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The 7 Deadly Sins: Sloth

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Slothful and unappreciative thirty-five-year-old Jae Evans is a father of five with his long-term girlfriend of seven years, Tore’. Jae’s ambition folds under the pressure of a growing family and his behavior turns indolent and shiftless.

With pressure from her family to get married, Tore’ wants more from Jae but she ultimately accepts that marriage may no longer be in the cards. Amid dealing with Jae’s excessive sleeping and procrastination, Tore’ discovers she’s pregnant with their sixth child and is utterly afraid to deliver the news.

Jae thinks he has more time, but his underwhelming contentment with life takes a gut-wrenching turn.

Will Jae be stuck with the fate he’s chosen? Or will he finally acknowledge his laziness is rooted in selfishness and change his slothful ways?

74 pages, Paperback

First published February 5, 2023

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February 8, 2023
Sloth is an enthralling narrative telling the story of a man who is too selfish and lazy in all aspects of life. Sadly, the only way he can change is through the suffering of significant consequences. The characters and their personalities are an easy ten out of ten with an even better story to go along with them. There are twists and turns that I would never have suspected leading our main character down a haunting path in life. There are few complaints to make in this book, however, there are some grammatical errors here and there. Additionally, it seemed the characters would sometimes switch between informal and formal language throughout the same conversation creating a somewhat strange dialect. Despite this, I thoroughly enjoyed the read and would recommend it to anyone interested in fictional or mystery writing!
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February 9, 2023
Sloth is a deeply personal story about the pain that is caused for someone and the people around them when the will to fight for one’s life disappears. The author drags you into the world and has you bear uncomfortable truths of human nature as well as modern society. It makes you cheer for characters to escape their situation, even when it conflicts with the other characters. In fact, the reader is lead to cheer for characters to make the hard decisions and come face to face with the consequences of their complacency in exchange for a happier life. The characters have a good balance of external and internal conflict that is shown very well.

However, it is held back by a lack of proofreading— with grammatical errors, repetition, and even a main character’s name changing suddenly on one occasion. This also may have been an answer to the issue of the biased third person narrator that seems more of a hive mind of the rest of the characters rather than an impartial spectator, preachy characters with shallow reactions (especially to huge reveals), and the existence of some reveals that either don’t make much sense for the story or negatively impact it through tearing down integral themes and messages that are important to the topic of sloth. One lesson I began to expect was taking accountability for one’s own actions, but characters instead got off scot-free from their sins in exchange for suffering the consequences of the actions of others, as if punished cosmically rather than naturally from cause and effect. The book shows the protagonist’s perspective and how it is impossible to fight against something that takes away your ability to fight, but most of the time approaches him without compassion. According to characters, the narrator, and the happenings in the story, slothful people are lazy bums who just need to get off their asses. This is rarely the actual solution. Instead, the protagonist takes a shortcut after one character is punished drastically when they seemed they might finally hold him accountable.

This book is a decent wake up call for anyone struggling with sloth in their life, acting as a tragic cautionary tale with aspects of crime drama for those who enjoy that.
1 review
February 10, 2023
Through a third person narrative we perceive the main character, Jae, and all the stages of his life that impact him in Sloth. There are plenty of moments where you want to turn your nose up at him— and you genuinely might do so—as I definitely did. Yet, there are an equivocal amount of moments where you allow yourself a second or two to wonder why he is the way that he is. To read about Jae’s character and the actions he takes whilst simultaneously seeing the effort other characters make to balance his shortcomings, makes him incredibly unlikeable to anyone that is a workaholic, perfectionist, or just knows the basis of being responsible.

You almost forget that at a point in time, this character was admired by those that knew him and for likely a good reason. Wether or not it was the author’s intention to make you dislike Jae and then instantly applaud him later, once he redeems himself, is a question that you’re left with. However, with this work being under the mystery genre I wouldn’t say it categorizes as such, although there is an investigation and there is an unsolved crime mentioned in connection to the characters.

