What do you think?
Rate this book
Homework Verse #1
But then, My Homework Was Never Quite Like This
J2 Fanfic
AU. Jared’s eighteen and in his senior year at a private school in San Francisco. He’s coasting pretty on his parents generous school donations—until his seventh period Physics teacher gets replaced with the maddening, infuriating, gorgeous Mr. Ackles. Jared’s gotten by all his life on his money and his charm, but Mr. Ackles seems to think he needs some... lessons in self-control. The journey their relationship eventually takes them on turns out to be far more than either of them ever bargained for. Toppy!Teacher!Jensen in glasses and Student!Jared in private school uniform included!
WORDS: 85,984 Complete
NOTES: Definite D/s but nothing hardcore. Jared is 18, Jensen is 26, and people can smoke in public in MY San Francisco.
AU. Jared’s eighteen and in his senior year at a private school in San Francisco. He’s coasting pretty on his parents generous school donations—until his seventh period Physics teacher gets replaced with the maddening, infuriating, gorgeous Mr. Ackles. Jared’s gotten by all his life on his money and his charm, but Mr. Ackles seems to think he needs some... lessons in self-control. The journey their relationship eventually takes them on turns out to be far more than either of them ever bargained for. Toppy!Teacher!Jensen in glasses and Student!Jared in private school uniform included!
WORDS: 85,984 Complete
NOTES: Definite D/s but nothing hardcore. Jared is 18, Jensen is 26, and people can smoke in public in MY San Francisco.
258 pages, Online Journal Archive
First published August 10, 2008
2 people are currently reading
276 people want to read
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 30 of 43 reviews
August 13, 2024
This is 90 percent sex, and 10 percent ... something else.
NOT plot exactly, because nothing happens except Jared and Jensen sucking and licking and fucking over and over again.
NOT character development, because the story is told from Jared's third-person, present-tense POV, and we get NOTHING.
It's all frantic narration: manic & unfocused.
The entire story is set in a vacuum. There's one vaguely developed secondary character (Chad), and the rest is a black hole (no real sense of people, places, or time, except for a vague feeling of early 21st century).
Every chapter is the same: Jared obsesses over Jensen; sees Jensen in his classroom after school (where the fuck is the principal? other teachers? other STUDENTS?); and allows Jensen to have his way with him.
The D/s theme is quite mild. Jensen is "tutoring" Jared. There's a bit of spanking and Jared calling Jensen "sir," but this is not BDSM.
It's kind of like Cool Whip pretending to be more.
Jared has no parents. We know they're rich, and they must live at home, but they're never around and never mentioned.
And Jensen seems to have no friends or family. Jensen's reasons for being a bitch are ... well, ridiculous really. I seriously giggled, because, COME ON, can you get more cliche than ?
I just don't think fanfic is for me. This is RPF, I guess, but ... well.
ETHICS.
Jared is Jensen's HIGH SCHOOL student when they start fucking. Jared is technically legal at 18, and, yes, he wants and teases Jensen. Even so, Jensen is Jared's TEACHER.
I know it's part of the naughtiness, but I taught high school seniors when I was 24, and they were CHILDREN to me. There was nothing hot or naughty about them. Just sayin'.
The ending is a HEA, I think. At least it's a HEA in this world where there is no past and no future, just endless hours spent rimming and caressing, which ... sounds, um, nice, but perhaps unrealistic?
SPICY (exploration, dirty talk, endless passion, raw & hard & needy), but no depth.
I'm probably breaking a fanfic rule by reviewing this. Sorry?
NOT plot exactly, because nothing happens except Jared and Jensen sucking and licking and fucking over and over again.
NOT character development, because the story is told from Jared's third-person, present-tense POV, and we get NOTHING.
It's all frantic narration: manic & unfocused.
The entire story is set in a vacuum. There's one vaguely developed secondary character (Chad), and the rest is a black hole (no real sense of people, places, or time, except for a vague feeling of early 21st century).
Every chapter is the same: Jared obsesses over Jensen; sees Jensen in his classroom after school (where the fuck is the principal? other teachers? other STUDENTS?); and allows Jensen to have his way with him.
The D/s theme is quite mild. Jensen is "tutoring" Jared. There's a bit of spanking and Jared calling Jensen "sir," but this is not BDSM.
It's kind of like Cool Whip pretending to be more.
Jared has no parents. We know they're rich, and they must live at home, but they're never around and never mentioned.
