I don't know how/why goodreads has a different synopsis than the one on the book cover, but the back of this book said none of the things that this goodreads did. It was so misleading and the fact that she had been married before should've been stated on the book otherwise I get mad that I get roped into reading it. I don't like when any of the characters have been married before. And there was no in-depth information about Shane as there was in this, about his travels and career and all. Also, I really wish I hadn't read this review while I was so early in the book because it gave away every destination they go to. That would've been a nice surprise. I really hate when authors give away everything without leaving anything for us to be shocked over. I also don't get why it says Elizabeth Lowell writing as Ann Maxwell. If that's a ghost writer type thing it defeats the purpose when your name is there.
In the beginning the writing really got on my nerves because all she kept talking about was the cold. It was really redundant and I should have counted how many times the word cold actually appeared in such a small amount of pages. Usually if I don’t like the style of writing in the beginning, I don’t come to like it. But it got a little better. Just when I was wondering how things would play out with Shane and Danielle, the author throws a wrench in and switches to a whore—not really though, because she doesn’t sleep with the guys, she hires other girls to do that, and decorates her house in October for Christmas and has items for each of the men’s religions. Wow. I’d like to believe that the world doesn’t have people like this, and I certainly don’t want to read about them in books. It’s absolutely bizarre/disgusting/weird/trashy etc. and I can’t believe someone would even put a character like this in a book and do that crap.
Dani was mostly admirable and I could respect her for not being easily led around or treated like she was helpless. She was strong and held her own with Feng, questioning him and digging for answers about the silk instead of being duped. She also didn’t let Shane baby her; she insisted she could run on her own and keep up with him. She suggested carrying her and she said she wasn’t a piece of luggage to be dragged across the landscape. He also didn’t give in to her attraction for him and turn into an empty-headed idiot that couldn’t concentrate on anything but his looks. She wanted to know what was going on, where they were going, and who Shane really was. And I like Shane too. He was protective and concerned about her, and he made the decision immediately to save her life instead of the silk. It was so sweet knowing he did everything he did, getting the truck and hiring his friend to risk his life, and getting a helicopter that cost a lot just so she could get out of the county safely. It was also nice how he insisted that she didn’t owe him or Risk Limited anything. Dani did want to repay that debt though and that was another admirable quality to her.
Redpath and Gillespie were very strange to me. I felt like I was missing out on a lot by them, like their story had been going in greater detail in a previous book or something and I had missed out. Idk if they had their own book before this, or if the author just didn’t think it was necessary to provide readers with any background info, but whatever the case I didn’t really know anything about their relationship and felt so lost. The way they talked was hard to figure out and I get the Gillespie was from another country and so had different sayings and phrases, but the author didn’t even say what any of them meant! I was like what the heck are they saying? I didn’t know much about Redpath either, and Idk if she picked up the words from Gillespie or what. “We will go softly, softly, here and mebbe catchee monkee, don’t you see?” When she said that I just reread it over and over thinking I had missed something, and tried to figure out what in the world she was saying. It was so weird and it went completely unexplained. Gillespie said things like “tickety-boo,” “bugger me” and “wankers.” No idea what they mean. There should have been a translator, one of the other characters saying what it meant, or a dictionary in the beginning of the book.
I found it really ironic that the author had Shane say “there’s nothing worse for a covert operation than sex” and “it’s going to be hell, lady. I promise that you’ll roast in the fires with me.” Because the author didn’t deliver at all. They’re on vacation at a tropical location and all I got was rusty fences and video cameras. That’s all they did. The author mentioned in an aside—Shane was thinking about it—that sleeping with Dani and feeling her breathe was tough on him, and that was it. She just blew over it without letting us experience it. As they’re leaving they have a moment in the bushes, where he touches her, but it wasn’t hot. Not nearly hot enough as a romance novel should be. Then when they get back Dani stretches and her blouse pulls tight and buttons come undone, or something, and I think it was supposed to be hot, but again, it wasn’t. And she’s licking the spoon again and again after she ate her soup, goes back to get the remaining drops, and licks the spoon repeatedly again. Anyone thinking that’s hot? Cuz I’m not. It’s been almost 350 pages and there’s really been nothing much between these 2 and I’ve had it. I understand that he can’t have sex because he made a vow to not have sex for 3 years. And are you sure the 3 years didn’t happen in this book? Because it sure felt like it. They could’ve had so many romantic moments that didn’t involve going all the way, and they didn’t.
It was a total waste of time and nothing was utilized to its full potential. It’s sad when the side characters are having sex, twisted though it is, and the main characters are doing than nothing more sneaking glances or touching a little. While they were in Aruba Gillespie had packed Dani a “butt-floss bakini” and I was waiting for Dani to wear it and them go out on the beach together to have some romantic moments, if only to keep up the appearance of being a happy couple, but of course, it didn’t happen. I was so disappointed because that could have been really good.