The majority of the story is focused around the angst of the personal family issues and the interactions between characters, rather than the connection to the case that doesn’t begin until the last few chapters. There are few actual details of the investigation and the process in which it is solved in the story. Throughout the ending chapters there are nods from characters that are unrelated to law enforcement and the in and outs of the case, having awareness of who the suspect is that are not explained or hinted at, in example the fact that the unconfirmed suspect committed said crime and is hiding in said place. I also noticed throughout the text that there were various grammar, capitalization, and punctuation mistakes which bothered me in terms of professionalism. In my eyes, the best aspect of this novelette is the wonderful characters and their depth that comes with each back story they hold. This was genuinely a nice read that evoked real feelings and discussions of what it means to be Sloth.
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September 21, 2023
“Sloth” by T.M. Carter is a book that dives into the lives of Jae and Tore, offering readers a thought-provoking exploration of ambition, relationships, and the consequences of slothfulness. Jae Evans finds himself struggling with the weight of his responsibilities. Despite being a father of five and having a long-term relationship with Tore’, Jae’s once-promising ambition has faded away, leaving him inactive. His relationship with Tore is clearly impacted by his laziness and lack of motivation. Tore’, his partner, desires more from Jae, longing for the commitment of marriage and a sense of direction in their lives. However, as she comes to terms with the possibility that marriage may be difficult, she faces a dilemma of her own when she discovers that she is pregnant with her sixth child. Tore’ is torn between her love for Jae and her fear of delivering the news to a man whose slothfulness threatens the stability of their family.
Carter’s “Sloth” perfectly dives into the themes of ambition and self-satisfaction, dissecting the psychology of a man whose once-promising future has been shut down by his own choices. Jae’s character invites readers to reflect on the consequences of slothfulness and the effects it can have on personal relationships and aspirations. All of the components between Jae and Tore’ are shown with authenticity, capturing the difficulties of a long-term partnership marked by love, frustration, and unfulfilled expectations. Tore’s desire for a deeper commitment and her struggle to balance her own aspirations with the demands of motherhood make her character relatable and complex. Carter’s writing style is engaging and emotionally powerful, drawing readers into the emotional journey of the characters. The text effectively conveys the weight of Jae’s inactivity and his internal conflict, allowing readers to empathize with their struggles. As the story unfolds, “Sloth’ prompts readers to examine their own ambitions and the impact of difficulty in their lives. It serves as a powerful reminder that relationships require effort and communication, and that the goal of personal growth is essential for the well-being of both individuals and families.
In conclusion, “Sloth” by T.M. Carter is a compelling exploration of ambition, relationships, and the consequences of slothfulness. Carter encourages the readers to consider the decisions we make and the impacts they have on our lives and the lives of the people we love through well-drawn characters and a thought-provoking narrative. For those looking for a story that connects with the difficulty of human nature and the desire for fulfilment in both personal and social relationships, this book is a must-read.
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February 10, 2023
Sloth was a short and bittersweet story that emphasizes the importance of community, love, and valuing the people that you care about as well as yourself. There are dark twists throughout the story that leave me feeling shocked as the world and the characters I have grown attached to in such a short period of time come and go. For the first arc of the story, my attention is split between the characters and their struggles with one another and the broader structures that are influencing their lives. The alienation that Jae feels toward the people he loves fueled by the betrayal of a system and culture that taught him that his value came from his work and his ability to provide are especially frustrating when we see that the people closest to him may not be well equipped to move him in the right direction. Likewise, his lack of introspection lead him toward self-destruction as he pushes away the family he has created. Like the second arc of the book, one can only wonder whether things could have turned out differently if just a few pieces were moved around in the past. Many of the broader themes are obscured in the latter half of the book as the story takes priority and becomes far more personal, focusing on the conflict between a recovering Jae and someone he doesn't expect to be a major player. I went into this book with the expectation that it wouldn't be for me, and I'm happy that I had as much fun with it as I did.
1 review
September 15, 2023
'Sloth (The 7 Deadly Sins)', a short story about a young couple who just cannot seem to make things work anymore. It mainly focuses on the downfall of a man who cannot take on the role of a loving father, future husband, and son-in-law. The author makes people aware of the consequences that comes with neglecting those around you. Our main character Jae is filled with negativity and constantly sulking around, it's hard to empathize with him- until you try to unpack the reasons why he may be acting the way he does. Nonetheless, I still found it hard to sympathize with Jae, especially with how he treated our other main character Tore. Since 'Sloth' was such a short read, it was difficult to gain a connection to the characters, good and bad alike. The pacing was quick, there were grammar mistakes, and towards the end- it was all very predictable. I wanted to try to gain a deeper understanding of the book and feel more connected with the characters, but everything felt above surface level. It's easy to appreciate the many lessons that reveal themselves and it's also easy to lose focus of what the main idea may be. Without spoiling the book, people would say that being slothful will cause major impacts, but what happened to our main characters was out of Jae's control. I wouldn't blame his lack of ambition for causing the ending. Overall, the book was an enjoyable read at the end of the day; in my opinion, it fell short of gaining any emotional reaction from the readers.
