What do you think?
Rate this book
Bornbane #2
A Prophecy of Undone
The second book in I. A. Takerian’s high-fantasy series takes us on a perilous journey through The Trials, readying our War Party to fight for the fates of all.
The world of Zenafrost is burning. Darkness has overtaken the lands, corrupting everything it touches. After discovering the truth of her birth, Mara ─ Princess of Delinval, daughter of the Dread Queen, prophesied bringer of the dawn ─ has no time to sift through the rubble of her former life. Not with the salvation of the world resting upon her shoulders.
By sheer luck and the help of her allies, Mara has somehow managed to survive the first Trial of the Odelians. Now, as she moves into the dangers of the Trials to come, she must stand beside warriors with centuries of training and skill in powerful magicks. But with Cyfrin, Kain, Milios and El to guide her, she remains determined to prove herself worthy to fight among them. Evil, however, refuses to wait until the Dawnbringer is prepared for battle. Shadows loom ever closer to the Forgotten Wood, and death rides in on swift wings. When nightmares become reality, Mara’s confidence falters.
Is she truly fit to lead the charge into the dawn?
The world of Zenafrost is burning. Darkness has overtaken the lands, corrupting everything it touches. After discovering the truth of her birth, Mara ─ Princess of Delinval, daughter of the Dread Queen, prophesied bringer of the dawn ─ has no time to sift through the rubble of her former life. Not with the salvation of the world resting upon her shoulders.
By sheer luck and the help of her allies, Mara has somehow managed to survive the first Trial of the Odelians. Now, as she moves into the dangers of the Trials to come, she must stand beside warriors with centuries of training and skill in powerful magicks. But with Cyfrin, Kain, Milios and El to guide her, she remains determined to prove herself worthy to fight among them. Evil, however, refuses to wait until the Dawnbringer is prepared for battle. Shadows loom ever closer to the Forgotten Wood, and death rides in on swift wings. When nightmares become reality, Mara’s confidence falters.
Is she truly fit to lead the charge into the dawn?
374 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 1, 2023
200 people are currently reading
2178 people want to read
About the author
I.A. Takerian
6 books314 followersLocated in the mountains of Lago Vista, TX, Isabeau has spent her life devoted to the written word. Starting early with the classic horrors, she quickly moved on to the likes of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle and J.R.R Tolkien. It was deep in the realm of Middle Earth that she discovered her unbridled love for fantasy. A love that was kindled from the very beginning by her incredible parents, Jeffry and Lauraine Hickman. They turned the spark of imagination into a whirlwind of dreams turned truth on the paper.
Much of Isabeau’s life was spent in and out of hospitals due to health complications. She found solace and escape in the pages of books, helping her to eventually create the universe she writes about today. In her fevered passion, Isabeau tells of romances that surpass the limits of life and time itself.
Isabeau is a doting mother to her beautiful baby girl, Aurora, as well as their fur babies, Mojo, Max and Mishka. When she is not submerged in her writings, Isabeau likes to sing with her family, and imagine the next adventures that she’ll bring her readers on.
Much of Isabeau’s life was spent in and out of hospitals due to health complications. She found solace and escape in the pages of books, helping her to eventually create the universe she writes about today. In her fevered passion, Isabeau tells of romances that surpass the limits of life and time itself.
Isabeau is a doting mother to her beautiful baby girl, Aurora, as well as their fur babies, Mojo, Max and Mishka. When she is not submerged in her writings, Isabeau likes to sing with her family, and imagine the next adventures that she’ll bring her readers on.
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 30 of 185 reviews
June 2, 2023
《 4.5 ✰ 》
"We've been training for this battle our entire lives. You'll never be alone in this journey."
A Prophecy of Undone focuses on the trials that an Odelian must complete in order to receive the high honor of becoming a warrior. The competitors are called Hopefuls, which is very fitting. If I had to make a comparison to describe the action — it would be Catching Fire (Hunger Games book 2). Remember the island? 😱
Things:
► The ultimate found family. We care more about the group than the romances. Their bond is special.
► Short chapters that benefit the pacing. 👍
► action! Action! ACTION! 🗡️🪓🌊🧚♂️👾
► Swoony and laugh out loud moments. 🫠🤭
► A potential powerful ally? If you read my review for the novella, I made it clear that my Bornbane Xmas wish list includes ALLIES! 🤞
► S•L•O•W burn. 🐌
► More magick! ✨
► A wide variety of deadly monsters.
I cannot wait to see how things play out. Read this series if:
1. You favor a motley crew that would die for each other.
2. You are in the market for a new book boyfriend.
3. You appreciate excellent worldbuilding and an exciting elemental magic system.
4. If you are also hoping to wake up as a fae. 🙋🏻♀️ I wouldn’t mind being kidnapped by one either.
MANY thanks to Isabeau Takerian for the gifted ARC.
⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ⋆ ⋆ ⋆
My beloved Rebecca, thank you for reading this with me. I had the. best. time. ❤️
⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ⋆ ⋆ ⋆
*To my friends that have read this…
The very last sentence in the bonus chapter! 🤫
My reactions:
AHHH! please DM me your theories so I can share mine too! 😘
⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ⋆ ⋆ ⋆
Expected Publication: 🗓️ 𝓙𝓾𝓷𝓮 ❶
I just got this gorgeous arc and I am screaming, with gratitude! 🎉
Can’t wait to be back with Cyfrin, Kain, Milios, El, and of course Mara aka 🤫!!!
"We've been training for this battle our entire lives. You'll never be alone in this journey."
A Prophecy of Undone focuses on the trials that an Odelian must complete in order to receive the high honor of becoming a warrior. The competitors are called Hopefuls, which is very fitting. If I had to make a comparison to describe the action — it would be Catching Fire (Hunger Games book 2). Remember the island? 😱
Things:
► The ultimate found family. We care more about the group than the romances. Their bond is special.
► Short chapters that benefit the pacing. 👍
► action! Action! ACTION! 🗡️🪓🌊🧚♂️👾
► Swoony and laugh out loud moments. 🫠🤭
► A potential powerful ally? If you read my review for the novella, I made it clear that my Bornbane Xmas wish list includes ALLIES! 🤞
► S•L•O•W burn. 🐌
► More magick! ✨
► A wide variety of deadly monsters.
❝
His gaze softened, like fresh snowfall coming down around her. "Mmm. If only you could see yourself the way I see you, my Dawnbringer."
"You surprise me, darling," … "I didn't think you could be any more beautiful."
I cannot wait to see how things play out. Read this series if:
1. You favor a motley crew that would die for each other.
2. You are in the market for a new book boyfriend.
3. You appreciate excellent worldbuilding and an exciting elemental magic system.
4. If you are also hoping to wake up as a fae. 🙋🏻♀️ I wouldn’t mind being kidnapped by one either.
MANY thanks to Isabeau Takerian for the gifted ARC.
⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ⋆ ⋆ ⋆
My beloved Rebecca, thank you for reading this with me. I had the. best. time. ❤️
⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ⋆ ⋆ ⋆
*To my friends that have read this…
The very last sentence in the bonus chapter! 🤫
My reactions:
AHHH! please DM me your theories so I can share mine too! 😘
⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ ⋆ ⋆ ⋆
Expected Publication: 🗓️ 𝓙𝓾𝓷𝓮 ❶
I just got this gorgeous arc and I am screaming, with gratitude! 🎉
Can’t wait to be back with Cyfrin, Kain, Milios, El, and of course Mara aka 🤫!!!
June 2, 2023
4.5 STARS!!!
"I am not defined by my hardships. I am defined by what is in my heart, despite it all. By the few who have stood and loved me in the face of it all."
We are back with Mara aka Dawnbringer and our beloved War Party!! Mara must complete a set of trials just like all of the other Hopefuls to prove herself and take her rightful place among her people as their Queen. With her trusted War Party there to guide and support her Mara will face her fears and push her limitations to discover just how deep her power runs. Time is not on their side as she must learn to harness her magick quickly as the dark threat to their world increases and all they love and whole dear is at risk!!
"And you may be the most magnificent creature I have ever encountered, my dear Dawnbringer." 🫠
Ahh this was a really fun read! Highlights were the action-packed trials and tribulations and the always heart squeezing War Party! The Slow burn romance is the definition of SLOW BURN! I loved seeing Mara embrace who she is and continue to push herself to persevere as we have come to expect from her character.
"You know, with every passing year I think they will grow up a little. But honestly, I think they're devolving. More animals than men at this point." 😂
The War Party never disappoints, and their bond is the heart of these books. I loved seeing even more of their dynamic and how Mara fits in with their group. Each one of them brings some individual strength to their crew and the way they create a sort of gravity for each other is beautiful and heartwarming. And also, Cyfrin and Kane are children together and it's always super funny!
