A few errors. Very introductive.
And i didn't like the part about her exes. I mean it's supposed to be about her artistry, not her private love life. So except if it's to explain lyrics she wrote (ie. "In this album, she sings often about long distance relationships because she exeprienced it.") or something she explicitely talked about in an itw, it feels like an intrusion in her life that we don't need to get to know her music. Really making a whole part of the book about that is so strange. (You'd hardly see that for a man because society don't define them through their relationships. What i mean is that's sexist to define a part of her career because of who she dated or might have a crush on at some point close in time or decades ago --' ) And it's not respectfull towards her either !
Some pictures were weird... i wonder if they have been chosen because the copyrights weren't too high ?