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Jack Hawthorne Adventure #2
Serpent of Moses
A Fast-Paced Follow-up to the Bestselling
Suspense Elisha's Bones !
Just three years after the recovery of Elisha's bones, Dr. Jack Hawthorne has given up teaching and resumed the practice of archaeology, although his frequent absences have put a strain on his relationship with Esperanza. Things heat up when Esperanza receives a call from an antiquities dealer with troubling news about Jack, and her fears are confirmed. Jack has gone to Libya in search of another biblical the Nehushtan, the serpent staff of Moses.
After Jack arrives in Libya, he soon discovers he isn't the only one searching for the Nehushtan. Later, in attempting to steal it, he finds himself in the hands of a man who just might be his match. Jack and his friends must stay one step ahead of the Libyan government, an overambitious member of the Vatican hierarchy, and an Egyptian assassin--if they stand any chance of staying alive long enough to recover the staff.
Suspense Elisha's Bones !
Just three years after the recovery of Elisha's bones, Dr. Jack Hawthorne has given up teaching and resumed the practice of archaeology, although his frequent absences have put a strain on his relationship with Esperanza. Things heat up when Esperanza receives a call from an antiquities dealer with troubling news about Jack, and her fears are confirmed. Jack has gone to Libya in search of another biblical the Nehushtan, the serpent staff of Moses.
After Jack arrives in Libya, he soon discovers he isn't the only one searching for the Nehushtan. Later, in attempting to steal it, he finds himself in the hands of a man who just might be his match. Jack and his friends must stay one step ahead of the Libyan government, an overambitious member of the Vatican hierarchy, and an Egyptian assassin--if they stand any chance of staying alive long enough to recover the staff.
320 pages, Paperback
First published July 1, 2012
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Don Hoesel
5 books50 followersDon Hoesel works in the Communications department for a Medicare carrier in Nashville, TN. He has a BA in Mass Communication from Taylor University and has published short fiction in Relief Journal. He lives in Spring Hill, Tennessee, with his wife and two children. He's published two novels: Elisha's Bones, released in March 2009, and Hunter's Moon, coming in February 2010.
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December 15, 2020
This book is as if Indiana Jones had no plot and all the characters were described only by their nationalities. I finished the whole book and I couldn't find any character motive until page 180 and the back of the book tells more about the serpent staff than the actual story. Perhaps I missed some important passages somewhere, but it was difficult to focus on reading because I couldn't figure out what the characters wanted or what they were willing to risk to get it within the first 10 chapters.
January 20, 2019
Jack has given up teaching and back to archeology. As well as his girlfriend
Esperanza who gets exasperated with him being late all the time. He is on a quest of an item that hasn’t been handle in a thousand years, the serpent staff of Moses As is the Israeli government after it, using whatever means they have to.
Esperanza who gets exasperated with him being late all the time. He is on a quest of an item that hasn’t been handle in a thousand years, the serpent staff of Moses As is the Israeli government after it, using whatever means they have to.
May 1, 2019
My biggest problem was that I didn't care for how he dealt with the Bible, although his approach to faith was interesting. I didn't care for the action either.
May 24, 2022
Excellent sequel to Elijah's Bones!
September 24, 2023
I love archaeology fiction. This has more action than archaeology .
July 9, 2024
Great adventure in the way of Indiana Jones without the s** scenes. Spiritual growth portrayed in a natural way.
December 28, 2012
This book is a quest to find the legendary brass snake that Moses set on a pole - the same snake that the Israelites could look up on in order to get healed from snake bites. Serpent of Moses assumes that the relic was not destroyed by Moses, making it one of the most profitable finds in the archaeology world. Esperanza, his long time girlfriend, ever waiting for Hawthorne to get serious, Romero, Esperanza's brother and art dealer, and Jim Duckett, an ex-CIA agent and former colleague, will team up when Hawthorne has not shown up to an important business meeting after a few weeks. He is not the most punctual person in the world, but even he knows the limits regarding a crucial art deal. The truth is, Hawthorne has found the location of the once thought lost relic, but he is not alone in his search and is taken prisoner. Esperanza, Romero and Duckett will start a search of their own with the hope of finding Hawthorne alive; none of them could have ever imagined that they would be risking their lives.
Yes, this book is full of suspense, and as I mentioned in my previous reviews of Hoesel's books, it should come with popcorn. He is certainly skilled at building up suspense and twisting the story right at the point where everything seemed solved. This makes it a gripping, interesting read, hard to put down. As usual, the ending comes a bit too fast, but it also leaves the reader with a curiosity to see what will happen next in the character's lives. This adds to the positive aspects of this book, but I do have to say that there were moments where I felt I was reading a copy of other successes - namely Indiana Jones and Dan Brown's books. Both of these have been successful, which I guess would be a plus for Mr. Hoesel, but there is really nothing new under the sun. During the story, the team needs the assistance of people with whom Hawthorne has worked before, but it is not initially clear whether they like or dislike him; I could even picture Hawthorne with Harrison Ford's look of uncertainty more than once, or even Robert Langdon's excitement when deciphering clues when Esperanza and Romero try to find the secret location of the serpent. Do not let this deter you from reading this book; if you are looking for clean entertainment during a rainy day, this would be a good choice. As I mentioned before, Hoesel is a skilled writer, but I would have preferred to not be reminded of other stories and get involved in this one on its own.
Also, there are numerous references to Hawthorne's previous adventure in Australia; I presume that would be "Elisha's Bones," which I have not read (and which I do not feel like reading after this book). At times, it was a bit distracting, because Hawthorne's reputation is relevant in the outcome of this plot. The dots are connected in the last part of the book, so if you share my situation and are not familiar with Hawthorne's past, just wait to get to the final chapters. It comes together, and Hoesel, once more, uses his resources wisely and manages to keep the reader on their toes to the last minute, right to the lousy ending. I personally have the sensation that this book could be much, much better, but it lacks authenticity, and the way the end is presented is a bad aftertaste that dilutes all the suspense.
Regarding Christian principles, God is mentioned here and there, but none of the characters actually practice a Christian life, a constant in Hoesel's books. However, language is clean, making this book a good read for teenagers.
In short, Serpent of Moses is an archaeology adventure in search of a relic precious to different peoples who will not stop at anything to have it - just that.
Bethany Publishers provided a free copy of this book in exchange of an honest review. The opinion and thoughts in this review are my own and have not been biased by the latter.
Yes, this book is full of suspense, and as I mentioned in my previous reviews of Hoesel's books, it should come with popcorn. He is certainly skilled at building up suspense and twisting the story right at the point where everything seemed solved. This makes it a gripping, interesting read, hard to put down. As usual, the ending comes a bit too fast, but it also leaves the reader with a curiosity to see what will happen next in the character's lives. This adds to the positive aspects of this book, but I do have to say that there were moments where I felt I was reading a copy of other successes - namely Indiana Jones and Dan Brown's books. Both of these have been successful, which I guess would be a plus for Mr. Hoesel, but there is really nothing new under the sun. During the story, the team needs the assistance of people with whom Hawthorne has worked before, but it is not initially clear whether they like or dislike him; I could even picture Hawthorne with Harrison Ford's look of uncertainty more than once, or even Robert Langdon's excitement when deciphering clues when Esperanza and Romero try to find the secret location of the serpent. Do not let this deter you from reading this book; if you are looking for clean entertainment during a rainy day, this would be a good choice. As I mentioned before, Hoesel is a skilled writer, but I would have preferred to not be reminded of other stories and get involved in this one on its own.