"My beautiful Dawnbringer, you will be the ruin of me, you know?" 😍
Mara and Cyfrin. This slow burn may actually kill me!!! I love their relationship so much; their banter and his teasing are always entertaining but Cyfrin lays down some really swoon worthy moments in this book! We are getting some clues too about his background and what they may mean for the future which is so exciting!
"I advise you to think very carefully about your next words to my Queen." 🗡️
My MVP award for this book goes out to DRAKE! I just love this character so much!! He is like a demony Capt. Jack Sparrow and I am obsessed! He is so much fun and definitely a little crazy and I think we have only scratched the surface of some mysteries surrounding his nature.
Thank you so much to the Author I.A Takerian for the gifted arc.
Thank you to my beautiful Soul Sister Cecelia for reading this with me and going down all our rabbit holes with our theories!
"I am not defined by my hardships. I am defined by what is in my heart, despite it all. By the few who have stood and loved me in the face of it all."
We are back with Mara aka Dawnbringer and our beloved War Party!! Mara must complete a set of trials just like all of the other Hopefuls to prove herself and take her rightful place among her people as their Queen. With her trusted War Party there to guide and support her Mara will face her fears and push her limitations to discover just how deep her power runs. Time is not on their side as she must learn to harness her magick quickly as the dark threat to their world increases and all they love and whole dear is at risk!!
"And you may be the most magnificent creature I have ever encountered, my dear Dawnbringer." 🫠
Ahh this was a really fun read! Highlights were the action-packed trials and tribulations and the always heart squeezing War Party! The Slow burn romance is the definition of SLOW BURN! I loved seeing Mara embrace who she is and continue to push herself to persevere as we have come to expect from her character.
"You know, with every passing year I think they will grow up a little. But honestly, I think they're devolving. More animals than men at this point." 😂
The War Party never disappoints, and their bond is the heart of these books. I loved seeing even more of their dynamic and how Mara fits in with their group. Each one of them brings some individual strength to their crew and the way they create a sort of gravity for each other is beautiful and heartwarming. And also, Cyfrin and Kane are children together and it's always super funny!
"My beautiful Dawnbringer, you will be the ruin of me, you know?" 😍
Mara and Cyfrin. This slow burn may actually kill me!!! I love their relationship so much; their banter and his teasing are always entertaining but Cyfrin lays down some really swoon worthy moments in this book! We are getting some clues too about his background and what they may mean for the future which is so exciting!
"I advise you to think very carefully about your next words to my Queen." 🗡️
My MVP award for this book goes out to DRAKE! I just love this character so much!! He is like a demony Capt. Jack Sparrow and I am obsessed! He is so much fun and definitely a little crazy and I think we have only scratched the surface of some mysteries surrounding his nature.
Thank you so much to the Author I.A Takerian for the gifted arc.
Thank you to my beautiful Soul Sister Cecelia for reading this with me and going down all our rabbit holes with our theories!
June 1, 2023
HAPPY RELEASE DAY TO THIS BEAUTY!
Honored. Blessed. Possibly screaming a little?
I'll be quick and try to keep this as vague as possible because it's an ARC and because it's an anticipated read that I don't wanna ruin for anyone.
A Prophecy of Undone is hands down one of my favorite sequels.
It was so full of action my eyes were barely keeping track of everything that was going on on the page.
The found family trope is so well done I didn't even care I had to wait 200 years for the main couple to finally acknowledge their mutual attraction.
Mara is amazing. Still a little raw at the edges, but she's getting there and we love her for her determination and kind heart.
Cyfrin rivals Aelin's Rowan when it comes to self-control, and that's everything I'm gonna say about him.
Holy slow burn, Batman.
I'm still sweating over that bathing scene.
El, Kain and Milios deserve the world.
Plotwise speaking, this was overall very interesting but also kind of a filler book.
There never was a dull moment, though, and the plot benefited from it.
Again, great job, for a second book. It takes talent not to let a sequel bomb.
Would I sound greedy if I said I need the next book yesterday?
Many thanks to the author for this opportunity!
"Long live the Dawnbringer!"
Honored. Blessed. Possibly screaming a little?
I'll be quick and try to keep this as vague as possible because it's an ARC and because it's an anticipated read that I don't wanna ruin for anyone.
A Prophecy of Undone is hands down one of my favorite sequels.
It was so full of action my eyes were barely keeping track of everything that was going on on the page.
The found family trope is so well done I didn't even care I had to wait 200 years for the main couple to finally acknowledge their mutual attraction.
Mara is amazing. Still a little raw at the edges, but she's getting there and we love her for her determination and kind heart.
Cyfrin rivals Aelin's Rowan when it comes to self-control, and that's everything I'm gonna say about him.
Holy slow burn, Batman.
I'm still sweating over that bathing scene.
El, Kain and Milios deserve the world.
Plotwise speaking, this was overall very interesting but also kind of a filler book.
There never was a dull moment, though, and the plot benefited from it.
Again, great job, for a second book. It takes talent not to let a sequel bomb.
Would I sound greedy if I said I need the next book yesterday?
Many thanks to the author for this opportunity!
June 4, 2023
4 Waterfall Crystal Stars ⭐
Spicy Level: 0.5🌶️/5
I utterly squealed when I saw that this was coming out as I could not stop raving to anyone and everyone who would (and wouldn't listen) how amazing Rise of the Dawnbringer was. I am thrilled to be back in this wonderful world that I.A. Takerian has created. She has managed to capture that vibe that you get from a traditional epic fantasy that, is on par with the worlds of Tolkien or Terry Pratchett. You can really feel how much care and thought has gone into the creation of the creatures and the world-building.
This book picks up directly after book one, which I am extremely thankful for because the cliffhanger in book one was not a very nice one as it left you high and dry and just needing more. We are thrown right into the action where Mara has to continue to complete the trials to become a warrior and prove herself as their rightful Queen. And these trials and tribulations are not easy. She basically faces a world where anything and everything wants to kill you or harvest your soul, from fluffy little teddy bears to giant sea creatures with dark magick.
Mara does a lot of growth in this book, on both a character level and overcoming her insecurities. She did lack both in the first book, and I think it was made up for in this book. She is very hard on herself. She doesn't believe that she's capable of completing this prophecy or being a good Queen. She doesn't think she's strong enough to close the gate. But being able to see how she works through her insecurities through the challenges and through the relationship growth of the War Party it was wonderful to see her strengthening herself and grow into who she is and who her role is.
I loved being back with the War Party. The relationship dynamic between these five characters truly makes this book stand out. They were the thing that I adored the most in the previous book, and they continued to be the thing that I loved the most in this book. To see how their relationship strengthens, how they get closer, and how they actually bring strength to each other was beautiful!
Mara and Cyfrin. It almost feels like a tease at this point because we were given just a sprinkling of spice and still the slowest of slow burns imaginable!!!! It's agonising but then also weirdly rewarding to see how these two are constantly drawn to each other and how they play off each other! I was yelling at the pages for the two of them to just kiss already!!! There is definitely speculation and theories in my mind on where the relationship between these two is going with the hints and clues we have been given, but my heart actually cannot take another book of them pining for each other!
If you love action in your books, this is one for you! There is so much going on that we are just jumping from one thing to another, nonstop! If feels like a constant go, go, go, go. That is also the one thing that did keep me from being as obsessed with this as I was with book one. I felt that we kind of "lost" the overarching plot a little bit, and I needed it to be just a little bit more. This was jumping from A to B and B to C than C to.... a series of small obstacles/monsters/challenges/fights and not really focusing on the final destination. However, towards the end, we got our baring back.
This does feel like a "Filler" book. We needed this story to happen to help grow our characters and the plot but it's setting the stage for that final battle and that final quest to close the gate
Overall this was a fantastic read and I would recommend this book and the series to anyone and everyone. If you love the following this is the book for you!
▶ Touch her you die
▶ SUPER SUPER Slow burn
▶ Found Family
▶ Fantastic worldbuilding
▶ Magick
▶ Unique monsters
▶ Super Action Packed
So many thanks to Isabeau Takerian for the gifted ARC! All thoughts and feelings in this review are my own
Spicy Level: 0.5🌶️/5
I utterly squealed when I saw that this was coming out as I could not stop raving to anyone and everyone who would (and wouldn't listen) how amazing Rise of the Dawnbringer was. I am thrilled to be back in this wonderful world that I.A. Takerian has created. She has managed to capture that vibe that you get from a traditional epic fantasy that, is on par with the worlds of Tolkien or Terry Pratchett. You can really feel how much care and thought has gone into the creation of the creatures and the world-building.
