3.25 stars
Unfortunately, this book fell a little flat for me; however, I think it serves as an excellent foundation and I am intrigued to see where things go from here.
To begin, let’s discuss my positives:
1. This is a story of self discovery and acceptance. Our main character grows up in a bigoted and judgmental environment where she is constantly scrutinized and shamed. I enjoyed seeing Sayr slowly break free of her chains as she learned more about herself, magic, and the history of the continent.
2. The magic system is interesting and ever evolving. I think this makes a great foundation and am really intrigued to see how it evolves from here. There’s clearly so much left to learn. I’d like to learn more about the non elemental magic.
3. “It is a crown of blood, Everett!” well done with this line, I really enjoyed the usage of the title here.
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There were also a few things that ultimately left me feeling a little underwhelmed:
1. I wish more emphasis was placed on Sayr being a Seer. Her being a Seer was the core of the plot, at least at the beginning; but, as the book went on the Seer aspect felt neglected. For example, the story begins with her explaining this reoccurring vision she keeps having, however, this vision is never mentioned again once they head to Creobe (where they spend the majority of the book).
Additionally, she doesn’t experience any visions of the future while she’s at the Western Palace. She has 2 visions while there: the first is a vision of her queen in the Western Palace looking for Sayr while the second is when she is transported and speaks with the unknown man on the throne. Both occasions were happening in real time, not the future. So is she really a Seer?
We learn a lot about the different types of elemental magic and that non elemental magic exists as well but I’d really like to learn more about our main character and her gifts. I’m hoping this is addressed more in the next book.
2. The relationship between Sayr and Dimitri fell a little flat for me. Their connection existed and there were definitely some cute moments (the dagger, how he helped her recover, the dance, etc) but at the same time I wish there was more depth to their relationship. I feel more intrigued by the unknown man on the throne (Naz?).
3. There are plenty of loose ends. I’m fully expecting the main ones to be addressed in the next book (her decision about joining the Western Court, information about her father, more information on Naz) but there are others that don’t seem to be intentional.
For example, Sayr was meant to be collecting items to frame the inner court and while it’s specified that she had collected 3 so far (chain, hair clip, and ring) this subplot was never discussed again. Was it because Sayr slowly changed her mind or was this because the author forgot about this subplot?
What about the dagger? Is it meant to be significant?
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Overall, this is a good book and I will be reading the next in the series. I’d like to see more detail and am hoping we learn more about our FMC and her abilities! I also must know this Naz character.