1 review
February 10, 2023
Sloth is a book that explores the relationship between a young couple slowly becoming distant. Majority of the text follows Tore becoming increasingly frustrated with her partner Jaes "laziness" as she describes it. While the book is told from Tores perspective initially, we do get to see how Jae thinks as well. For one to truly understand both perspectives however one must read beyond the text to decipher. With this said, I found myself disliking both characters but for different reasons. Tore came off as a very biased narrator, filled with negativity and nagging. Jae came across as lazy and distant, even uncaring. Further in however, we can see how he may be struggling mentally and this triggered a sense of compassion for his character. In addition, we do get to see him grow and develop which made me appreciate him as I hadn't before. The only big part that I felt I missed was a sense of the family as a whole, as a reader we don't really get to see the children's perspectives or how they interact with either their mom or dad. It would be interesting to see how the kids were affected by everything. Overall, I enjoyed the story. I believe that everyone can have a takeaway from this work in one sense or another. For instance, I took away how mental health struggles can truly hold someone back and how misunderstood those affected can be.
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February 11, 2023
I think this book was definitely a 5 star rating and it kept me turning the page wanting to know what's coming next. I feel like if you like mystery,crime and betrayal then this book is definitely for you or you might not like those genres but, you might love this one unexpectedly because it's that good. This book definitely caught me by surprise because of the big plot twist and the author made it to where you least would expect that to happen. Normally when I watch a movie I know when there is going to be a plot twist or how the plot twist may turn out but this one caught me by surprise. The crazy part about it is that I am a crime fanatic so I'm definitely shocked I didn't see the ending coming. I also relate to the beginning of the story because my parents went through something similar and my mom use to tell me how my dad stopped caring for me and her when I was younger and just distanced his self from my whole family. He was mentally abusive and he made my mom feel insecure about her self but, they would eventually break up. So, that part of the book really made me feel some type of way because it brought back so many memories and I think about how me and my dad's relationship isn't the same anymore. I recommend the Sloth book to everybody because it definitely gives you a different point of view in life and makes you think twice about some of the decisions you make.
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September 14, 2023
"Sloth: The 7 Deadly Sins" is a very engaging and personal book that shows the story of a ungrateful father, son, and man all in one and how his life was flipped completely upside down. He faces many different trails and obstacles throughout this story that not only shows the person that he is, but where his mindset is as well. This story mainly focuses on having a drive in life and to strive for better living no matter the circumstance. Jae, the main character has a very irritating personality through most of the chapters of sloth. It was hard for me to have hope and encouragement for Jae, but that feeling changed. There are many unexpected moments and suspicion throughout that allows you to become so invested in not only the life of the main character, but all of the characters as a whole. The author used the title "The 7 Deadly Sins" very seriously in certain characters and chapters of the book. I really enjoyed how descriptive the author was with how the character was feeling, what they were doing and so forth. This allowed you to really engage and figure out which character you can relate to most, which I enjoy doing. Sloth was a very interesting and heartfelt story as a whole. Despite few grammatical errors and the heavy language used, these were the only reasons for my rating. However, this book is definitely one that I would recommend to anyone I come across. Such a great and eye opening experience overall reading "Sloth, The 7 Deadly Sins"!
1 review
February 10, 2023
Sloth is what you need to enjoy your evening in a cozy chair sipping the hot favorite drink.
I am drawn to the writer's art that keeps readers on their toes from the very beginning to the final word. This book is a bunch of samples of everyday issues well known to all, and this makes it so exciting and relative to each of us. Moreover, there is a crucial turning point in the plot in the middle of the story which totally changes your perspective and is breathtaking (family drama vs detective).
Sloth contributes to feeling a diverse range of emotions: aversion to weakness, selfishness and indolence of the protagonist, total rejection of heroes’ lifestyle and compassion when they have started overcoming their hardship, the shock of the key tragedy and eventual acceptance of the fact that horrible things are what trigger people to wake up and to man up!
I would like to read more back-story and be aware of deeper details answering the questions “Why did he/she do that?”, “Why now?”, and “What did he/she feel at that very moment?”
At this point, I guess Sloth could become a novel. Especially because it pushes me to go on the internal matter of whether it is acceptable to vengeance and whether it is selfish or not?
1 review
February 10, 2023