Also, there are numerous references to Hawthorne's previous adventure in Australia; I presume that would be "Elisha's Bones," which I have not read (and which I do not feel like reading after this book). At times, it was a bit distracting, because Hawthorne's reputation is relevant in the outcome of this plot. The dots are connected in the last part of the book, so if you share my situation and are not familiar with Hawthorne's past, just wait to get to the final chapters. It comes together, and Hoesel, once more, uses his resources wisely and manages to keep the reader on their toes to the last minute, right to the lousy ending. I personally have the sensation that this book could be much, much better, but it lacks authenticity, and the way the end is presented is a bad aftertaste that dilutes all the suspense.
Regarding Christian principles, God is mentioned here and there, but none of the characters actually practice a Christian life, a constant in Hoesel's books. However, language is clean, making this book a good read for teenagers.
In short, Serpent of Moses is an archaeology adventure in search of a relic precious to different peoples who will not stop at anything to have it - just that.
Bethany Publishers provided a free copy of this book in exchange of an honest review. The opinion and thoughts in this review are my own and have not been biased by the latter.
August 29, 2012
Jack is back! No, not Jack Bauer. Jack Hawthorne. You know Jack Hawthorne, former Evanston University professor and archaeologist for hire who first came on the scene in Elisha's Bones (Bethany House, 2009). The last time we saw Jack, he and the lovely Esperanza were secretly reinterring the bones of the prophet Elisha, surely glad to be rid of them after the deadly ordeal that ensued during the search for them.
Fast forward several years and Jack is still wearing the hat of the itinerant archaeologist. His latest assignment has put him on the trail of another biblical artifact. This time it's not bones he's after, but a serpent. More specifically the Nehushtan, the bronze serpent on a pole that Moses had made in the wilderness as recorded in Numbers 21:4-9. 2 Kings 18:4 records that King Hezekiah had the Nehushtan destroyed because the Israelites were burning incense to it. What if it wasn't completely destroyed, but was merely broken or dismantled? Could it be found today?
While many would call this quest a fools errand, there are those who think the Nehushtan can be found. Jack is working in the employ of Milo Sturdivant, museum director for Apsley House in London. Unbeknownst to Jack, there is a second team on the trail of the Nehushtan. This second team is working in the employ of the Israeli government and they've been tasked with doing "whatever it takes" to acquire it.
The story unfolds as Jack and the second team led by archaeologist Martin Templeton are competing to find and then struggling with each other for possession of the Nehushtan. When things don't go as planned on either side, the Isreali government deploys Mossad agents to forcefully retrieve the sacred relic. Throw in the well-meaning Esperanza (Jack's girlfriend), Jim "Duckey" Duckett (Jack's former colleague at Evanston University and retired CIA agent), Romero (Esperanza's brother, antiquities dealer) and agents from the Libyan intelligence community and you have one heck of an adventure on your hands.
Serpent of Moses is the third novel I've read by Don Hoesel. True to the style exhibited in his previous books, Hoesel once again weaves a broad web of intrigue that moves along at a rapid pace. Overall, I enjoyed the story very much, but was left wanting a bit more closure in three areas. First, I would have liked a bit more insight into what has transpired in Jack and Esperanza's relationship since the closing of Elisha's Bones. Second, I was left wondering why the Israeli government was interested in the Nehushtan. Was it because they felt it had some secret power or were they hoping to preserve it as an important symbol of their national identity and history? Third, what was the special power of the Nehustan? Since Elisha's Bones had the ability to heal, I expected something similar from the Nehushtan. Towards the end of the story, we see its power briefly on display. It seemed to suggest that the person holding it was healed from a fatal wound, but it wasn't really clear. Had these gaps I perceived in the story been filled, I would have given the book five stars as I did to Elisha's Bones. In all honesty, I felt rather frustrated at the close of the story, so my overall rating for Serpent of Moses is 4 stars.
About the Author: Don Hoesel is a Web site designer for a Medicare carrier in Nashville, TN. He has a BA in Mass Communication from Taylor University and has published short fiction in Relief Journal. He lives in Spring Hill, Tennessee, with his wife and two children.
Disclaimer: This book was provided by the publisher for review. The reviewer was under no obligation to offer a favorable review.
Fast forward several years and Jack is still wearing the hat of the itinerant archaeologist. His latest assignment has put him on the trail of another biblical artifact. This time it's not bones he's after, but a serpent. More specifically the Nehushtan, the bronze serpent on a pole that Moses had made in the wilderness as recorded in Numbers 21:4-9. 2 Kings 18:4 records that King Hezekiah had the Nehushtan destroyed because the Israelites were burning incense to it. What if it wasn't completely destroyed, but was merely broken or dismantled? Could it be found today?
While many would call this quest a fools errand, there are those who think the Nehushtan can be found. Jack is working in the employ of Milo Sturdivant, museum director for Apsley House in London. Unbeknownst to Jack, there is a second team on the trail of the Nehushtan. This second team is working in the employ of the Israeli government and they've been tasked with doing "whatever it takes" to acquire it.
The story unfolds as Jack and the second team led by archaeologist Martin Templeton are competing to find and then struggling with each other for possession of the Nehushtan. When things don't go as planned on either side, the Isreali government deploys Mossad agents to forcefully retrieve the sacred relic. Throw in the well-meaning Esperanza (Jack's girlfriend), Jim "Duckey" Duckett (Jack's former colleague at Evanston University and retired CIA agent), Romero (Esperanza's brother, antiquities dealer) and agents from the Libyan intelligence community and you have one heck of an adventure on your hands.
Serpent of Moses is the third novel I've read by Don Hoesel. True to the style exhibited in his previous books, Hoesel once again weaves a broad web of intrigue that moves along at a rapid pace. Overall, I enjoyed the story very much, but was left wanting a bit more closure in three areas. First, I would have liked a bit more insight into what has transpired in Jack and Esperanza's relationship since the closing of Elisha's Bones. Second, I was left wondering why the Israeli government was interested in the Nehushtan. Was it because they felt it had some secret power or were they hoping to preserve it as an important symbol of their national identity and history? Third, what was the special power of the Nehustan? Since Elisha's Bones had the ability to heal, I expected something similar from the Nehushtan. Towards the end of the story, we see its power briefly on display. It seemed to suggest that the person holding it was healed from a fatal wound, but it wasn't really clear. Had these gaps I perceived in the story been filled, I would have given the book five stars as I did to Elisha's Bones. In all honesty, I felt rather frustrated at the close of the story, so my overall rating for Serpent of Moses is 4 stars.
About the Author: Don Hoesel is a Web site designer for a Medicare carrier in Nashville, TN. He has a BA in Mass Communication from Taylor University and has published short fiction in Relief Journal. He lives in Spring Hill, Tennessee, with his wife and two children.
Disclaimer: This book was provided by the publisher for review. The reviewer was under no obligation to offer a favorable review.
February 23, 2013
From the Back Cover
Moses built and lifted up the brass serpent,
healing the afflicted Israelites of snakebites.
King Hezekiah called the serpent Nehushtan. Long thought destroyed, it's been buried for millennia, secreted under the region's shifting sands.
Now the Israeli government wants it back and they will stop at nothing to get their hands on it. Yet they're not the only ones who covet the Nehushtan.
