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ELORA
Saved from the streets as a child, Elora spent her adolescent years in the care of seven vampires. As time goes by and she enters adulthood, emotions evolve into something unexpected.
Pure love turns into burning lust, friendships are challenged, humanity is put to the ultimate test, and loyalty is earned.
Filled with passion and desire, this coming-of-age novel follows the story of a selfless human with soiled innocence and the vampires who will do anything to keep her safe.
Pure love turns into burning lust, friendships are challenged, humanity is put to the ultimate test, and loyalty is earned.
Filled with passion and desire, this coming-of-age novel follows the story of a selfless human with soiled innocence and the vampires who will do anything to keep her safe.
677 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 4, 2023
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October 15, 2024
This was nasty. I feel filthy and not in a good way.
This book was written for people with very specific kink combinations. It's definitely a book where the girls that get it, get it. Sadly, I do not.
── .✦ The book is about a human girl who was abandoned at around 4 years old, found by 7 hot vampires who are thousands of years old, and then they kinda took her in and she grew up with them.
There are only so many different ways for that kind of story to go, unfortunately for me, this one made me feel uneasy. I knew this was risky and I still read it anyway so honestly this is on me lol
I'm always down to read anything, I've read a lot of weird shit in my life, and usually pretty good at suspending my belief (which is why I gave this one a chance in the first place). But I fear I have found my limits.
Disclaimer ! nothing sexual happens until she was 18, the vampires didn't feel or think anything sexual towards Elora, the fmc, until she was of legal age.
Doesn't mean it wasn't still weird, though. The author tried really hard to not mention "father figure", "family" and made Elora constantly refer to them as "her friends" and "my guys". Just because she said it all the damn time doesn't make it true.
The fact is, some of them raised her. Duke, one of the mmcs, literally used to bathe her and change her clothes when she was a child. Just because they are not "father figures" to Elora doesn't mean their acts aren't fatherly. Duke used to carry wet wipes to clean Elora's dirty hands when she was younger for fuck's sake.
Not all of them raised her as hardcore as Duke did, but they still helped raise her to be the person she was.
The only one I did not feel weird about was Lucifer because he barely interacted with her when she was young, went away for like 5 years during her formative years and came back when she was legal. And maybe Quin but that's only because I have a crush on the guy (he can cook, sue me) but the rest? Creepy as hell.
Making Elora have the personality (and mental capability) of a 5 year old when she was nineteen (could even be twenty according to her) is also a CREEPY decision.
She was described as super smart (captain of every single club in school or whatever), top of her class and all that bullshit, but she didn't know what a condom was. She didn't know what goes on in a sexual act. She didn't know a dick could get hard, she thought the guys were hiding candy bars in their pants. She didn't know what jerking off meant. She didn't know what getting horny was.
I learned all this shit when I was 13 in school and I was a dumb & lazy student. Elora's excuse was she was so busy with extracurriculars & she always missed health class. Yeah right, I call that lazy writing.
And the guys were so hellbent on protecting Elora's innocence (they thought it was cute) and it made me want to vomit. You all want to keep Elora acting like A CHILD. That's what you're all attracted to. A NINETEEN YEAR OLD TODDLER.
They were sO ProTecTive of her and didn't want her to make stupid teenage mistakes, but let her learn her lesson (like a PARENT would, so much of not being a PARENTAL FIGURE), then punished her because she was being a brat and acted irresponsible. NOO NOT THEIR INNOCENT ELORA getting drunk and high!
How did they punish her you ask? By bringing her to a dungeon red room and fucking her six ways to sunday with seven different dicks. That will teach her alright!
I think I would've somewhat enjoyed this more if Elora had acted her age. The fact that she acted like a child at a ripe age of 19 rubbed me the wrong way in an already sickening plot. Can we all please stop romanticizing grown women with a child-like personality please. It's not cute.
This book was written for people with very specific kink combinations. It's definitely a book where the girls that get it, get it. Sadly, I do not.
── .✦ The book is about a human girl who was abandoned at around 4 years old, found by 7 hot vampires who are thousands of years old, and then they kinda took her in and she grew up with them.
There are only so many different ways for that kind of story to go, unfortunately for me, this one made me feel uneasy. I knew this was risky and I still read it anyway so honestly this is on me lol
I'm always down to read anything, I've read a lot of weird shit in my life, and usually pretty good at suspending my belief (which is why I gave this one a chance in the first place). But I fear I have found my limits.
Disclaimer ! nothing sexual happens until she was 18, the vampires didn't feel or think anything sexual towards Elora, the fmc, until she was of legal age.
Doesn't mean it wasn't still weird, though. The author tried really hard to not mention "father figure", "family" and made Elora constantly refer to them as "her friends" and "my guys". Just because she said it all the damn time doesn't make it true.
The fact is, some of them raised her. Duke, one of the mmcs, literally used to bathe her and change her clothes when she was a child. Just because they are not "father figures" to Elora doesn't mean their acts aren't fatherly. Duke used to carry wet wipes to clean Elora's dirty hands when she was younger for fuck's sake.