This book picks up directly after book one, which I am extremely thankful for because the cliffhanger in book one was not a very nice one as it left you high and dry and just needing more. We are thrown right into the action where Mara has to continue to complete the trials to become a warrior and prove herself as their rightful Queen. And these trials and tribulations are not easy. She basically faces a world where anything and everything wants to kill you or harvest your soul, from fluffy little teddy bears to giant sea creatures with dark magick.
Mara does a lot of growth in this book, on both a character level and overcoming her insecurities. She did lack both in the first book, and I think it was made up for in this book. She is very hard on herself. She doesn't believe that she's capable of completing this prophecy or being a good Queen. She doesn't think she's strong enough to close the gate. But being able to see how she works through her insecurities through the challenges and through the relationship growth of the War Party it was wonderful to see her strengthening herself and grow into who she is and who her role is.
I loved being back with the War Party. The relationship dynamic between these five characters truly makes this book stand out. They were the thing that I adored the most in the previous book, and they continued to be the thing that I loved the most in this book. To see how their relationship strengthens, how they get closer, and how they actually bring strength to each other was beautiful!
Mara and Cyfrin. It almost feels like a tease at this point because we were given just a sprinkling of spice and still the slowest of slow burns imaginable!!!! It's agonising but then also weirdly rewarding to see how these two are constantly drawn to each other and how they play off each other! I was yelling at the pages for the two of them to just kiss already!!! There is definitely speculation and theories in my mind on where the relationship between these two is going with the hints and clues we have been given, but my heart actually cannot take another book of them pining for each other!
If you love action in your books, this is one for you! There is so much going on that we are just jumping from one thing to another, nonstop! If feels like a constant go, go, go, go. That is also the one thing that did keep me from being as obsessed with this as I was with book one. I felt that we kind of "lost" the overarching plot a little bit, and I needed it to be just a little bit more. This was jumping from A to B and B to C than C to.... a series of small obstacles/monsters/challenges/fights and not really focusing on the final destination. However, towards the end, we got our baring back.
This does feel like a "Filler" book. We needed this story to happen to help grow our characters and the plot but it's setting the stage for that final battle and that final quest to close the gate
Overall this was a fantastic read and I would recommend this book and the series to anyone and everyone. If you love the following this is the book for you!
▶ Touch her you die
▶ SUPER SUPER Slow burn
▶ Found Family
▶ Fantastic worldbuilding
▶ Magick
▶ Unique monsters
▶ Super Action Packed
So many thanks to Isabeau Takerian for the gifted ARC! All thoughts and feelings in this review are my own
August 10, 2023
4.5 stars
this book. THIS BOOK.
I AM OBSESSED. this book has me legitimately kicking my feet and squealing - i had to put the book down at times to just recover from the feels. because oh my lord the romance…
cyfrin is whipped, fully and completely. WHIPPED. OBSESSED. IN LOVE. and i am eating up every bit of it, because he is the exact perfect amount of obsessed, and is undeniably my new favourite book boyfriend.
but this isn’t just a romance book!! mara is such a powerful main character and the plotline and worldbuilding are just as extraordinary in this book as the last, plus all our favourite characters shone. kain is so damn funny, i adore him!
i’m so invested in this series and in this author’s writing, i need the next book stat!! read this, it’s so addictive and fun and adorable!
this book. THIS BOOK.
I AM OBSESSED. this book has me legitimately kicking my feet and squealing - i had to put the book down at times to just recover from the feels. because oh my lord the romance…
cyfrin is whipped, fully and completely. WHIPPED. OBSESSED. IN LOVE. and i am eating up every bit of it, because he is the exact perfect amount of obsessed, and is undeniably my new favourite book boyfriend.
but this isn’t just a romance book!! mara is such a powerful main character and the plotline and worldbuilding are just as extraordinary in this book as the last, plus all our favourite characters shone. kain is so damn funny, i adore him!
i’m so invested in this series and in this author’s writing, i need the next book stat!! read this, it’s so addictive and fun and adorable!
October 25, 2024
*+:｡.｡ Re-read: 5 STARS 😭 ｡.｡:+*
The way the next book is no joke my most anticipated book of this year- I cannot wait to read it . These books will never fail to just stun me with how magical it feels to read them 🥹.
∘₊✧──────✧₊∘
*+:｡.｡ Re-read: ｡.｡:+*
I feel like a broken record with the way I'm just repeating myself with how much I love this world.
Like the first book, reading this one for the second time was actually amazing. I'm desperate for the third book and am reeling from how obsessed I am. It was soso good.
∘₊✧──────✧₊∘
I'll try not the ramble but I wanted to talk about my fav scene ever:
To give a little context, the characters lost their ability to speak during a challenge but were able to communicate telepathically for a short period of time.
They had no control over their thoughts, where the first thing that came to mind was projected onto their companions.
The things that Mara and Cyfrin thought about each other HAD ME ON THE FLOOR. The scene was just so perfectly funny yet romantic and was everything. They're so enthralled with one another it's not even funny:
Mara:
*The fact that everyone heard her think that 😭?!
Meanwhile Cyfrin:
The number of times that I've gone back to read this scene since I first read the book isn't healthy.
∘₊✧──────✧₊∘
Also, CHAPTER MF 26?!?!?
I'm not going to put a single quote from this chapter because you have to experience this for yourself, but just know it had me CLUTCHING the walls. Cyfrin had me feral 💀-
Also 💀 ch 36 and the bonus chapter-
These two chapters had me so emotional oml. It's the way these characters feel so real- these two chapters hurt 🥲. It had me looking like a mess.
Also 😭, it's the way that I feel like I'm some mastermind when I'm connecting the dots to the Lost Tombs of Zenafrost.
Ok, I'll leave it there 🗿.
*+:｡.｡ Quotes ｡.｡:+*
∘₊✧──────✧₊∘
*+:｡.｡ Original read: ｡.｡:+*
This was such a good sequel to the previous book 😭.
-=- 4.5 stars -=-
You genuinely don't understand how scared I was to start this, but I'm honestly so happy with how it turned out, and am overall in love with this series so far.
I felt like it was a great continuation of the last book, with equally thrilling scenes and some amazing imagery. However, the thing that I loved the most about this book had to be the development of Mara and Cyfrin's relationship:
It was so perfect 🥹. I'm so in love with them as a couple and genuinely can't wait to see how their relationship develops in the next book.
Also similarly to the last one, the found family vibes gave me life 😭. It's so special.
-=-
The only thing I wasn't really sold on about this book was the ending/ the way the last couple of chapters played out. I'm interested to see what happens in the next one though.
Anyways, this was a really solid book and imma be waiting on my knees for the next one (the fact that there's no release day haunts me 😔🔫).
｡･:*˚:✧｡
Song: The Prophecy, Taylor Swift
(This song was literally made for this book shut up 😭).
｡･:*˚:✧｡
The way the next book is no joke my most anticipated book of this year- I cannot wait to read it . These books will never fail to just stun me with how magical it feels to read them 🥹.
∘₊✧──────✧₊∘
*+:｡.｡ Re-read: ｡.｡:+*
I feel like a broken record with the way I'm just repeating myself with how much I love this world.
Like the first book, reading this one for the second time was actually amazing. I'm desperate for the third book and am reeling from how obsessed I am. It was soso good.
∘₊✧──────✧₊∘
I'll try not the ramble but I wanted to talk about my fav scene ever:
To give a little context, the characters lost their ability to speak during a challenge but were able to communicate telepathically for a short period of time.
They had no control over their thoughts, where the first thing that came to mind was projected onto their companions.
The things that Mara and Cyfrin thought about each other HAD ME ON THE FLOOR. The scene was just so perfectly funny yet romantic and was everything. They're so enthralled with one another it's not even funny:
Mara:
“Beyonds bless me, his voice. We’re about to be burned or eaten or Zenoths knows what, and all I can think of is how much I miss his voice.”
*The fact that everyone heard her think that 😭?!
Meanwhile Cyfrin:
“Her voice. Music. Like beautiful music, gracing my ears. Blessing me beyond what I deserve.”
The number of times that I've gone back to read this scene since I first read the book isn't healthy.
∘₊✧──────✧₊∘
Also, CHAPTER MF 26?!?!?