Archaeologist Jack Hawthorne travels to Libya intent on recovering the sacred object, but one does not cross the Mossad and expect to walk away without a fight. Jack and his friends must find the priceless "snake of brass upon a pole" before those who are also hunting it find them...and silence them forever.
About the Author
Don Hoesel, the acclaimed author of Elisha's Bones, Hunter's Moon, and The Alarmists, lives in Spring Hill, Tennessee, with his wife and two children. Don holds a bachelor's degree in mass communication from Taylor University. When not writing novels, he spends his days working in the communications department of a large company.
My review:
This was a really good read . Some have suggested this book is like an Indiana Jones type of adventure.
Jack Hawthorne is the main character in Serpent of Moses. The book starts with Jack in a cave in Libya being chased by men who want the staff Jack has. The book continues with mystery, chasing and searching for Jack who is missing.
It is an interesting book about archaeology, the Bible, the Middle East, Milan, history, friendship, mystery, God, death, suspense danger and the brass staff called the Nehushtan. The Nehushtan is a sacred object in the form of a snake of brass upon a pole. Moses made it to heal people of snake bites from a plague of snakes God sent them. It is said to have been broken into pieces by King Hezekiah. The Israelis has hired Imolene to get the staff back and return it to them.
Jack has disappeared and Espy and her brother go to the Middle East to and Europe search for him. His friend Duckey also joins in the search.
This my first read by Don Hoesel and the second book in the Jack Hawthorne series, but this book can be read without reading the first one. There is violence but no sex or bad language.
Some Characters:
Dr. Jack Hawthorne- an archaeologist in search of the Nehushtan.
Imolene -an Egyptian paid by the Israelis to get the staff..
Dr. Esperanza (Espy) Habilla-girlfriend of Jack, she is from Venezuela and a foreign language expert at the University of Venezuela.
Romero Habilla- brother of Esperanza; an antiquities dealer.
Amadou Boufayed- a Libyan
Martin Templeton- an Englishman also after the staff and Jack.
Milo Sturdivant- a museum curator who hired Jack to bring him the staff.
Jim Duckett- a friend of Jack, a former CIA agent and a professor. Goes by the name of Duckey for his friends.
Stephanie- wife of Jim Duckett.
Marwen Saidani- a Tunisian.
Tom Fitzpatrick- CIA Unit Chief Agent and friend of Jim Duckett.
Places:
Milan
Libya
London
Caracas
Tripoli
Tunisia
Turkey
Al Bayda (Africa)
I received a complimentary copy of Serpent of Moses by Don Hoesel to read and review from Bethany House. The opinions are my own.
I will give it a 5 star because of the interest it had for me.
You can find the author at www.donhoesel.com and www.goodreads.com/author/show/2113161... and
http://www.shelfari.com/authors/a2404... for some sites.
August 5, 2012
I had the privilege of interviewing Don Hoesel, on our radio show “Kingdom Highlights”, for his new book, “Serpent of Moses” Book Two in the Jack Hawthorne series published by Bethany House Publishers.
From the Back Cover: Moses built and lifted up the brass serpent,healing the afflicted Israelites of snakebites.
King Hezekiah called the serpent Nehushtan. Long thought destroyed, it’s been buried for millennia, secreted under the region’s shifting sands.
Now the Israeli government wants it back and they will stop at nothing to get their hands on it. Yet they’re not the only ones who covet the Nehushtan.
Archaeologist Jack Hawthorne travels to Libya intent on recovering the sacred object, but one does not cross the Mossad and expect to walk away without a fight. Jack and his friends must find the priceless “snake of brass upon a pole” before those who are also hunting it find them…and silence them forever.
Archaeologist Jack Hawthorne is back in a new thrilling adventure. The events in ”Serpent of Moses” take place three years after the events of “Elisha’s Bones”. This time his travels have taken him to Libya tracking the Biblical bronze serpent of Moses. Just as he is about to escape with the staff he is captured and taken away with the opposing team of Archeologists. Now Espy, the woman he loves, travels to Milan to find out where he went to find him while Duckey, his best friend travels to Libya for the same reason. With his friends searching to help and the bad guys searching to kill him it is just a matter of time before someone finds him, hopefully it will be his friends. “Serpent of Moses” is a page-turner, heart-racing, action, suspense thriller. Jack Hawthorne’s life is in deadly danger as he is taken captive and his abductors have orders to kill him. Don’t start this book late at night because it will be very difficult to put it down or stop thinking about it. I recommend this book highly and am greatly looking forward to Don Hoesel’s next adrenaline rush.
If you missed the interview for “Serpent of Moses” and would like to listen to it and/or would like to hear the previous interviews where we discussed “Elisha’s Bones” or “The Alarmists” and/or would like to listen to interviews with other authors and professionals please go to www.kingdomhighlights.org where they are available On Demand.
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Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Bethany House Publishers. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
From the Back Cover: Moses built and lifted up the brass serpent,healing the afflicted Israelites of snakebites.
King Hezekiah called the serpent Nehushtan. Long thought destroyed, it’s been buried for millennia, secreted under the region’s shifting sands.
Now the Israeli government wants it back and they will stop at nothing to get their hands on it. Yet they’re not the only ones who covet the Nehushtan.
Archaeologist Jack Hawthorne travels to Libya intent on recovering the sacred object, but one does not cross the Mossad and expect to walk away without a fight. Jack and his friends must find the priceless “snake of brass upon a pole” before those who are also hunting it find them…and silence them forever.
Archaeologist Jack Hawthorne is back in a new thrilling adventure. The events in ”Serpent of Moses” take place three years after the events of “Elisha’s Bones”. This time his travels have taken him to Libya tracking the Biblical bronze serpent of Moses. Just as he is about to escape with the staff he is captured and taken away with the opposing team of Archeologists. Now Espy, the woman he loves, travels to Milan to find out where he went to find him while Duckey, his best friend travels to Libya for the same reason. With his friends searching to help and the bad guys searching to kill him it is just a matter of time before someone finds him, hopefully it will be his friends. “Serpent of Moses” is a page-turner, heart-racing, action, suspense thriller. Jack Hawthorne’s life is in deadly danger as he is taken captive and his abductors have orders to kill him. Don’t start this book late at night because it will be very difficult to put it down or stop thinking about it. I recommend this book highly and am greatly looking forward to Don Hoesel’s next adrenaline rush.
If you missed the interview for “Serpent of Moses” and would like to listen to it and/or would like to hear the previous interviews where we discussed “Elisha’s Bones” or “The Alarmists” and/or would like to listen to interviews with other authors and professionals please go to www.kingdomhighlights.org where they are available On Demand.
To listen to 24 hours non-stop Christian music please visit our internet radio station www.kingdomairwaves.org
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Bethany House Publishers. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
July 4, 2012
Thinking back to my younger days and sensing what types of movies and book really appealed to me, I'd have to say action-adventure with a twist of romance. Now I was fortunate enough to find myself with the opportunity to review Don Hoesel's latest novel, Serpent of Moses which will leave you a bit breathless.
The book opens with a murder of a German, a Dr. Felix Hoffstatter while members of the Mossad try to prevent it from happening in the dead of night. The mystery will begin to deepen as archaeologist Dr. Jack Hawthorne finds himself fleeing from armed men in a cavern in the mountainous part of northeaster Libya attempting to locate a historical biblical artifact. However once he finds himself cornered and no where to run or hide anymore, he is taken back into the main part of the cavern to find the item.
