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Annabelle's Story #1
Sprite
Annabelle Walsh thought she had it all. She was the star of her swim team, had a loving family, a great boyfriend, and to top it off, she’d be starting at UCLA in the fall. One day, she’d be referred to as Dr. Annabelle Walsh.
She was living every girl’s dream – until her life was turned upside down. All starting with finding out that she's not just a human, but also a water spirit. Half-human, half-sprite to be exact. Although not just any sprite, Annabelle is prophesied to be the only one who can save both the sprites and mankind.
With a mix of current events, anecdotes from Greek mythology, tidbits of folklore, and Leigh’s own imagination, we join Annabelle in her journey to restore order beneath the sea. Each step of the way her mind, body, and soul are pushed to the limit begging the question, how much can one half-human, half-sprite take?
She was living every girl’s dream – until her life was turned upside down. All starting with finding out that she's not just a human, but also a water spirit. Half-human, half-sprite to be exact. Although not just any sprite, Annabelle is prophesied to be the only one who can save both the sprites and mankind.
With a mix of current events, anecdotes from Greek mythology, tidbits of folklore, and Leigh’s own imagination, we join Annabelle in her journey to restore order beneath the sea. Each step of the way her mind, body, and soul are pushed to the limit begging the question, how much can one half-human, half-sprite take?
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First published April 30, 2012
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June 6, 2012
Actually a 2.5 star review. Read my reviews here and on the Akamai Reader!
I had a lot of problems suspending belief in this short novella. This story takes place underwater, yet they talk. With their vocal chords. You need air moving through your vocal chords to speak which is why I have such a hard time believing this is possible.
Another thing I had a hard time believing was when she saw someone’s tear falling down their face underwater. Wouldn’t that tear simply be lost in all the water?
Then there was the incident with her writing a letter with a pen underwater. How do you get a pen to work underwater? I suppose they have special pens and papers. I suppose I can let that one go for the sake of the story.
I also had problems with character development. Annabelle had a tendency to use sarcasm in all the wrong spots causing her to sound like a petulant child. The other characters weren’t very well developed causing them to appear shallow and one dimensional.
Finally there was the cliffhanger. The story just ends with no real resolution. You’re left with only questions left unanswered.
All in all a most unsatisfactory read.
I had a lot of problems suspending belief in this short novella. This story takes place underwater, yet they talk. With their vocal chords. You need air moving through your vocal chords to speak which is why I have such a hard time believing this is possible.
Another thing I had a hard time believing was when she saw someone’s tear falling down their face underwater. Wouldn’t that tear simply be lost in all the water?
Then there was the incident with her writing a letter with a pen underwater. How do you get a pen to work underwater? I suppose they have special pens and papers. I suppose I can let that one go for the sake of the story.
I also had problems with character development. Annabelle had a tendency to use sarcasm in all the wrong spots causing her to sound like a petulant child. The other characters weren’t very well developed causing them to appear shallow and one dimensional.
Finally there was the cliffhanger. The story just ends with no real resolution. You’re left with only questions left unanswered.
All in all a most unsatisfactory read.
January 4, 2014
2.5
The "cliff-hangar" ending was actually predictable.
While the premise for the book was good, the writing was distracting, passive, and weak. There were infrequent typos and misused words (like "alright" instead of "all right"). Annabelle's italicized thoughts were indistinguishable from normal prose (all in past tense), although the writing seemed to change style.
At least the magic was contained, limited, but there was still WAY too much power given to the MC.
The characters acted unrealistically. Why would the last Prince be allowed to go on dangerous missions? Why would her allies chloroform her? How can you throw things (or drop them and have them break) underwater? Why wouldn't the merfolk swim through the windows of the palace? It felt like the underwater world was too 2D, although Annabelle mentioned their sport felt 4D, which is completely off.
At least the cover is pretty and there was lots of action and only one kiss. No humor, though. Still, it sounds like there will be more romance in the next book, so I won't read it.
The "cliff-hangar" ending was actually predictable.
While the premise for the book was good, the writing was distracting, passive, and weak. There were infrequent typos and misused words (like "alright" instead of "all right"). Annabelle's italicized thoughts were indistinguishable from normal prose (all in past tense), although the writing seemed to change style.
At least the magic was contained, limited, but there was still WAY too much power given to the MC.
The characters acted unrealistically. Why would the last Prince be allowed to go on dangerous missions? Why would her allies chloroform her? How can you throw things (or drop them and have them break) underwater? Why wouldn't the merfolk swim through the windows of the palace? It felt like the underwater world was too 2D, although Annabelle mentioned their sport felt 4D, which is completely off.
At least the cover is pretty and there was lots of action and only one kiss. No humor, though. Still, it sounds like there will be more romance in the next book, so I won't read it.
January 31, 2013
This book blended mythology with fantasy in an underwater setting. There were so many creatures defined, it really held my interest! I think this may be a perfect summer beachside read!
November 9, 2012
Originally posted on www.yareads.com, reviewed by Nichole.
