PLEASE, somebody explain the five star reviews on Amazon to me?! I'm serious! For Raybourn it made sense if you know the world and most humans; but these are reviews that even other romances don't get, and I'm suffering from acute inflamation of the heart and brain trying to understand these women.
The first book of this author I had read was "Reputable Rake", written under her Gaston pseudonym, which like so many others I never wrote about. Since it was the first sexually explicit regency that I remember reading, and said to be not as good as her supposedly very special Wagering Widow and Mysterious Miss M (her regencies being about prostitutes etc.) and had the advantage of a likable couple and the woman wanting and then letting herself look at and touch the man, I tried to get all of Diane's books.
Sadly Gaston's Vanishing Vicountess was awful, book 1 then already/as well a big disappointment (since it had neither the depth or sparkle I had expected, but I cannot say if it was the order I read them in or just time or really worse), and now this earlier work is TEDIOUS. THAT is a fact.
Marriage Bargain was promising in that it looked longer than her later genre novels, and with more time spent on the characters. I'm not sure if that or the author's inexperience also made the sex so forgettable, or - again - if my reading better books in-between just blurred that RR had had only a single encounter.
The part about the heroine having had to scrounge in genteel poverty for three whole years, the distrust of his friends and her anger, that was promising (probably taken from RL of the author). But already the taken-for-dead chapter was so bad that I kept thinking there must be some later pay-off. Off course that never comes - while I was glad the heroine was vindicated, after a forgettable not-really-love-part there follow bland, pointless, summary-like chapters (and if I say him leaving her because he thought she would not die was the only thing that made sense - believe me).
Gaston's books tended to have a huge action scene pastede_on at the very end; disappointing and infuriating, I blamed those end-bits on publishers. This novel has some nothingness pastede_on; the heros trauma about dead brothers, his need to travel, her aversity to travel - these real and big issues were not resolved; there was too much, but not "much" in that it was barely an outline, her mother, the bad uncle, the male friends obviously only set up for books of their own - all that were not given more space than I did here, and I feel bad for wasting so many words, since people writing so many words about her had made me believe there must have been SOMETHING to the book. Njet, nada, rien, nichts, nihil.
I'm not even going to mention how the heroine "pored" over newspapers or "he stood at her entrance and gazed at her" (no, the sex is also very bland). It is very badly written, especially towards the end *boggles* I might have read so fast I didn't even catch the last few lines. Even taking negative and positive reviews on amazon into consideration, that was a very expensive and mentally deteriorating experience.
If you make it through the book, you were neither excited, amused, titillated or - anything. The opposite of elevated, energised or entertained, in fact.
I could not even say what h and h LOOKED like by the end, btw.