Her Triplet Alphas（Book 1)

by Joanna J., Crater (Contributor)

Chasity's POV

Chasity has spent years being picked on by the identical Alpha Alex, Alpha Felix and Alpha Calix Thorn. They’re rich, handsome and popular werewolves and they make sure Chasity knows she is a poor, "fat" and unpopular she-wolf. The boys pull her golden curls and mock her every move, nicknaming her ChaRity because she was taken into the pack house when left behind by her gambling, drug-addict parents. She cooks and cleans for free to pay off the debts incurred by her parents to the wolf pack. She’s relieved to count down the days to her eighteenth birthday when she can leave her pack behind forever. The last thing on her mind is finding out who her mate is when she comes of age. On her birthday, she is horrified to discover that her former tormenters, the Alpha Triplets, are her fated mates, all three of them. She has seven more months of hell aka high school before she can flee. The Triplets who are filled with remorse and lust for their little mate are determined to spend the next seven months convincing her to stay. Is it too little too late or will their happily ever after be just right?

Formerly Goldilocks and the Triplet Alphas

Genres: Romance, Fantasy, Werewolves, Paranormal, Shapeshifters, Why Choose, Fiction

350 pages, Paperback

Published April 20, 2023

Reviews

[Jodi Elinger · Rating 2 out of 5]

DNF
The storyline could have been really good but the writing is sloppy and a little immature. Some parts were unnecessary and others rushed. It needed a good proofreading. I just didn't feel it was worth the money the Dreame app wanted me to spend so I parted ways with it.

[Renata Sicolino · Rating 3 out of 5]

The book needed polishing and editing for misspellings, as the story does in the Dreame app. I like the characters and the steamy parts, but the book completely changes pace after the first half, which makes the story interesting too, but it’s like reading a totally different book.

[RottyReads · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5
Better than I expected. Honestly. VERY spicy. But the story line is pretty good too. Not bad for a book I found on an app thru an ad on Facebook.

[Madi · Rating 1 out of 5]

This was arguably one of the worst books I have ever read. There were so many typos and poorly structured sentences that the editor either quit halfway through or Helen Keller herself came back from the dead to proofread. Not to mention that all the characters essentially had the same name, especially if they were related in any way whatsoever. The triplets all just repeated themselves. Charity was annoying. I could go on forever honestly. The story didn’t even get exciting until they stopped fucking every chapter, but then it got drug out for so long I lost interest again, and couldn’t wait for it to end. This story would’ve been more interesting if it had been about 200 pages shorter or at the very least ended at chapter 50 where it seemed like it was wrapping everything up but then the author just decided to add the epilogue in with the story. All in all I would give negative stars if that were possible. Read at your own risk. I think I actually lost brain cells reading this.

[Cyndi Rachol · Rating 4 out of 5]

"It's werewolf smut," was my reply whenever my husband or in-laws asked what I was reading while on vacation. This was my guilty beach read. If you are looking for sophisticated writing, keep browsing elsewhere. If you are distracted by actual physiological impossibilities & are likely to ask "Which orifice? Um....what? *How?!?*", then this is not the book for you. If you're looking for a page-turner of werewolf sex-filled fiction, then you're in the right place. I'll soon be reading Book 2 (same story, told from the triplets viewpoint).

[Cassie · Rating 3 out of 5]

A Facebook ad reeled me in, wasn't expecting to like this at all but once I started I went down a rabbit hole. Saw comments online that the book was incomplete but I went on YouTube and found the audio version and I've been listening to that which was great coz the actual book had so many typos and errors - didn’t seem like it had been edited. Oh well, Book 2 where you at? Need my alpha fix 🫣😮‍💨

[Raven · Rating 1 out of 5]

I got sucked into reading this because of a Facebook ad and it honestly made me not trust any other Facebook ads.

The writing is very childish. It reads like it was written by a 15 year old. I’ll put it this way, I’ve read more polished and mature SpongeBob fanfic. Literally, I’m not joking.

