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508 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 9, 2012
A slow-starting but interesting read that reminds me in some ways of Sir Patrick Moore's "Scott Saunders" series that I read as a youth. This book is quite political in its nature, with its setting being that of a space habitat of a few thousand people chafing against the heavy-handedness of a hyper-conservative and decidedly Orwellian USA.
April's character can be decidedly jarring at first. Here is a fourteen year old girl who acts much more like someone in their early twenties in many ways and that can shock you out of your suspension of disbelief at times. However, the author does endeavour to paint a picture of children in orbital habitats having to be far more mature for their age, with surface dwelling children being portrayed far more like what we would expect. Something that is plausible when you consider that a space habitat could well be a place where discipline and sense would have to be insilled at a very young age due to the risk of decompression issues. The author does make some mention in the first fifteen percent of the book about how young teens can opt for a treatment that supresses the side-effects of teen hormones and I do wonder about the practicality and safety of such a treatment, even with the life extension treatments that are also mentioned.
The spelling, grammar and punctuation are not bad for a title on Kindle Unlimited, but there are issues. My suggestion to the author if they ever revisit this book for an updated edition would be to overhaul the first 20% of the book to bring it more in-line in tone with the rest of the book as well as getting a good proofreader to go through after you commit your final rewrite changes.
In summary I would describe this as a slow but interesting science fiction story that is in part a coming-of-age for a young teen in a complex and dangerous world. I'm very curious as to where the author will go in the next book and shall be starting that later today.