My first read through I liked the book a lot more than the second. In the second read through, I ended up finding a lot of things that I didn’t like. Let’s first begin with the fact that it’s pretty obvious that the author didn’t have an editor. There were so many grammatical errors, spelling errors, etc. that it was at times sort of hard to read. One of the main things that I noticed were missing words, which were very noticeable and slowed my reading down. Another thing, is specifically, I remember when the author was talking about someone with the last name of Bogoras, he later in another paragraph, put the person’s name as Borogas. That stood out WAY too much, and rather annoyed me because if the author can’t even take the time to make sure the names are spelled correctly is just ridiculous.
One thing I noticed over and over was how the author related everything back to either Greek mythology or Norse mythology. EVERYTHING. The first time wasn’t a big deal, but the author continuously did this and after a bit it really grated on my nerves. The author took a lot of time and obvious research on Greek and Norse mythology, but took very little time and research in other areas. It was very obvious what the author really wanted to key in on, and frankly, it rather annoyed me. It almost came off as laziness. I’m not sure what nationality the author is, but it seemed to me almost like a white man was writing about all these different mythologies, because the author kept relating everything back to a type of white culture mythology. I’m usually not a person who notices these things, but to me it was pretty obvious.
The author made some off-handed comment about how there were still some people who believed in some of the monsters, and rather condescendingly stated they were uneducated. That statement REALLY pissed me off. I’m sure the author has heard a lot about cryptozoology, so are they stating that cryptozoologists are also uneducated?! If that’s the case, I would like to remind the author that there are a lot of people with PhDs that are cryptozoologists, so the statement of them being uneducated is at the very least false, and at most, a condescending insult. Maybe the author didn’t actually mean for it to come off like that, but it really did.
The author really didn’t include monsters or mythical beasts that didn’t fit in with their thesis. When writing, you really should include things that go against your thesis and address them. It’s something called good writing. The author really failed to do that, which detracted from the thesis. Another thing was that the author just stated things, like this monster was atavistic, and didn’t really explain why. Another sign of bad writing. When you state something, you need to explain why you believe that. There were times where I really didn’t see how a specific monster was atavistic, especially because the author just stated the monster was, and moved on. Another sign of bad writing.
A statement the author made that came off very wrong was, “All the great civilizations boast grandiose monster repertories in their folklore and art, and especially in the myths that explain the world and humanity’s place in it.” So is the author saying that if a civilization doesn’t have this, then it isn’t great? Rather condescending if you ask me. Mythologies don’t make a civilization great. There are numerous things that can make a civilization great, and to insinuate that mythology and monsters are what make a civilization great is short sighted.
I realize that I’m really starting to nitpick, but a lot of issues started to stand out in my second read through that I just didn’t notice the first time around. I think if the author had just taken more time with the book, with both research and the actual writing, this could have been a great book. Unfortunately, the author didn’t and this was the result.