Let me just say … I was absolutely hooked from the first sentence! Your plot development was stellar and the characters were so relatable. Plus your amazing with plot twists … and getting the readers emotions involved!
My favourite scene was the kitchen scene between Athena and Alex.
Where they’re just having real talk between siblings.
Chapter 42, page 167-
I slide open the patio door, leading into the kitchen, where Alex has his hands full of paper plates. “Okay, fine I admit I can be a teensy bit...dramatic...and maybe a bit irrational at times.”
Alex raises an eyebrow, resting the plates on the counter. “Okay fine, most of the time. But that's still no excuse for you to not be honest with me. You should have just told me the truth.”
“You're right.” Alex admits.
“Wait what was that?” I ask in surprise.
“What?”
No way, did I hear him correctly.
Alex just said that I was right.
“Want to say that again just a little bit louder?”
Alex reluctantly, repeats himself. “You were...right.”
“One more time for the camera please.” I whip out my phone to record it.
Alex shakes his head, covering his face so I can’t record him. “No flash photography.”
I laugh at him while trying to move his hands away, he grabs onto my arms stopping me. “So are we cool?”
I laugh, of course we are. “Like the other side of the pillow.”
“Great, because now, would be a great time to mention that I may have broken your charger.”
“My what??” I ask, narrowing my eyes at him.
“Remember what we talked about?” Alex backs away slowly with his hands in front of him. “You promised not to be so overly dramatic.”
“Oh, did we? I don't recall.” I say as I slowly start walking towards him.
Alex laughs, thinking I’m joking.
I’m not.
“You've got 10 seconds.” My tone now serious. “10,9,8…” I count then chase him on 7 seconds.
“You said 10!!!” Alex yells, flying out the patio door, knowing that I won’t chase him in front of an audience.
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You can really see the strength in their relationship, even though we might grow apart or even though we might lead our own lives, our siblings are always there for us. Theres nothing else like having siblings who have your back.
No matter who else comes into your life, you know you can count on them!
I really love how you bring that out.