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333 pages, Hardcover
First published January 1, 1988
"We cannot hold this bridge," said Oleg. "Weight of numbers will force us back, and once we are on level ground they will overwhelm us."
"Now would be an exceptionally good time to think of a second strategy," observed the Lance Lord as the Goths drew rein at the end of the causeway.
"I was just making conversation," replied Oleg. "Do you object to me taking the right side?"
Much better than its predecessor, Ghost King. This story takes place a generation later and we pick up the story of a new struggle against some ridiculously evil villains cobbled together from various mythologies. But the setting feels a little more realistic and lived-in than the last book and the story benefits from it.
And it's a great story, too: Cormac has lived in isolation all his life because of the circumstances of his birth. One day he is driven from his village and becomes embroiled against his will in the struggles of those far more powerful than him. He also discovers his true history...
Like Ghost King this book suffers from being too short: there are many characters and storylines that really needed to be longer to have had a greater impact and, while it says it's set in Dark Ages Britain (tm), it feels more like a Fantasyland with some historical trimmings.
But it tells a tighter, more disciplined story and presents characters who have aged and grown but are still as confused by everything as they have always been. Especially the relationship between Uther and Gian Avar which is basically a marriage built between two people far too proud to be any real good to each other. But we also have Galead who is the most interesting character in either book: his transformation from wastrel merchant prince to sensitive pacifist is a great story and highlights the contradictions of the genre that Gemmell was often trying to plumb in his books. Which is part of what's terrific about Mr Gemmell's books: people who are confused or unable to cope with some aspects of life but are able to cling to what they do understand and make some new meaning from it and add purpose to their life.
It still feels like a rehearsal for some of his later books but there's enough exciting and interesting stuff going on that it isn't noticeable. This isn't Gemmell at his best but you can see traces of what makes him so damn good when he is there.