Annabelle Walsh thought she had it all. She was the star of her swim team, had a loving family, a great boyfriend, and to top it off, she’d be starting at UCLA in the fall. One day, she’d be referred to as Dr. Annabelle Walsh.
She was living every girl’s dream – until her life was turned upside down. All starting with finding out that she’s not just a human, but also a water spirit. Half-human, half-sprite to be exact. Although not just any sprite, Annabelle is prophesied to be the only one who can save both the sprites and mankind.
With a mix of current events, anecdotes from Greek mythology, tidbits of folklore, and Leigh’s own imagination, we join Annabelle in her journey to restore order beneath the sea. Each step of the way her mind, body, and soul are pushed to the limit begging the question, how much can one half-human, half-sprite take?
From the moment that I read the description of Sprite I was instantly intrigued. Many young adult books tend to focus on vampires, witches and werewolves, so it was refreshing to read something a little out of the norm. A story about a half-human, half -sprite? That sounded like something unique and right up my alley. Best of all? It didn’t disappoint.
Sprite was a very quick read, with it being only 161 pages, but I really got invested in the characters and storyline during that time. There were moments where I felt that it was a little rushed, and the ending was predictable, but there was something light and refreshing about Sprite that captivated me. I really enjoyed Annabelle’s character. I did feel that she adapted to the whole situation a little too soon, but it was really cool joining her in the sea and witnessing the whole mystical world that Michael created.
The whole underwater palace/city really fascinated me. There were a few things that I questioned, but I ignored my questions due to the fact that this book revolves around mythology and fantasy. I want my fantasy books to have a slight unrealistic quality to them, which I really enjoyed in Sprite. I also loved how visual Michael made the underwater city. The description of the city was so strong that I had an entire picture in my head. That made it that much more fun to read. I love being able to visualize books in my head.
Being only 161 pages, Sprite included a lot of action and adventure. I was always on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what would happen next. There is always the fear that a book will be bland, or not have enough adventure to keep the reader entertained, and I did not have that problem at all with this book. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Fans of Of Poseidon, by Anna Banks, will really enjoy this book. I really enjoyed having the chance to read about something new, and I can’t wait to read more from Michael in the future. I was a big fan of Sprite and everyone needs to go read it right now!
Pages: 161
Publication Date: April 30, 2012
Publisher: CreateSpace
Rating: : 3.5
Teaser Quote: “Adrianus, this is not some mission fueled by a vendetta. This isn’t revenge. This is the future of not only sprites, but also mankind.”
Annabelle Walsh thought she had it all. She was the star of her swim team, had a loving family, a great boyfriend, and to top it off, she’d be starting at UCLA in the fall. One day, she’d be referred to as Dr. Annabelle Walsh.
She was living every girl’s dream – until her life was turned upside down. All starting with finding out that she’s not just a human, but also a water spirit. Half-human, half-sprite to be exact. Although not just any sprite, Annabelle is prophesied to be the only one who can save both the sprites and mankind.
With a mix of current events, anecdotes from Greek mythology, tidbits of folklore, and Leigh’s own imagination, we join Annabelle in her journey to restore order beneath the sea. Each step of the way her mind, body, and soul are pushed to the limit begging the question, how much can one half-human, half-sprite take?
From the moment that I read the description of Sprite I was instantly intrigued. Many young adult books tend to focus on vampires, witches and werewolves, so it was refreshing to read something a little out of the norm. A story about a half-human, half -sprite? That sounded like something unique and right up my alley. Best of all? It didn’t disappoint.
Sprite was a very quick read, with it being only 161 pages, but I really got invested in the characters and storyline during that time. There were moments where I felt that it was a little rushed, and the ending was predictable, but there was something light and refreshing about Sprite that captivated me. I really enjoyed Annabelle’s character. I did feel that she adapted to the whole situation a little too soon, but it was really cool joining her in the sea and witnessing the whole mystical world that Michael created.
The whole underwater palace/city really fascinated me. There were a few things that I questioned, but I ignored my questions due to the fact that this book revolves around mythology and fantasy. I want my fantasy books to have a slight unrealistic quality to them, which I really enjoyed in Sprite. I also loved how visual Michael made the underwater city. The description of the city was so strong that I had an entire picture in my head. That made it that much more fun to read. I love being able to visualize books in my head.
Being only 161 pages, Sprite included a lot of action and adventure. I was always on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what would happen next. There is always the fear that a book will be bland, or not have enough adventure to keep the reader entertained, and I did not have that problem at all with this book. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Fans of Of Poseidon, by Anna Banks, will really enjoy this book. I really enjoyed having the chance to read about something new, and I can’t wait to read more from Michael in the future. I was a big fan of Sprite and everyone needs to go read it right now!
Pages: 161
Publication Date: April 30, 2012
Publisher: CreateSpace
Rating: : 3.5
Teaser Quote: “Adrianus, this is not some mission fueled by a vendetta. This isn’t revenge. This is the future of not only sprites, but also mankind.”
May 21, 2015
"Sprite was an amazing adventure beneath the sea with characters I feel in love with."
