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The Ghost Tracks #2

The Devil's Promise

San Antonio is full of secrets, and seventeen-year-old Erasmo Cruz investigates the strangest of them. After gaining renown for surviving the city's legendary Ghost Tracks, he has set up shop as a paranormal investigator. But helping exorcize other people’s demons doesn’t seem to relieve his own; his best friend Rat has abandoned him, his grandmother is nearing death, and his own health has taken a sudden decline. 


None of these hardships can prepare Erasmo for the story his newest client brings him. Two decades after a strange ritual at a rural ranch, Bradley Erickson is being hunted by the Devil. In exchange for the life of his dreams, Bradley must surrender the blood of his child. The case hurls Erasmo into a dark web of cults, bargains, and broken pasts. Only one thing is the Devil keeps his promises. 

301 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 26, 2023

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Celso Hurtado

2 books51 followers
Celso Hurtado was born and raised in San Antonio, TX. His first book, The Ghost Tracks, was praised by NPR and won an International Latino Book Award. He is also a member of the Horror Writers Association. The Devil's Promise is his second novel.

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Profile Image for Jamie.
539 reviews978 followers
July 8, 2023
I didn't realize when I requested The Devil's Promise from NetGalley that it was the second in a series, but it ended up being a non-issue. Other than a few references to events that presumably happened in the first novel, it really didn't feel much like a sequel at all. I'm sure that there was some backstory that I missed by not reading the series in order, but since Erasmo's personal history is a huge part of the plot the pertinent details are woven throughout the story.

Overall, this was an excellent read. I'm always a sucker for any book that involves a paranormal investigation so this was right up my alley. For some reason I thought that it would be a bit heavier on the horror than it was, and while there are definitely some creepy parts, it's more about Erasmo's troubled past, his friends, and his search for “family.” This isn't a bad thing, just a statement of fact. Erasmo is a sympathetic character and I found myself rooting for him as he made his way from one dangerous predicament to the next.

I also felt that the mystery itself was quite suspenseful and well-written, and leaves the reader guessing as to whether the events are supernatural in nature or just the result of some very overactive imaginations.

My one small complaint about this novel is that I felt like the twist at the end came out of nowhere and didn't really integrate into the rest of the story well. One minute it was all about Erasmo's investigation into the occult, and the next it was about ... a much more mundane issue. Still, looking back I suppose there were some small, unobtrusive clues that something was up, so perhaps other much more observant readers won't find the transition quite so jarring.

Anyway, this is the first book I've read by Celso Hurtado but I'm certain it won't be the last. I'm looking forward to going back and reading the first novel in the series, The Ghost Tracks, because Erasmo Cruz is an absolutely delightful protagonist.

Thanks to NetGalley and Inkshares for providing me with an advance copy of this book to review!
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2,178 reviews184 followers
September 27, 2023
Celso Hurtado’s ‘The Devil’s Promise’ is the second, not entirely standalone entry in the “Ghost Tracks” series, with ‘The Ghost Tracks’ itself being the first. It’s basically a paranormal YA novel, written simply yet with heart and great intelligence, sometimes darkly funny but always a riveting and enjoyable read (pretty much like the first entry!) The idea of a young Latino paranormal investigator going against the odds, still has its appeal, and Hurtado takes care not to outstay his welcome. Though it starts rather slowly, it soon picks up and the story intensifies with vivid depictions of entities and situations straight out of a demonology manual! The setting of San Antonio fits the story perfectly, the characters are totally relatable and the dialogue is sharp and natural, almost like friendly banter. I should mention that I loved the ending, and would happily recommend the book to everyone based just on that smart twist!

Huge thanks to NetGalley and Inkshares for the ARC!
Profile Image for Lilibet Bombshell.
1,099 reviews118 followers
October 9, 2023
I read the first book in this series back when I started doing this whole ARC reading/reviewing thing and it was an unexpected treat, so when I got an invite to read and review the sequel I jumped on it right away and I’m glad I did because not only is The Devil’s Promise an even better novel than The Ghost Tracks, but Celso Hurtado has really grown as a writer in the two years since The Ghost Tracks was published and it shows.

I’m not going to explain the plot of The Ghost Tracks for those who aren’t familiar with it. You can go and look up the blurb or something. An even better suggestion is to go read it! I can’t emphasize how much you really can’t read The Devil’s Promise and understand it without reading The Ghost Tracks. You’ll be extremely lost and won’t understand Erasmo, the book’s main character, in any way unless you do that. Then come read this book. Also! I don’t know if the final, published version of this book will have TW/CWs in place, but there is a lot of material in this book worthy of such warnings, so you may want to go look them up if you’re a person who needs such warnings.