As I read this book, I constantly found myself wanting to turn the page for more information. This story was not just a regular mystery/thriller, no this was as close to real life as you could possibly make it. The more and more you read, you feel a deeper sense of connection with Tore and almost start seeing through her eyes in the mess she is in. Then the book hits you with a curveball and you are dropped into Joe's perspective. The changing of emotions and connections made through reading this book are something any reader should look forward to. With this being said, the random spelling and grammar mistakes catch you into going back and "getting out of rhythm". I also feel as if there was a lack of detail in some parts of the story when there should have been more. I believe you have to have a unbiased outlook before taking on this book in order to have the best reading experience. This story will have you constantly wanting to know what's next along with fueling your heart with several different emotions.
1 review
February 15, 2023
Out of all of the seven deadly sins, 'Sloth' has the capability to depict all seven virtues: pride, greed, wrath, envy, lust and gluttony. Moreover, the story line captivates a bitter sweet love relationship between family and the overall community. The main character 'Tore'' seems to constantly tolerate her - not so tolerable - boyfriend; all while managing five children as number six is on its way. Hence why, I was so enticed to this novelette. Throughout the story, I felt as though I was submerged in the thought of 'you only need yourself'. My impression of the novelette was positive all around, the author made all the plots fall seamlessly together, having me at the edge of my seat every time! However, I felt the urge to think of the children within the story and it will remain a constant thought of how the children grew up and how are they dealing with it all. Overall, 'Sloth' will foil as a wake up call to those who related a little too closely with the personified ideology of sloth. I would recommend all readers as it really affects any community.
1 review
February 21, 2023
Overall I liked the the use of language throughout the novelette, it was the main thing that snatched my attention quickly. The story is being told from third person perspective so it gives you light on what the other person is doing and feeling. Jae was the main character of the book and trying to figure out how to overcome slothfulness for his family, and relationship. Throughout the book Tore' was very annoying just off the way she reacted to things; she seldom let Jae know how she felt about everything until it was too late. Her enablement of letting a grown man do as he please like they don't share the same children was highly exasperating. It really hit different aspects as far as it takes a village to raise children (community), patience, love, support, and loyalty (from the right people). What i didn't like was the lack of detail, and some of the plot twists and how they came about. The ending was definitely unexpected but I was elated that he got his head out the dark and chose to do better for his babies.
1 review
September 21, 2023
Sloth is a book that dives deep into the minds of people who are struggling in life. The story follows a man named Jae and his inability to get out of this slothful life. It isn’t easy to see why his struggles are keeping him where he is, but towards the end you begin to. I say begin to but I never fully felt bad for him. His hardworking girlfriend struggles in her own ways, and Jae is too lazy to help. Overall this book was a quick read, but can make readers think about their own struggles. While it’s hard to relate to Jae for me, we all go through things that make us feel weak and I think is the main message. The book has a few grammatical errors, and some characters aren’t developed enough. I think overall though we get a good look into a man who is truly slothful, and the consequences of being that way. The ending was kind of abrupt and totally threw me off guard. I think it might be a little bit of a stretch, but you never know how your actions can effect others. The book was overall a good read and I would recommend it!
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February 9, 2023
I must say that I was intrigued throughout every moment of reading this book. What truly lured me into this story was that it portrayed a common real-life situation that some of your readers might have experienced first handed or witnessed. This isn't a story about a once-in-a-lifetime thrill, an action story filled with a 1% chance of things happening. No, this was down to earth, as real as it can get and yet it was fascinating and genuinely exciting one sentence after another. I felt as though I was in Tore's shoes while reading. Feeling her anger, conflict, and confusion towards the situation she was in. Then, I began to transition into Jae's shoes continuously struggling with his depression, decision-making abilities, and his inability to realize what he had when he had it. There were twists and turns just as I had begun to figure out where the story was going to end, it was truly an on-the-edge-of-your-seat type of read!
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February 10, 2023
This book is a narrative story about a man who is sloth. The man who became selfish and lazy due to depression had no choice but to continue his conflict with his ambitious and devoted girlfriend.But the man who wanted to avoid that conflict had to be distant from his girlfriend. The frustration that came to him in a moment could change him for the better. The trigger seems to have changed a man, but it's not. Rather shows how 'sloth' he is. He had no choice but to change because he had to live the reality that he had to support his family. This story also depicts the inner and outer conflicts of the main characters very well. That characteristic makes the story very immersive, and the mysterious narrative and twist make the story exciting to the end.
This book will serve as an opportunity for countless 'sloth' people who read to reflect on the past and recommend it to those who like mystery.
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September 17, 2023
Sloth, by Takara Carter, is a short story that can make you think deeply about life changes and responsibility.