I'm not going to put a single quote from this chapter because you have to experience this for yourself, but just know it had me CLUTCHING the walls. Cyfrin had me feral 💀-
Also 💀 ch 36 and the bonus chapter-
These two chapters had me so emotional oml. It's the way these characters feel so real- these two chapters hurt 🥲. It had me looking like a mess.
Also 😭, it's the way that I feel like I'm some mastermind when I'm connecting the dots to the Lost Tombs of Zenafrost.
Ok, I'll leave it there 🗿.
*+:｡.｡ Quotes ｡.｡:+*
"Cyfrin nodded at her, the picture of sarcasm. “Of course, darling. And that’s why you’re positively glowing red at the thought, is it?” He drew a long finger down the side of her cheek."
“She laid there repeating the conversation in her head till she drifted into dreams filled with crystals, forests, and a man with lightning in his eyes.
“You surprise me, darling,” he murmured, heat pulsing in Mara’s core at the gentle purr under his tone. “I didn’t think you could be any more beautiful. And yet, here you are. Radiant and dazzling.”
“And though neither acknowledged it, though their comrades now bonded by magick ignored it as well, Mara and Cyfrin’s hands did not leave each other’s for the rest of their jubilant, long night.”
“Are you bothered, my darling Dawnbringer?”
“If only you could see yourself the way I see you, my Dawnbringer.”
“It had to be. No darkness could ever hope to stand against something as blindingly bright as you.”
“My beautiful Dawnbringer. You’ll be the ruin of me, you know.”
“You had me on my knees long before you accepted your crown, Dawnbringer.”
∘₊✧──────✧₊∘
*+:｡.｡ Original read: ｡.｡:+*
This was such a good sequel to the previous book 😭.
-=- 4.5 stars -=-
You genuinely don't understand how scared I was to start this, but I'm honestly so happy with how it turned out, and am overall in love with this series so far.
I felt like it was a great continuation of the last book, with equally thrilling scenes and some amazing imagery. However, the thing that I loved the most about this book had to be the development of Mara and Cyfrin's relationship:
"You're a bastard sometimes, Cyfrin."
"And you may be the most magnificent creature I have ever encountered, my dear Dawnbringer."
It was so perfect 🥹. I'm so in love with them as a couple and genuinely can't wait to see how their relationship develops in the next book.
Also similarly to the last one, the found family vibes gave me life 😭. It's so special.
-=-
The only thing I wasn't really sold on about this book was the ending/ the way the last couple of chapters played out. I'm interested to see what happens in the next one though.
Anyways, this was a really solid book and imma be waiting on my knees for the next one (the fact that there's no release day haunts me 😔🔫).
May 18, 2023
This ragtag group of warriors and their bond is one of my favorite things about this series. This is the 2nd book to Rise of the Dawnbringer. Mara is still finding her place in this new world, but she’s finally getting the sense of being where she belongs. I really liked Mara much better in this sequel. And Cyfrin! He’s just a big ole cinnamon roll. I just KNOW there is “something” more between the two of them. It keeps getting hinted at 👀. This one was a little slower than the first book, in my opinion and it took me a little to get into. This was like most second books, and didn’t move the plot forward too much, but there was definitely more character bonding and Mara coming into her powers a little more. I’m looking forward to the next installment. Thank you IA Takerian for sending me an arc for an honest review. These characters are so precious, and the monsters are gruesome!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 10, 2023
Rating: ⭐️⭐️💫
Overall: Unfortunately, this book was exactly what I feared it would be at the end of Rise of the Dawnbringer: Trials. The trials that began in the last book take up 80% of this book and I was not here for it. I enjoyed the first book, but at the end of my review I said, "I already felt this book had one too many fights with a beast, and I don't want to read a whole book about it". That is exactly what I got and the plot supporting all these fights wasn't even as strong as the first book.
This trials plot does not work for me for several reasons:
1) Having Mara do these trials is a bad strategy. These trials are deadly and Mara is the one from the prophecy, the only one who can stop the big bad. Yet, everyone is content with potentially letting her die by a random forest or sea monster. I cannot understand any reason they would let her do these. It would make much more sense for her to focus her efforts on stopping Mezilmoth or Grathiel than do this.
2) The tension is completely artificial. We know Mara is going to overcome whatever random beast she encounters. She's not going to die. Her friends are not going to die. There must be 8+ separate fights with random creatures and I skimmed every one. When she fights with someone like Adrian, there are stakes. I know she won't die, but I don't know what will happen with him or how the fight will change their relationship. I'm invested. When she encounters some random sprites, there is no investment. They will fight, she will be injured (but it won't matter or affect her really), the creature will be defeated and then the book moves on. As I said, this is the plot for 80% of the book and it is tiresome.
3) The trials change nothing. It does not appear as if completing the trials grants any extra powers - it's just a title. So after 80% of the book is completed, nothing is fundamentally different. Yes, through the trials she gained a bit of confidence and control with her powers. But this growth could have come during a much more meaningful adventure.
4) They make Mara seem overpowered. Again, one of my least favorite things about the last book is that Mara, a 21-year-old without true warrior training is better than warriors who have been training for hundreds of years because she "works hard." It's frustrating because feels unrealistic and makes her seem like many other special-snowflake YA heroines. Now, I will say in many ways she is only able to survive as much as she does because of the group. But still, there are lines like this: “We’re forcing hundreds of years of training down your throat in the course of just a few months", in the book I roll my eyes because of course she's able to do in months what it takes others to do in hundreds of years? That's very convenient for the plot.
Overall, this book felt like the author is trying to stretch a story into a long series, as is popular these days. I almost feel this book could be skipped in the series because so little plot is moved forward.
Which brings me to the romance. Now, I like Cyfrin and Mara's romance. I like that it is built on a strong basis of friendship and that Cyfrin, while protective, is not controlling. The first book only has hints of romance and I was very excited to see things play out in the book. But just like the plot was stretched out, it feels like the romance plot is being stretched. We get lots of longing glances and a few kisses, but that's about it. Cyfrin is holding back because of the guilt and pain he feels, which makes sense. But I wanted them to have at least one real conversation. The tension really isn't here for me, because they both love each other and they're just not talking about it. All that to say, their romance was my favorite part of the book. Maybe that's why I was disappointed, I wanted more than the snippets I got. I loved the mind-reading scenes, that was the best part of the book.
Speaking of stuff that does work in this book, I like how things with Adrian played out. As I mentioned, the Adrian plotline had real stakes and real tension. I won't spoil what happens, but it's very meaningful and emotional.
The book ends with the gang set to go after a mysteriousMacGuffin item. I am disappointed by this plotline because again it feels like stretching. This mysterious item that has never been mentioned before is now all important and needs to be their priority. I feel like the book needs to address either Mezilmoth or Grathiel next, not more random monsters. I could be wrong, this could play out differently, but I'm worried.
This appears to be a new-ish author. She is a great writer, but I feel she needs to push herself in this next book. The things that make these stories interesting are the interpersonal dramas and political stakes at play. When Mara finally confronts Grathiel that should be very exciting. But, at least for me, these side quests mixed in with monster attacks that change nothing are just not engaging and that's the majority of the first two books. I am not interested in reading another book in this series if it is going to be similar. But if we can get Mara back to her old court and kick butt. See her start to grow into a leader. See if she can set aside her mistreatment to convince her old kingdom that the King is corrupt. Now those are interesting stories that can really show Mara's growth.
Overall: Unfortunately, this book was exactly what I feared it would be at the end of Rise of the Dawnbringer: Trials. The trials that began in the last book take up 80% of this book and I was not here for it. I enjoyed the first book, but at the end of my review I said, "I already felt this book had one too many fights with a beast, and I don't want to read a whole book about it". That is exactly what I got and the plot supporting all these fights wasn't even as strong as the first book.
This trials plot does not work for me for several reasons:
1) Having Mara do these trials is a bad strategy. These trials are deadly and Mara is the one from the prophecy, the only one who can stop the big bad. Yet, everyone is content with potentially letting her die by a random forest or sea monster. I cannot understand any reason they would let her do these. It would make much more sense for her to focus her efforts on stopping Mezilmoth or Grathiel than do this.
2) The tension is completely artificial. We know Mara is going to overcome whatever random beast she encounters. She's not going to die. Her friends are not going to die. There must be 8+ separate fights with random creatures and I skimmed every one. When she fights with someone like Adrian, there are stakes. I know she won't die, but I don't know what will happen with him or how the fight will change their relationship. I'm invested. When she encounters some random sprites, there is no investment. They will fight, she will be injured (but it won't matter or affect her really), the creature will be defeated and then the book moves on. As I said, this is the plot for 80% of the book and it is tiresome.