And Jensen seems to have no friends or family. Jensen's reasons for being a bitch are ... well, ridiculous really. I seriously giggled, because, COME ON, can you get more cliche than ?
I just don't think fanfic is for me. This is RPF, I guess, but ... well.
ETHICS.
Jared is Jensen's HIGH SCHOOL student when they start fucking. Jared is technically legal at 18, and, yes, he wants and teases Jensen. Even so, Jensen is Jared's TEACHER.
I know it's part of the naughtiness, but I taught high school seniors when I was 24, and they were CHILDREN to me. There was nothing hot or naughty about them. Just sayin'.
The ending is a HEA, I think. At least it's a HEA in this world where there is no past and no future, just endless hours spent rimming and caressing, which ... sounds, um, nice, but perhaps unrealistic?
SPICY (exploration, dirty talk, endless passion, raw & hard & needy), but no depth.
I'm probably breaking a fanfic rule by reviewing this. Sorry?
August 25, 2012
My first Fanfic and I am speechless!.......review to follow, when life lets me catch up!!
*fanning myself* Looking at this picture brings it all back......
*fanning myself* Looking at this picture brings it all back......
February 10, 2013
Definite PWP!
PWP written in exclamatory, superlative language: hyped!
Nearly every orgasm induces a supernova, so be prepared. Plan also on a looooooooot of sex, some good, some great, most redundant and on okayish dirty talk. "You're so fucking hot" could have been retired about a third through.
What sliver there is of a plot is interesting enough, though the FSoG Mrs. Jones bit was generic and a little off-putting. Besides such, other elements in the storyline require a large measure of suspended disbelief. For example, believing that classrooms have no windows and that a student staying behind every day after class could go unnoticed etc.
All the yaaays and nays of Jared and Jensen aside, the character that really makes this book is Chad! Fantastic :-) Will Grayson, Will Grayson belongs to Tiny, and this book belongs to Chad.
PWP written in exclamatory, superlative language: hyped!
Nearly every orgasm induces a supernova, so be prepared. Plan also on a looooooooot of sex, some good, some great, most redundant and on okayish dirty talk. "You're so fucking hot" could have been retired about a third through.
What sliver there is of a plot is interesting enough, though the FSoG Mrs. Jones bit was generic and a little off-putting. Besides such, other elements in the storyline require a large measure of suspended disbelief. For example, believing that classrooms have no windows and that a student staying behind every day after class could go unnoticed etc.
All the yaaays and nays of Jared and Jensen aside, the character that really makes this book is Chad! Fantastic :-) Will Grayson, Will Grayson belongs to Tiny, and this book belongs to Chad.
August 31, 2012
4.5
I keep going back and forth between 4 and 5 stars on this. I actually woke up this morning thinking, maybe I should have given it 5 lol.
In a nutshell, Jared Padalecki is a spoiled rich kid whose teachers have always looked the other way regarding his grades due to his parents sizable donations to the school. His gravy train comes to a screeching halt when he gets a substitute Physics teacher mid-term. Far from being the nerd that Jared envisioned when he first heard about this replacement, Jensen Ackles is like a blond God - strong jaw, muscled, glasses and very stoic. He is totally unimpressed with Jared's attempts to get his attention and barely acknowledges him in class unless it's to ask a question. That is, until Jared's called on to answer a question, has no clue what they've been discussing and is called up to the board to construct a formula...with Jensen guiding his chalk hand the entire time. Combustion! He wants more and getting into Jensen's pants is now his sole mission in life.
This is a very well written story. Pacing is good. The characters are fully developed and I LOVED Jared's best friend, Chad. He interjects some humor into the situation and this balances things a bit because you'll need to laugh once in a while so your face doesn't melt off from the heat. Yes, folks, this book is HAWT!!! Students getting stripped down and slammed against chalk boards or told to lay across the desk. Dios Mio! Is nothing sacred in institutions of education anymore? Apparently not and long may that continue (in fiction, of course). Anyway, no one ever looks into this classroom, no other student ever walks in accidentally, no maintenance people have to change a lightbulb..it's just pure, uninterrupted sexy time.