In Sprite the main protagonist Annabelle has it all, a great boyfriend, loving family, is the star of her swim team and is heading to UCLA in the fall to study medicine. She would tell you herself she has a great life but suddenly her world is turned upside down when she is kidnapped and thrust into the ocean, only to release she can actually breath underwater and isn't exactly human. What Annabelle discovers is that she is a half Sprite/half human and is prophesied to be the only one to be able to save the Sprites and mankind.
Throughout the book Annabelle struggles to believe that she is the one prophesied to save everyone. But all the facts are coming together and she must decide whether to go on a mission to save everyone or decide everything is a lie (even though she is show how breathing underwater). I have to point out I really liked that even though Annabelle is half Sprite she didn't all of a sudden sprout fins, she was still human even underwater.
I also really liked that the story was quick of the mark that we didn't have to wait around forever to get into the story and kick of the adventure. I loved that Annabelle is learning everything as we as the reader are learning with her. I liked learning about all the different types of Sprites, merfolk, water fairies and nixies. I especially liked the though of the nixies who are in fact shape shifters. We also get a Greek mythology lesson when learning about the prophecy which I really enjoyed. Also Tritonis the city that the merfolk live in sounds awesome and magical. It reminded me of the where the Little Mermaid would have lived : )
The other characters in the book where great. I loved Adrian and I loved the connection between him and Annabelle, I can't wait to see where there relationship goes in the next book. I also like Natasha a guardian who accompanies them on the mission, I would like to hear more from her and her story.
Overall I highly recommend Sprite. It's a quick, exciting adventure that will leave you wanting more. You will fall in love with the characters and the world. A great book! I can't wait for part two.
In Sprite the main protagonist Annabelle has it all, a great boyfriend, loving family, is the star of her swim team and is heading to UCLA in the fall to study medicine. She would tell you herself she has a great life but suddenly her world is turned upside down when she is kidnapped and thrust into the ocean, only to release she can actually breath underwater and isn't exactly human. What Annabelle discovers is that she is a half Sprite/half human and is prophesied to be the only one to be able to save the Sprites and mankind.
Throughout the book Annabelle struggles to believe that she is the one prophesied to save everyone. But all the facts are coming together and she must decide whether to go on a mission to save everyone or decide everything is a lie (even though she is show how breathing underwater). I have to point out I really liked that even though Annabelle is half Sprite she didn't all of a sudden sprout fins, she was still human even underwater.
I also really liked that the story was quick of the mark that we didn't have to wait around forever to get into the story and kick of the adventure. I loved that Annabelle is learning everything as we as the reader are learning with her. I liked learning about all the different types of Sprites, merfolk, water fairies and nixies. I especially liked the though of the nixies who are in fact shape shifters. We also get a Greek mythology lesson when learning about the prophecy which I really enjoyed. Also Tritonis the city that the merfolk live in sounds awesome and magical. It reminded me of the where the Little Mermaid would have lived : )
The other characters in the book where great. I loved Adrian and I loved the connection between him and Annabelle, I can't wait to see where there relationship goes in the next book. I also like Natasha a guardian who accompanies them on the mission, I would like to hear more from her and her story.
Overall I highly recommend Sprite. It's a quick, exciting adventure that will leave you wanting more. You will fall in love with the characters and the world. A great book! I can't wait for part two.
June 26, 2012
3 1/2 stars
Sprite was definitely new and refreshing for me. Normally I’m into Vampires and werewolves and all things that go bump in the night. But I enjoyed Leigh’s story of Merman, Sprites, and many underwater creatures she has put forth. Even the mythology was intriguing.
She has certainly not held back on the vivid detail in which she has included in her story. Giving the reader step by step detail into the underwater world in which she has created.
Annabelle's goes from being a normal human being to someone she never thought possible. I found that She adapted very well, and moved on with life with no real heart ache or anxiety. I’d like to have seen a little more saddness mabye - after leaving her family behind to live a life she never knew existed. Being pulled from one world to another is just not an everyday occurance.
The storyline was very imaginative - being able to do so much underwater - some of it came across as very unreal. But saying this it is a fantasy story filled with a lot of great ideas and imagination on Leigh's behalf.
An ending I’m sure you will be wandering about, I eagerly look forward to book two to see which direction Leigh takes us. Only a short read easily read in one sitting. I’m sure the creativeness in this story alone will have your interest piqued. It’s very ya, ideal for anyone over the age of 13 and also for all those adults who love a fantasy story containing Mythology and underwater creatures of many kinds.
Characters I’m sure you will enjoy. I found Annabelle a little too eager to accept her new world. I’d like to have seen more turmoil with her new found life and abilities. Otherwise a likable character. The prince I found was sweet and witty .
Overall. I Recommend this to all. A great change to what is currently being shelved at the moment. Its filled with great imagination and an array of well thought out descriptions giving us an underwater world we can see through a looking glass.
Sprite was definitely new and refreshing for me. Normally I’m into Vampires and werewolves and all things that go bump in the night. But I enjoyed Leigh’s story of Merman, Sprites, and many underwater creatures she has put forth. Even the mythology was intriguing.
She has certainly not held back on the vivid detail in which she has included in her story. Giving the reader step by step detail into the underwater world in which she has created.
