ARC review: This is a 1 star book that I’m generously giving 3! Listing this book as Fantasy-romance is like reading a hockey-romance and expecting the book to be about hockey. There are fantasy “elements” but it is a disaster. Nothing makes sense, more plot holes than Swiss cheese and by the end; the author is throwing darts hoping anything sticks. Giving this book a very, very generous 3 stars - simply because I was entertained until I started wondering what in the f I was reading.
The read is fun, I will admit I was having a good time and invested. Till about 70%, when the story kept dragging, took some wild detours & I was learning literally f all about what the heck was going on.
We have our FMC, a shadow princess who’s lost her entire family in 6 months, doesn’t know why and then goes murderous to create more plot holes. Our FMC decides humans are the worst thing ever, but somehow totally doesn’t remember two of her childhood friends are half human? Or that like, she knows exactly who killed her husband, yet it’s totally logical to take it out on an entire species.
She also has magical powers that might be a curse, might not. Might have tangible properties, might also not. The authors not sure, so you shouldn’t be either.
Starting off with what the author does well:
-I love the character banter. The responses, flow and conversation actually are written well and progressive. You feel engaged and I love how you can get a good feel for each personality.
-the trials! This is where Vanessa shined! Girl, you have so much potential. So much creativity, why wasn’t that brought into the rest of the book?
-the romance do be romancin. While there is minimal burn; I did feel connected to the Arc of the relationship
Let me ask the author a few questions:
What colour hair does anyone have?
How tall is anyone?
How OLD is anyone?
Does everyone in each area speak the same language? Since people do be travelling all over the world!
We know some human kids are 25 but actually 6, like what? How the f does this work?
Dragons? Cool is there fire or can they just fly? Cause fire would have solved a lot at the end.
Who has magic, how does it work, what are these “common fae traits” BECAUSE NOTHING IS EVER EXPLAINED?!!! The author advertises “easy world building” there is no world building and it’s lazy.
It’s frustrating. Then at 80% of the way through the book the author throws in some nightwalkers that apparently every person in this world has known about but like hey! We’re just remembering this fact now. We also totally didn’t bother to go here EVER when we knew humans were killing everyone. I just threw my hands up at this point and said “okay we’ve lost the plot”.
Or the other issue that Matthias has dedicated YEARS to the fae killings but like drops everything for this tournament, then we hear nothing about it again until the end? Really?
I can go on and on but it just makes me more angry. This book is way too long to contain absolutely nothing. I really wish Vanessa explained her world, because like- I’m lost girl. So lost, this place makes no f**king sense.
Like how in book 1:
“But you don’t know who they are until the bond is physically formed.”
Liekes lips twisted comically. “Physically? So you have to sleep with them before you find out?”
“Maybe for some, I suppose. Though I’ve never met any who didn’t at least kiss before doing that.”
IMPLYING that any form of physical will trigger the bond.
then in book 2 they can have full on sex but no bond? The math ain’t mathing. Mostly also because the author, explains jack doo-doo. And there’s only 3 living mates in the entirety of the series, thus far. And no libraries apparently, so you should totally just go with the flow here. Frankly this is the vibe for the whole book, nothing makes sense and that’s okay. We here for vibes, not plots.
The letter in the beginning, is so YA coded. It set the mood as childish and reinforces this author loves to “tell not show” in writing, please have trust in your readers. There’s a reason “re caps” are not popular.
There is a lot of potential for this series. I had hopes the first book left holes as it was in a human POV and these loops would be closed. I wish the author would go back to the drawing board, actually write a book, prequel or something to do some world building. I do feel this author is simply trying to jump on a bandwagon and prefers romance writing.