“Charm presupposes some sort of vivacity and spark, at least what one might call some gesture of advance towards life…”
I’ve never visited England’s Northern Fells, (even though I would very much like to), but I dare say that Mary Stewart’s opening pages transported me to as close as one could get without actually being there:
“I might have been alone on a painted landscape…
The sky was still and blue, and the high cauliflower clouds over towards the south seemed to hang without movement. Against their curled bases the fells curved and folded, blue foothills of the Pennines giving way to the misty green of the pasture, where, small in the distance as hedge-parsley, trees showed in the folded valleys, symbols, perhaps, of houses and farms. But in all that windless, wide landscape, I could see no sign of man’s hand, except the lines – as old as the ridge and furrow of the pasture below me – of the dry-stone walls, and the arrogant stride of the great Wall which Hadrian had driven across Northumberland, nearly two thousand years ago.
The blocks of the Roman-cut stone were warm against my back. Where I sat, the Wall ran high along the ridge. To the right, the cliff fell sheer away to water, the long reach of Crag Lough, now quiet as glass in the sun. To the left, the sweeping, magnificent view to the Pennines. Ahead of me, ridge after ridge, running west, with the Wall cresting each curve like a stallion’s mane.
There was a sycamore in the gully just below me. Some stray current of air rustled its leaves, momentarily, with a sound like rain. Two lambs, their mother astray somewhere not far away, were sleeping closely cuddled together, in the warm sunshine. They had watched me for a time, but I sat there without moving, and after awhile the two heads went down again to the warm grass, and they slept.
I sat in the sun and thought. Nothing definite, but if I had been asked to define my thoughts, they would have come in one word.
England.
This turf, this sky, this heartsease in the grass; the old lines of ridge and furrow, and the still older ghosts of Roman road and Wall; the ordered, spare beauty of the Northern Fells; this, in front of me now, was England…
This other Eden, demi-paradise. This dear, dear, land.”
Then, without warning, I, the reader was ripped from my reading reverie…reminded that this was a story I was immersed in…not a breathtaking view of a scene I’d been physically superimposed into some how…
It was the shout…as I imagined it, that really broke me from my daydream…
Annabelle!!
I was now firmly re-established in my role as reader…one trying to imagine this man who so rudely broke my tranquility. He’s angry and is inexplicably yelling at the young woman sitting against the stone wall.
He’s on about a young woman named Annabel, nineteen years old when she’d run away from a nearby estate named Whitescar. It had happened eight years before, and she’d left on the worst of terms…at least that is what she can make out from his incessant shouting. Somewhere in there, the young man managed a most unceremonious attempt at an introduction…Connor “Con” Winslow of the aforementioned Whitescar Estate.
So convinced is he that he’d standing face to face with the long absent Annabelle, that he doesn’t even register the protests of the woman now standing before him, (she was previously sitting comfortably against the stone wall, but rose to her feet in protest to the man’s shouting), “I’m not Annabelle from, what did you call it, this Whitescar Estate?” She begins in a tone, not quite as forceful as his, but certainly sufficient to give him a moment of pause, “I’m Mary Grey…a born and raised Canadian!”
As a side note, being a Canadian myself, I must say that we would most certainly avoid yelling at another person, especially as a visitor in a foreign land, but even these polite Canadian sensibilities would be credibly set aside for a moment if I were faced with such a stark, brusque display of belligerence form the other party…
This gradually becomes apparent to Con, and a short time later, when he steps a little closer, he notices that the ever-subtle variations between the features of this woman, and the ones he recalls from Annabelle are either the transformation that might be the result of eight years passed, or perhaps, more rationally, the distinct appearance that would indicate this to be a completely different person.
And by instinct, as the dawning of the possibility that this is indeed Mary Gray from Canada, and not Annabelle from Whitescar, the man’s comportment transforms from frightening maniac to charmingly apologetic gentleman, “I must have scared you,” he begins, “Charging up like that and looming over you like a threat from the past…”
And it’s after a series of exchanges, all of which feature Con staring at Mary in disbelief at her uncanny similarity to this Annabelle woman, that he manages to as a question about the current situation, “Are you staying nearby?” He then pauses, as if he’s already thought of the answer to his own question, “No, I suppose you can’t be, or everyone would be talking…after all, you have a face that’s well known in these parts…”
Mary, for her part, no longer alarmed by this man’s presence, finds herself amused, and curious about this scenario of her lookalike. A very similarly featured woman who was from this very community. She then tells the man that she’s visiting these particular sights, but she’s actually staying, and working (in a café) in Newcastle.