3) The trials change nothing. It does not appear as if completing the trials grants any extra powers - it's just a title. So after 80% of the book is completed, nothing is fundamentally different. Yes, through the trials she gained a bit of confidence and control with her powers. But this growth could have come during a much more meaningful adventure.
4) They make Mara seem overpowered. Again, one of my least favorite things about the last book is that Mara, a 21-year-old without true warrior training is better than warriors who have been training for hundreds of years because she "works hard." It's frustrating because feels unrealistic and makes her seem like many other special-snowflake YA heroines. Now, I will say in many ways she is only able to survive as much as she does because of the group. But still, there are lines like this: “We’re forcing hundreds of years of training down your throat in the course of just a few months", in the book I roll my eyes because of course she's able to do in months what it takes others to do in hundreds of years? That's very convenient for the plot.
Overall, this book felt like the author is trying to stretch a story into a long series, as is popular these days. I almost feel this book could be skipped in the series because so little plot is moved forward.
Which brings me to the romance. Now, I like Cyfrin and Mara's romance. I like that it is built on a strong basis of friendship and that Cyfrin, while protective, is not controlling. The first book only has hints of romance and I was very excited to see things play out in the book. But just like the plot was stretched out, it feels like the romance plot is being stretched. We get lots of longing glances and a few kisses, but that's about it. Cyfrin is holding back because of the guilt and pain he feels, which makes sense. But I wanted them to have at least one real conversation. The tension really isn't here for me, because they both love each other and they're just not talking about it. All that to say, their romance was my favorite part of the book. Maybe that's why I was disappointed, I wanted more than the snippets I got. I loved the mind-reading scenes, that was the best part of the book.
Speaking of stuff that does work in this book, I like how things with Adrian played out. As I mentioned, the Adrian plotline had real stakes and real tension. I won't spoil what happens, but it's very meaningful and emotional.
The book ends with the gang set to go after a mysterious
This appears to be a new-ish author. She is a great writer, but I feel she needs to push herself in this next book. The things that make these stories interesting are the interpersonal dramas and political stakes at play. When Mara finally confronts Grathiel that should be very exciting. But, at least for me, these side quests mixed in with monster attacks that change nothing are just not engaging and that's the majority of the first two books. I am not interested in reading another book in this series if it is going to be similar. But if we can get Mara back to her old court and kick butt. See her start to grow into a leader. See if she can set aside her mistreatment to convince her old kingdom that the King is corrupt. Now those are interesting stories that can really show Mara's growth.
August 3, 2023
Adrian's chapter made me cry like a little baby. 😭
June 9, 2023
Let’s start with the end shall we?!
••The bonus chapter broke me, literally sobbed my entire soul out even tho I didn’t have a connection with that character whatsoever.
••Love that Mara is finally discovering herself, I’m sooo excited to see her in the next book! Hope she has more character development!
••THE WAR PARTY ❤️❤️❤️😍😍 my entire being, my entire heart, my entire soul, my entire all and everything is theirs!!! They’re the family we all wish we had. They’re supportive, funny, loyal.. they’re everything and while reading this book I really felt apart of they’re family, cause that’s what they are! 😭🥹
••CYFRIN U BITCH 😭😭❤️❤️❤️ AHHHHHHHHGG !! I felt like screaming every time he appeared, and that was all of the entirety of the book lol! I don’t think I have words tbh. If u Guys ask me to describe him I will probably just scream and melt 🤭🫠🫠😩
•• I do have a theory about cyfrin and Mara and I’m soooo hoping the author confirms it in the next book!
I’m beyond excited for the next book! This series is truly amazing 🤩
••The bonus chapter broke me, literally sobbed my entire soul out even tho I didn’t have a connection with that character whatsoever.
••Love that Mara is finally discovering herself, I’m sooo excited to see her in the next book! Hope she has more character development!
••THE WAR PARTY ❤️❤️❤️😍😍 my entire being, my entire heart, my entire soul, my entire all and everything is theirs!!! They’re the family we all wish we had. They’re supportive, funny, loyal.. they’re everything and while reading this book I really felt apart of they’re family, cause that’s what they are! 😭🥹
••CYFRIN U BITCH 😭😭❤️❤️❤️ AHHHHHHHHGG !! I felt like screaming every time he appeared, and that was all of the entirety of the book lol! I don’t think I have words tbh. If u Guys ask me to describe him I will probably just scream and melt 🤭🫠🫠😩
•• I do have a theory about cyfrin and Mara and I’m soooo hoping the author confirms it in the next book!
I’m beyond excited for the next book! This series is truly amazing 🤩
July 23, 2025
The easiest five stars I've given.
First of all, thank you so much I.A. Takerian for giving me an early access to Prophecy Of Undone by gifting me its ARC. I've been blessed, so much, much love.
Second of all, i have no idea where to start.
12 hours later after finishing and I'm still baffled... because IT WAS SO, SO GOOD!
Following up my review to the first book i think it's safe to say that high fantasy ROCKS! (In the right hands that is) and Isabeau has that magic in her lovely fingers.
Such a big universe written in mesmerizing descriptions words won't do it any justice, rich tomes filled with so much history and more legends, incredible magic attached to unique individuals leading to grand adventures whether on land or sea, up above or down below.
That's what will be waiting for you if you give these books a chance... you won't regret it.
*** Don't read this part unless you've read Rise Of The Dawnbringer (no spoilers for the rest tho) ***
So, Prophecy Of Undone follows up Mara in finishing her trials after the end of the first book. She's not the same girl she's been, and she works to show that to herself and to her companions. Speaking of companions, the War Party as annoyingly hilarious as ever, are STILL annoyingly hilarious as we gotten to know them, that aside they're also still surrounding Mara in her quest, and with her needs, but with much more bonding than before.
Children, smh...
***
It's only fair to say that this series so far is a masterpiece, especially concidering the artwork at the beginning of every chapter! Those were very beautiful.
I thought the story unfolded quite nicely, the beginning was set in a slow pace and then it started to move faster as the story went on, I'm not sure but I'd like to think that some stories set their own pace, and this one was no different from them.
I've also felt the exact same way as i felt with the first book.
I've giggled like a schoolgirl, laughed, blushed, cried (ACTUALLY cried which is rare), yelled, punshed the wall, threw my pillow away, screamed in my pillow before throwing it away, dropped my phone, danced like a dumbo, I'm also pretty sure all the people who saw me in the station yesterday smiling like an idiot while reading it think I'm crazy.
I also loved how much of a balance there was between the pack of action/adventure and the romance with Cyfrin... and i ABSOFRUITLY loved how much Cyfrin we've had.
There was also fairly A GOOD AMOUNT of blood shedding going on, a lot of swords slaying and magick killing, lots of hunting and running, monsters of all shapes and sizes, all kinds of powers and elements...
Lots of Cyfrin 🤧 i keep coming back to Cyf... why is he the way that he is? I think Cyfrin was the most surprising to me in this book because suddenly he was everywhere! (and I'm not complaining 🤧), why is he so perfect it hurts my heart? The angst, the teasing, the taunting, the slooooooW burn, the vulnerability... you guys it's SO WORTH IT.
I love him.
And everytime they're together the other trio goes:
And I'm REAAADY to have more of this world in the future, and where will Mara's next adventure lead her and what new monsters to encounter!!!
***spoilers***
This story is story of acceptance and hope, it's about the lot and the individual, and it was fun seeing Yvaine's acceptance to her position by the end of it, to be the new hope for the lot.
...
And I'm still waiting for that speech Yvaine aka Isabeau, with everything that happened you'd think I've forgotten, but girl you NEED TO TALK SOME SENSE INTO CYFRIN! Please, his vulnerability killed me in the lake scene.. where the good stuff were happening 👁👄👁.
...
Also, that surprising Cyf POV? When i tell you my heart stopped beating? Imma pray every night to have more of that. Thank you O'lord for this blessing.
That's about it i guess, till the next book!
first time reading: 26.04.2023
second time reading: 23.07.2025
First of all, thank you so much I.A. Takerian for giving me an early access to Prophecy Of Undone by gifting me its ARC. I've been blessed, so much, much love.
Second of all, i have no idea where to start.
12 hours later after finishing and I'm still baffled... because IT WAS SO, SO GOOD!
Following up my review to the first book i think it's safe to say that high fantasy ROCKS! (In the right hands that is) and Isabeau has that magic in her lovely fingers.
Such a big universe written in mesmerizing descriptions words won't do it any justice, rich tomes filled with so much history and more legends, incredible magic attached to unique individuals leading to grand adventures whether on land or sea, up above or down below.