Not all of them raised her as hardcore as Duke did, but they still helped raise her to be the person she was.
The only one I did not feel weird about was Lucifer because he barely interacted with her when she was young, went away for like 5 years during her formative years and came back when she was legal. And maybe Quin but that's only because I have a crush on the guy (he can cook, sue me) but the rest? Creepy as hell.
Making Elora have the personality (and mental capability) of a 5 year old when she was nineteen (could even be twenty according to her) is also a CREEPY decision.
She was described as super smart (captain of every single club in school or whatever), top of her class and all that bullshit, but she didn't know what a condom was. She didn't know what goes on in a sexual act. She didn't know a dick could get hard, she thought the guys were hiding candy bars in their pants. She didn't know what jerking off meant. She didn't know what getting horny was.
I learned all this shit when I was 13 in school and I was a dumb & lazy student. Elora's excuse was she was so busy with extracurriculars & she always missed health class. Yeah right, I call that lazy writing.
And the guys were so hellbent on protecting Elora's innocence (they thought it was cute) and it made me want to vomit. You all want to keep Elora acting like A CHILD. That's what you're all attracted to. A NINETEEN YEAR OLD TODDLER.
They were sO ProTecTive of her and didn't want her to make stupid teenage mistakes, but let her learn her lesson (like a PARENT would, so much of not being a PARENTAL FIGURE), then punished her because she was being a brat and acted irresponsible. NOO NOT THEIR INNOCENT ELORA getting drunk and high!
How did they punish her you ask? By bringing her to a dungeon red room and fucking her six ways to sunday with seven different dicks. That will teach her alright!
I think I would've somewhat enjoyed this more if Elora had acted her age. The fact that she acted like a child at a ripe age of 19 rubbed me the wrong way in an already sickening plot. Can we all please stop romanticizing grown women with a child-like personality please. It's not cute.
August 23, 2023
If I could give this a zero star I would. The hype around this book is way off base. It’s not a sexy tale of a vampire harem and their relationships with the girl they saved. It’s actually a shock and awe type story about a young girl being groomed by predatory men.
The language used throughout the book evoked the same response from me. Elora speaks like a pre-pubescent child and the men play on the fact that she’s innocent and needs to be taught about sex.
The punishment chapter was basically just a porn fest for anyone with a group sex/daddy fetish. It wasn’t sexy or erotic. It was actually disturbing, that these men who proclaim to love Elora treat her - in their own words - as a “pretty little slut.” All because she went out for a night and came home drunk in the arms of a boy, who was actually her own age. God forbid.
I skimmed it for the most part and ended up DNF’ing it at the aforementioned chapter, because in all honesty it left me feeling sleazy and in need of a sterile environment and a safe space. Also I will be sure to never be rescued by a bunch of vampires who want to fill me with a butt plug and use me as a sex toy. Give me Edward Cullen any day over this.
The language used throughout the book evoked the same response from me. Elora speaks like a pre-pubescent child and the men play on the fact that she’s innocent and needs to be taught about sex.
The punishment chapter was basically just a porn fest for anyone with a group sex/daddy fetish. It wasn’t sexy or erotic. It was actually disturbing, that these men who proclaim to love Elora treat her - in their own words - as a “pretty little slut.” All because she went out for a night and came home drunk in the arms of a boy, who was actually her own age. God forbid.
I skimmed it for the most part and ended up DNF’ing it at the aforementioned chapter, because in all honesty it left me feeling sleazy and in need of a sterile environment and a safe space. Also I will be sure to never be rescued by a bunch of vampires who want to fill me with a butt plug and use me as a sex toy. Give me Edward Cullen any day over this.
April 24, 2023
I can’t lie, this was my fave wattpad book last year 🙈 so excited for it to be published
This might have been my fifth time rereading this in the past year 😭
This might have been my fifth time rereading this in the past year 😭
July 15, 2023
Honestly shocked by all the positive reviews. This book is WEIRD and the relationship that evolves between Elora and the men after literally being raised by them is deeply unsettling. Despite being 18/19 there's so much emphasis on how mentally child like she still is, and the dynamic wouldn't have been anywhere near as strange if this wasn't the case. Also, if I had to read "girly parts" one more time I'd of genuinely gouged my eyes out. DNF
August 21, 2023
This is the first time I force myself to finish a book that makes me feel so bad, but I did it so I can write a review having all the information.
The books has trigger warnings, but I feel the need to add this because they don’t seem enough. First of all, take the warnings on the start of the book extremely seriously, because I had to skip some scenes from how unsettled and uncomfortable I felt. This book made all the other BDSM books that I ever read seem like the ultimate vanilla sex. I not only had second hand embarrassment for the FMC, I fully believe she’s the most pathetic and unlikeble female lead character that I ever read.
But other than this, the points that made me really dislike the book and give it 2 stars (that are only for the good writing):
The story felt really pedophilia-y, what was really disturbing. If you switch Elora’s age for that of a 11yo, it’s incredibly believable that’s what you’re reading about.
