It's not often that I rate a book this low, almost never and I considered the reasons, but after much though and time I still can't help but rate it the same and I stand by the rating.
It's been so long since I was so angry and disappointed reading a book. This is definitely one of the worst I have read and not even because of the editing, pacing or writing, but for the plot itself, which is a messy, confusing plot of whatever the heck is happening at the moment.
I was a bit reluctant when I read the first chapters because, even if they were not great, they still piqued my interest and I continued with the hope that eventually things will pick-up and get better. Boy, was I wrong about that one! As I kept reading everything just got messier and messier to the point that there was seemingly no point to the story and plot-wise it was going nowhere.
Main couple is supposed to be Alethea and Roman, with a prominent past played by Devendra, the latter's guide. As the storyline advanced, his character became more useless, as he lost importance and was more like a servant than a main character, and he's supposed to be pivotal to the purpose of the book. Even though his main purpose, was actually fulfilled by Devendra! Later, we are introduced to the main antagonist, Lokee, who, seemingly, could be killed around the first few chapters but is kept alive because "is not the right time," the slogan to make the book 200 pages too long. Some despicable and terrible acts fall upon our heroine, and the disturbing descriptions were quite better, just to continue the downhill spiral the book already had.
The last showdown is the most anticlimactic scene ever, and the consequences of the despicable happenings are seemingly condoned by the fact that the nightmare brought forward a "miracle" that would save them. Seriously, at this point killing every character would have been a happy ending for me. Roman was like a disposable tissue, no longer important to the story since more than half a book ago, and now I'm supposed to be happy because her "sacrifice" saved them. And then suddenly, abruptly end it with that knowledge. I was really dreading a sequel and I'm glad that that wasn't the case.
The way I felt after reading this book was so bad that I had no other rating to give. It was like I had lost my time reading this book when I could've read something better. By the end of it I just felt like I read a plotless story that didn't make sense in any way. The only think I could salvage maybe, are the first four chapters, aside from that everything wasn't good.
Don't get me wrong, this story had potential, and every element to be a great story, but the plot is terrible and doesn't make any sense. There are bits of the book that I found likable, like Devendra's story and some eerie descriptions but, shamefully, this is not good.