Unexpected
This is the first true novel in The Silver Creek Series. Oddly the H/h Carly and Lucas from the novella Unbuttoned that kicks off the series never make even a cameo appearance or were even mentioned? One of the things I enjoy about reading a series is the reappearance of familiar characters from previous books in the series. Otherwise what’s the point in calling it a series? I so wanted to love this short book. Until the very end I was ready to give it a solid 4 stars maybe even a 5. I like Ms. Yates writing that much. Okay, you have to be willing to accept the premise that two young adults in their early thirties have already both determined they’d never fall in love again because they were burned in early relationships. But that sort of acceptance is necessary if you’re going to enjoy any romance novel or Hallmark movie or rom-com. As a man I have to accept that because romance novels are written primarily by women for women the male characters tend to be barely more than two dimensional. Over six foot, check. Wavy, slightly too long hair, check. Piercing eyes, check. Broad shoulders check. Wide moderately hairy chest, check. Six pack abs, check. Bulging Biceps, muscular forearms, big hands check. Narrow waist, tight ass, thick thighs, check, check and check. And of course he must be at his core caring, honorable, intelligent and involved in a manly profession or a doctor or a vet. Cole Mitchell our male protagonist a studly rancher meets all of these requirements. Fortunately, the female characters are far more complex and this is where Ms. Yates excels at her craft giving her heroines a voice that makes them feel like real people. The female hero in this story Kelsey Noble is no exception. Beautiful, intelligent, strong but vulnerable, you can’t help but love her from the opening of the story.
Something I found different and liked about this book was that Ms. Yates subtly introduces the idea that perhaps people should wait to know each other, to form some sort of emotional bond before jumping into bed to satisfy an undeniable physical attraction to each other. Our main heroine Kelsey’s best friend Alexa is shocked that ranch hand Taylor although obviously attracted to her isn’t ready to jump into the casual hook up she was imagining she’d share with him. First, get to really know someone before you jump between the sheets with them. What a unique concept for a modern romance novel!
So why with a lovable heroine and good story line and even a unique take on sexual relationships and some pretty steamy sex did my 4-5 star rating drop to a 3? Spoiler alert! In order to give the book a more dramatic ending the author writes a scene where Kelsey agrees to marry Cole and offers him her unconditional love. Cole still living in fear of having his heart broken again, tells her that love wasn’t part of the deal. They were supposed to marry, live together, have great mind blowing sex and do their best to raise their child together. But love each other, no way! In fact, he can never love her because he’s been hurt so much, by the loss of his mother, by his shrewish ex-wife, by discovering his father whom he idolized was a lothario. He goes so far as to tell her he will never be able to love her. First of all, Kelsey is a strong intelligent woman. Too intelligent to consider marrying a man who doesn’t love her even if she loves him and carries his child. It wouldn’t require Cole’s outright profession of his inability to love her or a heart to heart with her BFF to come to that conclusion. Secondly, Cole deep down inside knows he loves Kelsey. When she accepts his marriage proposal and declares her unconditional love for him there’s no way he doesn’t break through the emotional walls he’s built around his heart to so ruthlessly reject her offer of love and callously throw it back in her face. This is the point where Cole should have manned up and told Kelsey how much he loved her to bring us to the HEA. Not after a night of drinking, talking with his brother and then waking up with a hangover to realize Kelsey was in fact ready to leave having realized that what he had offered her wasn’t enough. This whole scenario went so against the grain of both characters it darn near ruined the story for me and left a sour taste in my mouth. The fact that Cole miraculously wakes up the next morning to realize and accept his love for her, and tell Kelsey all the things he should have said to her the night before just didn’t salvage the ending of the story for me much as I love a good HEA as much as the next romance novel reader.