The men who have kidnapped him are working for the Israeli government that want to ensure that any and all biblical relics that are discovered are turned over to them. However they aren't in the position to bargain for anything but the return of their discovered item which turns out to be a staff Moses created called the Nehushtan, to heal those inflicted by the snake bites that Moses called forth during the plagues of Egypt.
The Israeli's have hired an Egyptian giant, who goes by the name of Imolene working alongside an Englishman named Martin Templeton who have vowed to acquire the staff and leave no witnesses remaining. Now Jack has to work at finding a way to escape along with the staff before he is killed and no one knows where he is at. His only luck is his connection with Milo Sturdivant, a museum curator, who has hired Jack to locate the staff and bring it to him.
When Jack doesn't show up for his appointment, his long time friends, ex-CIA agent Jim Duckett, Dr. Esperanza Habilla and her brother, Romero, will have to use all their skills to find Jack before it's too late.
I received Serpent of Moses by Don Hoesel compliments of Christian Fiction Blog Alliance for my honest review and was immediately drawn in from the first page. As a reader, I compared this one to those Indiana Jones movies I was captivated by, with our hero looking for a hidden biblical artifact that can only be found using a series of clues, meanwhile being hunted by others who want the fortune and glory all for themselves. This one is amazing and well worth a 5 out of 5 star rating. It delivers action, adventure, suspense and a touch of romance in this Christian novel. This is the second novel from Don Hoesel that I've had the opportunity to review and I know it will not be my last. This is the sequel to Elisha's Bones which I have on my Kindle and will be reading next.
The book opens with a murder of a German, a Dr. Felix Hoffstatter while members of the Mossad try to prevent it from happening in the dead of night. The mystery will begin to deepen as archaeologist Dr. Jack Hawthorne finds himself fleeing from armed men in a cavern in the mountainous part of northeaster Libya attempting to locate a historical biblical artifact. However once he finds himself cornered and no where to run or hide anymore, he is taken back into the main part of the cavern to find the item.
The men who have kidnapped him are working for the Israeli government that want to ensure that any and all biblical relics that are discovered are turned over to them. However they aren't in the position to bargain for anything but the return of their discovered item which turns out to be a staff Moses created called the Nehushtan, to heal those inflicted by the snake bites that Moses called forth during the plagues of Egypt.
The Israeli's have hired an Egyptian giant, who goes by the name of Imolene working alongside an Englishman named Martin Templeton who have vowed to acquire the staff and leave no witnesses remaining. Now Jack has to work at finding a way to escape along with the staff before he is killed and no one knows where he is at. His only luck is his connection with Milo Sturdivant, a museum curator, who has hired Jack to locate the staff and bring it to him.
When Jack doesn't show up for his appointment, his long time friends, ex-CIA agent Jim Duckett, Dr. Esperanza Habilla and her brother, Romero, will have to use all their skills to find Jack before it's too late.
I received Serpent of Moses by Don Hoesel compliments of Christian Fiction Blog Alliance for my honest review and was immediately drawn in from the first page. As a reader, I compared this one to those Indiana Jones movies I was captivated by, with our hero looking for a hidden biblical artifact that can only be found using a series of clues, meanwhile being hunted by others who want the fortune and glory all for themselves. This one is amazing and well worth a 5 out of 5 star rating. It delivers action, adventure, suspense and a touch of romance in this Christian novel. This is the second novel from Don Hoesel that I've had the opportunity to review and I know it will not be my last. This is the sequel to Elisha's Bones which I have on my Kindle and will be reading next.
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July 6, 2012Note: This review is by a guest reviewer... my husband, Addison! Please be kind; it's his first review! :)
Serpent of Moses is a good book and I had a fun time reading it. When I first read the description of the book, and its main character, the intrepid archaeologist Jack Hawthorne, I immediately thought of other famous adventurers like Indiana Jones and (for the video game savvy) Nathan Drake. While Jack Hawthorne's adventure through northern Africa in this book may not meet the bar set by those two adventurers, it did provide me with a joyful, fun, easy read.
I went into this book blind, not knowing that there is a preceding book which recounts an earlier adventure of Mr. Hawthorne's. Having done so, and now after finishing the book, I can say that Don Hoesel, the author, does an excellent job of allowing new-comers to jump right into the story. All the characters are well-developed within this single tale, and whenever something comes up that requires knowledge of Jack's previous escapades, the author fills you in with just enough details to clear up any confusion, and yet each reference to Jack's earlier adventure left me wanting to go back and read that story as well. It really is very well done.
The adventure itself is well thought out and has many moving parts. One of things I most enjoyed was how the narrative continually jumps between the many players in the story. Seeing the separate paths of all the characters involved and how all those paths wove in and out and eventually came together in the end was quite enjoyable.
While the subject of the book, the Nehushtan or Serpent of Moses, has biblical roots, the story itself only a few times touches on matters of faith. I was expecting and looking forward to Jack Hawthorne's spiritual growth being a central theme but was left wanting in that respect.
Overall Serpent of Moses was a fun, enjoyable and easy read. I would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for a quick globe-trotting adventure - it would be a great beach book!
This book is a clean read. Although there are a few occasional instances of descriptive violence (e.g. a man using a knife to "open the throat" of another man) none of it was gratuitous or overly graphic in my opinion.
I give this book 3 out of 5 stars.
I want to thank Don Hoesel, Bethany House Publishers, and the Christian Fiction Blog Alliance for the complimentary copy of this book for review. I was not required to write a positive review.The opinions I express in this review are my own. This is in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s CFR 16, Part 255.
Serpent of Moses is a good book and I had a fun time reading it. When I first read the description of the book, and its main character, the intrepid archaeologist Jack Hawthorne, I immediately thought of other famous adventurers like Indiana Jones and (for the video game savvy) Nathan Drake. While Jack Hawthorne's adventure through northern Africa in this book may not meet the bar set by those two adventurers, it did provide me with a joyful, fun, easy read.
I went into this book blind, not knowing that there is a preceding book which recounts an earlier adventure of Mr. Hawthorne's. Having done so, and now after finishing the book, I can say that Don Hoesel, the author, does an excellent job of allowing new-comers to jump right into the story. All the characters are well-developed within this single tale, and whenever something comes up that requires knowledge of Jack's previous escapades, the author fills you in with just enough details to clear up any confusion, and yet each reference to Jack's earlier adventure left me wanting to go back and read that story as well. It really is very well done.
The adventure itself is well thought out and has many moving parts. One of things I most enjoyed was how the narrative continually jumps between the many players in the story. Seeing the separate paths of all the characters involved and how all those paths wove in and out and eventually came together in the end was quite enjoyable.
While the subject of the book, the Nehushtan or Serpent of Moses, has biblical roots, the story itself only a few times touches on matters of faith. I was expecting and looking forward to Jack Hawthorne's spiritual growth being a central theme but was left wanting in that respect.
Overall Serpent of Moses was a fun, enjoyable and easy read. I would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for a quick globe-trotting adventure - it would be a great beach book!
This book is a clean read. Although there are a few occasional instances of descriptive violence (e.g. a man using a knife to "open the throat" of another man) none of it was gratuitous or overly graphic in my opinion.
I give this book 3 out of 5 stars.
