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Stephen Attebrook Mysteries #3
A Dreadful Penance
November 1262 is an unlikely season for war. But war nonetheless is coming to the March, the wild borderland between England and Wales. Not the war that most fear between the supporters of the King and the rebellious barons uniting around Simon de Montfort, but with Llywelyn ap Gruffydd, the Welsh warlord who styles himself Prince of Wales and who has united the fractious tribes of his land against the English. The English are uncertain, however, where and when the blow will fall. So, Sir Geoffrey Randall, coroner of Herefordshire, dispatches his deputy, the impoverished knight Stephen Attebrook, to the border town of Clun to make contact with a spy in order to learn Llywelyn’s plans. At the same time, Randall directs Attebrook to investigate the murder of a monk found dead in his bed at the Augustine priory of St. George at Clun. The assignment casts Attebrook into the middle of a desperate feud between the priory and the lord of Clun and reveals a forbidden love that can only result in suffering and death.
206 pages, Paperback
First published March 23, 2012
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May 2, 2021
Good mystery
A great English mystery. An I always guess wrong, I'll get one right sooner or later. I hope. Stephen is sent to a priori to find out who killed a monk and to find out what the Welsh are up to. But to get those answers he has to cross FilzAllans lands an you have to pay a toil to cross bridges to his lands. Once again Stephen has no money to do so. "For heaven's sake some one please pay the man his do". So he finds other ways to get the answers he needs. He learns who killed the monk an the war the Welsh brings to England while locked in a pig box. Gilbert an Stephen go through hell in this telling an he worries over his son in Wales. A fast pase English mystery. Well done sire.
A great English mystery. An I always guess wrong, I'll get one right sooner or later. I hope. Stephen is sent to a priori to find out who killed a monk and to find out what the Welsh are up to. But to get those answers he has to cross FilzAllans lands an you have to pay a toil to cross bridges to his lands. Once again Stephen has no money to do so. "For heaven's sake some one please pay the man his do". So he finds other ways to get the answers he needs. He learns who killed the monk an the war the Welsh brings to England while locked in a pig box. Gilbert an Stephen go through hell in this telling an he worries over his son in Wales. A fast pase English mystery. Well done sire.
September 26, 2016
now having read all three of the books in a short space of time both the strengths and weaknesses of vail's series are pretty clear.
strengths: the main character remains compelling and interesting to follow. vail writes excellent and well-staged action sequences. the action moves quickly and, sometimes, vail is good at building up tension (especially in the second book).
weaknesses: three books in and there has been zero real character development for main character(s). vail's plotting is extremely weak - especially in this book. events don't flow well and vail (in the second and third books) resorts to elaborate means to put his characters in key places that don't really fit the larger, realist tone of his books.
in general: enjoyable especially for the price.
strengths: the main character remains compelling and interesting to follow. vail writes excellent and well-staged action sequences. the action moves quickly and, sometimes, vail is good at building up tension (especially in the second book).
weaknesses: three books in and there has been zero real character development for main character(s). vail's plotting is extremely weak - especially in this book. events don't flow well and vail (in the second and third books) resorts to elaborate means to put his characters in key places that don't really fit the larger, realist tone of his books.
in general: enjoyable especially for the price.
February 3, 2014
While the ending of the book was good, as far as what happens to Stephen & Gilbert, I'm a little upset that we dont see what happens between FitzAllan and Stephen and whether or not FitzAllan pays for the crimes he has committed. I'm hoping its in another book because that really.left me hanging.
October 23, 2015
Another good instalment in the series.
March 31, 2015
Wonderful series
I have now read all of the books of this series of Steven Attebrook (having accidentally started with the last). I found them highly enjoyable. The characters are very well drawn with depth and humor. The author seems to have an excellent knowledge of the times he writes about. I am very sorry not to have another to read. I am now starting on another book by jason vail, the voyage of the wasp..but I crave more about Steven attebrook and Gilbert. Highly recommended.