The sex isn’t good either. The positions make no sense. These boys would have to phase through each other for some of these positions. Physically they make no sense, so trying to imaging the spicy scenes is just like “huh…???”

For the amount of money you’d have to spend on this to read it on the app…. Don’t. There are plenty other well written werewolf sex books that you can read.

[Natalie · Rating 2 out of 5]

I really wanted to give this book a chance but it felt like a gigantic run on sentence. Definitely needs editing and a lot of polishing. Had potential but just not yet.

[Shannon Doyle · Rating 1 out of 5]

I’m done with these stupids apps. This was the worst fucking thing I’ve ever read.

[cara · Rating 2 out of 5]

SO i actually read ‘The Challenge, Two alphas One Girl’ and i never actually finished THIS series but i read 130 chapters of that book and couldn’t find it on goodreads and wasn’t about to miss out on a book so x
decided to dnf this actual book series bc it was spoilt by my other book x

These books are my guilty pleasure, so bad they’re they’re so good

2/5

[Alicea · Rating 3 out of 5]

I can’t rate this more than 3 stars. While the overall plot was good there were tons of grammatical errors and a huge lack of world building. Being that the main characters were werewolves they hardly ever turned. I would read the second book because the concept is interesting.

[Stephanie · Rating 4 out of 5]

I found this book thru a facebook ad, but didn’t want to pay to read the rest of it. It kept popping up on my feed so eventually I did some digging and I was able to find it on Wattpad! (I primarily read this on Wattpad, a couple chapters a night before bed and more chapters during weekends) I eventually found it as an actual physical book available to purchase on Amazon (although I didn’t purchase it)

Pros:
✍🏻The spice was there 🌶️ (the preview from the ad got me hooked so there’s that) - very detailed scenes
✍🏻Quick easy read - I could’ve finished this in a shorter amount of time, but with a busy schedule, a couple chapters a night had to do.
✍🏻Fantasy Romance (?) - Werewolves / supernatural

Cons:
✍🏻Typos / grammatical errors - I didn’t mind them too much since they could easily be figured out anyway, but mostly because I didn’t spend anything to read this book, so I wasn’t too bothered by the occasional writing error.

Overall, I enjoyed reading this.

[Tessa Snyder · Rating 5 out of 5]

I cannot get past how much I loved this book. The plot has so many twists and turns. The scenes in them even made me feel spicy over here. I was fully in a chokehold, finished this and immediately started the second from the POV of the triplets. I never was big with the whole “werewolf” stuff before, but now I am. I highly recommend giving it a shot!

[Alyssa · Rating 2 out of 5]

Have you ever found yourself bored sitting around, yearning for a book that gives you all the vibes of 2013 Wattpad era, equipped with grammatical errors? Well, you're in luck I found the book just for you! Her Triple Alphas. Let me take you on a journey, full steam spoilers ahead because I took notes for this baby.

We open the scene with our female lead Charity, uh I mean Chaisty (Although Charity felt like the better name to me than Chaisty, anyways) She is this poor skinny little thing (Oh I’m sorry no she isn’t she is a curvy petite but doesn’t eat, make it make sense.) Did I mention she is so small too? So short and tiny. She lives in the alpha’s house, with Luna and their three adult sons who are three years older than her, but they still act like impudent children. Hse lives with them because her druggie parents abandoned her there when she was young. They disrespect her and call her names as well as bully her, during her entire stay in this house which she has been in since she was 9. These alphas dream of finding their mate on their 18th birthday, which they happen to share the same birthday as Chaisty who will shift for the first time and be able to discover her mate.

You will never guess who her mate is.

Did you guess the triple alphas? Bingo.

Oh did I mention their names yet? Alex, Felix, and Calix. Yeah I know I thought the same thing, her two friends she randomly made are named Mina and Tina, it is like the author said all the names need to rhyme.