I want to thank Don Hoesel, Bethany House Publishers, and the Christian Fiction Blog Alliance for the complimentary copy of this book for review. I was not required to write a positive review.The opinions I express in this review are my own. This is in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s CFR 16, Part 255.
August 5, 2012
Archaeologist Jack Hawthorne is on a quest to find the Nehushtan, the brass serpent staff of Moses. Unfortunately, he’s not the only one who wants it. Mercenaries, the Mossad, simple villagers…everyone seems to want to lay claim to this biblical relic that has rested undisturbed in Libya for centuries. When it’s brought to light, however, Jack finds himself in a world of danger and relying on friends scattered around the world.
Fraught with danger and adventure, Serpent of Moses is an action-packed novel with a hint of romance, a few lessons in biblical history, and plenty of intrigue. From London to Libya and beyond, the characters hop from one country to the next without a second thought, despite the danger the journey places them in. It’s only after men with guns appear that anyone considers the risk to their lives, and by then it’s too late to do anything but continue on and pray God wants them to live through the next step.
Although presented as a stand-alone novel, there are many references to Jack Hawthorne’s past expeditions. In particular, one that took him and his girlfriend Esperanza Habilla to Australia and ended badly. Enough details are finally given in the book for the reader to realize that expedition must be the subject of a previous book by Don Hoesel. Without reading that book first, however, the reader is left wondering what they missed when the story is repeatedly referenced in Serpent of Moses. There’s also the little matter of the characters frequently “intuiting” what others are thinking, as well as several instances of head-hopping (skipping from one character’s thoughts to another’s and back). These things were distracting, along with the feeling of being an outside observer rather than a participant in the story.
Serpent of Moses has an interesting plot and more twists and turns than strictly necessary for an exciting story, but the author managed to tie everything together well while connecting this book to a previous one. The few instances where the wrong location is mentioned in reference to an event in the story can be overlooked without too much trouble.
If you like suspenseful books with adventure, danger, and a bit of archaeology, Serpent of Moses could be the right book for you.
Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book from the publisher. The manner in which I received this book has no bearing on this review. All opinions in this review are my own and based solely on the contents of the book and my experience reading it.
Fraught with danger and adventure, Serpent of Moses is an action-packed novel with a hint of romance, a few lessons in biblical history, and plenty of intrigue. From London to Libya and beyond, the characters hop from one country to the next without a second thought, despite the danger the journey places them in. It’s only after men with guns appear that anyone considers the risk to their lives, and by then it’s too late to do anything but continue on and pray God wants them to live through the next step.
Although presented as a stand-alone novel, there are many references to Jack Hawthorne’s past expeditions. In particular, one that took him and his girlfriend Esperanza Habilla to Australia and ended badly. Enough details are finally given in the book for the reader to realize that expedition must be the subject of a previous book by Don Hoesel. Without reading that book first, however, the reader is left wondering what they missed when the story is repeatedly referenced in Serpent of Moses. There’s also the little matter of the characters frequently “intuiting” what others are thinking, as well as several instances of head-hopping (skipping from one character’s thoughts to another’s and back). These things were distracting, along with the feeling of being an outside observer rather than a participant in the story.
Serpent of Moses has an interesting plot and more twists and turns than strictly necessary for an exciting story, but the author managed to tie everything together well while connecting this book to a previous one. The few instances where the wrong location is mentioned in reference to an event in the story can be overlooked without too much trouble.
If you like suspenseful books with adventure, danger, and a bit of archaeology, Serpent of Moses could be the right book for you.
Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book from the publisher. The manner in which I received this book has no bearing on this review. All opinions in this review are my own and based solely on the contents of the book and my experience reading it.
July 6, 2012
Below is my review, which I first posted on my wife's blog - http://faerytalesarereal.blogspot.com .
Serpent of Moses is a good book and I had a fun time reading it. When I first read the description of the book, and its main character, the intrepid archaeologist Jack Hawthorne, I immediately thought of other famous adventurers like Indiana Jones and (for the video game savvy) Nathan Drake. While Jack Hawthorne's adventure through northern Africa in this book may not meet the bar set by those two adventurers, it did provide me with a joyful, fun, easy read.
I went into this book blind, not knowing that there is a preceding book which recounts an earlier adventure of Mr. Hawthorne's. Having done so, and now after finishing the book, I can say that Don Hoesel, the author, does an excellent job of allowing new-comers to jump right into the story. All the characters are well-developed within this single tale, and whenever something comes up that requires knowledge of Jack's previous escapades, the author fills you in with just enough details to clear up any confusion, and yet each reference to Jack's earlier adventure left me wanting to go back and read that story as well. It really is very well done.
The adventure itself is well thought out and has many moving parts. One of things I most enjoyed was how the narrative continually jumps between the many players in the story. Seeing the separate paths of all the characters involved and how all those paths wove in and out and eventually came together in the end was quite enjoyable.
While the subject of the book, the Nehushtan or Serpent of Moses, has biblical roots, the story itself only a few times touches on matters of faith. I was expecting and looking forward to Jack Hawthorne's spiritual growth being a central theme but was left wanting in that respect.
Overall Serpent of Moses was a fun, enjoyable and easy read. I would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for a quick globe-trotting adventure - it would be a great beach book!
This book is a clean read. Although there are a few occasional instances of descriptive violence (e.g. a man using a knife to "open the throat" of another man) none of it was gratuitous or overly graphic in my opinion.
Serpent of Moses is a good book and I had a fun time reading it. When I first read the description of the book, and its main character, the intrepid archaeologist Jack Hawthorne, I immediately thought of other famous adventurers like Indiana Jones and (for the video game savvy) Nathan Drake. While Jack Hawthorne's adventure through northern Africa in this book may not meet the bar set by those two adventurers, it did provide me with a joyful, fun, easy read.
I went into this book blind, not knowing that there is a preceding book which recounts an earlier adventure of Mr. Hawthorne's. Having done so, and now after finishing the book, I can say that Don Hoesel, the author, does an excellent job of allowing new-comers to jump right into the story. All the characters are well-developed within this single tale, and whenever something comes up that requires knowledge of Jack's previous escapades, the author fills you in with just enough details to clear up any confusion, and yet each reference to Jack's earlier adventure left me wanting to go back and read that story as well. It really is very well done.
The adventure itself is well thought out and has many moving parts. One of things I most enjoyed was how the narrative continually jumps between the many players in the story. Seeing the separate paths of all the characters involved and how all those paths wove in and out and eventually came together in the end was quite enjoyable.
While the subject of the book, the Nehushtan or Serpent of Moses, has biblical roots, the story itself only a few times touches on matters of faith. I was expecting and looking forward to Jack Hawthorne's spiritual growth being a central theme but was left wanting in that respect.
Overall Serpent of Moses was a fun, enjoyable and easy read. I would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for a quick globe-trotting adventure - it would be a great beach book!
This book is a clean read. Although there are a few occasional instances of descriptive violence (e.g. a man using a knife to "open the throat" of another man) none of it was gratuitous or overly graphic in my opinion.
September 4, 2012
Jack Hawthorn, an experienced archaeologist finds himself recovering an ancient artifact - the Nehushtan. It's a sacred and revered object that was thought to have been lost. However, having discovered the 'hiding' place he meets Englishman Martin Templeton - a man who Jack can't trust.