This is the story of Sarah (nicknamed Tore'/Rae), and her lazy boyfriend Jaeshawn (nicknamed Jae).
Tore' is a hard worker and does everything she can to support her family despite how her boyfriend slacks around their home without a job.
During this story, Jae will learn a hard lesson due to a tragic loss, that will lead him to change his life for once and for all.

This book can be read on its entirety in less than three days. But its length does not lessen what makes it interesting.
The way it is written makes it feel as if you are reading a testimonial of a real case, since many of the topics treated in the story are things that can happen to any regular person.

This was a refreshing reading, and it can help people to learn how to see life with all its ups and downs through new lenses.
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September 13, 2023
Sloth was a very interesting read. It has drama, murder, mystery, and revenge. The twists and turns in the story kept me engaged, and the constant changes the characters went through were very interesting. This book hit on lots of deep questions about life. Some of these included: all of the seven deadly sins, family, revenge, ethics, etc. The reason I gave this book such a low rating is because of the grammatical errors, and because of the story line. There were many spelling, punctuation, and vocabulary errors in this book. This made it hard to read at times, as well as just should not be the case with a published book. The story line was relevant to the times of right now, but it was quite simple. There could have been more character development and story development so that it was more intriguing. The story left something to be wanted.
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September 17, 2023
Sloth was a interesting read. Jae, who is the boyfriend of a struggling mother Tore’ represents slothful behaviors. This in turn slowly tears apart their family. Jae is not only slothful but he is neglectful to his wife and children. The story kept me on my toes and had many intriguing turn of events. As well as had important lesions about appreciating what you have before it’s gone and understanding what others may be going through. It was hard to understand how it took such tragedy to get Jae to finally turn things around and made it hard to have sympathy for him. I gave this book a lower rating because it did have grammatical errors and it made it hard to read. I feel the message of the story was not clear enough and I wanted more from the book.
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September 17, 2023
Sloth is an entertaining tale that tells the story of a guy (Jae) who is the definition of selfishness and laziness in every part of his life. All the characters and their personalities are great with an incredible story-line. The changes that occurred throughout the story made everything better and much more interesting. With all that Tore and Jay went through, it made the story feel as real-life as possible and I believe this happens every day in some type of manner across the world. I felt all sorts of emotions reading the book which made me go on an emotional rollercoaster. We can see all 7 deadly sins within the book itself and truly does go to show how love can blind. I would recommend this book because there is a lesson for everyone who reads it.
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February 7, 2023
Overall, I enjoyed the book. However, I do think there could have been some extensions to the story. I would have liked to see how Tore' dealt with the news her mother told her a little more, maybe even more about Kaleb, but I can appreciate the fast, consistent pace of the book. I really liked how real it felt as well. None of the inciting incidents or surprises feel overdramatized, but based in reality. The climax of the book, while executed and worded greatly, still felt sudden and a bit out-of-nowhere. Despite that, I still liked the twist and the conclusion following it. It was a very exciting read.
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February 11, 2023
A deeply personal story about the pain caused when the will to fight for one's life disappears, Sloth is about the pain that is caused for oneself and those around them. The author lures you in while simultaneously exposing uncomfortable truths about human nature and modern society. Despite conflicting desires between characters, it makes you cheer for characters who escape their situations. Readers are actually led to cheer for characters who overcome their complacency through making hard decisions and facing consequences in exchange for a happier future. Conflict between the characters in this story is well balanced between external and internal conflict.
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September 18, 2023
Sloth is the story of a struggle between a man and his long-term girlfriend, as a result of the man's negligence and lack of drive to improve his life. Throughout this book, all of the 7 Deadly Sins are present in some way, and multiple characteristics of these sins are present in some characters. Some of the struggles that Jae and Tore face in the story are realistic and could happen to anyone. The pacing of this story is a bit fast for my taste, but it is written very well and engages the reader to the end, which I like. Overall, I recommend this story to anyone who is looking for a quick, emotional, and engaging read.
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February 18, 2023
Sloth