Annabelle's goes from being a normal human being to someone she never thought possible. I found that She adapted very well, and moved on with life with no real heart ache or anxiety. I’d like to have seen a little more saddness mabye - after leaving her family behind to live a life she never knew existed. Being pulled from one world to another is just not an everyday occurance.
The storyline was very imaginative - being able to do so much underwater - some of it came across as very unreal. But saying this it is a fantasy story filled with a lot of great ideas and imagination on Leigh's behalf.
An ending I’m sure you will be wandering about, I eagerly look forward to book two to see which direction Leigh takes us. Only a short read easily read in one sitting. I’m sure the creativeness in this story alone will have your interest piqued. It’s very ya, ideal for anyone over the age of 13 and also for all those adults who love a fantasy story containing Mythology and underwater creatures of many kinds.
Characters I’m sure you will enjoy. I found Annabelle a little too eager to accept her new world. I’d like to have seen more turmoil with her new found life and abilities. Otherwise a likable character. The prince I found was sweet and witty .
Overall. I Recommend this to all. A great change to what is currently being shelved at the moment. Its filled with great imagination and an array of well thought out descriptions giving us an underwater world we can see through a looking glass.
October 3, 2012
Wow, I was not expecting this thrilling ride, but loved it. I had not read any major water type books, most I had read was a book with many magic types and it had one mermaid (who had legs on land) and a water elemental in it. I loved it, and the small taste I had into the water type supernatural. Well, this book is amazing, as I had not read anything before about water sprites, or even selkies before, for sure not mermaids or mermen, (I know, weird, but I never read or watched the Little Mermaid either, neither did my daughter, so no exposure there either.
The world building in this is amazing too, like finding nemo meets the supernatural’s of the water. I mean when the jet streams are described that what popped into my head, the way they seemed like a tube of fast water, like a superhighway of the water. I found it very interesting, and kept me hooked.
I loved the characters, Annabelle is a very pleasant girl, and I love Adrian, he is such a sweetheart. I won’t say much about who is what, as I want to leave you with the thrill and fun of the surprise.
What I will say, is there is twist and turns you won’t expect. And that you will be glad that the 2nd part of this story KIN is already out, as it’s a bit of a cliffhanger, so picking up the next book is a must.
I had to take a quick break to write this before picking up KIN, so I would not accidently put something that’s in the 2nd story, lol.
I highly recommend this book, it’s a sweet and exciting story. I can’t wait to see where it goes from here. KIN here I come.
See my blog for more, book tour going now, with expert.
The world building in this is amazing too, like finding nemo meets the supernatural’s of the water. I mean when the jet streams are described that what popped into my head, the way they seemed like a tube of fast water, like a superhighway of the water. I found it very interesting, and kept me hooked.
I loved the characters, Annabelle is a very pleasant girl, and I love Adrian, he is such a sweetheart. I won’t say much about who is what, as I want to leave you with the thrill and fun of the surprise.
What I will say, is there is twist and turns you won’t expect. And that you will be glad that the 2nd part of this story KIN is already out, as it’s a bit of a cliffhanger, so picking up the next book is a must.
I had to take a quick break to write this before picking up KIN, so I would not accidently put something that’s in the 2nd story, lol.
I highly recommend this book, it’s a sweet and exciting story. I can’t wait to see where it goes from here. KIN here I come.
See my blog for more, book tour going now, with expert.
May 16, 2012
I was gifted a copy of Sprite by the author for an honest review.
Annabelle, an 18 year old star swimmer who will be starting UCLA’s pre-med program in the fall finds out one cold winter day that she is part human and part sprite. She also finds out that she is a part of a prophecy that will forever change her life.
I liked:
The cover of the book. Just look at it.
The overall plot of the book. Girl finds out she is part mystical in nature and is needed to help out the people she is a descendant of.
The Greek Mythology included in this book as well as the lore of the Yoruba people. There is a legend/story, if you will, that is believed to be connected to Annabelle herself. I totally loved how the author used the Arethusa myth as the foundation of the plot. I've always loved Greek Mythology and the many stories that continue to be told of all the gods and goddesses. It was also nice to see the Mami Wata included in this book because the Yoruba people are a beautiful people with rich history and beliefs.
YaYa. Queen of the Merpeople and she’s quite an interesting character. I was glued to my IPad when she spoke of the history of their people.
The Ending. Possibly the best part of the book and when I say the ending I do mean the very last page. Honestly, I didn't see it coming and it was definitely a WOW.
In Summary
This is a totally different world than the one Annabelle is used to. She is a huge part of its survival and I just wanted a bit more conviction in her kick_assery. However, because of the plot, the myths and the great ending I do look forward to reading the next book in the series. Annabelle is still one to be on the look out for, though. She shows growth in this read and I can’t wait to see how much further she grows in the next installment. KICK SOME BUTT ANNABELLE!
Annabelle, an 18 year old star swimmer who will be starting UCLA’s pre-med program in the fall finds out one cold winter day that she is part human and part sprite. She also finds out that she is a part of a prophecy that will forever change her life.
I liked:
The cover of the book. Just look at it.