I have now read all of the books of this series of Steven Attebrook (having accidentally started with the last). I found them highly enjoyable. The characters are very well drawn with depth and humor. The author seems to have an excellent knowledge of the times he writes about. I am very sorry not to have another to read. I am now starting on another book by jason vail, the voyage of the wasp..but I crave more about Steven attebrook and Gilbert. Highly recommended.
April 30, 2013
I read close to 50% of this third book of the series before giving up. I enjoyed the first two but this one annoyed me. It seemed to jump about too much, there were few linking elements between scenes and the writing, quite honestly, did not keep me hooked. I will go back to this in a few weeks and see if I can get into it then.
January 25, 2017
This was a very good story. The Welsh are close to coming when Steven Attebrook is commissioned to solve the murder of a monk. Steven follows the leads he discovers yet even when he thinks he is close, he's not there, yet.
Gilbert is beaten and both are nearly burned to death before the murder is solved.
Gilbert is beaten and both are nearly burned to death before the murder is solved.
April 4, 2015
Worst in series
July 29, 2019
This is the third book in the Stephen Attebrook series, and the stories are settling into a nice tapestry. This one departs from the connected plots of the first two volumes (which really were just one tale split into two volumes, to my way of thinking) and is a pretty decent standalone story, though it does make references back to events in the previous books. This also takes the protagonists, Attebrook and his friend/assistant Gilbert Wistwode, further abroad than we've seen them--to the town of Clun, about 15 miles west of their hometown of Ludlow and closer to the Welsh border, where they have been charged with finding the murderer of a monk.
Like the other stories so far, this one has side plots and interwoven threads; personal story arcs as well as larger geopolitical ones. The events of the latter part of the book are of a grander scale (and the violence is more epic) than they've been so far, and I hope this is a sign of how the remaining books in the series are going to go.
I'm warming up to Attebrook because he's a complex and well-rounded figure. He's very good at some things, like fighting; but not so good at others, and he has flaws and makes mistakes. He's usually likable but not always, and then sometimes there's a sweetness about him. One of the most memorable moments in this book is when he tames a fiery young stallion, using the skills he learned as a soldier in Spain. It's touchingly written and shows us a side of Attebrook we hadn't seen in full, even in his interactions with his own horses.
Vail manages to avoid any major distractions in this volume, like the bad dialog in Baynard's List. In fact this is quite a good read, with evocative language, interesting characters, and a tight, fast-paced plot. I like that Vail is able to teach us about the state of relations between the King and Simon de Montfort, and also between England and Wales, without needing to resort to lectures via some deus ex machina.
The major flaw is that lack of any maps. Much of the plot revolves around the characters' travel between Ludlow and Clun, and then in Clun itself and the area along the Welsh border. Vail describes it all very minutely, but I had to call up the area on Google Maps in order to really get a feel for the geography of the story and the movements of the actors.
Like the other stories so far, this one has side plots and interwoven threads; personal story arcs as well as larger geopolitical ones. The events of the latter part of the book are of a grander scale (and the violence is more epic) than they've been so far, and I hope this is a sign of how the remaining books in the series are going to go.
I'm warming up to Attebrook because he's a complex and well-rounded figure. He's very good at some things, like fighting; but not so good at others, and he has flaws and makes mistakes. He's usually likable but not always, and then sometimes there's a sweetness about him. One of the most memorable moments in this book is when he tames a fiery young stallion, using the skills he learned as a soldier in Spain. It's touchingly written and shows us a side of Attebrook we hadn't seen in full, even in his interactions with his own horses.
Vail manages to avoid any major distractions in this volume, like the bad dialog in Baynard's List. In fact this is quite a good read, with evocative language, interesting characters, and a tight, fast-paced plot. I like that Vail is able to teach us about the state of relations between the King and Simon de Montfort, and also between England and Wales, without needing to resort to lectures via some deus ex machina.
The major flaw is that lack of any maps. Much of the plot revolves around the characters' travel between Ludlow and Clun, and then in Clun itself and the area along the Welsh border. Vail describes it all very minutely, but I had to call up the area on Google Maps in order to really get a feel for the geography of the story and the movements of the actors.