The Devil’s Promise picks up a few months after The Ghost Tracks left off. Erasmo’s grandmother is in the hospital and they don’t know if she’ll make it. He and his ex-bestie still aren’t speaking. Erasmo is trying to work as much as possible to pay hospital bills but he’s hardly making a dent as more and more come in. He’s not good. Then he gets an email reply to his Craiglist ad from a man who claims to have just realized he may have made a pact with the Devil when he was a teenager and now the payment has come due.

I don’t want to go any further with explaining the plot itself than that because of spoilers and because letting the plot unfold is one of the best things this book has to offer. It’s layered, surprising, depraved, seductive, and dark. It’s also nasty and very violent in some parts.

The Ghost Tracks had a lot to say about friendship. This book has a lot to say about family. Erasmo spends most of this book in a dazed and confused state, full of inner musings about the parents who abandoned him when he was small, the grandmother who loves him unconditionally and could quite possibly die before he becomes a legal adult, the grandfather who’s passed but looms so large in his memory, and the envy he feels constantly toward anyone and everyone who has a family and everything they want when he just feels lost, alone, and broken.

This book is marketed as YA, but it honestly shouldn’t be pigeonholed like that. Erasmo may only be 17, but he’s lived more than some adults have and has had to shoulder more responsibilities and see more things than most adults have. I think supernatural and occult horror fans would be surprised by how much they might enjoy this book.

I was provided a copy of this title by NetGalley and the author. All thoughts, opinions, views, and ideas expressed herein are mine and mine alone. Thank you.

File Under: Amateur Sleuth/Body Horror/Book Series/Coming of Age/Cult Horror/Horror/Occult Horror/OwnVoices/Supernatural Horror/YA Book Series/YA Fiction/YA Horror
Profile Image for Amanda.
392 reviews12 followers
September 26, 2023
I wonder if this would have worked better had I read the prior installment? It's clear pretty early on that our narrator is unreliable, but not exactly how or to what extent. The ultimate reason is a bit of a "get out of bad writing free" card since it explains plot holes and confusion away.

Overall, this felt a bit of a jumbled mess. The narrator is so unreliable that I missed the point and really just wanted it all to end. At least it was mercifully quick :)
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5,747 reviews340 followers
June 23, 2023
THE DEVIL'S PROMISE, a one-day read because I could not stop and sure didn't want to, left me speechless. Not at all surprising, considering my acclaim for Author Celso Hurtado's incredible debut novel, GHOST TRACKS [November 2021], which introduced a remarkable and wonderfully diverse Series Protagonist, seventeen-year-old Erasmo Cruz. This young man is without a doubt one of the most endearing fictional characters I've ever encountered [this in a character-pantheon that includes my all-time favorite Louis, Gay Black assassin and fashion plate of a certain extensive John Connolly Series!] Erasmo is so easy to identify with, so relatable, so eliciting of empathy. So I'm not him and I didn't live his exact life, but so what? We resonate. That's one of the perfect aspects of this Series.

Another is how giftedly Mr. Hurtado writes bullet-train paced Suspense! It's difficult to catch my breath reading his novels! Then the depths--the issues--the lives--the characters: to die for...

The Paranormal/Supernatural: no need for suspension of disbelief here, nor for any skepticism concerning the depths of the abyss of Human Evil. Mr. Hurtado lays it on the line. On.the.Line. Erasmo's Encounters are...simply incredible.

I found the Denouement a little (a lot) shocking....but realistic. And the ending: just glorious. I ended the book turned inside out--shocked--dismayed--frightened--yet ultimately happy. [How often does that happen?]

In my review of the author's debut novel, GHOST TRACKS, back in 2021, I presciently wrote:

"May debut author Celso Hurtado have a long and creatively productive career, because this author is an exceptional wordsmith!"

I'm extraordinarily thankful this hope is coming to pass!
Profile Image for Kalah.
91 reviews11 followers
October 29, 2023
I was given a copy of this by Celso Hurtado in exchange for a review so thank you so much!

The Devil's Promise follows 17 year old Erasmo Cruz investigating strange stories to make extra money to help take care of his grandmother. After gaining renown for surviving the city's legendary Ghost Tracks, he has set up shop as a paranormal investigator. But helping exorcize other people’s demons doesn’t seem to relieve his own; his best friend Rat has abandoned him, his grandmother is nearing death, and his own health has taken a sudden decline. 
None of these hardships can prepare Erasmo for the story his newest client brings him. Two decades after a strange ritual at a rural ranch, Bradley Erickson is being hunted by the Devil. In exchange for the life of his dreams, Bradley must surrender the blood of his child. The case hurls Erasmo into a dark web of cults, bargains, and broken pasts.

