THE COMPANY OF THE DEAD is an alternate-history novel that centers around the sinking of the Titanic. At the start, a time traveler named Wells attempts to stop the well-known disaster from occurring. He doesn't succeed, but he does delay the event by three hours. This small change creates massive ramifications that drastically alter the future. America is no longer United, Hitler is a famous artist, and most of the globe is under the rule of either the Japanese or German empires. A young man named Joseph Kennedy (ancestor of our famous, assassinated president), having glimpsed the even greater horrors that await this refurbished timeline, goes on a quest back in time to fix the rift in history and bring the world back to normal.
According to the acknowledgments, it took first-time author Kowalski nearly fifteen years to write this novel, and it shows. The alternate history he constructed is so intricate that it was astonishing. I started the novel with giddy amazement, ever more impressed as I turned the pages. I couldn't begin to imagine the detail, the thought, the mind-bending effort it must have taken not just to plot the book, but also to establish it firmly in a completely new and believable world. I tip my hat to Mr. Kowalski.
So why the two stars?
I read this book on my Kindle, and I didn't bother reading any reviews before I bought it. The product description alone was enough for me. Because Kindles don't list page numbers exactly, I didn't know that this book was -- in its printed form -- 751 pages long. That doesn't really matter to me; if a book is good enough, I'll read a thousand pages and gladly. Unfortunately, the middle five hundred pages or so are a convoluted mess that serve only to delay the entire story. Almost nothing important or meaningful occurs in this section. Instead, Kowalski sets up pointless obstacle after pointless obstacle, dragging the plot out until I was tearing my hair out in frustration. The cast list also grew more and more bloated for no good reason. One character -- a gruff-n-grumpy man named Hardas (I assume the name, with its missing 's,' is meant to be cheekily symbolic) actually questioned his own involvement in the adventure. When Hardas argued that he brought nothing helpful to the group's quest (he was right), Kennedy instead assured him that "every group needs its malcontent."
What? No, it doesn't. Pacing and plotting are critical in a book where characters say things like, "I need to know what you did with the time machine!" Plotting this book has in spades, but the pacing is perhaps some of the worst I've ever read. Every time I thought the story was finally going to go somewhere, whoops! here's another complication to slow the plot wa-a-a-a-a-a-ay down. "Great!" I thought at one point with relief. "They're finally at the time machine. NOW it gets good!" Nope. Let's have another hundred pages where they try to fix the darn thing, or fight off sinister outside forces, or simply bicker about the rightness of what they're doing.
I wanted SO MUCH to love this book as it had wowed me so incredibly right out of the gate. Kowalski obviously spent an amazing amount of time, energy, and thought into the research and writing of this story, and I respect that deeply. But by the time the characters managed to actually do what they'd spent five hundred pages talking about doing, I was sick of it all. My guess is that Kowalski, having spent fifteen years on the book, was loathe to chop out even one scene to shorten it down to a semi-reasonable length. To that, I quote Faulker: kill your darlings. If it's not important, if it doesn't move the story along, then get rid of it. No matter how beautiful your writing is -- and Kowalski's prose is pretty good, if not a little overwritten (ahem) -- if you use that writing to meticulously describe a falling row of dominoes that's a hundred miles long, you're going to lose a whole lot of readers.
You lost me this time, Kowalski, but based on the talent I saw glimmering underneath that massively constructed iceberg of words, I'll still give your next book a try.