The quest finds him travelling to Libya - but the Mossad agents are not going to let the priceless antique leave the country so easily. His friends - on/off girlfriend and linguist Espy, her brother Romero and one time secret agent Jim 'Duckey' Duckett soon become involved in his struggles once they start to search for Jack after he goes missing - for a longer period than usual.
And so ensues an epic struggle to leave the troubled Libya and neighboring countries and unlock the mystery surrounding 'snake of brass upon a pole'. Why does Templeton seem to have another reason to pursue Jack and is there more to the sacred staff?
From the explosive beginning, Hoesel's novel weaves a story that akin to 'Indiana Jones'. The plot thickens quickly and the momentum is for the most part maintained. The author is articulate and there is a nice fluidity to the chapters. The characters are well defined all with likable traits. Jack is almost nonchalant in his manner whereas Espy is hot headed; her brother and 'Duckey' - cool, calm and collected - yet they all complement each other.
Generally, I liked the premise of this story. However, I didn't gel with it entirely. I'm not sure if it was the plot, the characters or the seemingly lack of information regarding the artifact itself - it just wasn't that in depth. Hoesel is certainly eloquent; I like his style of writing and use of words. And, whilst action packed and engaging, I felt it needed a little more mystery. Recommended for those who like a biblical mystery.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from Bethany House Publishers. The opinions expressed are my own and I am not expected to give a positive review of this book.
The quest finds him travelling to Libya - but the Mossad agents are not going to let the priceless antique leave the country so easily. His friends - on/off girlfriend and linguist Espy, her brother Romero and one time secret agent Jim 'Duckey' Duckett soon become involved in his struggles once they start to search for Jack after he goes missing - for a longer period than usual.
And so ensues an epic struggle to leave the troubled Libya and neighboring countries and unlock the mystery surrounding 'snake of brass upon a pole'. Why does Templeton seem to have another reason to pursue Jack and is there more to the sacred staff?
From the explosive beginning, Hoesel's novel weaves a story that akin to 'Indiana Jones'. The plot thickens quickly and the momentum is for the most part maintained. The author is articulate and there is a nice fluidity to the chapters. The characters are well defined all with likable traits. Jack is almost nonchalant in his manner whereas Espy is hot headed; her brother and 'Duckey' - cool, calm and collected - yet they all complement each other.
Generally, I liked the premise of this story. However, I didn't gel with it entirely. I'm not sure if it was the plot, the characters or the seemingly lack of information regarding the artifact itself - it just wasn't that in depth. Hoesel is certainly eloquent; I like his style of writing and use of words. And, whilst action packed and engaging, I felt it needed a little more mystery. Recommended for those who like a biblical mystery.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from Bethany House Publishers. The opinions expressed are my own and I am not expected to give a positive review of this book.
August 1, 2012
First posted on my blog, Legacy of a Writer.
Serpent of Moses was my first read by Don Hoesel, though I own two of his previous books. And after such a good experience I will definitely be reading them in the near future! As I saw another reviewer compare, this book does put you in mind of an Indian Jones movie. What’s not to like, right?!!
Jack Hawthorne was a one-of-a-kind type of guy! While it was easy for me to grow to like him, I couldn’t help but laugh at a few of his antics—such as the ability to sit back, relax (or even sleep) no matter the situation. Esperanza, Romero, and Duckey made awesome “sidekicks” for him and, really, with a guy like Jack, he needs them!
The people hunting for the staff against these characters were formidable. I loved how Hoesel gave us a peak into their operations by having several scenes from either Bouyfayed, Imolene, or Templeton’s point of view. The plot, as a whole, was very well done. Things began at a rather suspenseful and climatic moment and—to my surprise and delight—Hoesel kept it steadily climbing till the end of Serpent of Moses.
The main reason I didn’t give Serpent of Moses 5 stars would be because of the writing. It was different then I was used to and there were a few scenes were I became confused because of the way things were written. I had to reread it for clarity. But, really, that might just be me—and it wasn’t to such a severe degree that it inhibited my experience in this book.
This newest release of Hoesel’s was a very easy read—the suspense and action pushing me effortlessly from one scene to the next. The cast of characters were easy to get to know and become endeared to. And the whole "hunt for the serpent" was intriguing! So to sum it all up, a very engaging and enjoyable read!!
Serpent of Moses was my first read by Don Hoesel, though I own two of his previous books. And after such a good experience I will definitely be reading them in the near future! As I saw another reviewer compare, this book does put you in mind of an Indian Jones movie. What’s not to like, right?!!
Jack Hawthorne was a one-of-a-kind type of guy! While it was easy for me to grow to like him, I couldn’t help but laugh at a few of his antics—such as the ability to sit back, relax (or even sleep) no matter the situation. Esperanza, Romero, and Duckey made awesome “sidekicks” for him and, really, with a guy like Jack, he needs them!
The people hunting for the staff against these characters were formidable. I loved how Hoesel gave us a peak into their operations by having several scenes from either Bouyfayed, Imolene, or Templeton’s point of view. The plot, as a whole, was very well done. Things began at a rather suspenseful and climatic moment and—to my surprise and delight—Hoesel kept it steadily climbing till the end of Serpent of Moses.
The main reason I didn’t give Serpent of Moses 5 stars would be because of the writing. It was different then I was used to and there were a few scenes were I became confused because of the way things were written. I had to reread it for clarity. But, really, that might just be me—and it wasn’t to such a severe degree that it inhibited my experience in this book.
This newest release of Hoesel’s was a very easy read—the suspense and action pushing me effortlessly from one scene to the next. The cast of characters were easy to get to know and become endeared to. And the whole "hunt for the serpent" was intriguing! So to sum it all up, a very engaging and enjoyable read!!
September 27, 2012
If you're an Indiana Jones fan, you won't want to miss this book. Like the famous trilogy, this story is about a famous archeologist who finds himself in over his head all too often but is able to use his incredible smarts to get himself out of tight spots. The story is action-packed and dramatic, and while this particular book (there is another book in this series) doesn't take place in the jungle, it does span beautiful Italian streets, London museums, and Libyan deserts. Also like the trilogy, Hawthorne seeks Biblical treasures of mythical proportions that possess power beyond human belief. This ups the ante throughout the story as more and more people head out in search of the Nehushtan, which also ups the danger level. I'm a big fan of mysteries and suspense, and Serpent of Moses has both in spades. There's also a bit of love-gone-wrong, which adds just the right amount of heart and mushiness to the strong male lead. I also prefer to read Christian books, and after that good clean books, and this hovers somewhere between the two. While Hawthorne has had mysterious encounters with God that he can't explain, and he has returned to faith, he's certainly not over the top, pushy, or preachy about any of it. While there is no racy or raunchy material in this book - nothing that would prevent, say, an advanced pre-teen boy from reading this story - the faith lessons are also applied softly. This is just an all around great read. This story enthralled me so much that I immediately went out and got the first one. While you can read them in any order, you might understand the characters' shared past better if you read them in the correct order. Whichever you decide to do, don't wait - you won't want to miss this book. I received a free copy of Serpent of Moses in exchange for an honest review.
August 30, 2012
This was a somewhat less enjoyable Jack Hawthorne adventure, when compared to the previous novel. But before I dive into the negatives of this book, let me present the positives. :-)
Hoesel begins Serpent of Moses in third person. This was different for me, seeing as the first book (Elisha's Bones) was written in first person. I freely admit I found the change confusing. Were we with Jack? Or is it Duckey? Espy? Thankfully, Hoesel revealed who it was within a paragraph, but it left a bad taste.