I didn't realize it was the second book in the series, but it didn't make a difference at all. I was able to read and follow to the book completely without having read the first one. Also I wouldn't say it is strictly for YA. I enjoyed this book and don't typically enjoy YA books. I feel like it is written in a way that it is not too mature for YA, but isn't too immature for older readers either, if that makes any sense.

The characters are well developed and make you concerned about what happens to them. The story doesn't have any unexplained plot holes and has a satisfactory ending. I definitely will be reading more of Hurtado in the future.
Profile Image for Janalyn, the blind reviewer.
4,994 reviews162 followers
October 12, 2023
Orlanzo Cruz is still fighting with his best friend rat but the thanks to Alma he has a new sidekick name Vero sadly OrlanZo is not in a good place his grandmother‘s cancer has gotten worse and she is now in the hospital something he would do anything to change or at least that’s what I thought they say curiosity kills the cat but it almost kills Alonso when Bradley Erickson comes to him to say 20 years before a crush invited him to a midnight gathering to meet the wish master and although his wish was granted the payoff is too much the demon wants his firstborn son but now that he knows his son he doesn’t want to pay. Despite how scary making a deal with the wish master is before it’s over orLonzo unwittingly just may do that. I loved the first book and felt so bad for Alonzo and felt so lucky to have received an arc copy of the second book and to say I enjoyed it just as much would be an understatement I cannot wait for the third book in this collection I love the stories I love the characters in the book and thought Vero and the twist she brought to the story was excellent I was not expecting that and wow what a twist this is a great book and one I highly recommend I want to thank the publisher and Net Galley for my free art copy please forgive any mistakes as I am blind and dictate my review.
Profile Image for Horror Reads.
1,030 reviews362 followers
June 26, 2023
This novel is about a young man who investigates the paranormal. Although he believes in the supernatural he's quite skeptical about most claims. He's a lonely man, abandoned by his parents and the pain of his grandmother slowly dying.

When a man contacts him with an incredible story, he's curious enough to investigate. And things start spiraling out of control from there.

There are mysteries to unlock in this book. Are the things he uncovers actually real or is it all in his mind or being manipulated by a cult in order to recruit him for their cause?

The supernatural aspects are at the center of these circumstances but arguments could be made for other explanations.

We'll learn more as the story progresses but the real "meat" lies in the last one hundred pages or so. This is when we find out things about certain characters that ties all of it together.

I was unaware that this is part two of a series and an incident was mentioned in the book several times but never explained. I'm assuming it's in part one.

I would recommend this book to others if you like a book that will have you thinking and might unravel what you believe.

I received an ARC with no consideration. This review is voluntary and is my own opinion.
Profile Image for Shekki’s memoirs .
337 reviews7 followers
July 13, 2023
I didn't realize when I requested The Devil's Promise from NetGalley that it was the second in a series, but it wasn’t a problem because this book felt like a standalone. I'm sure that there was some backstory that I missed by not reading the series in order, but I kind of figured what might have happened.
This was an excellent read. Horror/ Paranormal is one of my favuorite genres so I hooked to the book that instant when I started to read the book. In here, we can get a glimpse of well…yeah so many things. Like, Erasmo's troubled past, his friends, cults that worship devil and witchcraft. Erasmo is a sympathetic character and I found myself rooting for him.
I also felt that the mystery itself was suspenseful and an unpredictable and it kept me on edge throughout the book. But however, I felt like the twist at the end came out of nowhere and we didn't get the ending we wanted. Well maybe it’s just me or who knows, author has something in mind maybe.

Anyway, this is the first book I've read by Celso Hurtado but I'm certain it won't be the last. I'm looking forward to going back and reading the first novel in the series.
Profile Image for Codylyn Hazel.
85 reviews10 followers
October 10, 2023
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫/5⭐️’s
👻👻👻/5👻’s
🩸🩸🩸🩸/5🩸’s

👿So, I definitely jumped into this book not even paying attention that it had a book 1 🤦🏼‍♀️ but I was able to completely piece it all together in the end!

