Sadly, this book totally didn't work for me. I loved the first two books in this series, they were eerie and haunting and a lot of fun, but this one just fell apart in almost every way for me.
It started out weird that instead of being absolutely horrified by what she found out about her past in Asher Falls, Amelia was somehow inspired by it. She always felt like a loner but now she says knows why she is the way she is so its OK. But it's horrible, it's not just a family trait she got from her "Papa," the circumstances of her birth should put anyone in therapy. She wants to believe it's a gift, not just a dangerous legacy. Fine, if that keeps her sane. But it's really glossing over the whole heart of the last book, which was disappointing to me, I wanted to see it addressed. Amelia refers to the guy in book 2 a lot but not the big news of how awful her background is. Instead she's just mooning after Devlin. It was just bizarre to me that she never once mentioned the horrible things she found out. It should have profoundly changed her.
And then there's that whole big secret I just can't tell you trope. Whether they can't tell for someone's own good or they think they'll never be believed, it always gets carried too far in every book it's used in and it's so annoying. If Amelia can't have a relationship with Devlin anyway, why not risk telling him and taking a chance that he'll be able to use the knowledge to get over what he's been clinging to for so long? Worst case is that he doesn't believe her and they have no relationship, status quo.
One thing that really bugged me was the big use of coincidence in this book. Amelia kept "just having a strong feeling" and there are lots of coincidences that she thought were suspicious but chalked up to fate because nothing is really a coincidence. She keeps repeating that she no longer believes in randomness, everything happens for a reason, but the reason is the author, it's all too convenient, it felt lazy and just irritated the heck out of me. Plus Amelia repeatedly said that something or someone was trying to direct her actions, and that took away from her intelligence and free will and spirit. she ended up looking weak and silly.
And what was with that mystery powder? How many times was Amelia sneaking around where she didn't belong and got some mysterious powder blown on her and then bad stuff happened to her? It was totally overused, it made her look like an idiot cozy mystery snoop who just should have stayed home, and made me wonder why the author couldn't come up with a few different ways for the girl to get in trouble this time around.
I think what bugged me the most is that it felt like Amelia was being victimized. In the other books there were human villains of course, but the supernatural elements were really strong and so surreal that they took center stage. But now clearly Amelia was being hunted by a human. This wasn't about ghosts, although a lot of ghosts certainly had their hands in the puzzle and had stakes in the outcome. And even though Shani was still intriguing, she wasn't scary anymore, she was just sympathetic and sad. And Mariama was pathetic and a villain but since she was clearly Amelia's opposition she wasn't wasn't really scary. And Fremont didn't present as scary. So even if Goodwine was scary, it was a human scary, manipulative and evil but not eerie the way a cemetery full of drowned ghosts ringing bells and reaching out for Amelia in the night were eerie in Asher Falls.
Plus I hated the romance. She doesn't know this guy. Everyone, including the guy, kept telling her that she doesn't know this guy. She has never had a real conversation with him, hasn't seen him in months. This isn't love. I had high hopes after the first book that this was a relationship that was going to develop slowly and have some depth, but it's still insta-love all attraction no interaction. Reading about an otherwise mature woman moping around after a guy like a teenager wasn't fun.
I have to give the author a lot of credit for one thing, she wasn't one of those authors who had the character have a dog or car and then just forget about them. Amelia adopted a fabulous dog in book 2 and she took good care of him. She remembered to let him out and walk him even when it wasn't just a key part of the plot. He was there in the house with her, responding to whatever went on. A lot of authors like having their characters have a pet but then forget that if their character is out all night or the house gets trashed, what happens to the animal has to be addressed, the fans are attached to the pet and will notice. But of course it has to be done without being obsessive too, no one wants to read about every potty break, just like we don't want to read about every shower or cup of coffee or bite to eat like some books seem to detail. Providing realism is a balancing act that Stevens manages really well.
The whole tone of the book was just off for me. It wasn't spooky or eerie or particularly interesting, I didn't like the romance, I didn't like the coincidence-filled cozy mystery and half way through I was bored and didn't even want to pick it back up. It was a very unexpected total turn-around from the first two books, which I really enjoyed.