I did have a few issues. This is basically a D/s story, but at times I couldn't figure out where the true discipline was heading. It just seemed a bit superfluous at times. I like my Doms to be alphas and Jensen isn't really that. It's more of a control thing for him. I didn't quite get the 'life lessons' at times. Trying to follow was making me a bit cross-eyed and I just had to say, 'Ok, if you say so' and keep it moving. There is a bit too much detail in some of the sex scenes (or maybe I was tired/lazy) because sometimes I didn't know whose body parts were where. Had he actually penetrated him or was he still using his fingers? Or oh, this is the first time they've actually had sex? I thought they did that the last time. It was a bit too much to follow at times and the dialogue got a bit repetitive. It also bothered me how unaffected Jensen seemed at first. I like to be able to see a bit of weakness/loss of control in my Doms and I wasn't getting it from him...but we do get it eventually and boy, is it good!
Outside of those few issues, the book really is very good. Towards Chapter 5, everything I could possibly want falls into place. Thank you author for not doing some hokey, corny, outing scene. I was totally panicking during the entire Prom scene, but man, it was PERFECCCCCT and so was the ending.
Yeah, I think I'm going to go with a 4.75 on this one, so that's closer to 5.
I keep going back and forth between 4 and 5 stars on this. I actually woke up this morning thinking, maybe I should have given it 5 lol.
In a nutshell, Jared Padalecki is a spoiled rich kid whose teachers have always looked the other way regarding his grades due to his parents sizable donations to the school. His gravy train comes to a screeching halt when he gets a substitute Physics teacher mid-term. Far from being the nerd that Jared envisioned when he first heard about this replacement, Jensen Ackles is like a blond God - strong jaw, muscled, glasses and very stoic. He is totally unimpressed with Jared's attempts to get his attention and barely acknowledges him in class unless it's to ask a question. That is, until Jared's called on to answer a question, has no clue what they've been discussing and is called up to the board to construct a formula...with Jensen guiding his chalk hand the entire time. Combustion! He wants more and getting into Jensen's pants is now his sole mission in life.
This is a very well written story. Pacing is good. The characters are fully developed and I LOVED Jared's best friend, Chad. He interjects some humor into the situation and this balances things a bit because you'll need to laugh once in a while so your face doesn't melt off from the heat. Yes, folks, this book is HAWT!!! Students getting stripped down and slammed against chalk boards or told to lay across the desk. Dios Mio! Is nothing sacred in institutions of education anymore? Apparently not and long may that continue (in fiction, of course). Anyway, no one ever looks into this classroom, no other student ever walks in accidentally, no maintenance people have to change a lightbulb..it's just pure, uninterrupted sexy time.
I did have a few issues. This is basically a D/s story, but at times I couldn't figure out where the true discipline was heading. It just seemed a bit superfluous at times. I like my Doms to be alphas and Jensen isn't really that. It's more of a control thing for him. I didn't quite get the 'life lessons' at times. Trying to follow was making me a bit cross-eyed and I just had to say, 'Ok, if you say so' and keep it moving. There is a bit too much detail in some of the sex scenes (or maybe I was tired/lazy) because sometimes I didn't know whose body parts were where. Had he actually penetrated him or was he still using his fingers? Or oh, this is the first time they've actually had sex? I thought they did that the last time. It was a bit too much to follow at times and the dialogue got a bit repetitive. It also bothered me how unaffected Jensen seemed at first. I like to be able to see a bit of weakness/loss of control in my Doms and I wasn't getting it from him...but we do get it eventually and boy, is it good!
Outside of those few issues, the book really is very good. Towards Chapter 5, everything I could possibly want falls into place. Thank you author for not doing some hokey, corny, outing scene. I was totally panicking during the entire Prom scene, but man, it was PERFECCCCCT and so was the ending.
Yeah, I think I'm going to go with a 4.75 on this one, so that's closer to 5.
August 19, 2012
3,5-4 stars
Typical online-smex-fiction....sex in every chapter.
Average teacher/student lovestory with - admittedly - good character development.
80% of this story were sheet acrobatics - seriously hot - D/s but nothing hardcore - very graphic and detailed, with impressive stamina from both MC`s and the meanest orgasm delay I`ve ever read.
That got to the point (somewhere in the middle) where I thought `don`t you have anything better to do, guys?` - and the dirty talk " Oh-my-God-Jesus-fucking-Christ" got a bit aggravating but all in all this was a hot piece of erotica that was a touch too long. It took stamina to read it through...
`
Typical online-smex-fiction....sex in every chapter.
Average teacher/student lovestory with - admittedly - good character development.
