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Mageborn #3
The Archmage Unbound
Alternate cover edition of ASIN B00843Y4DY
Mordecai’s growing power and success have made him a threat, not just to the gods and their minions, but also to the king of Lothion. An unholy bargain has been struck to bring him to heel and increasingly it seems that victory may not be worth the price, not if the cost is measured in the blood of his family. Wizard, lord, husband, father, and now archmage... no man can balance so many roles without sacrificing something. Will the world be worth saving if it costs him the very reasons he has for living in it?
Mordecai’s growing power and success have made him a threat, not just to the gods and their minions, but also to the king of Lothion. An unholy bargain has been struck to bring him to heel and increasingly it seems that victory may not be worth the price, not if the cost is measured in the blood of his family. Wizard, lord, husband, father, and now archmage... no man can balance so many roles without sacrificing something. Will the world be worth saving if it costs him the very reasons he has for living in it?
545 pages, ebook
First published May 15, 2012
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About the author
Michael G. Manning
30 books2,087 followersMichael Manning was born in Cleveland, Texas and spent his formative years there, reading fantasy and science fiction, concocting home grown experiments in his backyard, and generally avoiding schoolwork.
Eventually he went to college, starting at Sam Houston State University, where his love of beer blossomed and his obsession with playing role-playing games led him to what he calls 'his best year ever' and what most of his family calls 'the lost year'.
Several years and a few crappy jobs later, he decided to pursue college again and was somehow accepted into the University of Houston Honors program (we won't get into the particulars of that miracle). This led to a degree in pharmacy and it followed from there that he wound up with a license to practice said profession.
Unfortunately, Michael was not a very good pharmacist. Being relatively lawless and free spirited were not particularly good traits to possess in a career focused on perfection, patient safety, and the letter-of-the-law. Nevertheless, he persisted and after a stint as a hospital pharmacy manager wound up as a pharmacist working in correctional managed care for the State of Texas.
He gave drugs to prisoners.
After a year or two at UTMB he became bored and taught himself entirely too much about networking, programming, and database design and administration. At first his supervisors warned him (repeatedly) to do his assigned tasks and stop designing programs to help his coworkers do theirs, but eventually they gave up and just let him do whatever he liked since it seemed to be generally working out well for them.
Ten or eleven years later and he got bored with that too. So he wrote a book. We won't talk about where he was when he wrote 'The Blacksmith's Son', but let's just assume he was probably supposed to be doing something else at the time.
Some people liked the book and told other people. Now they won't leave him alone.
After another year or two, he decided to just give up and stop pretending to be a pharmacist/programmer, much to the chagrin of his mother (who had only ever wanted him to grow up to be a doctor and had finally become content with the fact that he had settled on pharmacy instead).
Michael's wife supported his decision, even as she stubbornly refused to believe he would make any money at it. It turned out later that she was just telling him this because she knew that nothing made Michael more contrary than his never ending desire to prove her wrong. Once he was able to prove said fact she promptly admitted her tricky ruse and he has since given up on trying to win.
Today he lives at home with his stubborn wife, teenage twins, a giant moose-poodle, two yorkies, a green-cheeked conure, a massive prehistoric tortoise, and a head full of imaginary people. There are also some fish, but he refuses to talk about them.
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Eventually he went to college, starting at Sam Houston State University, where his love of beer blossomed and his obsession with playing role-playing games led him to what he calls 'his best year ever' and what most of his family calls 'the lost year'.
Several years and a few crappy jobs later, he decided to pursue college again and was somehow accepted into the University of Houston Honors program (we won't get into the particulars of that miracle). This led to a degree in pharmacy and it followed from there that he wound up with a license to practice said profession.
Unfortunately, Michael was not a very good pharmacist. Being relatively lawless and free spirited were not particularly good traits to possess in a career focused on perfection, patient safety, and the letter-of-the-law. Nevertheless, he persisted and after a stint as a hospital pharmacy manager wound up as a pharmacist working in correctional managed care for the State of Texas.
He gave drugs to prisoners.
After a year or two at UTMB he became bored and taught himself entirely too much about networking, programming, and database design and administration. At first his supervisors warned him (repeatedly) to do his assigned tasks and stop designing programs to help his coworkers do theirs, but eventually they gave up and just let him do whatever he liked since it seemed to be generally working out well for them.
Ten or eleven years later and he got bored with that too. So he wrote a book. We won't talk about where he was when he wrote 'The Blacksmith's Son', but let's just assume he was probably supposed to be doing something else at the time.
Some people liked the book and told other people. Now they won't leave him alone.
After another year or two, he decided to just give up and stop pretending to be a pharmacist/programmer, much to the chagrin of his mother (who had only ever wanted him to grow up to be a doctor and had finally become content with the fact that he had settled on pharmacy instead).