👿Honestly it took a minute to really get into and kind of piecing everything together (again, probably my fault 🤦🏼‍♀️), but this book threw me for a loop and I was completely here for it!! To say my mind was seriously BLOWN at the resolve is an understatement!! 🤯😱

👿Following Erasmo Cruz’s search for the paranormal, brings him to this potential client, Bradley, who believes the devil is after his newborn son. He recounts that in his younger days he decided to follow a beautiful girl to a ceremonial gathering that he has no idea what’s really going on. As Erasmo starts looking into things he comes to find the literal cult, who worships a mysterious demon who makes deals to give the person whatever they desire BUT for a huge cost…

👿Do you think that the need/want outweighs the consequence/sacrifice? Does Erasmo get Bradley’s son back or will he give into this unknown demon, just to save his grandmother and to have the feeling of a “family”?!?

👿But, for real though, add this to your Spooky Season tbr because if you don’t, you’re missing out on a heck of a spook!! 😏😈
Profile Image for Barbara Dougherty Evans.
773 reviews35 followers
August 27, 2023
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for granting me an advance copy of this book in return for my honest opinions.

Release date: October 3, 2023!

This book is the second book in a series, but can easily be read as a stand alone novel. There were a few instances where I was not familiar with some references to past events, but it did not take anything away from the story

The book was full of horror/paranormal and had me checking the locks on my doors in the wee hours of the night. I had all the lights on and was curled up with my little schitzu as my protector, but couldn't stop reading.

Recommend! Yes, well worth the read!
Profile Image for Jennifer Leonard.
406 reviews8 followers
September 21, 2023
A riveting return to his world created in The Ghost Tracks, Celso Hurtado brings us into life with Erasmo Cruz. Things are moving right along for Erasmo, until one day, they’re not anymore. The things he’s put off to whim and fancy, coincidence and chance, are far from that. Fun becomes frightful reality, and he and his friends are tested time and again, their choices defining who they are and will be.



I loved Ghost Tracks and this was no exception. As many others noted, the ending is totally unexpected, and I fall into the camp of ‘loved it’! Sincerely hoping to see the hinted at continuation here, and will be following Celso in hopes of hearing about it soon.
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1,276 reviews20 followers
August 9, 2024
The Devil's Promise by Celso Hurtado, the second book in the Ghost Tracks series, is a compelling YA horror novel that I thoroughly enjoyed. The writing is skillfully executed, with a well-balanced pace that keeps the story engaging from start to finish. The plot unfolds smoothly, with carefully thought-out events that build tension effectively. The vivid descriptions and chilling details of the entities and situations are truly gripping and kept me hooked throughout. This installment continues to impress with its blend of suspense and eerie atmosphere.
Profile Image for Sara Mcfadden.
783 reviews1 follower
August 26, 2023
Thank you to NetGalley and Inkshared for this opportunity to read, rate and review this arc which is available Octiber 3,2023!!!

This is book 2 of the Ghost Track books and I have to say I dig it a lot. I am a huge fan of possession horror, folklore horror and Latino horror.

This was a well written, edge of your seat wth was the noise kinda book. I had to keep the light on. But like the book says the Devil keeps its promises.
260 reviews2 followers
October 21, 2023
Devil's Promise

I can't even think of words to describe how good this book is, was really not expecting to fall in love with a new series. Dark and light, good and evil. This is not a book for someone who likes their fiction simple. Nothing wrong with that, but this book is for those who like their stories deep and intelligent. Sometimes so dark and deep that I had to stop and read something simpler. I surely hope there is another Erasmo Cruz book in the works.
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632 reviews53 followers
December 23, 2023
So this is the second book in a series, which I was not aware of upon requesting on Netgalley, so I am not sure if this ties into the first book.

The Devil's Promise was actually really good and had an amazing, creepy atmosphere to it! I really liked Celso Hurtado's writing style of the plot, characters, and twists. I will absolutely be reading the first book and others by the author!

Thank you to Netgalley and Inkshares for the ARC. All opinions are my own.
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240 reviews9 followers
November 14, 2023
Creepy, intense, and unnerving are just a few words I can use to describe this sordid tale. A dark decent into the depths of a hellscape. From the very beginning you just sort of hang on white knuckled while our main character deals with inhuman, audacious horrors. Hurtado knows how to build a story into a crescendo of insanity that you won't want to put down.
Profile Image for Misty Iputi.
291 reviews3 followers
July 22, 2023
This was a slow start however it soon picked up quickly and was interesting throughout the entire book. Would I read it again? If it was on a different platform I would in a heartbeat. It was well worth my time.
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356 reviews7 followers
August 5, 2023
An intriguing tale of a paranormal investigator who alone, without his usual friends, embarks on a mission to find the missing child of a man who made a deal with the devil in his teens. A story with an unusual end.