80% of this story were sheet acrobatics - seriously hot - D/s but nothing hardcore - very graphic and detailed, with impressive stamina from both MC`s and the meanest orgasm delay I`ve ever read.
That got to the point (somewhere in the middle) where I thought `don`t you have anything better to do, guys?` - and the dirty talk " Oh-my-God-Jesus-fucking-Christ" got a bit aggravating but all in all this was a hot piece of erotica that was a touch too long. It took stamina to read it through...
`
July 15, 2012
This fic is too hot for words.
3.5 stars.
3.5 stars.
August 25, 2012
Note: Free multiple formats available for download.
There were niggles... but who the hell cares?! These guys...have mercy, they were super intense and HOT! Didn't really see it as fanfic or whatever. Now, I will admit I spread it out over a few days or else the obscene amount of sizzling sex would've been overwhelming, but beyond all the smut (did I mention it was hot?), there was some real show of emotions and growth by both characters and the discovery of what the word "control" means for them.
There were niggles... but who the hell cares?! These guys...have mercy, they were super intense and HOT! Didn't really see it as fanfic or whatever. Now, I will admit I spread it out over a few days or else the obscene amount of sizzling sex would've been overwhelming, but beyond all the smut (did I mention it was hot?), there was some real show of emotions and growth by both characters and the discovery of what the word "control" means for them.
August 30, 2012
Things I am glad about after readig this book by Purplegirl549
I am glad that:
- Jensen and Jared were so hot together
- it didn't take long for the two to get together
- there was a dom/sub angle
- no one ever caught the two and we didn't have outside drama
- Jared's parents weren't around to mess up the hot sex
- Jensen and Jared were hot together
- we got to read about Chad
- Jensen was a little broken but it we didn't have to go through a long drawn out fixing
- there was good sex talk
- I can put this book on hotness shelf
- I can put this on the Depraved Mind Club shelf
and
- Jensen and Jared were hot together. lol
I am glad that:
- Jensen and Jared were so hot together
- it didn't take long for the two to get together
- there was a dom/sub angle
- no one ever caught the two and we didn't have outside drama
- Jared's parents weren't around to mess up the hot sex
- Jensen and Jared were hot together
- we got to read about Chad
- Jensen was a little broken but it we didn't have to go through a long drawn out fixing
- there was good sex talk
- I can put this book on hotness shelf
- I can put this on the Depraved Mind Club shelf
and
- Jensen and Jared were hot together. lol
February 9, 2013
3.5 Stars !
November 24, 2013
Smut filled teacher/student story with some SIZZLING hot D/s with a very earthy carnality.
Read
May 14, 2012One of my favorite online reading smexy stories. It's a RPF of Jared Padalecki and Jensen Ackles from Supernatural fame. I have never watched the show, so that's probably why it's easily enjoyed (I don't picture the stars as the people in the story). It takes place in a definite AU where Jared is 18 and Jensen is older (his teacher) at an all boys school.
The d/s portion of it is well done in my opinion and there's a bunch of after stories. The sex is pretty scorching. I'd take off one star because it lags a little in the forth part, but then it picks up again and seems to dust itself off and zoom into the end with a wonderful flourish.
There are some minor short stories that follow the story after it. I highly recommend them all.
The d/s portion of it is well done in my opinion and there's a bunch of after stories. The sex is pretty scorching. I'd take off one star because it lags a little in the forth part, but then it picks up again and seems to dust itself off and zoom into the end with a wonderful flourish.
There are some minor short stories that follow the story after it. I highly recommend them all.
June 4, 2016
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6r5Dhq...
An extremely erotic well-written J2 fanfic. Jared is approaching graduation from high school. He meets with new physics teacher Jensen for lessons in 'control' after class.
"I said I still want this."
Jensen looks at him then. "Why?" he asks, like he can't possibly imagine.
Because I want you, you stupid motherfucker, he thinks. Is there any possible way Jensen still couldn't know that.
"Because I want you."
An extremely erotic well-written J2 fanfic. Jared is approaching graduation from high school. He meets with new physics teacher Jensen for lessons in 'control' after class.
"I said I still want this."
Jensen looks at him then. "Why?" he asks, like he can't possibly imagine.
Because I want you, you stupid motherfucker, he thinks. Is there any possible way Jensen still couldn't know that.
"Because I want you."
