"I... I'm sorry Kath... I ca..Can't be the man you want me to be..."
Now, with polite respect to other opinions I've heard about this work, well I'd think (fantasy only, no death threat don't worry) that anyone who thinks this is "Immature" should be fed to the various gruesome beasties in this book... For "Immature" go to the "Boddysey" which is more of an art technique experiment with pure erotic imagery.
The story starts out of course as a "Boy's Macho Fantasy". Really, that's what appealed to me, young teen goes into an 'otherworld' and metamorphs into a superior overman, gets to kick butt, take names, gets laid and can use his brain too on top of it. Really, who'd not want that?
Well this is where it goes to the aspect of 'modern' fantasy creeping into the good ol' sword and planet stuff. However, unlike the stuff excreted today, it is not "Deconstructionist". Sorry, but Den is a good man, the hero, but is NOT cliche and NOT Gay, etc. And he doesn't deserve what he goes through.
Now, spoiler fearers avert thine eyes, but I'll only hint...
1. The "Damsel in Distress" gets sick of her part in the story...
2. There's a more realistic love triangle brewing.
3. Already some complex motivations and plots developing.
4. An old enemy is still active.
5. The hero faces a conflict where his will is tested more than any enemy.
6. He comes back, but not in time to save the day.
7. Things go from bad to worse.
8. No, the hero doesn't always win.
9. Despite that, life goes on.
This is a very good work - the Underground bursting to the mainstream, challenging and re-inventing classic heroic fantasy cliche - pushing the boundaries of what content could be used - both in an over the top way and a justified by the story way.