1. The FMC acts like a child, using ponytails as a 19yo, licking lollypops and saying she likes to go to the doctor because she receives a juice box after
2. She refers to her vagina as “girly part” and her stomach as “tommy”. She also giggles at everything, just like a child would
3. Besides being the top of her class and wanting a medical degree, she doesn’t know why her “girly parts” tingle, what a penis looks like, what a condom is or how babies are made (please consider she has full access to a phone with internet)
4. The guys say she’s their baby/princess, they like her innocence and ignorance, and some of them asked her to call them “daddy”
5. Throughout the book, their size differences are constantly emphasized, describing Elora as super tiny in every physical aspect (EVERY), and how this turn the guys on.
6. All of this paired with the daddy kink, the context of them raising her, the dacryphilia and them keeping things from her/making all the decisions just made all seem manipulative and grooming
7. All this makes it really hard to believe they like her for anything besides a sextoy that’s convenient for them, or that they even respect her at all, but the book is pretty heavy on aftercare and love declarations, so I guess they love her
Besides this, the plot was pretty bad, had some holes, and just made the protagonist seem even more heavily stupid. The only moment when I felt was created to be the ultimate plot moment was the one that made me think they should just die already. This book made me feel nothing besides wishing for a therapist or a way to unread it.
That’s it, I’m traumatized.
The books has trigger warnings, but I feel the need to add this because they don’t seem enough. First of all, take the warnings on the start of the book extremely seriously, because I had to skip some scenes from how unsettled and uncomfortable I felt. This book made all the other BDSM books that I ever read seem like the ultimate vanilla sex. I not only had second hand embarrassment for the FMC, I fully believe she’s the most pathetic and unlikeble female lead character that I ever read.
But other than this, the points that made me really dislike the book and give it 2 stars (that are only for the good writing):
The story felt really pedophilia-y, what was really disturbing. If you switch Elora’s age for that of a 11yo, it’s incredibly believable that’s what you’re reading about.
1. The FMC acts like a child, using ponytails as a 19yo, licking lollypops and saying she likes to go to the doctor because she receives a juice box after
2. She refers to her vagina as “girly part” and her stomach as “tommy”. She also giggles at everything, just like a child would
3. Besides being the top of her class and wanting a medical degree, she doesn’t know why her “girly parts” tingle, what a penis looks like, what a condom is or how babies are made (please consider she has full access to a phone with internet)
4. The guys say she’s their baby/princess, they like her innocence and ignorance, and some of them asked her to call them “daddy”
5. Throughout the book, their size differences are constantly emphasized, describing Elora as super tiny in every physical aspect (EVERY), and how this turn the guys on.
6. All of this paired with the daddy kink, the context of them raising her, the dacryphilia and them keeping things from her/making all the decisions just made all seem manipulative and grooming
7. All this makes it really hard to believe they like her for anything besides a sextoy that’s convenient for them, or that they even respect her at all, but the book is pretty heavy on aftercare and love declarations, so I guess they love her
Besides this, the plot was pretty bad, had some holes, and just made the protagonist seem even more heavily stupid. The only moment when I felt was created to be the ultimate plot moment was the one that made me think they should just die already. This book made me feel nothing besides wishing for a therapist or a way to unread it.
That’s it, I’m traumatized.
May 5, 2023
★4.5/5! i love elora and her men! this is just the perfect mixture of smut and fluffiness - which i am a sucker for along with an amazing plot twist. the bonus chapters + extra little scenes where the absolute best, my comfort book atm 🫂! don’t let the cover fool you one of the spiciest books i’ve read ever (the last two bonus spice scenes at the end did something to me, forest + butcher room IF YOU KNOW YOU KNOW. i just love everything about this, mainly the relationships -romantic & friendship.
May 18, 2024
Alright, FUCKKK no. Dnf.
It’s cringe and uncomfortable. She’s 4 and thinks like a 20yo, "I hummed as I pushed some suds against my chin"??? TALK LIKE A GODDAMN 4YO!! What 4yo knows the word "suds"??!!
Then she’s 18 (actually 20) and thinks like a 6yo who thinks the erection in one of MLs pants is a candy bar??!! That’s disgusting infantilism and so cringe I want to chock her with my bare hands.
"It wasn’t like he hadn’t seen my butt before. He used to give me baths when I was a kid!" DON’T FKG SAY THAT, HOLY SHTTT. Gross Gross Gross!!
"Had he already forgotten the hundreds of baths, showers, and clothing changes he’d given me as a child?" IM THE ONE WHO WANTS TO FORGET!!! ME!! Im gonna bash my head against the concrete to give me short-term amnesia!!
Finally, we attained peak predatory behavior with one of the MLs who said "You’re legal." NOPE, NOPITY FK NO!!
If I could give negative stars, I fkg would! I just wanted a bit of taboo age gap, not fkg acid reflux!! 😭🤡
It’s cringe and uncomfortable. She’s 4 and thinks like a 20yo, "I hummed as I pushed some suds against my chin"??? TALK LIKE A GODDAMN 4YO!! What 4yo knows the word "suds"??!!
Then she’s 18 (actually 20) and thinks like a 6yo who thinks the erection in one of MLs pants is a candy bar??!! That’s disgusting infantilism and so cringe I want to chock her with my bare hands.