Michael's wife supported his decision, even as she stubbornly refused to believe he would make any money at it. It turned out later that she was just telling him this because she knew that nothing made Michael more contrary than his never ending desire to prove her wrong. Once he was able to prove said fact she promptly admitted her tricky ruse and he has since given up on trying to win.
Today he lives at home with his stubborn wife, teenage twins, a giant moose-poodle, two yorkies, a green-cheeked conure, a massive prehistoric tortoise, and a head full of imaginary people. There are also some fish, but he refuses to talk about them.
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June 1, 2012
The Archmage Unbound picks right up where book 2 left off and doesn't disappoint! I love the inner dialog Mort always has going on. The characters develop in a very honest, believable way that allows me to care about them deeply.
I cannot recommend this series enough. It's not the "high style" of fantasy Tolkien etc. It's very much like Fiest with much more humor. Manning is able to "spin yarn" in a very very fun way.
I cannot recommend this series enough. It's not the "high style" of fantasy Tolkien etc. It's very much like Fiest with much more humor. Manning is able to "spin yarn" in a very very fun way.
June 2, 2012
Ok... Good series. Fast read. But the first person narrator voice can be super juvenile and annoying.
May 21, 2016
Remember what happened in book 1? The scene where Penny got a vision and decided to do things herself?
Okay, maybe nobody would've believed her, so she needed to mess things up. But after that time and the battle in book 2, I am pretty sure people will believe her and her visions.
Anyways, in this book, Penny decides to try to do things again. Obviously, she "fails" and bad things happen. It seems that this is the author's only way of progressing the plot. I really don't get the whole point of the vision, really.
You know the saying about the most important things in a war are the food supply and information? Well, Penny decided that withholding the information can help Mort win.
Sigh.
I am liking the series less and less, especially when Mort actually has a pretty bad character. Now coupled with the poorly conceived plots, it's just a disappointment.
All in all, I do see some improvements from book 1 to 3. But it is hardly recognizable. I mean, it's still a decent time killer. But it's not worth the money.
Okay, maybe nobody would've believed her, so she needed to mess things up. But after that time and the battle in book 2, I am pretty sure people will believe her and her visions.
Anyways, in this book, Penny decides to try to do things again. Obviously, she "fails" and bad things happen. It seems that this is the author's only way of progressing the plot. I really don't get the whole point of the vision, really.
You know the saying about the most important things in a war are the food supply and information? Well, Penny decided that withholding the information can help Mort win.
Sigh.
I am liking the series less and less, especially when Mort actually has a pretty bad character. Now coupled with the poorly conceived plots, it's just a disappointment.
All in all, I do see some improvements from book 1 to 3. But it is hardly recognizable. I mean, it's still a decent time killer. But it's not worth the money.
May 22, 2012
One of my favorite authors does it again I purchased this book and could not put it down finished it in about 6 hours if you like fantasy or just want to read a great series check it out
November 19, 2024
"The Archmage Unbound" is the 3rd book in the Mageborn series, following the journey of Mordecai, a young wizard who discovers his magical heritage and rises to become an archmage. In this installment, Mordecai's growing power and success have made him a threat to both the gods and the king of Lothion. An unholy bargain is struck to bring him under control, but the cost of this victory may be too high, especially if it means sacrificing the lives of his loved ones.
Narrative and Pacing
Michael G. Manning's storytelling is both engaging and well-paced. The plot moves swiftly, keeping readers hooked from start to finish. The narrative is filled with action, intrigue, and moments of introspection, allowing readers to connect with Mordecai on a deeper level. Manning's ability to balance multiple storylines and character arcs is commendable, making the book a compelling read.
Character Development
Mordecai is a complex and multifaceted character. His journey from a simple blacksmith's son to a powerful archmage is fraught with challenges and moral dilemmas. Manning skillfully portrays Mordecai's internal struggles, his desire to protect his family, and his quest for redemption. The supporting characters, including Mordecai's wife and allies, add depth to the story, each contributing to the overall narrative in meaningful ways.
Themes and Motifs
The book explores themes of power, sacrifice, and loyalty. Mordecai's struggle to balance his responsibilities as a wizard, lord, husband, and father is a central motif. The idea of sacrifice for the greater good is prevalent throughout the story, with Mordecai constantly weighing the cost of his actions against the safety of his loved ones. Manning's exploration of these themes adds a layer of depth to the narrative, making it thought-provoking and emotionally resonant.
Narration
Alex Wyndham's narration is exceptional. His voice brings Mordecai and the other characters to life, adding an extra dimension to the story. Wyndham's ability to convey the emotions and motivations of the characters enhances the listening experience, making the audiobook a standout. His performance of the action sequences is particularly noteworthy, capturing the intensity and excitement of the plot.
