Dean Young IS a bender though I'm not sure he's ON one. This was my first exposure to Young's work, and I left it joyful, jealous, and just a touch confused.
Young's linguistic dexterity resonates on every page of this book, in every poem. Whether he's conjuring similes from his deep unconscious like,"I could no longer care, only in a detached way like a monk for a scorpion," or talking about the oldest things in a new way, "father, you bend the nail but keep hammering because hammering makes the world," Young's skill is everywhere evident. One line that's stayed with me is his simile: "he dies like snow melting from a fence."
It is lines like those and Young's trust that "every word is a euphemism" which make me jealous as a writer that I didn't create some of these poems. Young knows that "inside everyone of us is a staircase" and he is unafraid to ascend and descend his on an errand to find "something immense and in tact."
I can't help but include so many of his lines in my review because they sparkle and rage with such discovery.
The reason, however, I didn't give this book five stars is simply idiosyncratic: at times, the surrealism which informs and inspires Young is a bit distancing. Some of the poems are difficult to find any foothold in--not that every poem need make "sense" in a logical lockstep fashion, not at all, just that several offer no grounding in experience and swirl into abstraction. Sometimes, the glacial truth which Young is exploring calls for such verbal pioneering--there is no way to get there with an old map. But on those rare occasions Young loses me and is out on his own.
I highly recommend this collection, especially to young poets looking for something more accessible than Ashbery but more inventive and risky than say, Collins (whom I love, by the way)