"It wasn’t like he hadn’t seen my butt before. He used to give me baths when I was a kid!" DON’T FKG SAY THAT, HOLY SHTTT. Gross Gross Gross!!
"Had he already forgotten the hundreds of baths, showers, and clothing changes he’d given me as a child?" IM THE ONE WHO WANTS TO FORGET!!! ME!! Im gonna bash my head against the concrete to give me short-term amnesia!!
Finally, we attained peak predatory behavior with one of the MLs who said "You’re legal." NOPE, NOPITY FK NO!!
If I could give negative stars, I fkg would! I just wanted a bit of taboo age gap, not fkg acid reflux!! 😭🤡
August 3, 2024
I gave it a chance
This is Usagi drop, Vol. 1 but with 7 Twilight vampires.
🐇 What I liked
↠ The writing is not exactly professional. There's something too amateurish and infantile about it. However, there's also an underlying... wistfulness. I could almost feel the author's deep desire for her fantasy, for this world, to be her heroine and live this idyllic life with her eternal loves.
I'm not saying that's enough to recommend this book, but just something I wanted to acknowledge.
🐇 What I didn't like
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This is Usagi drop, Vol. 1 but with 7 Twilight vampires.
🐇 What I liked
↠ The writing is not exactly professional. There's something too amateurish and infantile about it. However, there's also an underlying... wistfulness. I could almost feel the author's deep desire for her fantasy, for this world, to be her heroine and live this idyllic life with her eternal loves.
I'm not saying that's enough to recommend this book, but just something I wanted to acknowledge.
🐇 What I didn't like
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August 21, 2023
0/5
DNF. I started this book after reading all the positive reviews. This book is ...odd. The child like mentality of Elora and the grooming that seems to be taking place is really off-putting. The writing could use a lot of help grammatically. Another reader shocked by the hundreds of positive reviews. Do not recommend. Smut was cringe - worthy. Confusing male anatomy as a "king size candy bar" on a few occasions just ... 🤦♀️
DNF. I started this book after reading all the positive reviews. This book is ...odd. The child like mentality of Elora and the grooming that seems to be taking place is really off-putting. The writing could use a lot of help grammatically. Another reader shocked by the hundreds of positive reviews. Do not recommend. Smut was cringe - worthy. Confusing male anatomy as a "king size candy bar" on a few occasions just ... 🤦♀️
July 5, 2023
being raised by 7 hot vampires will solve all girls' problems tbh
July 12, 2023
god awful
It is so bad i wanna give you a zero but that’s not possible so I give u a 1
It is so bad i wanna give you a zero but that’s not possible so I give u a 1
January 16, 2024
This book still haunts me.
I never read something so disturbing. There’s not enough trigger warnings in the world for this.
I never read something so disturbing. There’s not enough trigger warnings in the world for this.
May 31, 2023
I normally do not write reviews, but I feel like I need to in order to warn anyone who is thinking of buying this.
BE WARNED
1) it's kind of gross how Elora's Foster "parents" end up all wanting to bang her. YOU RAISED HER. Also, no child in existence has ever fantasized about her dads either, ew.
3) This book has ABSOLUTELY no story. All they do is stay inside their huge house and have kinky sex. Once in every 50 to 100 pages, she might go outside once. For a little bit. Probably accompanied too.The only thing that progresses the story in the first 400+ pages is that elora gets kidnapped for a hot minute. (Which just ends up in the book becoming 99% porn because now she isn't allowed to leave the house anymore)
3) the 6 or what 7 boys? Are almost all the same. All men fit either into the category rough/badboy or soft/caring. You could've had the same effect with 3 men since most don't stand out character wise. And they also have this weird hivemind going on, which is totally gross. It started kinda interesting when I thought it was just between lucifer and Elora but quickly became another ick for me
4) The smut is incredibly mid, which is kind of bad when you take into consideration that this book has nothing else to offer. The only romance buildup I felt was between lucifer and Elora. All the others just read like it was plain sex but no spark. I can go on about all the horrible sex scenes that all begin with Elora being ignorant and innocent about sex and end with her waking up all cleaned up in her bed but I just cba
I DNF'd after roughly 460 pages. Maybe I should've given this book 2 stars to thank it for making me realise what kind of smut I absolutely despise.
Sometimes, wattpad stories should stay on wattpad.
0.5/5 ⭐️
BE WARNED
1) it's kind of gross how Elora's Foster "parents" end up all wanting to bang her. YOU RAISED HER. Also, no child in existence has ever fantasized about her dads either, ew.