Conclusion
"The Archmage Unbound" is a captivating continuation of the Mageborn series. Michael G. Manning's intricate plot, well-developed characters, and exploration of complex themes make it a standout entry in the genre. Alex Wyndham's narration adds depth and emotion to the story, enhancing the overall listening experience.
Narrative and Pacing
Michael G. Manning's storytelling is both engaging and well-paced. The plot moves swiftly, keeping readers hooked from start to finish. The narrative is filled with action, intrigue, and moments of introspection, allowing readers to connect with Mordecai on a deeper level. Manning's ability to balance multiple storylines and character arcs is commendable, making the book a compelling read.
Character Development
Mordecai is a complex and multifaceted character. His journey from a simple blacksmith's son to a powerful archmage is fraught with challenges and moral dilemmas. Manning skillfully portrays Mordecai's internal struggles, his desire to protect his family, and his quest for redemption. The supporting characters, including Mordecai's wife and allies, add depth to the story, each contributing to the overall narrative in meaningful ways.
Themes and Motifs
The book explores themes of power, sacrifice, and loyalty. Mordecai's struggle to balance his responsibilities as a wizard, lord, husband, and father is a central motif. The idea of sacrifice for the greater good is prevalent throughout the story, with Mordecai constantly weighing the cost of his actions against the safety of his loved ones. Manning's exploration of these themes adds a layer of depth to the narrative, making it thought-provoking and emotionally resonant.
Narration
Alex Wyndham's narration is exceptional. His voice brings Mordecai and the other characters to life, adding an extra dimension to the story. Wyndham's ability to convey the emotions and motivations of the characters enhances the listening experience, making the audiobook a standout. His performance of the action sequences is particularly noteworthy, capturing the intensity and excitement of the plot.
Conclusion
"The Archmage Unbound" is a captivating continuation of the Mageborn series. Michael G. Manning's intricate plot, well-developed characters, and exploration of complex themes make it a standout entry in the genre. Alex Wyndham's narration adds depth and emotion to the story, enhancing the overall listening experience.
May 19, 2012
I think the reason I like this series so much is because it is very close to my "dream series" - the story resonates with the ones I have often created in my head. Mordecai had gained his power and didn't foolishly bumble around with it, but dived right in. Unlike many coming-of-age fantasies, there are little to no restricting authorities, thus making Mort gain experience and wisdom at a much quicker pace while he led his friends and vassals. And as a huge bonus, Mort is not afraid to experiment.
In this book, we continue to learn about the magic system, various enchantments, and the characters. Mort gets a patient new 'companion' to explain the magical world to him, but she/it does not have a conflicting agenda (refreshingly). We see the main character balancing multiple issues nicely, including suicidal thoughts in his friend Marc, weapons and armor, and threats. He has to deal with the king's threats of treachery and kidnapping while managing not to lose himself with the elements of the earth that he draws power from.
All in all, a great book.
But now for my short list of problems (only four, though I devote a lot of text to them):
First, the series still has the problem with commas:
And with names as well:
It seems like this happens all the time, so I'm wondering if it is a style preference of the author. In my case, however, it just jars me out of the story a bit. Commas help divide up sentences so I don't have extra to interpret.
I looked up some comma rules, and here are the ones that seem to be continually violated:
I didn't specifically find a violation in the book for each of these rules I listed, but I'm basing them off my memory of the reading. So it is quite possible that I am mistaken in adding a few, but there definitely are some reoccurring comma errors. While I like good grammar and always try to use it (feel free to point out mistakes), I am not a "grammar nazi." The story was very enjoyable once I trained myself to ignore noticeable comma problems.
A second problem with the style was modern language - this still felt a bit like modern American (or English-speaking) characters who were in a medieval setting, despite the many improvements made since the first in the series.
A third is the way Mort dealt with the problem of invisible intruders in his castle - he didn't ask his new guide about them or try to make some sensor things just in case invisibility was possible. A little frustrating, but quite minor.
BTW, the guide's identity for people who like spoilers:
Fourth, Mort sometimes seems to not grasp a fairly simple concept until his friends explain it to him. For example, once Rose and Marc were talking about the political side of the execution of a baron, and Mort couldn't follow what I understood pretty quickly.
Do these problems (and a few ones I forgot to mention) detract from the story? Not much, in my view. I've read some books with truly terrible writing, and the Archmage Unbound is nowhere near those. And the interesting plot (plus the various realistic issues Mort has to deal with on the side) more than make up for some small problems.