January 12, 2025
Another solid story, nothing too exceptional and kind of the same formula- last minute Stephen figures out the mystery and escapes certain death. You know, that kind of thing :)
I was just in Wales last June (2024), on a castle/garden tour, so this whole book series is speaking to me on a whole another level...
I appreciate that each story spans a few months and are all close together, it keeps the continuity going. Also, this one had more banter with harry and Gilbert which you could take as funny or eye-rolling and irritating. Depends on your response. Personally it was a little of both for me.
I really liked Gilbert in this one, he is a dedicated side kick and can hold his own with Stephen.
Highlights & Spoilers:
“If you know anything about Clun, perhaps you’ve heard of a fellow named Llwyn,” Stephen said.
“Llwyn,” Harry said. “Sounds foreign. Is he Welsh?”
“No, he’s Estonian,” Stephen said. “Of course, he’s Welsh. A drover and horse trader at Clun.”
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“If I continue my association with you, I’ll soon have no friends left,” Gilbert fretted.
And every once in a while, Stephen comes up with something to contemplate:
(Stephen)“But you must have had something in common. You are both men of God.”
(Alcwyn)“He was English, and the worst kind, a Norman. Like all of that sort he looked down on those who were not.”
“It has always been my impression that everyone looks down on those who are not like them.”
Alcwyn chuckled. “That seems to be true, doesn’t it?”
I was just in Wales last June (2024), on a castle/garden tour, so this whole book series is speaking to me on a whole another level...
I appreciate that each story spans a few months and are all close together, it keeps the continuity going. Also, this one had more banter with harry and Gilbert which you could take as funny or eye-rolling and irritating. Depends on your response. Personally it was a little of both for me.
I really liked Gilbert in this one, he is a dedicated side kick and can hold his own with Stephen.
Highlights & Spoilers:
“If you know anything about Clun, perhaps you’ve heard of a fellow named Llwyn,” Stephen said.
“Llwyn,” Harry said. “Sounds foreign. Is he Welsh?”
“No, he’s Estonian,” Stephen said. “Of course, he’s Welsh. A drover and horse trader at Clun.”
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“If I continue my association with you, I’ll soon have no friends left,” Gilbert fretted.
And every once in a while, Stephen comes up with something to contemplate:
(Stephen)“But you must have had something in common. You are both men of God.”
(Alcwyn)“He was English, and the worst kind, a Norman. Like all of that sort he looked down on those who were not.”
“It has always been my impression that everyone looks down on those who are not like them.”
Alcwyn chuckled. “That seems to be true, doesn’t it?”
February 9, 2018
This wasn't a dreadful read, but it certainly didn't have me on the edge of my seat. And come on, Jason, if you're going to hit us over the head with your knowledge of canonical church practices, do your homework and get the details of daily life right. Salt cod is not served in dry slabs: it's soaked and rinsed repeatedly until it's soft and then cooked. Mattresses were stuffed with straw - hay is horse feed.
December 18, 2020
Just what is it . . .
What is it about this series that makes it so good? Perhaps it is the survivability of the unlikely and bedraggled bunch of misfit characters who slog their way through each miserable day, to just live another day, just the same. Never have I seen such stories of ornery, sorry leading characters who live on hope and kindness alone. Tough but hopeful and kind in the face of despair! That is what wins the heart.
What is it about this series that makes it so good? Perhaps it is the survivability of the unlikely and bedraggled bunch of misfit characters who slog their way through each miserable day, to just live another day, just the same. Never have I seen such stories of ornery, sorry leading characters who live on hope and kindness alone. Tough but hopeful and kind in the face of despair! That is what wins the heart.
February 16, 2022
Just a short review to say how much I'm enjoying these mysteries. Jason Vail hardly needs another 5-star review, but heck...
One of the nice touches in this mystery series is how seemingly trivial loose ends from one book become the focal point of another book. Each book feels complete on its own, but its a fun surprise finding something from a previous story suddenly relevant in a new story.