August 18, 2012
Far out, that has a lot of hot as hell D/s sex in it. And the endless mindblowing orgasms are the most believable part of the story: I'm pretty sure if a student stays behind with the teacher in a locked classroom after school every single day someone notices. And I have ideological isssues with RPS. But still, phew.
3.682 stars (Ami-style rating)
3.682 stars (Ami-style rating)
May 27, 2012
Chad (post fin): Be your fuckin' self, and don't make any apologies.
February 24, 2015
Dear nyxocity,
I'm unabashedly smitten with your work, loving that you are absolutely meticulous with details, even as you present us with some of the most scorching sex that's ever seen page. You are one of the few I've discovered in this genre who can accomplish that and it puts you at the very top of my Always Read list.
To me, there's nothing more annoying than to have invested my time and efforts into beginning a book, only to discover it's been written by an 'unconscious' author. See:
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
On the other hand, you are the rarefied kind who doesn't leave a necktie tossed onto a sofa on page 103, but remembers to have the character pick it up when he leaves 30 pages later. Now that's class. And talent. And, like the guru said....Supreme Consciousness.
With high hopes that you are putting pen to much more paper,
Your Fan,
Don
I'm unabashedly smitten with your work, loving that you are absolutely meticulous with details, even as you present us with some of the most scorching sex that's ever seen page. You are one of the few I've discovered in this genre who can accomplish that and it puts you at the very top of my Always Read list.
To me, there's nothing more annoying than to have invested my time and efforts into beginning a book, only to discover it's been written by an 'unconscious' author. See:
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
On the other hand, you are the rarefied kind who doesn't leave a necktie tossed onto a sofa on page 103, but remembers to have the character pick it up when he leaves 30 pages later. Now that's class. And talent. And, like the guru said....Supreme Consciousness.
With high hopes that you are putting pen to much more paper,
Your Fan,
Don
September 8, 2012
2.5 stars
I'm not really sure how to rate this. This is a Jared/Jensen fanfic. ALSO this is a teacher student kink.
It's basically chapter after chapter after chapter of sex. There are a repetitive words/phrases and little things the main characters seem to do in every scene. Also the little 'life lessons' were weird.
The underlying story was good and I liked both main characters. And it's free.
I'm not really sure how to rate this. This is a Jared/Jensen fanfic. ALSO this is a teacher student kink.
It's basically chapter after chapter after chapter of sex. There are a repetitive words/phrases and little things the main characters seem to do in every scene. Also the little 'life lessons' were weird.
The underlying story was good and I liked both main characters. And it's free.
February 20, 2014
As long as the story stayed in the classroom, this was delicious!! Hot, imaginative and with a tiny bit of humiliation.
In the last third, I wasn't any longer thrilled with the romance plot and even the sex became a bit too repetitive in the end.
PS: Some of the extra stories were really good , too.
In the last third, I wasn't any longer thrilled with the romance plot and even the sex became a bit too repetitive in the end.
PS: Some of the extra stories were really good , too.
June 17, 2012
OH MY GOD, this was scorchingly hot.I couldn't actually imagine the real actors as the main characters in the book,but I didn't really care.Read as an original story this was amazing !
August 25, 2012
3.0 for the story but 5 for it's pure Hotness!
February 10, 2013
Holy shit on a popsicle.
The dirty talk in this.
SOMEONE BRING A HOSE FOR THIS SHIT PLEASE.
(there are also post-epilogue stories!)
The dirty talk in this.
SOMEONE BRING A HOSE FOR THIS SHIT PLEASE.
(there are also post-epilogue stories!)
July 20, 2012
So I put off writing a review for this one.....
I liked it....in the beginning. Some damn hot scenes and the little bit of story line was pretty good.
But then things just got repetitive. At about 85-90% I was just ready to be done, I skipped entire sex scenes. I think if they had just simply shortened it up a bit then I would have been happy. But it became too much of a good thing for me.
I did tear up when Jared realized "this" was all it would ever be. I enjoyed the ending very much. 2 people coming together, learning each other... All in all it was a romantic story with lots and LOTS of hot sex ;)
I liked it....in the beginning. Some damn hot scenes and the little bit of story line was pretty good.
But then things just got repetitive. At about 85-90% I was just ready to be done, I skipped entire sex scenes. I think if they had just simply shortened it up a bit then I would have been happy. But it became too much of a good thing for me.