3) This book has ABSOLUTELY no story. All they do is stay inside their huge house and have kinky sex. Once in every 50 to 100 pages, she might go outside once. For a little bit. Probably accompanied too.The only thing that progresses the story in the first 400+ pages is that elora gets kidnapped for a hot minute. (Which just ends up in the book becoming 99% porn because now she isn't allowed to leave the house anymore)
3) the 6 or what 7 boys? Are almost all the same. All men fit either into the category rough/badboy or soft/caring. You could've had the same effect with 3 men since most don't stand out character wise. And they also have this weird hivemind going on, which is totally gross. It started kinda interesting when I thought it was just between lucifer and Elora but quickly became another ick for me
4) The smut is incredibly mid, which is kind of bad when you take into consideration that this book has nothing else to offer. The only romance buildup I felt was between lucifer and Elora. All the others just read like it was plain sex but no spark. I can go on about all the horrible sex scenes that all begin with Elora being ignorant and innocent about sex and end with her waking up all cleaned up in her bed but I just cba
I DNF'd after roughly 460 pages. Maybe I should've given this book 2 stars to thank it for making me realise what kind of smut I absolutely despise.
Sometimes, wattpad stories should stay on wattpad.
0.5/5 ⭐️
September 10, 2023
So you’re telling me that all the booktok girlies are hyping up a book about a girl, who’s mentally 5 years old, getting groomed and doing kinky shit with a group of vampires who are basically her father figures??? A big fucking no for me
April 17, 2025
some people shouldn't be allowed to write
September 25, 2026
I always get a little nervous going into a book with multiple main characters, much less eight of them! It’s so easy for some characters to get lost in the shuffle or feel like they don’t get enough “airtime,” but that was absolutely not the case here. Every single character was so beautifully fleshed out and distinct that I’m honestly not entirely convinced they aren’t real people. I became so attached to this entire cast.
This is probably the longest book I’ve read all year, and somehow, I still could’ve happily read another 300 pages. The story was just that beautiful. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes throughout, but I was so invested in the plot and characters that they were incredibly easy to overlook.
Anyways, I’m very happy to officially welcome Beanie Harper into my author hall of fame🫡
This is probably the longest book I’ve read all year, and somehow, I still could’ve happily read another 300 pages. The story was just that beautiful. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes throughout, but I was so invested in the plot and characters that they were incredibly easy to overlook.
Anyways, I’m very happy to officially welcome Beanie Harper into my author hall of fame🫡
May 4, 2023
I first read this book on wattpad a long time ago.
There are definitely things in the book that need to be fixed. A lot of punctuation and grammatical errors, but to be expected, so no harm done.
The book reminds me of the anime diabolic lovers, i believe thats where the author got the inspiration from.
Its full of smut, a lot of smut.
There are definitely things in the book that need to be fixed. A lot of punctuation and grammatical errors, but to be expected, so no harm done.
The book reminds me of the anime diabolic lovers, i believe thats where the author got the inspiration from.
Its full of smut, a lot of smut.
April 29, 2024
This was horrible. She’s supposed to be 19, which ugh, and she has never heard the word boner before? Yeah. Okay. Plus the dudes like raised her from when she was 4. She calls her vagina her “girly parts.” Like I feel disgusting having read any of it to be honest. Hard pass.
May 11, 2023
i already loved this book when it was on wattpad but the added scenes+ bonus chapters were fireee 🔥🥵
and thank you Beanie for adding the letter scene. I LOVED IT
and thank you Beanie for adding the letter scene. I LOVED IT
April 26, 2023
Great book! I love all the relationships between Elora and her men. The author has a great writing technique that allows you to escape and really immerse yourself into elora’s world. I love all her books and can’t wait to see what else she has planned!🌸✨✨
August 3, 2023
not for me
2.5 stars.
Le’ sigh….
The good…
Writing not bad. Sex scenes pretty steamy when I pushed certain things out of my mind.
The ok….
The guys: I think the author did pretty good job of making things a little less creepy because none of the guys were really paternal to Elora except for Duke. And with Duke, it did help that there was such a long separation where he hadn’t seen her or acted as a father figure for her. Plus, the fact that they were vampires and had no issues killing humans after sex drove home the fact they obviously didn’t have human sensibilities. Added to that someone who’s lived for hundreds or thousands of years may not see much difference between a human who’s lived 18 years versus 25. Of course, my human, female, sensibilities gave me the heebeejeebees when thinking about it too deeply.
The bad….
Elora. Come on. Making her an innocent virgin is one thing. Making her completely ignorant of ANYTHING sexual or human body related was ridiculous. Especially when writing the girl as an OCD, overachieving, valedictorian of her class, in a “modern” timeframe. She would know the difference between a hard dick and a candy bar in that situation… like really? The author wrote Elora soooo child-like. It made me sick to my stomach. Additionally, this was a classic case of daddy issues galore and when that’s turned into kink..: definitely not my thing.
Overall, I was close to a DNF but ending up skimming to get through to the end.
2.5 stars.
Le’ sigh….
The good…
Writing not bad. Sex scenes pretty steamy when I pushed certain things out of my mind.
The ok….
The guys: I think the author did pretty good job of making things a little less creepy because none of the guys were really paternal to Elora except for Duke. And with Duke, it did help that there was such a long separation where he hadn’t seen her or acted as a father figure for her. Plus, the fact that they were vampires and had no issues killing humans after sex drove home the fact they obviously didn’t have human sensibilities. Added to that someone who’s lived for hundreds or thousands of years may not see much difference between a human who’s lived 18 years versus 25. Of course, my human, female, sensibilities gave me the heebeejeebees when thinking about it too deeply.