I found Esperanza's loyalty, when it counted, to be very, very admirable. Duckey's too. Especially after all that occurred in Elisha's Bones. In addition, I liked it when Jack had his realization that his relationship with Espy is more important than gallivanting off after artifacts. Friendship plays a big part in Hoesel's novels and it's an element I enjoy.
Now, to briefly disclose my cons. I really didn't like the change to third person. I think I understand why Hoesel did it, but it still aggravated me when I got lost. Because of the change, I struggled to keep up even more so than I did in Elisha's Bones. I also did not like all the jumping around from person to person. It just added to my confusion. Finally, though the story was fast paced at some points, in others it felt like it was dragging.
I'll conclude with one final statement: If I hadn't read Elisha's Bones first, I think I might have liked Serpent of Moses more. I give this book three stars.
I received this book from Bethany House in return for an honest review of my opinions, which I have done.
Hoesel begins Serpent of Moses in third person. This was different for me, seeing as the first book (Elisha's Bones) was written in first person. I freely admit I found the change confusing. Were we with Jack? Or is it Duckey? Espy? Thankfully, Hoesel revealed who it was within a paragraph, but it left a bad taste.
I found Esperanza's loyalty, when it counted, to be very, very admirable. Duckey's too. Especially after all that occurred in Elisha's Bones. In addition, I liked it when Jack had his realization that his relationship with Espy is more important than gallivanting off after artifacts. Friendship plays a big part in Hoesel's novels and it's an element I enjoy.
Now, to briefly disclose my cons. I really didn't like the change to third person. I think I understand why Hoesel did it, but it still aggravated me when I got lost. Because of the change, I struggled to keep up even more so than I did in Elisha's Bones. I also did not like all the jumping around from person to person. It just added to my confusion. Finally, though the story was fast paced at some points, in others it felt like it was dragging.
I'll conclude with one final statement: If I hadn't read Elisha's Bones first, I think I might have liked Serpent of Moses more. I give this book three stars.
I received this book from Bethany House in return for an honest review of my opinions, which I have done.
September 9, 2012
Let me start by saying that Don Hoesel's previous novels have won high recommendations from me for their non-stop action, excellent plots, and Hoesel's strong command of the English language. I therefore approached "Serpent of Moses" with expectations that this book would live up to his previous works. In many ways it did, because the story features plenty of high-octane action scenes and interesting locales. However, for some reason I found much of the story to be somewhat plodding, and I finished the book not even quite clear on whether I liked Jack as a character. He definitely experiences growth during the story, coming to realize that his relationship with his partner is more important than the latest archaeological find or large financial reward. But his whole reason for going after the object in the first place is utterly without merit, and because of this the book lacked the sense of justice and rightness that would make me normally side with the main character and their mission. Jack simply didn't deserve to win anymore than anyone else in the story did. And despite the coolness factor of the artifact, its importance to Israel itself isn't fleshed out that strongly in my opinion.
The result is that I can only give this book a mild recommendation to readers who typically enjoy stories of action and suspense, and a rating of 3.5 out of 5 stars.
Book has been provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications, Inc. Available at your favourite bookseller from Bethany House, a division of Baker Publishing Group.
The result is that I can only give this book a mild recommendation to readers who typically enjoy stories of action and suspense, and a rating of 3.5 out of 5 stars.
Book has been provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications, Inc. Available at your favourite bookseller from Bethany House, a division of Baker Publishing Group.
August 9, 2012
This was an enjoyable archaological mystery following Jack as he finds an historical artifact and is subsequently kidnapped by others after the same artifact! The story tells of his journey through the aftermath of his find and also follows two other sets of characters, his girlfriend and her brother and a ex-CIA friend as the attempt to follow in his footsteps in order to help their missing friend. It is a well written, wholesome adventure, and while it is a "Christian" book, the faith aspects are not overwhelming so would be excellent for any adventure reader, including non-Christians and younger readers. The character's faith definitely influences his decisions at the end in a somewhat surprising conclusion. I did not realize until later that this is the sequel to another novel, Elisha's Bones, though it is quite obvious through the novel that some rather large events had occured before, and they do influence the progression of the novel. However the author does an excellent job of sharing what is necessary without retelling too much. I was satisfied with this book (didn't feel like I missed out) and yet am interested in reading the first book to get more of the story. I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys adventure and mystery without all the unnecessary violence and language of mainstream novels.
I recieved a copy of this book from the publisher for my honest review.
I recieved a copy of this book from the publisher for my honest review.
August 12, 2012
Resting in Libya lies a valuable treasure beckoning from the deep that comes with a price. There are those who would do just about anything to acquire it.
Former Professor Jack Hawthorne well known in the world of archaelogy is possessor of ancient artifacts. His desire for one in particular will lead him on a journey alone to discover and acquire of its well preserved hiding place before others realize he has gone.
As danger lurks in the foreground will the treasure be gained at the risk of lives?
Slightly reminicient of an Indiana Jones adventure, this novel brings action filled storyline, dangerous suspense and tense moments from the beginning. Although at times the reading drug slightly, it quickly picked back up again and I would find myself once again lost within the pages. This book seems to be a continuation of the first novel Elisha's Bones where Jack is introduced. Not reading the first one yet, I feel reading in order would definately help with beginning story development and clarity. Plot was well flowing, scenery realistic and dialogue original and felt as if I were there at the scene. I found the overall message inspiring and was challenged in my faith. I was entertained and would recommend this book to others but will suggest reading Elisha's Bones prior to reading this one. I received a complimenary copy from Bethany House Publishers for my review.
Former Professor Jack Hawthorne well known in the world of archaelogy is possessor of ancient artifacts. His desire for one in particular will lead him on a journey alone to discover and acquire of its well preserved hiding place before others realize he has gone.
As danger lurks in the foreground will the treasure be gained at the risk of lives?
Slightly reminicient of an Indiana Jones adventure, this novel brings action filled storyline, dangerous suspense and tense moments from the beginning. Although at times the reading drug slightly, it quickly picked back up again and I would find myself once again lost within the pages. This book seems to be a continuation of the first novel Elisha's Bones where Jack is introduced. Not reading the first one yet, I feel reading in order would definately help with beginning story development and clarity. Plot was well flowing, scenery realistic and dialogue original and felt as if I were there at the scene. I found the overall message inspiring and was challenged in my faith. I was entertained and would recommend this book to others but will suggest reading Elisha's Bones prior to reading this one. I received a complimenary copy from Bethany House Publishers for my review.
July 16, 2017
Archaeologist Dr. Jack Hawthorne discovers the Nehushtan, the Serpent Staff of Moses. Jack is chased across Northern Africa by Israeli Mossad. He enlist the help of his girlfriend, her brother and his buddy who is retired from the CIA.
The Nebushtan is actually briefly mentioned in the Bible (Numbers Chapter 21). The Israelies spoke against God and Moses, so the Lord sent snakes among the people. Many were bitten and died. Then the people apologized to Moses and Moses prayed for the people. God instructed Moses to built a bronze snake on a pole. The bitten Israelies could look upon The Serpent Staff and survive.