That's what will be waiting for you if you give these books a chance... you won't regret it.
*** Don't read this part unless you've read Rise Of The Dawnbringer (no spoilers for the rest tho) ***
So, Prophecy Of Undone follows up Mara in finishing her trials after the end of the first book. She's not the same girl she's been, and she works to show that to herself and to her companions. Speaking of companions, the War Party as annoyingly hilarious as ever, are STILL annoyingly hilarious as we gotten to know them, that aside they're also still surrounding Mara in her quest, and with her needs, but with much more bonding than before.
...Bulabores.” Kain paused, turning to Mara with a serious look. “Bulabores are nasty little bastards. Ten feet tall- “
“Six, at most,” Cyfrin interrupted, eyes glinting over the rim of his tankard.
Kain scoffed before continuing. “As I was saying. Ten feet tall...
Children, smh...
***
It's only fair to say that this series so far is a masterpiece, especially concidering the artwork at the beginning of every chapter! Those were very beautiful.
I thought the story unfolded quite nicely, the beginning was set in a slow pace and then it started to move faster as the story went on, I'm not sure but I'd like to think that some stories set their own pace, and this one was no different from them.
I've also felt the exact same way as i felt with the first book.
I've giggled like a schoolgirl, laughed, blushed, cried (ACTUALLY cried which is rare), yelled, punshed the wall, threw my pillow away, screamed in my pillow before throwing it away, dropped my phone, danced like a dumbo, I'm also pretty sure all the people who saw me in the station yesterday smiling like an idiot while reading it think I'm crazy.
I also loved how much of a balance there was between the pack of action/adventure and the romance with Cyfrin... and i ABSOFRUITLY loved how much Cyfrin we've had.
There was also fairly A GOOD AMOUNT of blood shedding going on, a lot of swords slaying and magick killing, lots of hunting and running, monsters of all shapes and sizes, all kinds of powers and elements...
Lots of Cyfrin 🤧 i keep coming back to Cyf... why is he the way that he is? I think Cyfrin was the most surprising to me in this book because suddenly he was everywhere! (and I'm not complaining 🤧), why is he so perfect it hurts my heart? The angst, the teasing, the taunting, the slooooooW burn, the vulnerability... you guys it's SO WORTH IT.
I love him.
He stood slowly from the floor. He took a step forward, staring down into her red face with a look that could have thawed the Frost Falls. “You’re a bastard sometimes, Cyfrin.”
“And you may be the most magnificent creature I have ever encountered, my dear Dawnbringer.”
And everytime they're together the other trio goes:
El, Kain, and Milios became very interested in the weapons rack a few yards away from them, loudly beginning to organize it.
And I'm REAAADY to have more of this world in the future, and where will Mara's next adventure lead her and what new monsters to encounter!!!
***spoilers***
...
...
That's about it i guess, till the next book!
first time reading: 26.04.2023
second time reading: 23.07.2025
May 13, 2025
I'm screaming. I'm sobbing. Oh my gosh—I cannot believe that ending. I haven’t felt this destroyed by a book in a long time.
Okay—drying my tears now...
This book was absolutely phenomenal—if the emotional damage isn't proof enough. I was so deeply connected to the characters that their struggles, their heartbreaks, and their triumphs felt like my own. Takerian has a gift for crafting raw, authentic emotions that leap off the page and settle into your soul.
The balance in this book was perfection: character growth that felt real and earned, plot progression that kept me hooked with every twist, and world-building that was immersive without ever being overwhelming. Every detail added richness to the story without taking away from the emotional core.
This author deserves so much more recognition. If you're a fan of emotionally intense fantasy with unforgettable characters and a story that lingers long after the final page, do yourself a favor and read this book. Now I just need to recover from this book hangover.
Okay—drying my tears now...
This book was absolutely phenomenal—if the emotional damage isn't proof enough. I was so deeply connected to the characters that their struggles, their heartbreaks, and their triumphs felt like my own. Takerian has a gift for crafting raw, authentic emotions that leap off the page and settle into your soul.
The balance in this book was perfection: character growth that felt real and earned, plot progression that kept me hooked with every twist, and world-building that was immersive without ever being overwhelming. Every detail added richness to the story without taking away from the emotional core.
This author deserves so much more recognition. If you're a fan of emotionally intense fantasy with unforgettable characters and a story that lingers long after the final page, do yourself a favor and read this book. Now I just need to recover from this book hangover.
August 27, 2023
already can’t wait to reread!
I love this series and can’t wait to reread it! I love the story, the action amazing. I could imagine everything so well. Beautifully written.
I love this series and can’t wait to reread it! I love the story, the action amazing. I could imagine everything so well. Beautifully written.
June 25, 2023
This was a great second instalment to the series.
The author is at her best writing action scenes with unbelievable monsters!
I felt like the writing was a lot tighter compared to book one (in which I found a few little errors took me out of the story - but not in this one!)
I did find the pacing felt a bit slower & I wasn’t reaching to pick it up & read. Once I did though I throughly enjoyed it.
I found from 50-75% that while the action was really great I wasn’t learning anything new in regards to the plot which made it drag a little.
But the last 25% really picked up & I speed through the ending.
There was one chapter at the end that was repeated 3 times with 3 different POV’s - & while I liked seeing it from the different perspectives it felt odd rereading the same chapter done this way.
I love, LOVE the found family (SO GOOD!) & the fmc’s growth in this book.
The slow burn is delicious & there are SO many hints of what these two could possibly mean to each other that I can’t wait to get answers!!
Overall an enjoyable NA fantasy read that fulfils the epic adventure itch if that’s what your in the mood for!
The author is at her best writing action scenes with unbelievable monsters!
I felt like the writing was a lot tighter compared to book one (in which I found a few little errors took me out of the story - but not in this one!)
I did find the pacing felt a bit slower & I wasn’t reaching to pick it up & read. Once I did though I throughly enjoyed it.
I found from 50-75% that while the action was really great I wasn’t learning anything new in regards to the plot which made it drag a little.
But the last 25% really picked up & I speed through the ending.
There was one chapter at the end that was repeated 3 times with 3 different POV’s - & while I liked seeing it from the different perspectives it felt odd rereading the same chapter done this way.
I love, LOVE the found family (SO GOOD!) & the fmc’s growth in this book.
The slow burn is delicious & there are SO many hints of what these two could possibly mean to each other that I can’t wait to get answers!!
Overall an enjoyable NA fantasy read that fulfils the epic adventure itch if that’s what your in the mood for!
June 16, 2023
I am so upset.
The first book in this series had me on my knees, but this sequel was a far cry from what I loved so much about the premiere novel.
I don't know what happened, but the characters seemed to devolve into vastly more immature versions of their book-one-selves. The dialogue sometimes felt juvenile and cheesy, and I thought the friend group dynamics seemed overly contrived. This made me so sad, especially considering that one of the things I adored so much about the previous book was the wonderful characterization.
The romance totally lost its spark for me, which was also deeply disappointing. The back-and-forth between Mara and Cyfrin became to feel super repetitive. They both make it blatantly clear that they're interested in each other and yet don't allow themselves to act on their feelings for no real reason. It felt silly. And annoying. Also, the shit that came out of Cyfrins mouth during this book... was horrendous. The cheesy one-liners he tossed around were sometimes difficult to read and totally cringe-inducing. It seemed like a complete 180 from his character in the previous novel, and I had a hard time reconciling the abrupt shift in his personality.
I'm so sad about all of this because the first book was one of the very few five-star reads that I've had this year. I'll probably attempt book three, just for that reason, but I don't have high expectations, considering how this turned out.
The first book in this series had me on my knees, but this sequel was a far cry from what I loved so much about the premiere novel.
I don't know what happened, but the characters seemed to devolve into vastly more immature versions of their book-one-selves. The dialogue sometimes felt juvenile and cheesy, and I thought the friend group dynamics seemed overly contrived. This made me so sad, especially considering that one of the things I adored so much about the previous book was the wonderful characterization.
The romance totally lost its spark for me, which was also deeply disappointing. The back-and-forth between Mara and Cyfrin became to feel super repetitive. They both make it blatantly clear that they're interested in each other and yet don't allow themselves to act on their feelings for no real reason. It felt silly. And annoying. Also, the shit that came out of Cyfrins mouth during this book... was horrendous. The cheesy one-liners he tossed around were sometimes difficult to read and totally cringe-inducing. It seemed like a complete 180 from his character in the previous novel, and I had a hard time reconciling the abrupt shift in his personality.
