It seems that I have the most to say about books I do not enjoy.
This book was better than the first book in the series, The Smoke Thief. But not by much.
Basic plot: The Street Urchin, Zane, a little starving, dirty, wounded, human boy, is saved from bleeding to death by Clarissa Rue, a weredragon. That was in the previous book. Now he's all grown-up and super-hot, apparently.
The weredragons can hear jewels and precious metals singing to them. Clarissa Rue, now grown with grown children of her own, can hear the song of a big, blue diamond that is super-powerful. All the weredragons want it to be brought in. But only a mortal can go. So they pick Zane, the only trustworthy human.
The female protagonist is Clarissa Rue's daughter - Amalia. She is the only one of her family that cannot Turn. But she has other gifts. She dreams of the future, and she can hear the call of gems and metals better than anyone else in the clan. Amalia never tells anyone about these gifts.
An important plotline in the book is that Amalia constantly dreams (I mean nocturnally) about an accurate future. She can predict the future, essentially. Unfortunately, she's been dreaming since she was 14 that Zane and her are lovers. Well, lovers isn't exactly the right word. She dreams that Zane has the diamond and is now her master. He can command her to do anything and uses her talents to steal lots of stuff and to kill off her family. She really enjoys the dream-sex she has with him, but hates to think that he has turned evil and that she is his slave and that he is ruthless in his quest for money and doesn't hesitate to kill her family members when the try to save her/kill him.
Remember, this is only the future appearing in her dreams. From age 14-19 she really hasn't much to do with Zane. But when she's 19, he gets sent on the quest, and she hunts him down and tags along because she can hear the Diamond and guide him to it.
Most of the book consists of them travelling by carriage in Hungary and Europe, going towards the Carpathian Mountains. Abé does a nice job of creating this kind of Transylvanian/Dracula atmosphere full of mountains, mines, peasants, and superstition.
Zane does his best to keep his lust for Lia under control. He sleeps on the floor numerous times in order to separate himself from her. Lia even offers to sleep with him multiple times, but he refuses, trying to be noble I guess. But this plotline is very inconsistent. At times he's all "I want to have sex with you" and then when she says "okay" he's all "Wait, I changed my mind, get away from me. I'm trying to be noble and stuff."
When they finally DO have sex...wait for it...she's unconscious. I couldn't believe it. Here Abé has set us up with what I thought was a noble, caring (if thieving and slightly immoral) hero. But here he is taking away Lia's physical virginity and SHE SLEEPS THROUGH THE WHOLE THING. This I do not understand at all. 1.) Since she is not conscious, this counts as rape. Moreso because they have never had sex before, so it's not like he's doing a loving, sexy wake-up here. 2.) How on Earth could a man have sex with a virgin (what is portrayed as great, hot sex to boot) and SHE DOESN'T WAKE UP?!!?!? WTF? And he's supposed to be great in bed. But even if he was the worst lover ever, I still think she'd wake up if someone was having sex with her for the first time!!! I mean, seriously. It's not like they were lovers before and she's used to him rolling her over when she's half asleep. She's never had sex with him...or anyone for that matter!
I'd also like to address the fact that Abé wants to have her cake and eat it too. While Lia is a virgin physically, she supposedly knows all about sex and men and techniques and tricks since she's been having these erotic dreams since she was 14. O.o I have never read something with this kind of idea before. It's mind-boggling. I'm surprised this was written by a female for a female audience. It's saying, "Hey, men. Here's a woman who's pristine and has never been touched by anyone but you, but don't worry, she's automatically an amazing lover who knows everything you like." Holy crap. This is very disappointing, not to mention disturbing.
Minus points AGAIN for Abé making the female a virgin and the male a sex expert.
And another thing. Amalia is a weredragon. She's from a powerful clan of weredragons. Even though she can't Turn (for the first 2/3s of the book, at least) she should be a strong female character. But she's not. She has no self-confidence, follows Zane around like a little lost lamb, doesn't assert herself at all, or even make suggestions on courses of action. She is SO WEAK. It's terribly sad. Even though Zane is a mortal and she is a weredragon, he's dominant and she's meek. ALSO, when she does want Zane to do something or promise something, she begs him for it. Why is she begging? Shouldn't she have the upper-hand here? It's as if dreaming about him being her master in the future has just taken all the fight out of her. When she's 14, she stands up to her family a little bit, by letting a bird go free that they wanted her to kill. And she sneaks out a few times. So I know when she was 14 she had a little backbone at least. But after the dreams start, that's all out the window.
Zane is, I think, supposed to be seen as a decent guy. But it's a little hard for the reader to believe that since we're privy to Lia's dreams in which he plans on killing her family and orders her to help her steal from tons of people.
She also develops the ability to breathe fire, which is an unheard of Gift, I guess.
Let's talk about Maricara. Unlike Lia, Maricara is a strong female character. She is an 11-year-old weredragon forced into marrying an evil prince. She is enslaved to him, practically, because she has a family and he whips them and tortures them when she disobeys him. Even though she is married to him and more or less obedient to him, she is always looking for a way to escape or kill him. I like her because she takes action, puts herself out there, and risks everything ruthlessly for a chance to escape from bondage. Unlike Lia, who usually just sits there, simpering.
Finally, after about 4/5s of book, Lia has a dream about an alternative future, in which Zane is not her cruel master, but instead her loving husband. They have children together and create a caring family. So it seems as if Zane could go either way here.
And that brings me to another disturbing thing. When, 4/5s into the book, Zane discovers that if they find this stone he can enslave any weredragon - he seriously considers it. I was so, so disappointed in him. What a piece of sh*t. He was thinking about how he could have everything, he could have Lia. He already has Lia. They have had sex (multiple times consensually after the unconscious rape fiasco), she has told him that she loves him, she has told him that she wants to get married to him. What is he thinking!? If you loved someone - no scratch that. If you even care for or respect someone AT ALL you wouldn't ever considered making them your slave. Him having these thoughts is horrifying. Clarissa Rue, Amalia's mother, saved his life TWICE when he was a child, for Pete's sake. And now he's thinking about not only enslaving Amalia but her family too - a family that cares for him and trusts him and that he owes a life-debt to?! What a (expletive deleted). Lia even asks him point blank not to use the stone against her and her family and he refuses to promise such a thing. Dick!
Of course in the end he makes the right choice. Not letting anyone have the stone, but instead destroying it. But there are pages and pages of him considering it. Despicable.
Sidenote: The way men dress is in the 1700s is NOT sexy. It's just NOT. I don't care how Abé describes it.
Sidenote 2: I like how Abé addresses the fact that since Zane starved on the streets for years as a child, he has to really struggle to control his eating now. He wants to eat everything in sight, but exercises strong self-control because he thinks "you can't be a fat thief and be successful." I appreciate her mentioning the strong hunger and uncontrollable urge to eat and get fat that is experienced by people who have gone through long periods of hunger. This is true to life.
Sidenote 3: This book reminded me of the Terminator 2 quote "The future's not set. There is no fate but what we make for ourselves." Yay, Terminator movies! So fun.
Regarding Abé. She's not a bad writer. Her prose is pretty. Her book has beautiful borders in the margins of every page (at least in the copy I checked out). I know that, as a person, she loves animals and takes in shelter pets and encourages people to spay and neuter their pets. I would also like to mention that her weredragon book series for Young Adults (The Sweetest Dark, The Deepest Night) is much better than this series and features a female protagonist who actually is fierce and more or less capable. So. Not hating on Abé, just on this book.
ONE REAL STAR, ONE ROMANCE STAR