One of the nice touches in this mystery series is how seemingly trivial loose ends from one book become the focal point of another book. Each book feels complete on its own, but its a fun surprise finding something from a previous story suddenly relevant in a new story.
September 17, 2023
It's 1262 and Deputy coroner Stephen Attenbrook, is sent by the coroner Sir Geoffrey Randall, to investigate the murder of a monk in Shropshire as well as to gather information on the possibility of a Welsh attack. Stephen would rather go to Wales himself and bring home is his young son--but he has no choice. Of course, things do not go well in Clune and Stephen finds himself in more difficulties before he is able to solve the mystery.
October 31, 2016
Two things. One: the plot is a rambling mess. It needs structure [like someone had a plan] and, since it is way too long, to be trimmed back. There are a lot of meaningless moments here and they wear. Two: the hero, Attebrook does some actual sleuthing!!!, and while some of it is his usual blundering about, some of it is bona fide figuring things out. So three stars.
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March 8, 2020Welsh uprising begins
Stephen and Gilbert travel to Wales to investigate a murdered monk. Predictably, they run into lots of trouble . This is set in 13th century England, and is a fun read. It is the third in a series, and I had hoped the author would have found an editor by now to fix his numerous grammatical errors, but no. The story is fun though
Stephen and Gilbert travel to Wales to investigate a murdered monk. Predictably, they run into lots of trouble . This is set in 13th century England, and is a fun read. It is the third in a series, and I had hoped the author would have found an editor by now to fix his numerous grammatical errors, but no. The story is fun though
January 17, 2018
It's Over! - Or is it?
I read this book at a cracking pace until I came
to the end when I was pulled up short. Was this the end? Apparently so. Great start. Masterful tale well told. Poor, poor finish.,
I read this book at a cracking pace until I came
to the end when I was pulled up short. Was this the end? Apparently so. Great start. Masterful tale well told. Poor, poor finish.,
October 26, 2020
I didn’t enjoy this book as much as the first two in the series. The storyline was quite complex and it was hard to see where it was going. It did come together at the end but felt rather forced, it really didn’t seem to flow. I’m not sure whether to read the next in the series or not.
January 26, 2021
Another great Stephen Attebrook story
We find Stephen Attebrook in another riveting story but this time in Wales. It has what we've come to expect, a well written story and adventure! Can't wait to read the next instalment!
We find Stephen Attebrook in another riveting story but this time in Wales. It has what we've come to expect, a well written story and adventure! Can't wait to read the next instalment!
July 24, 2021
Attebrook is sent to Wales to uncover the mystery behind a murdered monk and again finds himself drawn into the quarrels of Henry III and Simon de Montfort, but this time the Prince of Wales may be involved as well, and Attebrook makes a very serious enemy
October 6, 2021
Really pageturner
Superbly plotted, fact pacing and very athmospheric historical mystery. Interesting intrigue and some unexpected final. So meticulously researched and give genuinely medieval feelings.
Superbly plotted, fact pacing and very athmospheric historical mystery. Interesting intrigue and some unexpected final. So meticulously researched and give genuinely medieval feelings.
September 18, 2022
Enjoyable read
I find myself enjoying these tales. Looking back on the hardships in th 13th century, gives pause to my soul of the blessings of our current time. Safety, security, and a full mug of ale is glorious.
I find myself enjoying these tales. Looking back on the hardships in th 13th century, gives pause to my soul of the blessings of our current time. Safety, security, and a full mug of ale is glorious.
January 10, 2018
Good read
Fast read enjoyed it i like this series i will continue to read this series .good read. Can't wait for the next one
Fast read enjoyed it i like this series i will continue to read this series .good read. Can't wait for the next one
July 9, 2021
A well-plotted tale.
August 17, 2021
i am confused.
as this a mystery or a political history story? everyone seemed to be a bad guy. of course, maybe that is what is was like in the 1200s.
as this a mystery or a political history story? everyone seemed to be a bad guy. of course, maybe that is what is was like in the 1200s.