I'm so sad about all of this because the first book was one of the very few five-star reads that I've had this year. I'll probably attempt book three, just for that reason, but I don't have high expectations, considering how this turned out.
June 7, 2023
Minor spoilers… maybe?
I wish I enjoyed this book more… I adored the first one, but this one, not as much. The story was still good, but there were a lot of “little things” that added up to annoy me. There were a number of typos that were distracting, and some repetitive terms used that just grated on me for some reason - like the use of the word “curls” every single time Mara’s hair was referenced. I kept waiting for something more to happen between Cyfrin and Mara but it was like one step forward, one step back with them for the entire book. I like a slow burn, but this was a little too slow. I still loved the found family dynamic and appreciated Mara’s development, but then the end felt a little rushed. Add in Mara’s abrupt “I can now be queen and defeat the darkness when just yesterday I still felt useless because I couldn’t use my magic on my own” attitude change + abrupt name change. I don’t know… there was just a lot that didn’t work for me.
I wish I enjoyed this book more… I adored the first one, but this one, not as much. The story was still good, but there were a lot of “little things” that added up to annoy me. There were a number of typos that were distracting, and some repetitive terms used that just grated on me for some reason - like the use of the word “curls” every single time Mara’s hair was referenced. I kept waiting for something more to happen between Cyfrin and Mara but it was like one step forward, one step back with them for the entire book. I like a slow burn, but this was a little too slow. I still loved the found family dynamic and appreciated Mara’s development, but then the end felt a little rushed. Add in Mara’s abrupt “I can now be queen and defeat the darkness when just yesterday I still felt useless because I couldn’t use my magic on my own” attitude change + abrupt name change. I don’t know… there was just a lot that didn’t work for me.
June 6, 2023
i’m crying. that ending was devastating but beautiful at the same time! definitely my favorite book that i’ve read this year so far. I would do anything to get my hands on the third book right now!!
February 13, 2024
3.5 because ONE specific scene had me SOBBING (see below)
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
S P O I L E R S
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
I can sum this book up in five parts:
1. Mara and Cyfrain’s “will they, won’t they”, which didn’t need to drag on but it was still hella enjoyable, I love them! It’s so OBVIOUS that they’re the equivalent of mates, I just wanna shake them!
2. Mara constantly stuck in visions, I swear this happened nearly every chapter where she got sucked into visions of her past or cruel hallucinations
3. “A mighty boom”, “an earth shattering boom”, “a resounding boom”…. Just boom. Lots of boom. Someone’s having too much fun in the background.
4. trials which didn’t really add to the plot but did add a lot of action. If we cut the trials, all scenes, I don’t think the plot would be affected much.
5. Mara’s magick being able to cure anything with little explanation on how celestial magick works. Idk that’s just how it works.
This book, while enjoyable and fast-paced, did suffer from second book syndrome. There were no stakes, no plan to stop the gate or the antagonists, and no movement of character motivations besides Mara’s (I think). So far, the side character motivations remain “protect Mara” for the good side and “be evil”? For the bad side? I think? I need a refresher on the king’s motivations, that’s my bad.
Kain, El, Milios, Caerani, Drake, and Cyfrin remain entertaining and fun as they become closer and form a brotherhood that links them as family. Mara finally got the family she wanted!
Now if only that family included ADRIAN.
How dare you.
That man had very few scenes in the two books but his death!??!?! Had me SOBBING. I was doing ok until Cyfrin understood that he could relate to Adrian because he too would do anything to save the love of his life (aka Mara) and then Cyfrin actually comforted Adrian. And Adrian understood and asked Cyfrin to keep Mara safe before Cyfrin stopped his heart! This scene could’ve been easily a classic trope where one love interest is glad that the other is dead BUT NOT HERE OH BOY. And it seems like Adrian’s not done yet either hehehe.
Beside the aforementioned scene, I do wish there was more plotting and scheming to defeat the bad guy but I am also not opposed to the next book being over 600 pages 🫶 as long as we can understand the villains and get a war started.
please let this be a trilogy, I love trilogies
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
S P O I L E R S
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
I can sum this book up in five parts:
1. Mara and Cyfrain’s “will they, won’t they”, which didn’t need to drag on but it was still hella enjoyable, I love them! It’s so OBVIOUS that they’re the equivalent of mates, I just wanna shake them!
2. Mara constantly stuck in visions, I swear this happened nearly every chapter where she got sucked into visions of her past or cruel hallucinations
3. “A mighty boom”, “an earth shattering boom”, “a resounding boom”…. Just boom. Lots of boom. Someone’s having too much fun in the background.
4. trials which didn’t really add to the plot but did add a lot of action. If we cut the trials, all scenes, I don’t think the plot would be affected much.
5. Mara’s magick being able to cure anything with little explanation on how celestial magick works. Idk that’s just how it works.
This book, while enjoyable and fast-paced, did suffer from second book syndrome. There were no stakes, no plan to stop the gate or the antagonists, and no movement of character motivations besides Mara’s (I think). So far, the side character motivations remain “protect Mara” for the good side and “be evil”? For the bad side? I think? I need a refresher on the king’s motivations, that’s my bad.
Kain, El, Milios, Caerani, Drake, and Cyfrin remain entertaining and fun as they become closer and form a brotherhood that links them as family. Mara finally got the family she wanted!
Now if only that family included ADRIAN.
How dare you.
That man had very few scenes in the two books but his death!??!?! Had me SOBBING. I was doing ok until Cyfrin understood that he could relate to Adrian because he too would do anything to save the love of his life (aka Mara) and then Cyfrin actually comforted Adrian. And Adrian understood and asked Cyfrin to keep Mara safe before Cyfrin stopped his heart! This scene could’ve been easily a classic trope where one love interest is glad that the other is dead BUT NOT HERE OH BOY. And it seems like Adrian’s not done yet either hehehe.
Beside the aforementioned scene, I do wish there was more plotting and scheming to defeat the bad guy but I am also not opposed to the next book being over 600 pages 🫶 as long as we can understand the villains and get a war started.
please let this be a trilogy, I love trilogies
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 12, 2023
4.5 i love you Cyfrin!!!!!!!!! ULTIMATE FANTASY BOOK BF 😭🫶🏻 im about to start scribing “i 🤍 cyfrin” on all my planners.. and the bonus chapter?!
July 15, 2023
4⭐️
I really loved the second instalment of the Bornbane Series 🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼 once again, this series appears to be plot forward with a side of romance however we did get way WAY more romance in this book versus the first one. Some of the things Cyfrin was saying had be giggling like he was saying them TO ME? 🤪🫶🏼🩷🥰
The storyline for this book was super interesting and kept me hooked with the trials, the ship, the island and monsters. 🪐🌊⚡️🐙🗡️⚓️ The found family aspect was so sweet and I LOVE their bond and friendship. Queen Mara 4EVER!!!!! Long live the Dawnbringer!
“Nothing matters but you. What’s best for you and your happiness. I am but a broken man. The pieces of my blackened heart laid rest their hollow dreams long ago. And you, my beautiful Dawnbringer. Light, and stars. Being from the Beyond’s themselves. You deserve nothing but wholeness in the love given to you. Fierce passion and fiery grip.” ❤️🔥
I really loved the second instalment of the Bornbane Series 🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼 once again, this series appears to be plot forward with a side of romance however we did get way WAY more romance in this book versus the first one. Some of the things Cyfrin was saying had be giggling like he was saying them TO ME? 🤪🫶🏼🩷🥰
The storyline for this book was super interesting and kept me hooked with the trials, the ship, the island and monsters. 🪐🌊⚡️🐙🗡️⚓️ The found family aspect was so sweet and I LOVE their bond and friendship. Queen Mara 4EVER!!!!! Long live the Dawnbringer!
“Nothing matters but you. What’s best for you and your happiness. I am but a broken man. The pieces of my blackened heart laid rest their hollow dreams long ago. And you, my beautiful Dawnbringer. Light, and stars. Being from the Beyond’s themselves. You deserve nothing but wholeness in the love given to you. Fierce passion and fiery grip.” ❤️🔥
July 19, 2023
3☆. spoilers ahead.
All I really have to say about this book is that I.A. Takerian is a good author, but A Prophecy of Undone lacked the proper focus. I knew we were mostly going to be clogged up with the Trials in this book, and I really was not looking forward to it because I wanted to dig into Mezilmoth and how his darkness was ravaging the world. Instead, this book was a lot of sitting around and waiting for Mara (Yvaine now, I suppose) to complete the Trials. Most of it didn't feel important to me because it was, essentially, filler; the plot of the Trials didn't make sense to begin with when there are so many other things going on that need the attention, for one. For two, when you compare it to the conflict with Adrian at the end--where you actually get to see why the darkness is so crucial to fight and destroy--it makes you wonder why you flipped these pages for so long when the real story was literally waiting on the characters' doorstep.
