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277 pages, Paperback
First published September 1, 2002
➼ A musical magic system. I may have mentioned in other reviews that I don't really mind if a magic system is codified in an almost scientific way (ala Brandon Sanderson), but I've always found magic systems that are somehow tied to music or language really appealing. The world of Tremaris and its various types of music-based magic disciplines was beautiful; the descriptions of how they all interact with each other and what they sound like when sung were done well.Now I want to talk about some things that I wasn't as fond of.
➼ An interesting, flawed protagonist and a varied supporting cast. I don't think all readers with like Calwyn, the protagonist, at least not at first blush. She starts off relatively secure but a bit mischievous, and her restless nature almost borders on whiny. To me, that's fine - she's 16, and based on her upbringing, it makes sense that her outlook on the world is sheltered. There's also such a thing as character development, and Calwyn certainly does learn and grow over the course of the novel. I wasn't as fond of Darrow; Calwyn mentions not getting a good read on him, so to speak, and I agree with her assessment. He holds himself apart from the group, and this book never really resolves why (other than just saying he's aloof, which just seemed to kind of hand-wave it away). Luckily, the other side characters are more fleshed-out and likeable, though I do hope they develop more past being fantasy archetypes in future books. I think Mica, the brash windworker, is my favorite at the moment.
➼ The descriptive prose. This is another thing that will really vary from reader to reader - I think others might find the prose too far on the purple side - but I liked it. It painted the people and landscapes of Tremaris in vivid colors to me.