“I came here because it’s my day off,” she says, completing her answer.
Once again, the man seems to have slipped into his own world of thoughts, it seemed to her that he hadn’t heard her answer, but instead was mentally playing at the line of his own questioning,
“What brought you up here?” He suddenly asked.
Mary took his question to mean that he was speaking of Northern England in general, and not this particular place of the Fells. She explains that her family have all died, and that most recently she was caring for a friend with crippling polio, on her farm near Montreal. Her friend passed away six months ago, and after that she felt alone and adrift in Canada. She felt a desire to sojourn to the place where her ancestors had lived, generations before, when they were here.
“My people did come from hereabouts, so my grandmother told me…”
“From Whitescar?” Con asked.
Mary shook her head, “I never heard the name, I was very little when Granny died…but I did know that my ancestors did come from somewhere in Northumberland. They were Armstrong’s.”
“Have you come to stay?” Con asked, more softly now.
Mary laughed, “That’s what I’d told myself. But I hadn’t seen myself coming back quite like this, I’m afraid. I-well, I was left pretty badly off. I got my fare together, and enough to tide me over till I got a job. And that’s my situation now. It sounds like the opposite of the usual story doesn’t it? Usually, the lone wolf sets out to the New World to make his way, but I…well, I wanted to come over here. The New World can be a bit wearying when you’re on your own, and…don’t laugh…but I thought I might fit in better here.”
“Because your roots are here?” Con asked.
Mary paused, trying to piece together her thoughts, when Con suddenly built upon his own question, “Maybe there was someone, some Winslow way back in the last century who went to Canada from here. Yes, that’s it, that explains it! Some Winslow went to Canada, and one of his daughters…your great-grandmother…married an Armstrong there. That must be it!”
“Perhaps,” Mary replied in a non-committal way.
But her casual, almost dismissive reply didn’t seem to dissuade Con, “That makes us cousins, then!” He loudly proclaimed.
What followed was a lengthy tale Con told her about the history of the Winslows, their feud with the neighboring Forrest family and the eventual flight of their rival family to Italy.
It was shortly after this that Mary began to pick up her bag.
“Where are you going?” Con demanded.
“I must catch my bus,” Mary announced matter-of-factly.
“But you can’t go yet,” Con protested, he then went on with his theory that Mary’s presence there…so close to her ancestral home couldn’t possibly be the result of coincidence. “We can’t simply walk away in the opposite direction and forget all this!”
“Why not?” Mary asked with a cool tone of voice, her eye already fixed on the path back to the station.
“Well, for one, you’re nearly broke,” Con gamely attempted.
“You take your family responsibilities very seriously, don’t you Mr. Winslow? Am I to take it that you were thinking of offering me a job?”
He looked at her, replying slowly, “Do you know, I might just do that very thing, Mary Grey!”
She laughs at the stuttering nature of his ill prepared answer, “But you can hardly expect me to take you up on it, and by the way, did you consider what sort of sensation would there be if I did turn up at Whitescar with you…had you thought of that?”
He replied in a strange voice, “Oddly enough, I had…”
For the next moment their eyes met, and Mary had the oddest feeling that for just those few seconds, each knew what the other was thinking.
That’s when Mary spoke up, “I must go. Really. Please, let’s leave it at that. I won’t annoy you by telling you again that it’s been interesting. It’s been…quite an experience. But forgive me if I say its one I don’t want to take any further. I mean that. Thank you for your offer of help. It was kind of you. And now this is really goodbye.
Mary then held out her hand. The formal gesture seemed, in these surroundings, and after what had passed, faintly absurd, but it would, she hoped, give the touch of finality to the interview, and provide the cue on which she could turn her back and leave him standing there.
To her relief, after a moments hesitation he made no further protest. He took the hand quite simply, in a sort of courteous recognition of defeat.
“Goodbye then, Mary Grey. I’m sorry. All the best.”