September 29, 2021
Fine historical series
So far, series holds up with interesting characters, seemingly well-researched background. Look forward to next installment. All part of family thread.
So far, series holds up with interesting characters, seemingly well-researched background. Look forward to next installment. All part of family thread.
October 16, 2021
Well it takes all sorts
I've heard of poetic licence but this story road a card and several horses through it. Still it takes bottle to write this bad.
I've heard of poetic licence but this story road a card and several horses through it. Still it takes bottle to write this bad.
December 6, 2021
so good
Jason Vail has captured my interest with his story telling!
A few cultural slips but who was there to tell for sure.
Jason Vail has captured my interest with his story telling!
A few cultural slips but who was there to tell for sure.
August 10, 2024
In Like a Lion
Strong beginning, strong finish. Could be longer, but easy read. Stephen was asked to solve a murder away from home. Border lords. Welsh invasion. Can he survive another day?
Strong beginning, strong finish. Could be longer, but easy read. Stephen was asked to solve a murder away from home. Border lords. Welsh invasion. Can he survive another day?
January 28, 2013
This is the third installment in the Stephen Attebrook series. With its dense plot and engaging characters it is a great continuation of the story. The events take place a month after the end of the previous book (Baynard's List). While the author makes quick reference to some of the events that have gone before, he does not belabor them, but integrates them nicely into the story to explain some of the peripheral characters behavior towards Stephen for example.
Apart from Stephen, Gilbert and Harry reprise their roles, as well as other characters previously introduced, but because the majority of the story takes place away from Ludlow, they have much smaller roles to play this time. I absolutely love the dialogues between Stephen and Gilbert, their verbal sparring where each one gives as good as he gets.
Rumors of impending war with the Welsh have reached Ludlow and now Stephen rues the fact that he has sent his infant son Christopher to Wales to live with a distant relative. He makes plans to go and retrieve his son, but his plans are put off when he and Gilbert are sent to investigate the murder of a monk at Clun, a priory and village near the Welsh border. Faced with animosity, lies and distrust, Stephen does his best to uncover the truth, while he continues to be plagued by doubts about his ability to do a good job. For example: "Although the people in Ludlow seemed to have come around to the idea that he had a knack for finding things, he had the good sense to realize that his success was the result of dumb luck and not craft. If he had the knack for anything, it was overlooking the painfully obvious."
Vail does a great job to bring depth to his characters; bringing them alive in their environment. Stephen has learned to avoid his mistakes of the past, but he still feels out of his depth and wishes for a change of career.
This book is a great continuation of the series. I have no complaints about the writing and editing, the only issue I have is the rather abrupt ending, but it definitely has me waiting anxiously for the next installment.
Apart from Stephen, Gilbert and Harry reprise their roles, as well as other characters previously introduced, but because the majority of the story takes place away from Ludlow, they have much smaller roles to play this time. I absolutely love the dialogues between Stephen and Gilbert, their verbal sparring where each one gives as good as he gets.
Rumors of impending war with the Welsh have reached Ludlow and now Stephen rues the fact that he has sent his infant son Christopher to Wales to live with a distant relative. He makes plans to go and retrieve his son, but his plans are put off when he and Gilbert are sent to investigate the murder of a monk at Clun, a priory and village near the Welsh border. Faced with animosity, lies and distrust, Stephen does his best to uncover the truth, while he continues to be plagued by doubts about his ability to do a good job. For example: "Although the people in Ludlow seemed to have come around to the idea that he had a knack for finding things, he had the good sense to realize that his success was the result of dumb luck and not craft. If he had the knack for anything, it was overlooking the painfully obvious."
Vail does a great job to bring depth to his characters; bringing them alive in their environment. Stephen has learned to avoid his mistakes of the past, but he still feels out of his depth and wishes for a change of career.
This book is a great continuation of the series. I have no complaints about the writing and editing, the only issue I have is the rather abrupt ending, but it definitely has me waiting anxiously for the next installment.
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