So we are mated to these alphas who bullied her for the vast majority of her life, and did they apologize before begging her to accept them? The hard answer is no, not NEARLY enough. There was not enough groveling for the amount of things these guys put her through, so I pulled a quote to share with you.
“ ‘You don’t ever have to forgive us, just be ours anyways’ said Calix. “ Ahem, this was in context to her addressing how they put her in an ice hole one time and tried to drown her and gave her hypothermia, did they ever really address that? No, she forgave them way too easily since her stupid wolf wanted to be all up in their grill and did not want them to be upset. GIRL, they deserved to be upset. They were horrible to you, but I guess that's just me.
I did not realize there was an actual plot to their book until about the halfway point and it truly just felt random, the first half was solely focused on their relationship which they marked each other and mated fairly early; additionally, she accepted them but still had thoughts of running away to somewhere else? You’re mated now baby you're not going anywhere. They fell in love fairly quickly, I understand fated mates but this was super insta love on both of their ends. Granted Chastity was a bit more hesitant; she got there very quickly.
Onto the “plot”. It would not be a nosologic Wattpad vibe read if there was not a kidnapping. Of course, our fmc gets kidnapped by the werewolf mafia, which is what I’m going to call it. They take her because who would not want the Luna of a very powerful werewolf pack, so here she is trapped for a fairly long time, why couldn’t they use the mind link and tracking? Idk either man, plot holes. While she is here she finds out that she is pregnant! (I am a firm surprise pregnancy trope hater, but I felt it coming so wasn’t even surprised). We also find out that Luna is her father’s step-sister, so she hates her because Luna hated her mom but she still “took care” of Chaisty regardless. She gets rescued by her mates and has a complicated birth where she has three healthy triplet babies. There is a lead-up to book 2, but I will not suffer through that. Oh, I forgot to mention her parents are snakes somehow, never understood that part. I did not understand what happened but okay.
Some honorable mentions:
There was a jumpscare daddy kink in this and random BDSM talk, I mean I am not one to come here and kink shame but you can’t just daddy kink me like that give me a warning girl.
Calix was my favorite by far, he was the most reasonable Fleix pushed her so much to do things she did not want to do, and Alex was just kind of there. Their personalities could have been fleshed out more but weren’t.
The world could have been so cool but there was no world-building, I could follow along well because I KNOW my werewolf lore, but if this was my first werewolf book I would be so lost.
I hated the phrase “My weeping flower”. That was horrible in my eyes.
There was not enough groveling in this book. (I am so adamant about this that it needed to be said again.)

The moral of the story, if you want to read a book that is extremely smutty and horny, a half-baked plot, and some sprinkled errors in it, I suggest this book.

[Minnie Jung · Rating 2 out of 5]

did it make sense? absolutely not. was it entertaining? absolutely 🐺

[Katelyn King · Rating 3 out of 5]

Did what I needed it to do until the 3/4 mark, then I got tired of it, very repetitive.

[Susan King · Rating 2 out of 5]

I got sucked into the story from a FB ad not realizing I’d have to subscribe to finish the story. I was disappointed I had to pay so much more than a paperback or hardback book to finish the story, but I guess that’s the point of the sneak-peek FB ads. I am not a reader that can DNF a book once I’ve invested time in it. The writing definitely needed a great deal of editing for misspellings and grammatical errors. The story started with a good hook, but the rest of it felt rushed and underdeveloped. There was a lot of introspection into Chasity’s mind and life experiences in the first half, and the second half was missing that piece. As I said, the second half was rushed.

[Luisa Meco · Rating 2 out of 5]

I was a bit disappointed with the amount of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in this book.

[Melanie DMR · Rating 1 out of 5]

This Book is the biggest shit what huh I read,what is the reason I say it ? The history is really simple, one cliche made history obviously, but the real problem is their protagonists, the Boys is the same stereotipic shit in the example of "Alpha male who treats his partner badly" they are supposed to lead A COMMUNITY, they cannot behave like teenagers, by the way "surprise" they cannot take responsibility for their actions, years of violence focused on a person who would continue like this if they had not been their partner, this brings me to another point, the protagonist is an idiot.