The overall plot of the book. Girl finds out she is part mystical in nature and is needed to help out the people she is a descendant of.
The Greek Mythology included in this book as well as the lore of the Yoruba people. There is a legend/story, if you will, that is believed to be connected to Annabelle herself. I totally loved how the author used the Arethusa myth as the foundation of the plot. I've always loved Greek Mythology and the many stories that continue to be told of all the gods and goddesses. It was also nice to see the Mami Wata included in this book because the Yoruba people are a beautiful people with rich history and beliefs.
YaYa. Queen of the Merpeople and she’s quite an interesting character. I was glued to my IPad when she spoke of the history of their people.
The Ending. Possibly the best part of the book and when I say the ending I do mean the very last page. Honestly, I didn't see it coming and it was definitely a WOW.
In Summary
This is a totally different world than the one Annabelle is used to. She is a huge part of its survival and I just wanted a bit more conviction in her kick_assery. However, because of the plot, the myths and the great ending I do look forward to reading the next book in the series. Annabelle is still one to be on the look out for, though. She shows growth in this read and I can’t wait to see how much further she grows in the next installment. KICK SOME BUTT ANNABELLE!
November 23, 2012
I put off reading any other type of mermaid/selkie/sprite stories while writing my own. But now I can sit back and fully enjoy them. And enjoy Sprite, I did. I think I read this book in two days - simply because I didn't want to put it down. Leigh has created a magical (and totally different) world for her water creatures, and I loved it. Her writing flowed well, the characters were believable, and I like where the story is going. Annabelle is a teenage girl with plans (love that!) until she discovers what she really is. Leigh did a nice job of flushing out Annabelle's new world, and although she accepted it rather quickly, I think that just goes to show how mature Annabelle is for someone her age. Adrian is a complete, well planned character and I look forward to seeing him more. I had my suspicions about Blake, and wanted to learn more - but have a feeling I will in the second book. If the writing style and world building don't draw you in, then the cliffhanger at the end will have you begging for more!
The Good: Sprite was a nicely paced, entertaining read that will keep you enthralled. The magical world alone is a bonus, plus I have to give Leigh props for incorporating some of the scientific names into her character types!
The Issue: It was a little hard for me to wrap my mind around Annabelle's swimming and breathing underwater and keeping it on par with the other creatures who were better adapted. But then I told myself to stop being so scientific and enjoy the story for what it is - a great story!
The Rating: 5 conch. A really great start in a series about all water creatures. I've already started Kin (Book Two!)
Originally appeared at http://ambergarr.blogspot.com
The Good: Sprite was a nicely paced, entertaining read that will keep you enthralled. The magical world alone is a bonus, plus I have to give Leigh props for incorporating some of the scientific names into her character types!
The Issue: It was a little hard for me to wrap my mind around Annabelle's swimming and breathing underwater and keeping it on par with the other creatures who were better adapted. But then I told myself to stop being so scientific and enjoy the story for what it is - a great story!
The Rating: 5 conch. A really great start in a series about all water creatures. I've already started Kin (Book Two!)
Originally appeared at http://ambergarr.blogspot.com
November 12, 2012
I love mermaids. Always have. But I’ve never read a mermaid book until now. We start off with our seemingly regular high school girl who has dreams of becoming a doctor one day. Coming off the high of a big win in her swim match, Annabelle gets kidnapped and later finds out she’s supposed to be the savior of a group of merfolk, who, by the way, have two tales instead of one (like the Starbucks mascot). They originate from Poseidon’s son, Triton, and have a long and colorful history.
I love that Leigh Michael did her research on the many, many creatures of water mythology and folklore (although I do disagree that rusalkas should be a part of “merfolk” species). I don’t think she let an opportunity pass by to prove that she did the research and I think that really benefits the more casual reader who may not have as much knowledge of the stories as say, a mythology-buff like me. This story is super fast paced and easy to read. It’s sweet, likable, and the quest of the main character definitely keeps you interested. The underwater world is painted really well to make everything believable. And the secondary characters all had these wonderful little backstories to go with them.
I had one major issue. I just don’t feel like Annabelle was given enough time to train properly and then within a course of three days her water powers come to fruition. And then after a day of training those powers, BAM!, she has to run off on this super dangerous quest. I realize that there’s a time table here, but I also think that the merfolk could have, or rather should have, captured her earlier so that she could properly train.
All in all: I enjoyed the book. I felt it was a bit too short and wished it was longer, but I suppose I’ll have to read Kin to find out what happens next.
I love that Leigh Michael did her research on the many, many creatures of water mythology and folklore (although I do disagree that rusalkas should be a part of “merfolk” species). I don’t think she let an opportunity pass by to prove that she did the research and I think that really benefits the more casual reader who may not have as much knowledge of the stories as say, a mythology-buff like me. This story is super fast paced and easy to read. It’s sweet, likable, and the quest of the main character definitely keeps you interested. The underwater world is painted really well to make everything believable. And the secondary characters all had these wonderful little backstories to go with them.
