This is a review of the American Scholastic edition, which came out three years after this book was originally published by Hodder in the UK. Despite the author name on the cover, the real author was Jenny Oldfield, who wrote the majority of the original 30 books. We still have Shelagh McNichols as the illustrator. She still manages to do people than she does animals.
The Scholastic editions are embarrassingly Americanized. It's not just changing of punctuation and spelling, but even using American versions of British things. For example, in this book, the RSPCA is changed to SPCA. The RSPCA is arguably the world's best animal rescue charity. There is no equivalent in the US. In America, an SPCA is just the name to local shelters or rescue groups. SPCA is just a variation of a shelter or rescue group name, like Humane Society. By not calling the RSPCA the RSPCA, it not only demeans an incredible charity, it sends out false hopes to American kids that there is something like the RSPCA in America.
Now, in past books, pounds sterling have been called dollars. In this book, at least, they finally use the correct terms pounds and pence. That wasn't too hard, was it, now, Scholastic? They also used the correct UK name of Father Christmas instead of Santa Claus. Again, not too difficult to keep unchanged, is it?
As to the story itself ... well ... it's an Animal Ark book. It begins promisingly with cleaning Smoky's ears, but then gets predictable and does what would become a well-worn plot of trying to find a lost animal. There's a bunch of deliberately soppy stuff about having to raise money to send a sick girl to America (it would be the other way round now, since health care in America has plummeted) and her bad-boy brother.
Two reindeer come to stay at Animal Ark. They aren't wild reindeer. Remember, reindeer have been domesticated for thousands of years. Jenny Oldfield then shovels on the silly when Mandy and James can't figure out who was playing Father Christmas. Just before then, there was a nice bit when it looked like Mandy's Grandma would be Father Christmas. I think that would've made a better story.
This is the second Welford Christmas parade in the series. I can't remember if Mandy had Christmas in Australia. And she's still 12. Good GAWD.