In this book, we continue to learn about the magic system, various enchantments, and the characters. Mort gets a patient new 'companion' to explain the magical world to him, but she/it does not have a conflicting agenda (refreshingly). We see the main character balancing multiple issues nicely, including suicidal thoughts in his friend Marc, weapons and armor, and threats. He has to deal with the king's threats of treachery and kidnapping while managing not to lose himself with the elements of the earth that he draws power from.
All in all, a great book.
But now for my short list of problems (only four, though I devote a lot of text to them):
First, the series still has the problem with commas:
“He said he would be at the tavern my lord,” Cecil replied quickly.
And with names as well:
“Lift your head Harold Simmons,” I told him.
It seems like this happens all the time, so I'm wondering if it is a style preference of the author. In my case, however, it just jars me out of the story a bit. Commas help divide up sentences so I don't have extra to interpret.
I looked up some comma rules, and here are the ones that seem to be continually violated:
Rule 4: Use commas before or surrounding the name or title of a person directly addressed.
Rule 8: Use commas to set off expressions that interrupt sentence flow.
[Like the "my lord" phrase, I would guess.]
Rule 14: A comma splice is an error caused by joining two strong clauses with only a comma instead of separating the clauses with a conjunction, a semicolon, or a period.
Example:
Incorrect:
Time flies when we are having fun, we are always having fun.
[Put an "and" after the comma or use a semicolon.]
Rule 20: Use commas surrounding words such as therefore and however when they are used as interrupters.
I didn't specifically find a violation in the book for each of these rules I listed, but I'm basing them off my memory of the reading. So it is quite possible that I am mistaken in adding a few, but there definitely are some reoccurring comma errors. While I like good grammar and always try to use it (feel free to point out mistakes), I am not a "grammar nazi." The story was very enjoyable once I trained myself to ignore noticeable comma problems.
A second problem with the style was modern language - this still felt a bit like modern American (or English-speaking) characters who were in a medieval setting, despite the many improvements made since the first in the series.
A third is the way Mort dealt with the problem of invisible intruders in his castle - he didn't ask his new guide about them or try to make some sensor things just in case invisibility was possible. A little frustrating, but quite minor.
BTW, the guide's identity for people who like spoilers:
Fourth, Mort sometimes seems to not grasp a fairly simple concept until his friends explain it to him. For example, once Rose and Marc were talking about the political side of the execution of a baron, and Mort couldn't follow what I understood pretty quickly.
Do these problems (and a few ones I forgot to mention) detract from the story? Not much, in my view. I've read some books with truly terrible writing, and the Archmage Unbound is nowhere near those. And the interesting plot (plus the various realistic issues Mort has to deal with on the side) more than make up for some small problems.
June 17, 2012
The Archmage Unbound picks up immediately after the events of The Line of Illeniel and doesn't let up until the end. What I absolutely love about Manning's characters is the fact that, even more than the in the first two books in the series, he's really managed to flesh them all out. There isn't any dead weight and every character feel real. There's humor, horror, love. There's honor, restrained lust, genuine rage.
At one point one of the character's emotional reaction threatens to literally destroy the world and you can practically feel their anguish and rage fighting balanced on razors edge while they're talked down. The best part? You know letting the world burn would be bad (the end of the world usually is), but you'll understand any sympathize with the character either way. That is, possibly, the best part of the book, save one I won't share near the end involving a pillar and honor, or maybe the smug satisfaction the reader gets during the creation of a certain glowing stone. You'll have to read the story to find out what I'm talking about. And trust me, both scenes are well worth it.
Mort's growth as a noble lord while retaining the gutter humor of a lowely commoner, his quest to constantly improve because nobody told him "that's impossible" until he'd already done it, his loyalty to friends and family, this is one protagonist I will gladly continue following the rest of my life.
I have just one request though for any future books: keep up the plot twists like you had at the end of this one. I didn't see it coming, but looking back throughout the story you managed to weave just enough hints that it didn't really come out of left field. And this one? Major plot potential. Well played.
I glady recommend this story to anyone who loves fantasy. While geared towards a young adult audience this story bridges the gap between young adult and more mature themes. Death, violence, lust, they're all in the story to one degree or another. If you can handle that you owe it to yourself to read this series. You won't come away disappointed.
At one point one of the character's emotional reaction threatens to literally destroy the world and you can practically feel their anguish and rage fighting balanced on razors edge while they're talked down. The best part? You know letting the world burn would be bad (the end of the world usually is), but you'll understand any sympathize with the character either way. That is, possibly, the best part of the book, save one I won't share near the end involving a pillar and honor, or maybe the smug satisfaction the reader gets during the creation of a certain glowing stone. You'll have to read the story to find out what I'm talking about. And trust me, both scenes are well worth it.