I had one major issue. I just don’t feel like Annabelle was given enough time to train properly and then within a course of three days her water powers come to fruition. And then after a day of training those powers, BAM!, she has to run off on this super dangerous quest. I realize that there’s a time table here, but I also think that the merfolk could have, or rather should have, captured her earlier so that she could properly train.
All in all: I enjoyed the book. I felt it was a bit too short and wished it was longer, but I suppose I’ll have to read Kin to find out what happens next.
July 13, 2012
This is a typical hero’s origin story. This time the hero in Sprite (Annabelle’s Story: Part One) is the afore mentioned Annabelle. I liked this book. The fact that this hero is female, a trend that’s starting to dominate the book market, made it interesting. The mythos created is grounded in a mix of fantasy and Greek mythology.
Anyone that likes mythology will like this book, especially young girls. I think Annabelle is a character that is constantly questioning this amazingly new facet of her life. Annabelle is an unconvinced and consciously reluctant hero. For the majority of this novel her emotion revel between the fascination with her new abilities, resistant of her hero’s quest, and the family she left behind. I like reading how women writers decide to test their heroines.
I found this novel an interesting read, although a lot of elements were patented. One example is Blake. He came under my suspension the moment he left his girlfriend when she just told him about a creepy man near her car. I don’t even like my sister walking to her car by herself.
The sides of good and evil were defined but I still don’t trust the Queen of Tritonis. Maybe I’m just suspicious because of how evasive they’re with Annabelle. Leigh Michael’s story left me with a lot of unanswered questions that I hope will be answered in Kin (Annabelle’s Story: Part Two). It’s scheduled for released August 2012.
Anyone that likes mythology will like this book, especially young girls. I think Annabelle is a character that is constantly questioning this amazingly new facet of her life. Annabelle is an unconvinced and consciously reluctant hero. For the majority of this novel her emotion revel between the fascination with her new abilities, resistant of her hero’s quest, and the family she left behind. I like reading how women writers decide to test their heroines.
I found this novel an interesting read, although a lot of elements were patented. One example is Blake. He came under my suspension the moment he left his girlfriend when she just told him about a creepy man near her car. I don’t even like my sister walking to her car by herself.
The sides of good and evil were defined but I still don’t trust the Queen of Tritonis. Maybe I’m just suspicious because of how evasive they’re with Annabelle. Leigh Michael’s story left me with a lot of unanswered questions that I hope will be answered in Kin (Annabelle’s Story: Part Two). It’s scheduled for released August 2012.
October 26, 2012
Annabelle Wash is your typical teenage girl. She's a senior in high school, the star of the swim team, and she has a dreamy hot boyfriend. One night after returning home from a swim meet, Annabelle's life is forever changed when she finds herself face-to-face with a whole world she only thought existed in fairy tales. Forced to face the fact that nothing and nobody are what they seem, Annabelle begins a journey that not only changes her life, but affects the life of a whole race that she never knew existed. Finding herself in the company of the most beautiful boy she's ever seen, Annabelle must choose to trust him, or risk losing everything, possibly even her life.
This is a really fun story, filled with fantasy, folklore, some Greek mythology, and a little romance. Annabelle was very likable and entertaining. Adrian, the love interest, was also really fun to get to know. There is a bit of a love triangle as Annabelle finds herself torn between the boy she is with and the boy she left behind. There are also several secondary characters that are both imaginative and entertaining. Leigh Michael has created a world under the sea that includes creatures, myths, and places, from both legend and her own imagination that is unique and enjoyable. The romance is sweet, there is adventure, some danger, and some mystery as well. I found this book to be a cute and entertaining read and feel that it would be something that would appeal to tweens and teens, especially if you like mermaids, mythology, and romance.
This is a really fun story, filled with fantasy, folklore, some Greek mythology, and a little romance. Annabelle was very likable and entertaining. Adrian, the love interest, was also really fun to get to know. There is a bit of a love triangle as Annabelle finds herself torn between the boy she is with and the boy she left behind. There are also several secondary characters that are both imaginative and entertaining. Leigh Michael has created a world under the sea that includes creatures, myths, and places, from both legend and her own imagination that is unique and enjoyable. The romance is sweet, there is adventure, some danger, and some mystery as well. I found this book to be a cute and entertaining read and feel that it would be something that would appeal to tweens and teens, especially if you like mermaids, mythology, and romance.
September 30, 2012
This book is a very quick read about a girl, Annabelle, who finds out that she is part of a world that she never knew existed. One minute, she's a high schooler who took like a fish to water on the swim team and the next second, she's part of an underwater world being chased by people who she has no idea what they want from her.
This book jumps right into the action, which is good in one way as it moves the story forward quickly. On the other hand, because we don't get to see a lot Annabelle before her transformation, we don't get a chance to really get to know Annabelle before she finds out what she is.
Furthermore, at about 160 pages, there was not much that happened in the book that was not part of the main story arc. So you only get to know the characters in the context of the story arc and not much about who they really are outside of it. It sort of left me with a lot of different questions about the motives of the various characters.
One thing that I did like about the book is the inclusion of Greek mythology. I love mythology so it was really cool to learn a little bit more about it. I also liked seeing how the author was able to weave in some of the Greek mythology in order to explain Annabelle's story.
