His 11th thriller uneven - complex plot but choppy storyline...
We're Margolin fans, having read all ten of his prior novels, and generally find his work entertaining and satisfying. We agree that this one is slow to get going -- only the latter part of the book zings along with exciting action. Perhaps the problem with this thriller's complex plot is that to make any sense of the present we have to wade through lengthy recounts of the past for main characters Dan Morelli (aka Carl Rice) and Vanessa Wingate, the bad-girl general's (and presidential hopeful's) daughter. That both lead characters, not counting the sweet but rather naive lawyer to the rescue, Ami Vergano, have apparent histories of mental trouble makes it hard for us to decide just who is telling the truth and who might be fabricating the most intricate delusions one would ever try to invent.
At any rate, Rice and Vanessa get into more trouble, and leave more bodies in their wake, than a serial killer with a death wish. Yet in the end, will these bad guys convince a judge that their fantastic claims about Gen. Wingate are true? Can there be proof? And does any such truth justify the brutal half dozen or so murders committed along the way?
We know Margolin can craft a good tale and turn a good phrase. Indeed, "Lost Lake" does generate some heat before the final pages. Unfortunately, like an amusement park ride that gets a little long to sustain the thrills, we found ourselves tiring from all the ups and downs, all the trials and tribulations. Perhaps a little better pace, less historical detail, more believable protagonists, and a little more character work with key supporting players might add up to a better book. As suggested by others, it's not a novel so much bad as just disappointing -- and whether that's worth our investment of time, a little problematic.