Mort's growth as a noble lord while retaining the gutter humor of a lowely commoner, his quest to constantly improve because nobody told him "that's impossible" until he'd already done it, his loyalty to friends and family, this is one protagonist I will gladly continue following the rest of my life.
I have just one request though for any future books: keep up the plot twists like you had at the end of this one. I didn't see it coming, but looking back throughout the story you managed to weave just enough hints that it didn't really come out of left field. And this one? Major plot potential. Well played.
I glady recommend this story to anyone who loves fantasy. While geared towards a young adult audience this story bridges the gap between young adult and more mature themes. Death, violence, lust, they're all in the story to one degree or another. If you can handle that you owe it to yourself to read this series. You won't come away disappointed.
November 13, 2012
Manning never fails to amaze me. His books honestly just get better and better! I can't wait to lay my hands on #4 in this series :D
Aside from being brilliantly written, and descriptive, the plot is amazing and beyond any normal persons imagination capacity! The amount of thought that I suspect went into the inner workings of magic and the history and plot of the books in general is definitely up there with David Eddings himself. He even gave Eddings a run for his money on the sarcastic, dry, witty humour.
Honestly, my favourite part of the book, as dark as this sounds, was when Mort began to lose his min and started making terrible jokes (Like when Harold was running to hack up 20 or so Shiggreth) was extremely funny and I laughed out loud more than once. I also loved the last few pages, where it mentioned Moira's______*SPOILER______________
Newborn baby :D And I loved the name choices! Moira and Matthew :) Mort is going to make an excellent dad! And I can;t wait to see Rose and Dorian (probably) get married. I really doubt the man has a choice, especially after Rose had to spend so much time thinking he was dead. I'm also really happy that Cyhan is becoming a knight for the greater good! I always liked him :)
Aside from being brilliantly written, and descriptive, the plot is amazing and beyond any normal persons imagination capacity! The amount of thought that I suspect went into the inner workings of magic and the history and plot of the books in general is definitely up there with David Eddings himself. He even gave Eddings a run for his money on the sarcastic, dry, witty humour.
Honestly, my favourite part of the book, as dark as this sounds, was when Mort began to lose his min and started making terrible jokes (Like when Harold was running to hack up 20 or so Shiggreth) was extremely funny and I laughed out loud more than once. I also loved the last few pages, where it mentioned Moira's______*SPOILER______________
Newborn baby :D And I loved the name choices! Moira and Matthew :) Mort is going to make an excellent dad! And I can;t wait to see Rose and Dorian (probably) get married. I really doubt the man has a choice, especially after Rose had to spend so much time thinking he was dead. I'm also really happy that Cyhan is becoming a knight for the greater good! I always liked him :)
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August 15, 2023
I enjoyed this continuation of the series. There are a few good plot quests that keep the reader thinking. I am looking forward to the next book in the series.
March 8, 2014
I would have given it more but for one huge plot hole. The book's main plot is how Mort handle the kidnapping and apparent death of his wife and best friend but the whole thing could have been prevented if they went to Mort's house in the Capital instead of going to Lancaster to hide since the house in the Capital can only be accessed by Mort and friends and is heavily enchanted that no one can gain access inside unless invited in.
July 11, 2015
What i really enjoy about this series is that it does not over complicate things.Their are not millions of characters and the story basically is about Mordecai the archmage,His wife Penelope, and his two best friends Marc and Dorien.The dialogue is witty and sarcastic in spots and rings true to life.Other authors may write similar novels but not many can get you to buy into the overall story and characters like Mr. Manning can.
August 8, 2012
Got this as an ebook. It is an easy, fun read. The characters are interesting. Read the first and second in this series. They were really good. I would recommend this book to any one who likes fantasy.
May 18, 2012
this book did not disappoint :) after waiting a while i did get nervous that it wouldnt live up to first two but if anything it was even better.
an awsome read
an awsome read
October 8, 2012
Wow
I feel this whole series has come so far, from the first good but slightly awkward book, to this masterpiece.
I loved the twist at the end as well.
I am so excited for the next book!!!!!
I feel this whole series has come so far, from the first good but slightly awkward book, to this masterpiece.
I loved the twist at the end as well.
I am so excited for the next book!!!!!
September 28, 2018
4.5 stars, great series, I love this book and series.
January 5, 2020
Rating 3.5 stars
There are a lot of good things about this book. I just wish I could rate it higher. The YA aspect of the book is the reason I can't. Let me start on the positives though. I love the magic. Whenever Mort is building or coming up with new enchantments, I really enjoy myself. The author does a good job of making me feel emotions. In each book so far I have felt very strong emotions Making the reader feel such emotions is not an easy thing and I have to give the author credit for that. I also enjoy the banter between the friends and know they really care for each other. Finally, there are actually a few twists and turns to the story that I wasn't expecting which made it more enjoyable.