I also liked that the book was sort of written in a conversational tone. You almost feel like Annabelle is talking to you as a close friend.
Bottom line: A good, short story with a healthy dose of mythology!
This book jumps right into the action, which is good in one way as it moves the story forward quickly. On the other hand, because we don't get to see a lot Annabelle before her transformation, we don't get a chance to really get to know Annabelle before she finds out what she is.
Furthermore, at about 160 pages, there was not much that happened in the book that was not part of the main story arc. So you only get to know the characters in the context of the story arc and not much about who they really are outside of it. It sort of left me with a lot of different questions about the motives of the various characters.
One thing that I did like about the book is the inclusion of Greek mythology. I love mythology so it was really cool to learn a little bit more about it. I also liked seeing how the author was able to weave in some of the Greek mythology in order to explain Annabelle's story.
I also liked that the book was sort of written in a conversational tone. You almost feel like Annabelle is talking to you as a close friend.
Bottom line: A good, short story with a healthy dose of mythology!
May 20, 2012
Sprite was different from anything I have read before. My attention was captured from the first page, and I knew I was going to enjoy Annabelle's character. Annabelle has a dream...a plan for her life. She seems to have it all. Until one night she is kidnapped right out of her driveway. Life will never be the same. And now the fate of everyone is in her hands. With the help of Adrian, a member of the water world royal family, it is a race against time to avoid the trackers and find the missing shell that will save the day.
I enjoyed the under water world Michael's has created. The descriptions were vivid and the characters likable. The story also had plenty of suspense and left me wanting more. My only issue was that it seemed Annabelle adapted a little to easily to everything going on. One minute she is standing on her driveway, the next she is swimming for her life and being told she is the one prophesied to save the day. While she thinks of her family often, it just seemed a little odd that she would so readily accept the fact that she is half human and half sprite..who even knew they existed! I love how different this story line is. It's a refreshing break from werewolves and vampires. I look forward to reading the next book in the series and hope the wait won't be too long! Michael's has done a great job for her first published novel!
I enjoyed the under water world Michael's has created. The descriptions were vivid and the characters likable. The story also had plenty of suspense and left me wanting more. My only issue was that it seemed Annabelle adapted a little to easily to everything going on. One minute she is standing on her driveway, the next she is swimming for her life and being told she is the one prophesied to save the day. While she thinks of her family often, it just seemed a little odd that she would so readily accept the fact that she is half human and half sprite..who even knew they existed! I love how different this story line is. It's a refreshing break from werewolves and vampires. I look forward to reading the next book in the series and hope the wait won't be too long! Michael's has done a great job for her first published novel!
October 9, 2012
'Sprite' is the first book in the young adult fantasy series, Annabelle's Story. It follows the main character, Annabelle Walsh, as her entire life comes crashing down around her when she learns she is actually half water sprite. On top of this bomb, she learns that she isn't just any half sprite, she is the one prophesied about - the one who will save humans and sprites alike. Will Annabelle be able to accept her fate and save the world?
I found this book to be a fast-paced and fun read with tons of adventure and great fantasy characters. I found it interesting how the author presented the sprite culture and their history. There are tons of mermaid books out there, but the water sprites brought a unique and refreshing feel to the fantasy genre in young adult fiction.
This story was somewhat predictable but had great twists and adventures that I didn't see coming. I easily reconnected to Annabelle and identified with her early in the story. The ending was a good fit for a first in a series - it doesn't leave the ending too closed and it doesn't leave too many questions unanswered either. All in all, 'Sprite' is a great start to a fun and interesting series. Fans of fantasy YA fiction and mermaid lore will love this series.
Disclosure: I received a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
I found this book to be a fast-paced and fun read with tons of adventure and great fantasy characters. I found it interesting how the author presented the sprite culture and their history. There are tons of mermaid books out there, but the water sprites brought a unique and refreshing feel to the fantasy genre in young adult fiction.
This story was somewhat predictable but had great twists and adventures that I didn't see coming. I easily reconnected to Annabelle and identified with her early in the story. The ending was a good fit for a first in a series - it doesn't leave the ending too closed and it doesn't leave too many questions unanswered either. All in all, 'Sprite' is a great start to a fun and interesting series. Fans of fantasy YA fiction and mermaid lore will love this series.
Disclosure: I received a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
August 4, 2012
No one really thinks of themselves as a hero like Batman or Wonder Woman. No one ever considers themselves a potential savior of the world. Of course, we all do our part, but how would you handle someone snatching you from your family and friends and then telling you that your not human but something else? Well, Annabelle Walsh found out very quickly when she was kidnapped and forced to breath underwater. She was the star of her swim team and on her way to becoming a student at UCLA. She was happy and content. Annabelle was now, at age 18, half-human and half-sprite. According to the Tritons prophecy, the soon to be savior of their world and ours.
Leigh has created a fast-paced read young readers will sink their teeth into. If you are a fan of Greek mythology or folklore this is the perfect story for any reader to sit back and root for a good guy, or in this case the good girl. Vivid scenes of a world under water will have readers feeling as if this place could be real. This action packed tale will give readers the feeling they are racing against time with the characters.
