this book’s target audience don’t care whether characters are well-written or not–I certainly didn’t at that age.
Setting: Unfortunately, Aliyah Serin and the Box of Zenas fell short in this regard as well. But not because the setting was boring or poorly described–rather, it felt just too much like Harry Potter. The similarities once Aliyah arrived at Petrovis were alarming. Is it that hard to come up with an original setting, even when it’s a magical school? This felt like off-brand Harry Potter. Even the names of the Harry Potter-inspired characters vaguely reflect their originals.
Plot: As far as middle-grade magical realism plots go, I thought this one was pretty good. It is indeed slow at the beginning, but that didn’t bother me at all. I enjoy slow, slice-of-life plots, but if you don’t feel the same way, the first part of this book may bother you.
Style: Aliyah Serin and the Box of Zenas didn’t have a bad writing style, though there were plenty of errors. One character’s name was frequently spelled as both “McKinley” and “McKinnley”, which irked me. Additionally, this book is not nearly as humorous as others in its genre; in fact, it barely has any humor at all. I can understand that, though, as humor is difficult for me to write as well.
Theme: This book didn’t have much of a theme, except for maybe not being greedy for power. Some of the characters’ actions bothered me; I will detail those in the content section.
Content: This is a clean book, but there are still a few things that the reader should be aware of. This book contained more magic than I usually read, although that may or may not be an issue for you. Also, the characters rather frequently stole and lied without these actions being presented as wrong. I was bothered by Aliyah and her friends lying to get themselves out of trouble and not experiencing any repercussions.
I realize that I may have said several negative things about this book, but in actuality, I quite enjoyed it. The similarities to Harry Potter are off-putting, but it was still a pleasant read and very much of its genre. If you enjoy middle-grade contemporary fantasy and need something light to read, Aliyah Serin and the Box of Zenas would be a good choice.
I would like to thank the author for giving me a free ARC/review copy to honestly review.