Now for the parts I don't like. As I wrote above it is mainly the YA aspect of the book. Why is Mort the one making all the decisions? If all those decision were about magic, I could understand but that's not what I am getting at. Marc's father is Mort's liege lord, and yet whenever the get together, Mort is the one telling him what to do. The way he acts around the king and other nobles is just stupid. Yes, he might have the moral high ground but he is basically flipping off his bosses boss. How is that supposed to make things better? I think I would love this story if they would of made Mort just the magic user and not the "ruler". He has no experience to think he would do a good job of that and he has so much more he can do with magic that the politics part is just annoying.
Now for the story. The battle is over and now the King has to decide what to do with Mort. Is he a hero or a rebel. Mort shows his power and they come to an agreement.
Overall this was a good story. If it wasn't for the negatives above, I would have no problem calling this a great story. Those things just aggravate my person pet-peeves. I can understand if other people don't feel the same way.
There are a lot of good things about this book. I just wish I could rate it higher. The YA aspect of the book is the reason I can't. Let me start on the positives though. I love the magic. Whenever Mort is building or coming up with new enchantments, I really enjoy myself. The author does a good job of making me feel emotions. In each book so far I have felt very strong emotions Making the reader feel such emotions is not an easy thing and I have to give the author credit for that. I also enjoy the banter between the friends and know they really care for each other. Finally, there are actually a few twists and turns to the story that I wasn't expecting which made it more enjoyable.
Now for the parts I don't like. As I wrote above it is mainly the YA aspect of the book. Why is Mort the one making all the decisions? If all those decision were about magic, I could understand but that's not what I am getting at. Marc's father is Mort's liege lord, and yet whenever the get together, Mort is the one telling him what to do. The way he acts around the king and other nobles is just stupid. Yes, he might have the moral high ground but he is basically flipping off his bosses boss. How is that supposed to make things better? I think I would love this story if they would of made Mort just the magic user and not the "ruler". He has no experience to think he would do a good job of that and he has so much more he can do with magic that the politics part is just annoying.
Now for the story. The battle is over and now the King has to decide what to do with Mort. Is he a hero or a rebel. Mort shows his power and they come to an agreement.
Overall this was a good story. If it wasn't for the negatives above, I would have no problem calling this a great story. Those things just aggravate my person pet-peeves. I can understand if other people don't feel the same way.
September 30, 2018
A marked improvement over the first two books that takes the story interesting directions.
Michael G Manning he's able to create some fascinating characters that feel as if they have real depth to them. The characters flourish in this story elevating the series overall and making me glad that I made it through the first two books.
There are many parts of the story that compelled me to read just one more chapter. I found that it was easier to lose myself within the story then in the previous books of the series. Still there was some moments in which I felt they were errors in point of view. In these moments I was taken out of the story but thankfully they were not as many as before. Where the first book had the story told from a first-person epistolary point of view with some third person omniscient moments popping up the second and third books shift to almost a first person present tense/epistolary point of view with some moments of third person omniscient.
The story was less predictable and had some moments that took me by surprise. I enjoyed seeing how our hero which face up to the challenge. In the second book the author made the character almost a Superman type character in that he was overwhelmingly powerful to the point that it made the stakes seem almost irrelevant. In this book I felt that there was a legitimate risk too many of the characters and that made it more exciting.
The series itself still has a wish fulfillment quality to it but the strong characters and relationships between them or enough to hook any fantasy readers attention.
Michael G Manning he's able to create some fascinating characters that feel as if they have real depth to them. The characters flourish in this story elevating the series overall and making me glad that I made it through the first two books.
There are many parts of the story that compelled me to read just one more chapter. I found that it was easier to lose myself within the story then in the previous books of the series. Still there was some moments in which I felt they were errors in point of view. In these moments I was taken out of the story but thankfully they were not as many as before. Where the first book had the story told from a first-person epistolary point of view with some third person omniscient moments popping up the second and third books shift to almost a first person present tense/epistolary point of view with some moments of third person omniscient.
The story was less predictable and had some moments that took me by surprise. I enjoyed seeing how our hero which face up to the challenge. In the second book the author made the character almost a Superman type character in that he was overwhelmingly powerful to the point that it made the stakes seem almost irrelevant. In this book I felt that there was a legitimate risk too many of the characters and that made it more exciting.
The series itself still has a wish fulfillment quality to it but the strong characters and relationships between them or enough to hook any fantasy readers attention.