The bad….
Elora. Come on. Making her an innocent virgin is one thing. Making her completely ignorant of ANYTHING sexual or human body related was ridiculous. Especially when writing the girl as an OCD, overachieving, valedictorian of her class, in a “modern” timeframe. She would know the difference between a hard dick and a candy bar in that situation… like really? The author wrote Elora soooo child-like. It made me sick to my stomach. Additionally, this was a classic case of daddy issues galore and when that’s turned into kink..: definitely not my thing.
Overall, I was close to a DNF but ending up skimming to get through to the end.
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April 1, 2024Ummm…I cannot put myself through this anymore. This actually made me feel icky. They’ve raised her since she was FOUR YEARS OLD and as soon as she turns 18 they are all immediately attracted to her. All of them are parental figures to her. They bathed her, scolded her, helped her with homework, brought her up as their own since she was a toddler. I literally cannotttttt
I just kept trying to tell myself that they’re vampires to try and soften this blow because I was NOT vibing with that. But to make matters worse, she is the most immature girl like her mind is not fully developed/she knows NOTHING. Does this school not teach basic sex Ed???? She is graduating at the top of her class but doesn’t know ANYTHING about female/male anatomy or sex. And I’m talking just basic things like what being turned on means, what a penis is (😭), where babies come from. Her whole personality is very infantilized. It’s so cringey.
I just kept trying to tell myself that they’re vampires to try and soften this blow because I was NOT vibing with that. But to make matters worse, she is the most immature girl like her mind is not fully developed/she knows NOTHING. Does this school not teach basic sex Ed???? She is graduating at the top of her class but doesn’t know ANYTHING about female/male anatomy or sex. And I’m talking just basic things like what being turned on means, what a penis is (😭), where babies come from. Her whole personality is very infantilized. It’s so cringey.
July 11, 2025
7 vampires is where I cross the line, the way I kept forgetting who was who 😭.
The dynamic in this was SO questionable, but all in all, this was alright 🤷♀️.
The dynamic in this was SO questionable, but all in all, this was alright 🤷♀️.
September 20, 2023
This is basically like Snow White and the Seven Dwarves, except Snow White is a stupid ditzy emotionally-immature MORON and the dwarves are super sexy vampires. Okay, it's nothing like Snow White. Seriously, this girl is so stupid it's actually painful, and all the other characters constantly mention how ditzy she is. But let's be honest, I didn't exactly choose this one for the plot (which is a good thing since there are maybe only 4 pages without smut). I hope no one I know ever reads this book... I wouldn't be able to look you in the eye. *does the sign of the cross*
December 5, 2024
De här va de värsta jag läst. Like literally, behöver purify Mina ögon med holy water cause OMG NEJJJJ. ELORA din fula lilla pick me, jag klarar inte av dig mer sån psycho chick “ im in love with my 7 vampires” bro you actually are a Who** aren’t you. Du skäms inte ens. Eugene, Dane, Duke, Felix, Quin, Theo och lucifer do better like omg.
August 7, 2024
я випадково видалила свій перший відгук, заодно всі свої коментарі до неї. Але вона настільки жахлива, що мені хочеться про це написати. Знову.
Книга починається з того, що майже 3000 літній вампір вирішив врятувати бездомну людську дівчинку. На той час їй було 4 роки, тому він та його 6 товаришів ростили та виховували її(вони були не в захваті від цієї ідеї) . Але через 10 років в них з'явилися їхні вампірські справи, тому Дюк, Фелікс та Люцифер поїхали на 4 років. А коли приїхали побачили, що Елора виросла. А потім вони порахували, що Елорі вже є 18 і вона цитую "вже законна", тип різниця в 3000років їх взагалі не смущає. А далі в основному секс, секс та секс +якийсь фоновий сюжет (зроблений для галочки та драми, ну бо треба ж вкінці когось вбити, (але мертвий не означає, що назавжди)). О і закінчується це все сексом.
(Тут я вставлю короткий опис персонажів, тому що не знаю куди його приліпити.
Елора —головна героїня, яку врятували. Вона повинна була виглядати як добра, розумна і трохи наївна дівчинка, але в авторки не вийшло це нормально прописати, тому вона просто виглядає як тупа дитина в тілі 18річної дівчини. Вона не має ніякого розвитку, що в 4, що в 20, що в 25 вона поводиться однаково.
Дюк — це той вампір який врятував Елору. Був її аля "тато", але трахав її не менше інших. Хоть і робив вигляд, що йому це не подобається.
(насправді всі чоловічі персонажі дууже схожі, і майже не мають якихось власних якостей)
Люцифер — мовчазний вампір, який любить солодке. (мені він сподобався найбільше порівняно з іншими)
Квін — він любить готувати. Це все. Більше він нічим не виділяється. А ще він кидається на кров Елори.
Фелікс — лідер їхнього клану та найстаріший, найсильніший, найвищий, найгарніший, загалом він все що починається з най-.
