This book felt confusing because the main characters are between age 11 and 13, with a couple of less important characters more like 16, and yet the themes and content were suitable for older than 13 year old teenagers. It was quite a step up in violence and themes such as complex redemption, difficult love affairs etc which, while handled very well felt really jarring each time the relative ages of the children were mentioned. I don’t understand the authors’ choices not to allow Jake and his friends to have grown up between books, making them 15 or 16 now, a far more suitable age to be exploring such content. My only other problem was the length of the book. Nearly 24 hours on audible…I would never have got through reading it in hard copy format…the book felt like at least 2 if not 3 stories all bundled into one ‘bumper’ issue.
Fortunately the pacing and problems with the authenticity of the characters, that I experienced in the last book in the series, has been corrected in this story, but given it is aimed at middle grade readers, the length and some of the content is highly unsuitable for this group of readers. As a teacher, I speak with authority when I say that I doubt many of today’s youth would persist through such a lengthy tome without loosing heart someway through it.
Certainly my 14 year old had similar criticisms to my own, in particular with the length of the story. He also found the swapping back and forth of different character plots disconcerting as he struggled to hold the very different pacing and mood each plot projected, while swapping between each other. This disturbed me less as I am more familiar with this type of episodic writing.
This series started with lovely reads for the middle grade age group and now seems so self indulgent in its writing of the last two instalments, as if they have forgotten who their audience and fan base are, or have become confused about their consumers’ needs. When you write for children, it is essential to stay connected and walk in their shoes…if you write for a 13 year old, make your 13 year old character believable and relatable. I have given 3 stars as I did enjoy the character development and complexity of plot as an adult reader, but as I say, I do not believe this book was intentionally written for an adult audience. Hence it is inherently problematic.