December 13, 2025
3.5*
Overall the series is alright. Manning is becoming a better writer with each book, however, his style is somewhat different to what I typically prefer. For one, most of the books begin as slow-burners and have an incredibly fast and over-dramatised ending. As with a few reviews ago, the pacing is a tad King-esque and the interactions between Penny and Mordecai are cringey. However, the overarching story is interesting enough to hook me. I will be continuing the series, but I do think that people should be cautioned. It had the aura of an epic-fantasy series that dealt with incredibly dark themes, but has turned out to be a series where every book has a big drama right at the end of the book that abruptly ends. I’ve started the fourth book now and am really hoping that books 4 and 5 are joined better, with a focus on Ileniel’s Promise/Doom, the contract/document of recognition by the She-Ha of humanity, Mordecai’s ancestors, and the “undead” Timothy. Only time will tell. I will say that it is a decent book to listen to, and if you get distracted for a few minutes often you missed nothing of import.
Overall the series is alright. Manning is becoming a better writer with each book, however, his style is somewhat different to what I typically prefer. For one, most of the books begin as slow-burners and have an incredibly fast and over-dramatised ending. As with a few reviews ago, the pacing is a tad King-esque and the interactions between Penny and Mordecai are cringey. However, the overarching story is interesting enough to hook me. I will be continuing the series, but I do think that people should be cautioned. It had the aura of an epic-fantasy series that dealt with incredibly dark themes, but has turned out to be a series where every book has a big drama right at the end of the book that abruptly ends. I’ve started the fourth book now and am really hoping that books 4 and 5 are joined better, with a focus on Ileniel’s Promise/Doom, the contract/document of recognition by the She-Ha of humanity, Mordecai’s ancestors, and the “undead” Timothy. Only time will tell. I will say that it is a decent book to listen to, and if you get distracted for a few minutes often you missed nothing of import.
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September 10, 2025
Finally, these are getting good. I know Manning is a good writer, because I've already read Art of the Adept and the two currently released books in his Wrath of the Stormking series. They're excellent, and together are one of the best series I've read in recent years. I didn't know all of Mannings' books are technically connected, so I'm working my way from the beginning after purchasing... well, all of them.
The Mageborn series started pretty rough. The first book was... downright bad. Likeable characters, but that was about it. The plot was predictable, Mort was a complete Mary Sue, and the tropes were tropey. It almost put me off the series. So, in a sense, I'm glad I read his later series first. I know he's capable of more than this.
Thankfully, it got better. Same was true of the second book. I'm glad to see the series improving as it goes along, and Archmage Unbound was a great improvement on the prior books, while building on their foundations. The series feels like it's coming around to big things, and I'm looking forward to it.
The Mageborn series started pretty rough. The first book was... downright bad. Likeable characters, but that was about it. The plot was predictable, Mort was a complete Mary Sue, and the tropes were tropey. It almost put me off the series. So, in a sense, I'm glad I read his later series first. I know he's capable of more than this.
Thankfully, it got better. Same was true of the second book. I'm glad to see the series improving as it goes along, and Archmage Unbound was a great improvement on the prior books, while building on their foundations. The series feels like it's coming around to big things, and I'm looking forward to it.
June 5, 2019
I previously used the term "fun" to describe the first two entries in this series, for the third book, I'm not sure that word fits. Don't get me wrong, it's still an enjoyable read. However, it's grown up a lot.
World building, which was lacking from the previous two books, got a lot of focus in this instalment. It's still limited by us only seeing the main character's perspective, but this time the author takes the time to let questions be asked and answered. The introduction to Moira really helped push things in the right direction for me.
Personally, I felt the ending was lacking. Although the author has come a long way in terms of story telling, the epic finally of the story fell a little flat. That said, it was still a good ending, and left enough mystery that I'm excited to read the next.
World building, which was lacking from the previous two books, got a lot of focus in this instalment. It's still limited by us only seeing the main character's perspective, but this time the author takes the time to let questions be asked and answered. The introduction to Moira really helped push things in the right direction for me.
Personally, I felt the ending was lacking. Although the author has come a long way in terms of story telling, the epic finally of the story fell a little flat. That said, it was still a good ending, and left enough mystery that I'm excited to read the next.
September 12, 2022
Mageborn #3
In the aftermath of a repelled invasion, Mort is honored as a national hero while mourning the losses of success. He is rewarded/double crossed with a castle invasion, kidnapping, and hostage ransom. As his enemies unite, his friends rally and unexpected allies emerge in a final explosive confrontation with gods and kings.
I don't understand some of the king's actions. It seemed like at every turn he created conflict. I get that Mort is an unknown quantity but his actions were always in the defense of his people and by extension the realm. What a huge advantage a king would have if the only wizard alive was their vassal. This brings me to the next issue I had is suddenly there is another wizard that no one knows about and is already in the king's employ. This seems like too big of a secret to contain. Although, if you consider how this came about, it does shed some light back on my first issue. I guess you'll have to read it to know what I'm talking about.