You don't have to read the first book to follow the story.
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14.4k reviews174 followers
August 29, 2023
This is the second in a series and I want to read the rest as this novel is an emotionally charged, creepy and well written story.
Twisty, dark and well plotted.
Recommended.
Many thanks to the publisher for this ARC, all opinions are mine
Profile Image for Amanda Lucero.
139 reviews3 followers
October 3, 2023
This was a good book.  It has a occultist vibe.  It is scary, intense, dark and creepy.  I was surprised when I realized it was the second book in the series.  Despite that you don't really need to read it to get the story.  It did refer to incidents but wasn't very spoiler kind of details.  Overall great book.
206 reviews3 followers
July 18, 2024
Erasmus Cruz is quickly becoming one of my favorite fictional ghost hunters. His new adventure will thrill new readers and shock the ones familiar with the character. Celso Hurtado is an incredible writer, someone to watch.
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453 reviews14 followers
December 31, 2023
Ghost Tracks by Celso Hurtado was my very first Netgalley read. I really enjoyed that book so when I heard that he had released a new book I was there for it! The author offered a few people an advanced ebook copy of this book, and I was lucky enough to be chosen.

His writing this time was even better than the first! The story grabbed me in the first chapter and didn't let go! Creepy, a bit more bloody than the first, and filled with suspense! I continue to be a fan of his work.

While this book continues with some of the story and characters from Ghost Tracks, it can definitely be read and enjoyed as a standalone.

It's absolutely worth the read. 5⭐️
Profile Image for Heather - Just Geeking By.
514 reviews84 followers
September 1, 2023
Originally posted on Just Geeking by.

In the follow-up to his brilliant debut The Ghost Tracks, Celso Hurtado returns with another thrilling tale of horror. Seventeen-year-old Erasmo Cruz is a paranormal investigator, taking cases to pay for his grandmother’s healthcare. He is doing it alone, his friend Rat having abandoned him. Erasmo’s latest case is unlike anything he’s ever come across, and at first he’s tempted to pass on it. Bradley Erickson is convinced that his good fortune is due to a ritual he took part in during his youth in exchange for an undisclosed gift. Now the Devil want’s his due; the blood of his child.

Not only does it sound too ludicrous to be true, but everything Bradley tells him doesn’t fit with Erasmo’s knowledge. It sounds as if Bradley has been taken for a ride. Things become more serious when Bradley’s son is kidnapped in front of Erasmo, an event that has him questioning everything he knows. Unable to walk away he finds himself drawn into a dark conspiracy of satanic cults, demons and secrets as he hurries to save an innocent child.

All the while his grandmother’s health is failing, her body losing its battle with cancer. Erasmo is struggling, not just with facing the loss of the only family he’s ever had, but his own health is a mess. He’s having black-outs, he’s feeling nauseous and fatigued all the time. All Erasmo can do is hope that he can hold it together long enough to find Bradley’s son.

Once again Celso Hurtado has delivered a dark and intriguing tale of horror filled with twists and turns, seamlessly blending the fantastical and the everyday. As with the previous book, The Devil’s Promise keeps the reader guessing, providing as much evidence for the existence of the supernatural as for con artists. At the heart of this book about demons is a very human protagonist, and for the second time I was blown away by Hurtado’s ability to harness the rawness of life. The Devil’s Promise includes difficult scenes portraying the harsh realities of end of life care, and I applaud Hurtado for including these in a young adult novel. It was something I appreciated as someone who had a grandparent who battled cancer during my teenager years, and passed away when I was seventeen.

The end of The Devil’s Promise packs a punch, and if you can avoid spoilers for this book then I suggest doing so. At this point Hurtado has proven himself to be a master of surprise twists within twists, and the beauty of this one is that it is right in front of the reader the entire time. It is an extremely powerful moment in the book. With this second novel Celso Hurtado has easily secured a spot as one of my favourite writers, and I am eagerly looking forward to the next book in The Ghost Tracks series.

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157 reviews3 followers
January 11, 2024
Right around 60% I began to skim read. I feel like the plot became convoluted and the twists were forced in an attempt to drag some interest back into the story. I also feel the random intervention/drug addiction subplot slapped on to the end was unnecessary and existed solely to add additional word count.
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111 reviews19 followers
September 5, 2023
This is the first I’ve ever read anything by Celso Hurtado. I very much enjoyed this book, and had a hard time putting it down. It’s centered around a young man who investigates the paranormal. While he believes in these situations, he is first a skeptic. When he’s contacted to look into a new claim so many things start to happen. Are these claims real, in his head, or maybe something else at play?
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