Cute story, love Dallin and Wil. Little bit of critique though, after reading this many Carole Cummings books, I'm a bit fed up with the multi-words. After a while I just kept thinking "just decide already!!" An example from this particular story: move-snap-thrust, examples from other books: lovepainshameregret or shock-grief-pain-betrayal. It's just a small thing, but I found it annoying.