I'm not always a fantasy fan, but I got excited when I read some of the great reviews on the back cover. And I really wanted to like the book. Especially because it's a new author. The author's intentions were good, I think. I enjoyed the mythical creatures and the hidden-in-plain-sight idea, but it wasn't enough to make up for what the book lacked.
FINAL VERDICT: not recommended.
The plot was shaky at best and undeveloped at its worse. Again, the premise was good: missing (dead?) person, quest to save loved one, journey through mythical lands, meeting mythical creatures, and all of that while traveling through half of the United States. But the story left me with more questions than answers. Not "wow, I wonder what will happen next" type questions. But more "wait, why'd that happen, what just happened, who was that" type questions. There were too many holes that I couldn't fill in with the given information. Sometimes a character would stop speaking midway through a sentence because another character was assumed to understand the rest of it, all the while I, the reader, am left scratching my head and hoping that whatever invisible exchange just happened was not critical to my understanding of the plot (which of course it always was).
The characters were undeveloped and unrelatable. When I finish a book, I want to remember the characters and wish to see them or be them. I want to love or hate the characters. That didn't happen with any of these characters. I didn't feel any empathy, sympathy, or even pity towards Calliope, the protagonist. I couldn't even understand why her role was necessary in the story. At the end, I may have even been put off by her especially from her interactions with her estranged family. She was vulgar and impulsive. The author tried too hard to make her a "strong" leading lady and it didn't work. Her dialogue seemed forced and unnatural. A female character doesn't have to swear in every other sentence to be considered a strong, competent individual. I never quite understood what happened to Joshua White and why it happened. I don't understand the motivation behind Walker's relentless chasing of Calliope. I felt the most sympathetic towards Tom, the ex-boyfriend, then any other character and he only appears on a few pages.
Overall, not really worth the time it took to painfully reach the end. Plot had too many loose ends. Ending was not satisfying.