As a side note, I have read the entire NIV Bible. It took me 15 months to read and was over 1200 pages. This is why I was drawn to this novel. I wish that more of the actual biblical story was written into the novel. Also, the story lacked suspense. I was never worried about Jack surviving this adventure. He seemed to be more than a mortal man. Still, I enjoyed this book. I would grade this book a C+.
The Nebushtan is actually briefly mentioned in the Bible (Numbers Chapter 21). The Israelies spoke against God and Moses, so the Lord sent snakes among the people. Many were bitten and died. Then the people apologized to Moses and Moses prayed for the people. God instructed Moses to built a bronze snake on a pole. The bitten Israelies could look upon The Serpent Staff and survive.
As a side note, I have read the entire NIV Bible. It took me 15 months to read and was over 1200 pages. This is why I was drawn to this novel. I wish that more of the actual biblical story was written into the novel. Also, the story lacked suspense. I was never worried about Jack surviving this adventure. He seemed to be more than a mortal man. Still, I enjoyed this book. I would grade this book a C+.
July 20, 2012
I absolutely loved "Elisha's Bones." Jack Hawthorne is a bit of Indiana Jones and dash of Dr. Grant with a healthy portion of luck made possible by his friends. They are far from being supporting characters as their ups and downs create as much of the tension and anxiety as the predicaments that Dr. Hawthorne embroils them in. The addition of Ducky in this book make it even more fun.
I agree with another review about Elisha's Bones that not only what that book make a great movie, this could be a fantastic follow up to that one. As I'm sure most people do, I've put together a cast in my head just for the fun of it. I imagine Monica Belluci as Espy and Alfred Molina Romero. Idris Elba for Imolene, Brian Cox as Ducky, Ralph Fiennes as Templeton and how about Michael Fassbender as Dr. Hawthorne? Hmmmm?
I agree with another review about Elisha's Bones that not only what that book make a great movie, this could be a fantastic follow up to that one. As I'm sure most people do, I've put together a cast in my head just for the fun of it. I imagine Monica Belluci as Espy and Alfred Molina Romero. Idris Elba for Imolene, Brian Cox as Ducky, Ralph Fiennes as Templeton and how about Michael Fassbender as Dr. Hawthorne? Hmmmm?
December 15, 2013
Serpent of Moses by Ron Hoesel find Jack Hawthorne once again on the quest for religious artifacts and of course putting himself in danger.
The Staff of Moses, in which he healed the Israelites of snakebites has long believed to have been lost.
Israel is intent that any artifacts relating to the Jewish faith are returned to Israel. Mossad has hired Imolene to guarantee the return of the Nehushtan. Imolene is working with Martin Templeton to find the staff. They don't plan on leaving behind any witnesses. Jack is, therefore, in a fight for his life. Templeton has a personal grudge against Jack that plays into his complete dislike for Jack.
When Jack fails to keep to his deadline he has friends who step in to find Jack and assist in anyway possible.
The Serpent of Moses drawls the reader in from the beginning of the story and never lets go. Great read.
The Staff of Moses, in which he healed the Israelites of snakebites has long believed to have been lost.
Israel is intent that any artifacts relating to the Jewish faith are returned to Israel. Mossad has hired Imolene to guarantee the return of the Nehushtan. Imolene is working with Martin Templeton to find the staff. They don't plan on leaving behind any witnesses. Jack is, therefore, in a fight for his life. Templeton has a personal grudge against Jack that plays into his complete dislike for Jack.
When Jack fails to keep to his deadline he has friends who step in to find Jack and assist in anyway possible.
The Serpent of Moses drawls the reader in from the beginning of the story and never lets go. Great read.
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February 10, 2016Just three years after the recovery of Elisha's bones, Dr. Jack Hawthorne has given up teaching and resumed the practice of archaeology, although his frequent absences have put a strain on his relationship with Esperanza. Things heat up when Esperanza receives a call from an antiquities dealer with troubling news about Jack, and her fears are confirmed. Jack has gone to Libya in search of another biblical artifact: the Nehushtan, the serpent staff of Moses. After Jack arrives in Libya, he soon discovers he isn't the only one searching for the Nehushtan. Later, in attempting to steal it, he finds himself in the hands of a man who just might be his match. Jack and his friends must stay one step ahead of the Libyan government, an overambitious member of the Vatican hierarchy, and an Egyptian assassin--if they stand any chance
of staying alive long enough to recover the staff.
of staying alive long enough to recover the staff.
August 24, 2012
The mystery, action, excitment, and protagonist (even the antagonists) were crafted excellentlly. I was transported into the story, believed every character, and was wondering how everything worked together and was pleased by the result. I was left with a couple of questions in the end but I'll live. Saw a few point of view and showing vs. telling errors but haveing trouble thinking of an example so they didn't make a huge impression. A previouse book to this one was mentioned a few times but this is can be read stand-alone and understood completly. This book will have a happy place on my bookshelf and I will be looking into Don Hoesel's other books.
In exchange for an honest review, I received this book for free from Bethany House Publishers.
In exchange for an honest review, I received this book for free from Bethany House Publishers.
February 18, 2016
The adventure continues and it was as enjoyable as the first book. This time, it was Moses' staff with a serpent that's the object of desire.
If I have any reservation about this book, it is the somewhat quick discoveries being made about signs and clues. If one's group has a legitimate archaeologist, a voracious linguist, and an antiques dealer, one has got to have a very fiction-trained mind to not question their ability to quickly spot and interpret the clues.
Not that I'm complaining... It's just an observation. At the end of the day, what really matters is how enjoyable and entertaining this book is.
If I have any reservation about this book, it is the somewhat quick discoveries being made about signs and clues. If one's group has a legitimate archaeologist, a voracious linguist, and an antiques dealer, one has got to have a very fiction-trained mind to not question their ability to quickly spot and interpret the clues.
Not that I'm complaining... It's just an observation. At the end of the day, what really matters is how enjoyable and entertaining this book is.
November 24, 2015
Another tightly written suspense by Don Hoesel. The author is able to help us slip easily from our present into his story. There's enough real life to suspend doubt of the possibility of the plot, and the characters are strong. Realistic, suspenseful, humorous at times, intense to the end. A great read.
I've read the first and third in this series and was glad to find the second. Although these can be stand-alone books, there is a greater character arc that covers the series and it's fun to follow.
I've read the first and third in this series and was glad to find the second. Although these can be stand-alone books, there is a greater character arc that covers the series and it's fun to follow.
April 10, 2014
Ik ben dit boek gaan lezen omdat ik nu eenmaal geen weerstand kan bieden aan boeken die over archeologie gaan. Vond dit boek wel leuk maar niet echt een hoogvlieger. Ook is dit een tweede boek over Jack Hawthorne alleen is dit eerste boek nooit vertaald in het Nederlands, het was dus best wel vervelend dat er in dit deel een heleboel werd gerefereerd naar gebeurtenissen in het eerste boek terwijl ik dit eerste boek dus niet heb gelezen.
December 18, 2012
A great follow up to the first Jack Hawthorn book. We see the characters develop well and see more of the supporting characters from the previous book.
The hunt is on for the Staff of Moses with the brass snake wound around it, the hunt takes us from Milan,Libya, Tunisia and finally Turkey. A must read for anyone who likes history combined with relic hunting.
The hunt is on for the Staff of Moses with the brass snake wound around it, the hunt takes us from Milan,Libya, Tunisia and finally Turkey. A must read for anyone who likes history combined with relic hunting.
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