I did tear up when Jared realized "this" was all it would ever be. I enjoyed the ending very much. 2 people coming together, learning each other... All in all it was a romantic story with lots and LOTS of hot sex ;)
May 22, 2013
Fine piece of erotica with really hot sex scenes. However,if I hear one more time " so effing hot", I will go insane! The dirty talk was a huge disappointment because it was the same thing over and over and over. Not sure I will continue with the series but I recommend it for a light steamy read.
January 18, 2013
I don't think I can even express how hot this was. I never once rolled my eyes about all of the sex and dirty talk. There was sex on just about EVERY page! AND...it was just HOT! I will never look at these two guys the same way again. OMG!
February 26, 2013
So hot. I almost had a spontaneous orgasm reading this. Can't wait to read the rest of the series. Probably a 4* read, but I gave it the extra star for how freakin' hot it is and that it is very well written by a nonpublished author.
Updated - read all the short stories that come after this. OMG. I want more. So hot and smutty and wonderful. Definitely a 5* and one of my faves.
Updated - read all the short stories that come after this. OMG. I want more. So hot and smutty and wonderful. Definitely a 5* and one of my faves.
November 28, 2012
It's not Aiko......*looks away*.....it's her damn userpic teehee.
August 21, 2012
3.5 Stars. It took me a while to get into this one mostly because I wasn't connecting with Jensen at all. I loved Jared from the start and the sex was off the charts hot.
March 7, 2013
This book was basically one hot sex scene after another with not much story going on, until the very end. Really liked the end, will be reading the follow up shorts.
September 19, 2013
The story had an amazing start. The writing was delicious. The characters came alive and the dynamics between them electrifying. Some gorgeous D/s sex scenes. Towards the middle, the sex scenes seemed to drag. Pages after pages of foreplay? But considering the length of sex scenes, I have to hand it to the author that I didn’t start to skip the entire sex scene. Just skipped the foreplay to get to the main course. Apart from the abundant use of ‘Jesus Christ’ during sex, the story started to become enthralling once again. The sex scene at the prom was so rough, raw and passionate. I really couldn’t have asked for more. I was happy to see that they got together in the end.
My main disappointment with this story was why Jenson was the way he was. A reference to Mrs Robinson type of character, a corrupting influence to a young man, was off putting enough, but the explanation that he didn’t believe in love because of her influence? Well, I found it rather lame and it kind of ruined the image of Jenson for me. But this story gave me so much pleasure up until then and despite my reservation (and this is no small one for me) about the way the author resolved the conflict, I can’t give it less than a four star.
My main disappointment with this story was why Jenson was the way he was. A reference to Mrs Robinson type of character, a corrupting influence to a young man, was off putting enough, but the explanation that he didn’t believe in love because of her influence? Well, I found it rather lame and it kind of ruined the image of Jenson for me. But this story gave me so much pleasure up until then and despite my reservation (and this is no small one for me) about the way the author resolved the conflict, I can’t give it less than a four star.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 28, 2013
I have never read/listened to - yes this is available to download as an audio file - anything as hot as this. I had never watched Supernatural and had no idea who the actors this is based on were but that did not matter at all. If you like m/m and a bit of BDSM then this is your baby. Jensen struggles with love. His young protege should we say is far more mature in this aspect and Jared's friend, Chad, is there to put Mr Akles (Jensen) straight. Jared is the High School wonder boy who everyone wants to date whatever their gender. He's just been dumped by his latest conquest an unheard of event in itself when the new physics teacher arrives. Jared is determined to get him but Jared has a lot to learn, they both do.
This story has humour, hot sex and love all thrown in and is not to be missed. Don't forget to read the extras which give background and a glimpse into the future.
This story has humour, hot sex and love all thrown in and is not to be missed. Don't forget to read the extras which give background and a glimpse into the future.
September 29, 2013
A very intense teacher/student pairing ... it's fan-fiction but as I didn't know the characters/show it was based on, I had to judge the characters as portrayed in this story ... I probably would have enjoyed it more if it weren't written in third-person narrative ... I prefer first person so I can submerge myself in the characters and their experiences instead of being kept at arms-length ... for fan-fic, this was pretty good ... it tended to lapse into sophomoric turns of phrase occasionally and there was over-use of certain phrases too BUT I've read worse published works so it is worth reading if you are prepared to over-look the few niggly issues.
Displaying 1 - 30 of 43 reviews