Юджин (Євген) — я про нього нічого не пам'ятаю, окрім як те, що він псих. І має садиські нахили (як і всі вони).
Дейн — лікар, єдиний хто при вигляді крові не кидається на людей. Косить під доброго, але як ви можете зрозуміти відвідати Елору в червоній кімнаті не відмовиться.
Тео — про нього я взагалі нічого не пам'ятаю. Він нічим не вирізняється особо)
Щодо стилю написання, то він ніякий. Авторка просто жахливо пише. Деякі моменти просто бридкі та не зрозуміло для чого вони були потрібні. Я навіть уточнювати не буду, в мене рука не піднімається це написати.
Загалом мені книга настільки не сподобалась. що якби можна було поставити 0,01 бала, я би це зробила. Тому що я не розумій за що тут і 1/5 ставити
Книга починається з того, що майже 3000 літній вампір вирішив врятувати бездомну людську дівчинку. На той час їй було 4 роки, тому він та його 6 товаришів ростили та виховували її(вони були не в захваті від цієї ідеї) . Але через 10 років в них з'явилися їхні вампірські справи, тому Дюк, Фелікс та Люцифер поїхали на 4 років. А коли приїхали побачили, що Елора виросла. А потім вони порахували, що Елорі вже є 18 і вона цитую "вже законна", тип різниця в 3000років їх взагалі не смущає. А далі в основному секс, секс та секс +якийсь фоновий сюжет (зроблений для галочки та драми, ну бо треба ж вкінці когось вбити, (але мертвий не означає, що назавжди)). О і закінчується це все сексом.
(Тут я вставлю короткий опис персонажів, тому що не знаю куди його приліпити.
Елора —головна героїня, яку врятували. Вона повинна була виглядати як добра, розумна і трохи наївна дівчинка, але в авторки не вийшло це нормально прописати, тому вона просто виглядає як тупа дитина в тілі 18річної дівчини. Вона не має ніякого розвитку, що в 4, що в 20, що в 25 вона поводиться однаково.
Дюк — це той вампір який врятував Елору. Був її аля "тато", але трахав її не менше інших. Хоть і робив вигляд, що йому це не подобається.
(насправді всі чоловічі персонажі дууже схожі, і майже не мають якихось власних якостей)
Люцифер — мовчазний вампір, який любить солодке. (мені він сподобався найбільше порівняно з іншими)
Квін — він любить готувати. Це все. Більше він нічим не виділяється. А ще він кидається на кров Елори.
Фелікс — лідер їхнього клану та найстаріший, найсильніший, найвищий, найгарніший, загалом він все що починається з най-.
Юджин (Євген) — я про нього нічого не пам'ятаю, окрім як те, що він псих. І має садиські нахили (як і всі вони).
Дейн — лікар, єдиний хто при вигляді крові не кидається на людей. Косить під доброго, але як ви можете зрозуміти відвідати Елору в червоній кімнаті не відмовиться.
Тео — про нього я взагалі нічого не пам'ятаю. Він нічим не вирізняється особо)
Щодо стилю написання, то він ніякий. Авторка просто жахливо пише. Деякі моменти просто бридкі та не зрозуміло для чого вони були потрібні. Я навіть уточнювати не буду, в мене рука не піднімається це написати.
Загалом мені книга настільки не сподобалась. що якби можна було поставити 0,01 бала, я би це зробила. Тому що я не розумій за що тут і 1/5 ставити
April 27, 2023
5/5📚 5/5🌶️
This will forever be the best reverse harem that ever existed.❤️
This will forever be one of the best books I’ve ever read PERIOD!!! I love the storyline. I love the characters. The smut scene in here are hands down my absolute favorite of all time (mainly because they tick off every single kink of mine, did the author hack my AO3 account and went through my „daddy kink and so much more“ tag?????)
Every little detail was fucking perfect. Hello?? How is that possible? I’ve read this for the first time back when this was called „the vampires human“ and only had a few views on wattpad and now I’m holding the signed copy in my hand and can read this whenever and wherever I want!? This must be heaven (or hell seeing
that Lucifer is involved🤭)
No reverse harem author has ever accomplished what this author accomplished. Writing complex and ‚different from the mainstream’ MMC‘s.
*Side eye* to Lily Gold who wrote the same 3 personalities for 4 different books (I lost my marbles suffering through these books) and yet we have this author who gives us 7 completely individual characters who you can so easily separate from one another. I could close this book throughout a chapter, come back 10 month later and still know exactly from whose POV I‘m currently reading. THANK YOU!
I love all of them the same🥰 (but here is the unofficial ranking):
1. Dane, Lucifer and Felix (my daddy trio👉🏻👈🏻)
2. Quin
3. Eugene
4. Theo
5. Duke
Because I started this in the other review I will do it here as well, pet name ranking:
1.Love❤️
1.Kitten❤️
2.Sweetheart
3.Doll
4.Angel
5.Princess
6.Baby (my biggest ick)
Tw:
•death
•murder
•violence
•panic attacks
•mental illness
•heavy BDSM
This will forever be the best reverse harem that ever existed.❤️
This will forever be one of the best books I’ve ever read PERIOD!!! I love the storyline. I love the characters. The smut scene in here are hands down my absolute favorite of all time (mainly because they tick off every single kink of mine, did the author hack my AO3 account and went through my „daddy kink and so much more“ tag?????)