Leigh has created a fast-paced read young readers will sink their teeth into. If you are a fan of Greek mythology or folklore this is the perfect story for any reader to sit back and root for a good guy, or in this case the good girl. Vivid scenes of a world under water will have readers feeling as if this place could be real. This action packed tale will give readers the feeling they are racing against time with the characters.
August 20, 2012
OMG! This book was so good, I read it in 2 days (not realizing I'd have to wait for bk 2! LOL), I just couldn't put it down. Although I'd say this book was deffinately for the younger audience, perhaps 12 and up (my granddaughter is 11 and an avid reader and she'd love this book-she's not read it yet, but plans to soon), I still loved it myself.
Ms Michael has one helluvan imagination! A complete different concept with sprites, selkies, merfolk, trackers(the bad guys), and some kind of...underwater horse like creature they had to wrangle & ride! This was all in an underwater type city! Like I said, Leigh Michael has some kinda imagination!! The description of the underwater city and castle was amazing! Intense action, from the training to the actual defense. And talk about a "cliffhanger"?! Oh my gosh! I'm so glad my wait for book 2 was only 3 months!!
I seriously can't wait to see/read Ms. Michaels next work of art!
Ms Michael has one helluvan imagination! A complete different concept with sprites, selkies, merfolk, trackers(the bad guys), and some kind of...underwater horse like creature they had to wrangle & ride! This was all in an underwater type city! Like I said, Leigh Michael has some kinda imagination!! The description of the underwater city and castle was amazing! Intense action, from the training to the actual defense. And talk about a "cliffhanger"?! Oh my gosh! I'm so glad my wait for book 2 was only 3 months!!
I seriously can't wait to see/read Ms. Michaels next work of art!
October 11, 2012
A wonderful combination of mythology, romance, and adventure. Annabelle is an appealing character with a feisty temperament. She is stunned however when she discovers that she's not completely human, and not only that she is thought to be the answer to a prophecy. While I had a bit of a hard time getting into this story because of some editing problems (odd word combinations, grammatical errors, etc.), once Annabelle arrived at Tritonis, I was hooked. The author does a fabulous job of creating an awesome setting in the underwater city of Tritonis. I immediately wanted to go there (only if I could breathe underwater like Annabelle though). I also appreciated lack of graphic sexual situations and excessive violence, it made the book a much more comfortable read for me. There is a bit of swearing, but not a lot. Overall, I recommend the book as a fun read for those who can't get enough mythology.
January 1, 2013
Sprite was such a unique story! As a mythology lover I really enjoyed Leigh Michael's take on Hades, Zeus and Poseidon. When Annabelle is kidnapped by a strange man and dragged into the sea she has no idea that she's about to be introduced to a whole new world. Not only does she realize she can breathe under water, but she's also a descendant of Triton. How cool is that?! I really liked Annabelle's character. While she was a bit irritating in the beginning, when she realizes she has a job to do she puts on her big girl panties and gets to work. I also like the twists and turns of the story. No one really is as they seem. While at times a bit predictable, the action and adventure kept the pages turning. Sprite was an enjoyable read, and I hope Kin (Part Two) keeps me just as intrigued.
November 9, 2012
I liked the storyline, and enjoyed the mention of various Greek myths. I disliked the writing style. The author made almost. every character have the same voice and she made the main character completely naive and at times- stupid. I couldn't really concentrate much at times, because I felt. like there was too much "blah blah blah" in the book. The ending was pretty much NOT an ending, but I guess it could be SOME sort of cliff hanger. I really think the author had a great idea, but failed conveying it. Nevertheless, I will be reading the sequel, just because I can never leave a story unfinished.
2.5 stars.
2.5 stars.
August 10, 2015
Talk about green transportation! Annabelle and Adrian's use of the jet stream makes me envious. I gotta admit the ending threw me for a loop. There are a few editorial misses, like my where it should be a me. Not really an issue for me, but I want to be honest in my review.
Leigh, I have to say your book is far better than a few best sellers. I wish you the best of luck at trying to knock them off the list.
Ready for part 2!
First reads winner review.
Leigh, I have to say your book is far better than a few best sellers. I wish you the best of luck at trying to knock them off the list.
Ready for part 2!
First reads winner review.
June 13, 2012
I loved this story up until the last page.
That was when it became the first of who knows how many stores about mermen, sprites and so on. Just felt like a sucker punch. Should have paid closer attention to the intro blurb then would have been prepared. Great read.
That was when it became the first of who knows how many stores about mermen, sprites and so on. Just felt like a sucker punch. Should have paid closer attention to the intro blurb then would have been prepared. Great read.
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May 18, 2012A sprite for a Heroine? promising change...
August 20, 2012
looks and sounds awesome...
November 8, 2012
This was terrible. The plot may have been interesting, but my 6th grader would have had less grammatical mistakes. The flow was also really off, which made it difficult to even understand.
January 1, 2013
It was action packed from start to finish. I loved the greek mythology too.
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