In the aftermath of a repelled invasion, Mort is honored as a national hero while mourning the losses of success. He is rewarded/double crossed with a castle invasion, kidnapping, and hostage ransom. As his enemies unite, his friends rally and unexpected allies emerge in a final explosive confrontation with gods and kings.
I don't understand some of the king's actions. It seemed like at every turn he created conflict. I get that Mort is an unknown quantity but his actions were always in the defense of his people and by extension the realm. What a huge advantage a king would have if the only wizard alive was their vassal. This brings me to the next issue I had is suddenly there is another wizard that no one knows about and is already in the king's employ. This seems like too big of a secret to contain. Although, if you consider how this came about, it does shed some light back on my first issue. I guess you'll have to read it to know what I'm talking about.
August 16, 2018
Fabulous story! I can't believe that I waited so long to read this book. I'm pretty sure that this book is better than the previous two. Partly due to the background stories having already been developed, but also due to the growth of Mordecai, the MC, both emotionally and magically. I was so invested as I was reading that at one point I actually had tears in my eyes. I will definitely be reading the fourth book sooner rather than later. Highly recommend this entire series to epic fantasy and Sword and Sorcery lovers.
July 10, 2018
The Archmage Unbound (Mageborn Book 3) Review
Dear Michael, I really enjoy reading your stories and this book was excellent. Your imagination and creativity is wonderful and your characters are outstanding. I highly recommend reading this book to any adult interested in reading a great story. Thanks for the entertainment and enjoyable time.
Dear Michael, I really enjoy reading your stories and this book was excellent. Your imagination and creativity is wonderful and your characters are outstanding. I highly recommend reading this book to any adult interested in reading a great story. Thanks for the entertainment and enjoyable time.
September 21, 2018
I almost didn't finish this one. The second half made me upset.
I don't like how she handles her foresight. Loved the magic elements, but not enough to balance out my hate of dumb decisions character wise.
Still a good book, I liked it.
I plan to read more in this series. Not sure if I'll jump into the next book immediately.
I don't like how she handles her foresight. Loved the magic elements, but not enough to balance out my hate of dumb decisions character wise.
Still a good book, I liked it.
I plan to read more in this series. Not sure if I'll jump into the next book immediately.
March 8, 2020
Great Series
Mordecai has enemies who are fearful of his power. They come after his family and friends to try to control him. The kidnapping of his wife is an emotional rolley coaster of loyalty, sacrifice and tragedy. I like the action, humor, and love. I look forward to the next book.
Mordecai has enemies who are fearful of his power. They come after his family and friends to try to control him. The kidnapping of his wife is an emotional rolley coaster of loyalty, sacrifice and tragedy. I like the action, humor, and love. I look forward to the next book.
October 14, 2020
Great resolution
This third volume of Mageborn was a very nice closure of most of the problems of the hero and his chosen family. Just enough left to want to read more. I have truly enjoyed the three volumes so far. Stayed up way too late finishing every one of them. Thankful there are authors who tell great stories like Michael G a meaning has done!
This third volume of Mageborn was a very nice closure of most of the problems of the hero and his chosen family. Just enough left to want to read more. I have truly enjoyed the three volumes so far. Stayed up way too late finishing every one of them. Thankful there are authors who tell great stories like Michael G a meaning has done!
April 27, 2024
4.5/5
These books are getting progressively better. Although not the most amazing writing I’ve ever read, there’s a certain charm and realness to the dialogue that I feel a lot of fantasy lacks. Sometimes the situations and dialogue feel very real and human and not so fantasy-esque, despite a huge fantasy world
These books are getting progressively better. Although not the most amazing writing I’ve ever read, there’s a certain charm and realness to the dialogue that I feel a lot of fantasy lacks. Sometimes the situations and dialogue feel very real and human and not so fantasy-esque, despite a huge fantasy world
May 8, 2025
The story continues and I'm still enjoying the ride. Mordecai has matured, as a mage and now archimage, as a leader and as a man. The other characters, in this story and the two before, are not neglected. They too evolve. Michael is a good story teller and he has created characters J care about. What more do you want?
July 5, 2018
Brain Candy
I highly recommend this book and the entire series. It's well done easy reading that does not contradict itself and is believable. I have laughed and cried ready these books but most of all I have been throughly entertained!
I highly recommend this book and the entire series. It's well done easy reading that does not contradict itself and is believable. I have laughed and cried ready these books but most of all I have been throughly entertained!
January 20, 2019
Mort continues to be a total Gary Stu, but he's also a total asshole, so that evens everything out. Really falling for Rose, because The Smart Friend Not Prone to Righteous Indignation is often the best of characters.
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