Every little detail was fucking perfect. Hello?? How is that possible? I’ve read this for the first time back when this was called „the vampires human“ and only had a few views on wattpad and now I’m holding the signed copy in my hand and can read this whenever and wherever I want!? This must be heaven (or hell seeing
that Lucifer is involved🤭)
No reverse harem author has ever accomplished what this author accomplished. Writing complex and ‚different from the mainstream’ MMC‘s.
*Side eye* to Lily Gold who wrote the same 3 personalities for 4 different books (I lost my marbles suffering through these books) and yet we have this author who gives us 7 completely individual characters who you can so easily separate from one another. I could close this book throughout a chapter, come back 10 month later and still know exactly from whose POV I‘m currently reading. THANK YOU!
I love all of them the same🥰 (but here is the unofficial ranking):
1. Dane, Lucifer and Felix (my daddy trio👉🏻👈🏻)
2. Quin
3. Eugene
4. Theo
5. Duke
Because I started this in the other review I will do it here as well, pet name ranking:
1.Love❤️
1.Kitten❤️
2.Sweetheart
3.Doll
4.Angel
5.Princess
6.Baby (my biggest ick)
Tw:
•death
•murder
•violence
•panic attacks
•mental illness
•heavy BDSM
May 12, 2023
Thank you to Niss for telling me to read this book because I binged this book and ate it up like my last meal. This book is a reverse harem romance with vampires. It is 7 men and 1 woman. This is precisely what I needed after binging the Hunger Games trilogy, it had a decent plot with rounded characters but the smut is what I really loved.
Elora is a kind-hearted, innocent young woman who was saved on the streets by seven vampires, each of them being steamy fucking hot and oh so yummy. This is definitely my favourite reverse harem book by far and the vampire aspect was just an added bonus. If you are looking for some plot with your toe-curling smut this book is for you.
Just a little note however, this book was originally written on Wattpad and was so popular it was developed into a physical book, so the writing is more Wattpad style than some of the books you may be used to, but that didn't deter me at all because I still loved Beanie Harpers writing and attention to the small details. I genuinely have nothing bad really to say about this book and I would give the romance in it an 11/10. This is a must-read for my vampire and RH lovers.
Elora is a kind-hearted, innocent young woman who was saved on the streets by seven vampires, each of them being steamy fucking hot and oh so yummy. This is definitely my favourite reverse harem book by far and the vampire aspect was just an added bonus. If you are looking for some plot with your toe-curling smut this book is for you.
Just a little note however, this book was originally written on Wattpad and was so popular it was developed into a physical book, so the writing is more Wattpad style than some of the books you may be used to, but that didn't deter me at all because I still loved Beanie Harpers writing and attention to the small details. I genuinely have nothing bad really to say about this book and I would give the romance in it an 11/10. This is a must-read for my vampire and RH lovers.
October 5, 2024
3.5/5 ⭐️s - definitely not the best book I’ve read, not even close. But did I somewhat enjoy it? Yes 😬
I have to admit, some parts made me feel extremely uneasy. Elora, the FMC, is 19, top of her class, captain of debate and various clubs and yet, she’s completely clueless about sex. What’s a boner? Condoms? Why does she feel tingly between her legs? And the fact that she acts like an actual toddler, constantly craving candy and sweets, just gave me the ick. I honestly wanted to throw up.
That said, I did enjoy it more towards the end when Elora was in her mid to late 20s. I also liked all seven of the men, each had distinct personalities, and for once, I could actually tell them apart 🤣 I don’t know why, but I’m always drawn to the doctor/caretaker type (Dane in this case) and the fun/flirty one (Theo).
A quote I thought was cute:
“I’ve lived thousands of lives, but the only one that was ever worth living is the one with you in it, Elora. Let’s have our own happily ever after.”
So, yeah, this book isn’t for everyone. It took me a few days to get through it because I needed breaks due to the ick factor, but it’s definitely not the worst!
I have to admit, some parts made me feel extremely uneasy. Elora, the FMC, is 19, top of her class, captain of debate and various clubs and yet, she’s completely clueless about sex. What’s a boner? Condoms? Why does she feel tingly between her legs? And the fact that she acts like an actual toddler, constantly craving candy and sweets, just gave me the ick. I honestly wanted to throw up.
That said, I did enjoy it more towards the end when Elora was in her mid to late 20s. I also liked all seven of the men, each had distinct personalities, and for once, I could actually tell them apart 🤣 I don’t know why, but I’m always drawn to the doctor/caretaker type (Dane in this case) and the fun/flirty one (Theo).
A quote I thought was cute:
“I’ve lived thousands of lives, but the only one that was ever worth living is the one with you in it, Elora. Let’s have our own happily ever after.”
So, yeah, this book isn’t for everyone. It took me a few days to get through it because I needed breaks due to the ick factor, but it’s definitely not the worst!
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