A father of five has no room for slothfulness. Tore was a strong woman and too tolerant of Jae's laziness. I felt the weight that she shouldered while working, taking care of the home and the children day in and day out without help. Jae finally came around, but only because he had to. I was glad he finally stepped up, but the time lost cost him.

I've read all 7 books in this series and I highly recommend it. Aside from some amazing stories, I was introduced to new authors whose works I can't wait to explore.
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February 10, 2023
Overall, the book is good however I wish there were more details or a much smoother transitions throughout the story. Somethings came from the blue or the language wasn't fitting in some parts of the story. Things that I liked about the book were how there were different points of view between the two main characters, Tori and Jae. This story is full of twists and turns, love every second of it.
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February 11, 2023
The book was amazing. The book immediately grabbed my attention with the first chapter. It displays real life events that so many people have to face. Reading beyond the words is very important for this story, there’s so many things that’s hidden within the Jae character. Every character has their own story as to why they’re in the position they’re in. The plot twist was the best part about the book. I did not expect that ending at all. Amazing book!
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January 24, 2025
Laziness

How one could be lazy with 5 young babies in the home is beyond me. Jae didn't have the first job but was able to get high daily while Tore' did all she could to keep the family together. I respect Tore' sentiments for not having an abortion, but there are other ways to prevent pregnancies, which should have been her number 1 priority!!!!

The twist this book took was unexpected but good. The loss of star was due to the ending feeling rushed.
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February 8, 2023
I loved the book but I feel like it was quite silly that Tore' found Jay to be a slothful bum for possibly battling with depression and how he struggles to find a job. While I do side with Tore' on some things about at least putting in the effort to find a new job or at least doing something to help with the kids. She should also take into account that there might be something else going on. It is better that she tries her best to help him or try to talk with him about what's, what.
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February 9, 2023
I can say overall, I love the book I think it's awesome but I haven't got that far yet. I feel like Jae and Tore is going to end up separating. Tore is depressed and emotional and having regrets. Jae is depressed also but lazy, and showing that he doesn't really care is how I feel. I will read the rest tonight because it's entertaining to me and catches my attention very well.
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February 10, 2023
From the beginning of the book, the text reached out and held my attention. The characters and plot provide a strong emotional appeal and very relatable rising action. The language and delivery were affective in relation to demographics and real life communication. Underlying themes in this book are gradually revealed in a becoming manner; a broader setting to the plot is revealed.
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