I began this book loving it. I am a huge Godfather fan. As a Bronx native, I loved the Arthur Ave and (especially) Tremont Ave mentions. However, it was soon apparent that this author has not the smooth storytelling ability of Puzo, and this book shouldn't have been sanctioned as part of the Godfather narrative.
Luca
I was curious at first that Luca Brasi had a personality. The film, of course, portrays him as a dimwit. Then, aha, his constant pill popping results in his brain damage.
Are you really supposed to feel sorry for Luca? For watching his father beat his mother (and kill her unborn child, though not his father's)? For killing his father? For killing his mother's lover? For the suffering after he ingested enough pills to kill a Cohoes Mastodon?
I understand that Luca is supposed to have incredible strength, but brutalizing someone who has been already captured is not the same as hunting them down.
He's eating an orange a la George Costanza eating an onion, peel and all, and you're supposed to believe he can hunt down an entire Irish gang, who KNOWS he's coming for them, and take them all out? It goes beyond suspending disbelief.
Ah, but he gets his in front of Guy Smiley Bruno Tattaglia, begorrah!
The Irish
So, Willie surprises Luca's gang and fires two guns and hardly does any damage. Then Sean, Pete, Rick, Billy, Stevie and Corr bombard Vito et al. at the parade and don't get their mark? Yes, they get Luca, who is wearing a bullet proof vest. Vito is atop a Corleone mountain and he doesn't get hit? Were the Irish equipped with muskets?
I suppose if we were being completely accurate, we'd have to admit that Irish gangs in NYC were all but nonexistent by the 1930s. Former mob guys like Bill Dwyer went into legitimate businesses.
Have you ever met an Irish person, Ed Falco? Stick to writing about Italians. Éirinn go Brách!
Vito
As much as Michael becomes the don and brings the Corleone empire to new levels, Vito is the one most people (ok, I) think of as Don Corleone. And that is why this dialog is not credible: "and if this all could have been blamed on the crazy Irish, because everyone knows that Italians would never endanger women and children, another man's innocent family." This doesn't sound like Vito. I had a hard time with all of Vito's dialog; Falco had difficulty putting a voice to him. He doesn't (or can't) believe this. Wasn't his own life threatened at age nine? Wasn't his mother killed by the mafia in Sicily? (Though she did have a knife to the Don's throat.) Tattaglia's prostitute? Applonia? Cork? Some of these haven't happened yet, however, fault lies with Mariposa/Barzini for the parade fiasco. I suppose they do endanger the lives of women and children.
Et Cetera.
Mariposa is really going to believe that Tessio comes to him after the parade fiasco. Ugh. He knew Pentangeli and Tits were traitors but couldn't tell Tessio was going to double cross him? More thought should have been put into that.
Why didn't Sonny offer money to Eileen for the death of her brother, when he knew Cork was innocent and had to kill him anyway, to save face? I found it mighty convenient that Mariposa's goon didn't kill Eileen's husband, rather Pete Murray did. Why would Mariposa allow the rumor that one of his men killed Jimmy Gibson just so he could "keep his thumb" on the Irish? Weak. Wouldn't this spark revenge?
The only bright spot was Frankie Pentangeli. With the great acting of Michael Gazzo in GF2, you could almost hear him saying some of his lines. I liked how he was always sitting backwards in a chair. It is so strange to know the end of that story, with Frankie and his family living in the house soon to be built for Vito, Frankie's conflict with the Rosato Brothers, his testimony, and suicide.
Finally, stop with the oranges, please. That made it fan fiction. Ooh, foreshadowing!