Dani was pretty ruthless at times and her sense of humor really rubbed me the wrong way. Her mouth at times went too far and it was usually when Shane hadn’t said anything to really provoke it. It’s good to stick up for yourself but it’s unlikable and irritating when you do it with no cause. She kept calling him a Zen cyborg which I didn’t really know what it meant, it sounded like geeky, nerdy language to me. Then she knows what a “Charlie Foxtrot” means, and mentions a “circle-jerk” to Shane and Gillespie. Both of these phrases I had to look up. Nothing quite like doing research while you’re reading a book. The author could make it easy and actually tell readers what they’re saying but I guess that’d be too much trouble. A circle-jerk is when guys get around in a circle and masturbate themselves or each other. What a nice, classy joke for her to make. And there’s no explanation to how she knows that either. Oh that’s right, being an archaeologist suddenly qualifies you to know everything. And Shane and Gillespie are talking about Katya’s sex life and Dani pipes up with is this like a “look Ma, no hands thing?” I didn’t really get it, but it was inappropriate.
Redpath was mean, judgmental and sarcastic. I thought she was interesting before that, particularly her relationship with Gillespie and I wanted to see if she had her own story, but when she went to the bookstore and was critically studying the gothic girl behind the counter I didn’t like her at all. She noticed that the girl was anorexic and it wasn’t in a sympathetic way. Then she judges her on the way she speaks, dresses, acts and reads. And she insults the girl repeatedly and gets smart with her and then just kind of seems smug that the girl doesn’t even realize it! Was that supposed to make us like her? What was the author thinking with putting that in there?!
When Shane got to Katya’s house it got a little sleazy and I didn’t like the thoughts he was having. It was out of character and disgusting. There was a whore having sex with one of Katya’s men, and Shane thought “Ride ‘em, cowgirl. That’s one guest I won’t have to worry about tripping over.” And he thought that the whores will have their work cut out for them tonight, because the men couldn’t get it up with a splint. And Katya leans over to show her cleavage off. “Promises, promises, Shane thought cynically. Is it the money or her tits that turns on the bankers? Either way, she has them eating out of her ice-cold little crotch.” That was disgusting. He could’ve said those things in a better way, or better yet, not said them at all. The word tits is so gross and classless to me. Why didn’t the author just have him stay outside and watch the whores go to work, the way he seemed so approving of it. Yuck.
The author changed perspectives and gave thoughts of all the characters with no warning whatsoever. We’d be in the narration of one character and then suddenly be privy to the thoughts of another. In my opinion that’s bad writing and it leaves the reader on rocky ground with uneven footing as we try to figure out whose thoughts we’re going to be in next. And she gave the thoughts of Tony Lieu a lot; I don’t really care what he was thinking.
It was boring in so many places and easy to put down. I didn’t even feel like reading the wordy parts, and there were lot of those. There were so many conversations that lasted page after page after page and most were hard to follow and understand. It was bogged down with too much political lingo and I just didn’t have any clue what she was talking about. There were so many intelligent characters and my brain struggled to comprehend what they were talking about. I wondered if the author herself knew what she was talking about, or if it really was just confusing like I thought it. Either way, the novel was way more complicated than it needed to be. I felt like I was reading a seminary piece of work on the downfall of the Soviet Union, crime syndicates, drug cartels, Buddhism, monks, and ancient textiles. Not exactly the light romance novel I was expecting.
Every single chapter she had to state where they were at and what month it was, even if it the same location and time for more than one chapter in a row. I don’t need to be reminded constantly where they’re at and what month it is.
The ending was so disappointing. They didn’t have until so late in the book I didn’t even think they were going to. And it lasted less than a page and had so little details it barely even registered that they were having sex. I wait for over 400 pages for 2 people to have sex—it feels like a lifetime—and then I get that? I HATE when romance authors don’t give any romance! Sex scenes should be hot and steamy, they should describe every action, look, touch, not completely blow over it. And he broke his vow on a technicality—the International date line made it tomorrow where they were at, so technically he had been celibate for 3 years. Really. You drug out that celibacy vow for over 400 pages and then on the last day they can’t wait so you throw out a technicality so it’s ok. And Dani still believes he doesn’t like her so she’s all heartbroken, and then he appears and the Prasam Dhamsa gives them the silk and wraps it around them. Real good stuff. And there wasn’t enough of a wrap-up on their relationship. Shane made the comment that even if they don’t get married they’ll still be connected, and Dani didn’t even really correct it. There should’ve been a proposal right there and then. And Redpath and Gillespie, I’m not even sure what to make of that relationship. And I guess the author didn’t either because she didn’t make 1 thing happen between them the entire book.
This author does sadistic and twisted relationships all too well. And omg, the ending with Katya and Kasatonin... what a colossal copout. She has Kasatonin kill Katya, and worst of all, he kills himself! Are you freakin kidding me? I guess she didn't have any idea how to take them down and so took the easy way out. I hate when authors do that. I can barely even talk about their relationship because I was in complete and utter shock that Katya was turned on by cold vodka bottles and having her private part bitten until it drew blood, and turned on the sight of Kasatonin bleeding and there being a struggle during sex. She apparently loved him, which was just weird. The author didn't even keep up that pretense with Kasatonin. He mocked her all the time, calling her poor, sad mink and cut her, and threatened to kill her all the time. And he even wanted Redpath more and wondered how she was during sex. This author is twisted to even come up with something like this. It takes a sick individual to think of something like this much less publish it. I'd scare myself if I thought of this and I'd be afraid of what people would think of me if I wrote it.
I’m not impressed with the author, and I bought this book for $1 along with another of hers so I’m really dreading that one after this thing.