The author couldn't have written someone more basic and insufferable, right? She is just "oh I hate them because of the years of abuse, but they gave me a backpack and a cell phone and that's why I want to forgive them and have crazy sex" it can be more basic and insipid, it has no personality other than crying and then having sex, her story is "I have traumas and I hate them all, but not anymore because they gave me love and sex" Hugh

The parents are literally a forgettable character with the most trashy and cliché story ever, really the original Luna's pretext for hating her is someone immature and stupid, the alpha practically does not exist, the parents of the FL are the most badly thing written after the protagonist, "oh we are addicts, Let's forget that being addicts they are unstable and usually their children are born addicts because they can't stop using, let's forget that usually the law always seeks to ensure that children are left in the hands of relatives to prevent something from happening to the child", and so on.

Author, if you don't know how to write serious topics, DON'T WRITE IT AND NOW, it's really sad that the story has potential but it's garbage, well, what did I expect too?

I know there are many stories with these types of protagonists, but this one is actually even worse than all the previous ones.

I don't give it less than one star because there's no way.

I won't say more, it's tiring to talk about everything bad, anyway, don't read it, thank you

[Katherine Graziano (Westrick) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Smut at its best

[Victoria Parkins · Rating 4 out of 5]

Okay for first time ever, I actually continued reading an ad I saw on IG Reels and I must admit the book had me hooked. Surprisingly, by the time I finished the book, I was shocked with how much MORE it encapsulated in terms of a fantasy world, a thriller, drama while obviously still intertwining themes of reverse haram, mental health, abuse and some graphic erotica.

My rating is mainly based on the content of the overall story, granted there were some spelling and grammatical errors and the style of writing was very simple, plain language. To understand what I mean…. When there were “fast paced, thriller” scenes in the latter half of the book, anytime I had anxiety build up, it lasted a few seconds because I knew based on the author’s writing style that I really didn’t have to wait long for a reveal/movement of the story haha. BUT, this book really showed me how talented an author can be, without having to hide behind imagery and other typical writing styles that can fill up hundreds of pages. This story itself was GENUINELY SO GOOD, that I could look past its faults.

The only things that I struggled to overlook was how Twilight Saga coded this book was (i.e extremely young girl falling in love while still in HS and experiencing some serious series of events). However, I only thought about that once I reached near the end of the story and started reflecting on the start, where the protagonist started from- and was like “what the heck”.

Fun little page turner.

[Phoebe · Rating 4 out of 5]

Overall I enjoyed reading this book, I have never really read books before. I had always found it too hard or I was easily distracted. This is only the second book I had ever read. I didn't mind all of the spelling mistakes or grammatical errors as I am dyslexic and I haven't known any different. However I can see how it would bother others. There were a few times where a character's name was spelt differently or wrong, and I got confused thinking that yet another character had been added with another familiar name, but after rereading it was Clear what it meant.

I decided to read after seeing the Same ad on Facebook that I assume everyone saw but after reading a few chapters on one app realised I could read for free on wattpad. I enjoyed it a lot and I think I will continue to find similar story's to enjoy.

I very much enjoyed the amount of smut in this book and I think that it is what kept me hooked I hope to find more like It !

The book did feel rushed towards the end, but I like that it got wrapped up and not left on a cliffhanger for me to worry and wait to see what's next .

[Alyssa Gandaria · Rating 1 out of 5]

I read this story and DNF at about the halfway point when it was only on the dream app a few years ago. It was super rough then. Sentence structure was a mess, and I was constantly having to reread to understand. There were so many grammatical and spelling errors, and a handful of times I was lost, trying to figure out if it was a flashback or on the current timeline. I was not going to spend any more "coins" to unlock and read 80 something chapters.
Then, I found it on Amazon as a self-published paperback. It was my fault for figuring it had been fixed and edited, so I bought it, and YIKES. It's still the exact same story. Mistakes and all. I'm definitely returning it to Amazon.
The story is so bad. The idea behind it could be solid if it was executed correctly. The story reads so adolescent, and I'm annoyed with every single character. The main characters are supposed to be 23 and 18, but they read like they're all 14 and dating the way they think adults date. I definitely do not recommend this book.