Not only that, but the romance in this irritated me to no end; both the plot and the romance are good in theory, but the more it's pushed off to extend the series, the less interested I will be. And A Prophecy of Undone was already pushing the boundary for me. Give Yvaine and Cyfrin a rocky love story; let them be a slow-burn; give Cyfrin a realistic reason for not being with her--but do don't string me along for nearly 400 pages of poor development. Angst I can handle, but brief acknowledgments of their feelings on one page and several pages of no acknowledgement at all? Not to mention barely any meaningful scenes between our love interests? Get that away from me. I did enjoy Adrian's story (and I guess where it's going, too, though the idea of him being used by Mezilmoth or whatever is something that needs to be done well), and I still love this world as whole, but this book felt like it contributed next to nothing. Because that's exactly what it did. I'm not super excited for the next pieces of the plot this series has to offer, though if it takes them to Ax or something else that has to do with Mezilmoth, I'll be happier than I was this go 'round. I guess we'll have to wait and see.
June 2, 2023
I finished this way too fast…. 🫠 this was such a fun read! It had only been a few days since I finished book 1, but I was already missing this group of rag tag misfits and how deeply they care for one another. I love this little found family so much. The way they took Mara in and gave her a sense of belonging was so sweet to witness. El healing Mara’s ears? The war party bonding? My heart cannot handle it.
This book follows Mara as she trains to complete the trials to become an odelian warrior. We see her continue to grow in confidence, her magic abilities, and toward the end we watch as she takes her rightful place as leader of the odelians. I loved Mara so much more in this book! She has moved past the pity party she was throwing for herself in book 1. She’s MAD. And ready to get justice for her kingdom, her parents, and let’s be honest…. Cyfrin. She’s a puddle on the floor for that guy.
Mara and Cyfrin. 🫶🏻 the slowest of slow burns in the history of the universe. 🐌 but I don’t mind one bit. Their chemistry & banter are impeccable. And their relationship progresses so naturally. They started as enemies (at least to mara), slowly gained trust as friends, and now they are full blown in their FEELINGS. The lake scene???? Are you kidding. I’m gonna need to reread that one a couple times. 😮💨🤌🏻 I’m hoping Cyfrin gets off his brooding/self loathing high horse and comes to his senses in the next book. And I KNOW there is something more between them…… soulmates anyone?
The pacing felt natural, the fight scenes were action packed, and the magick continues to get more and more complex. I cannot wait for the next one!
This book follows Mara as she trains to complete the trials to become an odelian warrior. We see her continue to grow in confidence, her magic abilities, and toward the end we watch as she takes her rightful place as leader of the odelians. I loved Mara so much more in this book! She has moved past the pity party she was throwing for herself in book 1. She’s MAD. And ready to get justice for her kingdom, her parents, and let’s be honest…. Cyfrin. She’s a puddle on the floor for that guy.
Mara and Cyfrin. 🫶🏻 the slowest of slow burns in the history of the universe. 🐌 but I don’t mind one bit. Their chemistry & banter are impeccable. And their relationship progresses so naturally. They started as enemies (at least to mara), slowly gained trust as friends, and now they are full blown in their FEELINGS. The lake scene???? Are you kidding. I’m gonna need to reread that one a couple times. 😮💨🤌🏻 I’m hoping Cyfrin gets off his brooding/self loathing high horse and comes to his senses in the next book. And I KNOW there is something more between them…… soulmates anyone?
The pacing felt natural, the fight scenes were action packed, and the magick continues to get more and more complex. I cannot wait for the next one!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 22, 2023
How am I to live now until book 3 comes out? This is pure agony, I tell you 🥺 This series is pure perfection, and 5 stars doesn't seem just, infinity is more like it 🌟
This is the second installment and it is packed with action and emotions, so many of them. I have cried, I have laughed, I have gone through every emotion imaginable.
War party is the family we all need in our lives, pure friendship with lots of banter and laughs.
And Cyfrin, no words for this man. The burn is slow, and we have to wait for book 3 to see it all happen, but the angst, emotion, and love between the two main characters are palpable.
Now we wait and wait... Book 3 cannot come soon enough 🥺
This is the second installment and it is packed with action and emotions, so many of them. I have cried, I have laughed, I have gone through every emotion imaginable.
War party is the family we all need in our lives, pure friendship with lots of banter and laughs.
And Cyfrin, no words for this man. The burn is slow, and we have to wait for book 3 to see it all happen, but the angst, emotion, and love between the two main characters are palpable.
Now we wait and wait... Book 3 cannot come soon enough 🥺
September 22, 2023
♾😭😭my heart cannot take this much pain. that ending will always be seared into my brain because whyyy?? And where is book 3!!!?!
this series has grown on me and left me utterly devastated. this is what fantasy is yall.
this series has grown on me and left me utterly devastated. this is what fantasy is yall.
July 7, 2023
So so so good!!!! I read it in 1 day! The slow burn, the fantasy, the tension between Cyfrin and Mara. I cannot wait for the 3rd book to come out. HIGHLY RECOMMEND!!
February 14, 2024
Fit to says that this book was a good second instalment in the series.
The action and pace with that are right on point. You can feel when the stakes are getting higher and when some parts need to be slower.
The trials and all the monsters were really crazy, and the author did a good job describing each of them, making it much easier and more fun to read and imagine. But the trials took up almost the whole book, which I didn't like. It didn't make sense in terms of the plot and Mara's fate. I understand why it was added, partly to be able to show that she's capable of anything for her people, but these trials are deadly and she has a far more important mission to do than risk her life. The real action and important stakes were at the end of the book, there it was captivating and did in fact brings emotions and sense to the plot.
The trials were a nice touch and now that it's over, I can't wait to see the denouement in the third book and the real action that's coming.
With all the intense moments, I did enjoy reading Mara's evolution in this book, feeling where she belongs and validating herself, thanks to her squad and especially Cyffrin (gosh, I want more of them).
Addition note, for my moral support, the last chapter absolutely destroyed me.
The action and pace with that are right on point. You can feel when the stakes are getting higher and when some parts need to be slower.
The trials and all the monsters were really crazy, and the author did a good job describing each of them, making it much easier and more fun to read and imagine. But the trials took up almost the whole book, which I didn't like. It didn't make sense in terms of the plot and Mara's fate. I understand why it was added, partly to be able to show that she's capable of anything for her people, but these trials are deadly and she has a far more important mission to do than risk her life. The real action and important stakes were at the end of the book, there it was captivating and did in fact brings emotions and sense to the plot.
The trials were a nice touch and now that it's over, I can't wait to see the denouement in the third book and the real action that's coming.
With all the intense moments, I did enjoy reading Mara's evolution in this book, feeling where she belongs and validating herself, thanks to her squad and especially Cyffrin (gosh, I want more of them).
Addition note, for my moral support, the last chapter absolutely destroyed me.
January 12, 2024
This didn't really move the plot forward a whole lot, but the character development more than made up for it. I liked Mara a lot more in this book than in book 1, and her connections with her found family was the highlight of the book.
I did find some things moved maybe a bit too quickly or were glossed over, given what the timeline is. I want more with Mara and Cyfrin. Adrian's chapters were heartbreaking and I wish we got a bit more time with him.
Looking forward to what book 3 has in store!
I did find some things moved maybe a bit too quickly or were glossed over, given what the timeline is. I want more with Mara and Cyfrin. Adrian's chapters were heartbreaking and I wish we got a bit more time with him.
Looking forward to what book 3 has in store!
December 5, 2023
3.5 technically. Ok I actually really like the plot- the action is really enticingly written and the character relationships give guardians of the galaxies vibes. The writing does fall slightly short overall with the grandiose moments and some cheesy borderline cringy aspects. Also the sudden name change doesn’t work notes need to be taken from Sarah j mass. But I enjoyed it and would gladly read the 3rd:)
May 23, 2024
Loved this one too! Lots of development for the FMC that deals with a lot of self doubt/fear of facing herself which is super relatable lol. Really sweet, beautiful developments of friendship and belonging. More trials/competitions which is always fun and a LOT OF MONSTERS AGAIN (fun if you're into it). The lil romance story line heats up a bit, but is basically just a few lil delicious crumbs.
July 4, 2023
the only blonde man propaganda i will accept
Displaying 1 - 30 of 185 reviews