As she left him, she was very conscious of him standing there and staring at her.
In the ensuing chapter, we read of Con, and his half sister Lisa’s persistence as they attempt to break down Mary’s resolve. Their plan, to put it briefly, is for Mary to return to Whitescar, posing as Annabelle, the long-lost granddaughter of the master. So closely does Mary resemble Annabelle, and so intelligent did she come across as being, that they were both certain she’d make a more than credible “stand-in” for Annabelle. As we see in the abovementioned vignette, Mary is resistant in the beginning…but slowly, gradually, as the combination of her realization that a lifetime of near poverty wasn’t for her, and as the persistence of the Dermett siblings intensified, she gave into their scheme.
As I considered what might have been the straw that “broke the camel’s back” the factor that was powerful enough to cause Mary to decide for the scheme, I thought of the lyrics of Bob Seger’s storytelling masterpiece, “Against the Wind,” especially when he says, “I found myself seeking shelter against the wind…”
She would seek shelter from an uncertain future by venturing to Whitescar, as “Annabelle,” she would go along with Con and Lisa’s plan…and do the best job of it she possibly could.
And after three weeks of “schooling,” both Con and Lisa were convinced that she was ready for her new role. If she pulled it off, they persisted, then Annabelle’s grandfather would think twice about willing the estate to another family member named Julie, and instead, would will it to Annabelle, the once favorite of his grandchildren, before a row broke out between them and Annabelle fled Whitescar.
Con and Lisa are convinced that when “Annabelle” returns, Grandfather Matthew will be so happy that he’ll change his will in her favor, then, after he passes, the imposter would inherit the estate. One or two years later, after the news of the inheritance died down, she would sell the entire estate to Con and Lisa for a song. And in exchange for doing all this, she would be given a generous monthly salary for the rest of her life.
This was an incredible first chapter in a book that had one amazing scene after another! Here were just a few of my favorite moments in this story:
Mrs. Bates, a supremely confident member of the Whitescar serving staff who was, “a good hand with a tea cake.” She was a bit of a “legend in her own mind,” but was unforgettable to be sure!
Tommy, the ever present, fat, black and white cat.
A subtle “dessert slip up” that almost breaks the intricate web of deception woven into this story.
I really enjoyed the way Mary Stewart slowed the pace of the plot long enough for me, the reader, to take in the rich atmosphere “Annabelle” now found herself in…
“I went slowly up the wide oak staircase. The carpet was moss-green and thick; my feet made no sound. I turned along the landing which made a gallery to one side of the hall. At the end of it a window looked over the garden.
Here was a door. Oak too, with shallow panels sunk in their beveled frames. I put out a finger and ran it silently down the bevel.
The landing was full of sunlight. A bee was trapped, and blundering, with a deep hum, against the window. The sound was soporific, dreamy, drowning time. It belonged to a thousand summer afternoons, all the same, long, sun-drenched, lazily full of sleep…
Time ran into nothing; stood still; ran back…
The moment snapped. I turned, with a sharp little movement, and thrust open the casement beside me. The bee bumbled foolishly about for a moment or two, then shot off into the sunlight like a pebble from a sling. I latched the window quietly behind it, then turned and knock at the door…”
The scenes, like these that Mary Stewart wrote, were not just atmospheric, but thought provoking as well!
Aside from these things, I was also introduced to a number of words I’d never heard of before:
Chalcedony – A microcrystalline, translucent variety of quartz, often milky, or greyish.
Mandragora (Mandrake) – A narcotic, short-stemmed European plant of the nightshade family, having a fleshy, often forked root somewhat resembling a human form.
Dog’s Mercury – A hairy, somewhat poisonous euphorbiaceous perennial, having broad lanceolate toothed leaves and small greenish male and female flowers, the males borne in catkins. It often carpets shadowy woodlands.
Pussy-Struck – From a base-reference of “Star-Struck.” Represents an individual who acts differently / more chivalrous when the sex of preference is presented to him/her.
It was late Sunday morning when I started reading what would be the last 10% of this story. I'd wanted another coffee, a little breakfast and a refreshing shower...
But all of that would have to wait because these final pages were absolutely riveting!
Overall, a truly fantastic read. A Gothic Mystery masterpiece by Mary Stewart!