Well, this really ought to come with a do not read unless you have your partner handy, warning ;-)
This is one HOT read! The sex scenes are beautifully written and as a reader you really get drawn into the chemistry between these two. I loved the concept of the Forfeit, and as the back story of the characters unfolded slowly their motivations became clear. I did feel that perhaps there was too much emphasis on the sex at times. I'm not complaining, lol, this is an erotic romance, after all, but for the length of the story I would have liked to have seen a little more emphasis on character development. The author does tie everything up beautifully at the end.
One thing that bothered me is really an editing issue, that pulled me out of the story repeatedly. There was no indication of scene breaks or POV changes. Not sure whether that was just my review copy, but it forced me to read back a paragraph a few times.
The scene changes, in particular were quite abrupt. One minute they're in the bedroom, then they're in the kitchen, then it's another day...
I got used to it, and it didn't stop me from reading, but in a less engrossing story it would have done. It made reading quite hard work at times.
Having said all that, I really enjoyed this story and wouldn't hesitate to read this author again.