I was extremely disappointed in this book. It didn't feel like a Carly book at all, and I've read just about all her books. This book didn't have the same flow as her Chandler brothers trilogy, it lacked the character connections that were in the Hot Zone trilogy, and the carefree ways of the Costas Sisters books.
This book seemed forced and at times it felt like someone else wrote the book and just stuck Carly's name on the cover. I'm going to read the last two books since there are only three, but I hope the rest of her books to come are much better than this.
The women in the book were very childish at times, and Derek seemed to have more estrogen then a man should have. The only characters I could stand was Hank and Derek's daughter.
Mary and her grand-daughter were the most poorly written. Instead of giving the characters depth, to me, it felt that Carly was dancing around giving these two characters personalities until the very end when Gabby's "plan" just happened to pull through at the nick of time without a hitch.
Which brings me to Gabby. For a character that's supposed to be strong, she's very closed-minded and weak. Her strength comes from the only thing she seems to know.. sex. The only time she was strong was when she could get Derek in bed, or work at getting Derek into bed. After that, she became childlike, especially when it came to her best friend.
I understand that her friend (who's name I can't remember, she wasn't very memorable to begin with) went through a problem during college, and yes, some situations can cause people to fold into themselves, changing who they are completely. We've all been effected one way or another by a situation like that, or because someone we know was in a situation like that. However, the character arc with this character was very repetitive. Every time Gabby's friend was brought up, a re-hash of what happened in college followed. We got the point the first few times.
We then meet the man who hurt Gabby's friend in college and all of a sudden his wife is little miss talkative and it's like nothing ever happened. Yes, Tony (I think that's his name..) paid for what he did, but honestly, after the confrontation, it was as if nothing ever happened and everyone went on their merry little ways.
It feels as if Carly just kicked out this book at the last minute because she was late for her deadline. I've read the Chandler brothers trilogy more times than I can count and so far, the first Lucky trilogy book is a serious disappointment. I usually get through her books in a matter of a couple of hours because they engaging and I have to know what happens, however, with this book, it took me a matter of 4 days to get through a book than has less than 400 pages.
The last time it took me that long to get through such a short book, was a text book I had to read for a class in college.