3.25/5.
On the one hand, the subplot of the MMCs angling to take down a corrupt pharmaceutical company that harmed one of their own is a great premise! But... I'm positively floored that the FMC isn't at all involved in their scheming beyond them selecting her for initiation into the pack... Maddie is amazing at navigating public life and pack politics, yet somehow you don't ever deploy her for corporate espionage?!
This book was really well written for the genre--it had flawed characters and a feisty omega, to a point. I adored Maddie, Alex, and Luca. Their spicy scenes were good too, lots of tension.
But, there are a number of things keeping me from giving this read a 4/5:
- It's too long. Clocking in at ~400 Kindle pages (9 hours for me, so KU tells me), this book could've been much shorter, especially if they'd cut an alpha or two. Why couldn't Luca and Nic have been the same character? Same question for Vincent and Alex. Too many cooks in the kitchen without enough distinguishing characteristics. I started reading the POVs that most interested me and skimming the rest, especially the MM sex scenes, at the 70% mark.
- Maddie starts as this super strong sassy lady but quickly becomes a dull woman. Her day to day life sounds busy, but we never interact meaningfully with anyone who isn't her pack or her best friend. She talks about omega politics, but we never get to see them live. After only a month of resistance, her big ~*moment*~ is that she decides "oh, guess I'll give it a shot"... Also, after reading so many of these OV RHs, I really hate when the FMC can come on command. Especially repeatedly. And that FMCs seemingly have no refractory period. Once they cross that threshold with the MMCs, it's usually sex city with no relief. Idk, it's just wearing on me.
- Idk why, but sometimes I'm down for betas being in packs, and sometimes I'm really not interested. I think Avery, while sweet, was written poorly. He's essentially the pack butler, at times a bit of a neuro-divergent mess, and I just didn't like his, Vincent, and Maddie's dynamic or romance. It felt a little like she was an added bonus to their bond and not the main event. In these romance novels, I just need to feel like the FMC completes them, and I didn't get that here. I didn't at all feel this way about Luca and Nic though. Go figure.