[Tessa J. · Rating 3 out of 5]

I honestly want to give this book more stars because it had me in a chokehold for about two days. I had to snap out of it because there is just way too many questionable things going on here.

Number 1: I can get with the whole triple fated alpha wolf thing but the borderline incest had me questioning my whole being on board. There was wonderful one on one scenes so the triplet gang bang could've been avoided.

Number 2: She was a virgin!!!! Omg at the fast tracked extreme love making. I get wolves aren't real but lawd! Give the lady some time to adjust!

Number 3: The individual relationships she had with each was so wonderful and I wish that was expanded on more. Each twin had their own personality and motive but were so committed. I needed more of that.

The story, most spicy scenes, and world building were great to read! At the end of the day, I had to break up with the book, it wasn't me it was you.

[Amanda Roussey · Rating 2 out of 5]

Facebook got me invested by previewing the first several chapters, which led to me downloading the ‘Dreame’ app….and my inability to not finish a book once started made me preserve and continue to read the rest of this book.

The Werewolf smut gave me slight Twilight vibes. Overall, it needed to be proofread. There were A LOT of spelling and grammar errors. Some chapters were well written, and other chapters seemed rushed. There were chapters that were engaging and chapters that were pointless. It started off great and engaging, BUT by the middle/end it lost it's energy and just became stale. 

I will NOT be reading nor paying for the sequel. 60 chapters were enough and I don't care enough about the characters to want to know more 🙃

[cait sanders]

this was *comically* terrible, and yet… I still kinda had a good time 😂 it appeared to me as an instagram caption and I bothered to download and read the whole thing so take that for whatever you want it to mean. I will say, I regularly glimpsed little glimmers of potential while I was reading. I love the concept of a Luna, I love that the boys are generally respectful of her not being ready, I love that even though the prose is really minimal she makes a visible effort to make each of the triplets unique, and she seems to have a strong and consistent vision for their personalities. The author seems very young, I really do think she has potential.

[Lauren Hardke · Rating 1 out of 5]

I was really disappointed in the character development and the amount of typos in this book. It's a shame the publisher didn't edit the book before publishing. There were a lot of discrepancies in the details in the plot line, unrealistic expectations from a character's perspective (everyone is hunky dory after 1 therapy session), and unnecessary details about characters that show up once, maybe twice, in all 62 chapters. I can honestly say this is the worst book I've ever read. I have an unfortunate sense of self-determination that once I start a book, I have to finish it. If I could have stopped reading this, I would have.

[Allison · Rating 1 out of 5]

Would have been higher if I could actually properly read the book. It was impossible to find a full copy of it unless you paid a ridiculous amount on Dreame or Wehear & other apps to read bits and pieces I found a copy on Amazon but it was only in paperback and didn't feel compelled to buy a copy when the author broke it up into so many books and it was just as much or more that way compared to the apps.. the writing was good and I was enjoying the story but the ridiculousness of trying to track down a way to read it was way to much.

[Camille Wolsky · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is my first werewolf romance book, and I kept seeing it advertised to me on Facebook, so I figured I’d give it a go. The spicy scenes were well-written and the writer’s strong suit. However, there were a lot of grammar errors throughout, so if that bothers you, I’d skip this one. The lack of editing almost made it feel like fan fiction. The pacing of the novel was a bit odd; the ending felt rushed compared to the beginning. It was entertaining and a fun read but nothing to write home about.

[Rachael · Rating 1 out of 5]

Literally makes Stephanie Meyers writing look Stephen Hawking. Use of repetative phrasing is annoying ( and a turn off) , the English language has so many lovely hyperbolic words and different phrases that can make books like this more imaginative and exciting but no, this author uses the language of a 14 year old boy (insert Beevis and Butt head laugh and it's there).

I do appreciate this is just suppose to be a very base level, get the job done version of "Mills & Boon" with extra smut, but it had the potential to be more.