It took me a while to complete this book — it’s not the sort of light beach read you can breeze through in an afternoon — it’s a long and quite heavy-going novel. It has been meticulously researched and clearly, the author has put a lot of thought into it. I enjoy historical novels and am not afraid of big books and this book should have been just my cup of tea. It both was and wasn’t.
I liked the story, it was engrossing and engaging. I liked the characters, although I was angered by what I felt was the pointless and unnecessary death of a main character. The author keeps within the framework of the period the novel is set in and I must give full marks for her attention to detail. No jarring modern slang or expressions to jerk the reader from the setting.
I wanted to give this book five stars. I am a very generous reviewer and will overlook much if the story grips me and I wrestled long and hard with my decision to only award four stars. There are a couple of reasons why I marked it down. Firstly, the main premise of the novel is the Order of the Roses. This was my first book by this author so I don’t know if the Order is fully explained in other books, but an explanation at the beginning outlining the origin and a brief history of the Order, along with help in understanding its terminology would have been incredibly helpful. As it was, I struggled to wade through all the root, leaf, stem, bud and rose phrases and couldn’t grasp their meaning. A simple page at the beginning helping the reader to understand would have saved me a world of frustration.
Secondly, there are a lot of characters in this book and I mean A LOT. Many of them have very similar names — I lost count of all the Megs, Meggies, Maggies, Margarets, Marys, Marias, and Marianas — and the author changes POV at the drop of a hat, sometimes even mid page she will headhop to another character. I was left floundering, not sure who was talking now and why we’d so abruptly jumped. Sometimes, I had no idea who the characters were and where they fit into the narrative. Again, a list of characters and which family they belonged to at the beginning of the book would have made my life a lot easier. As it was, I was constantly flipping back to try and see where we had swapped POVs and why. A simple Dramatis Personae would have at least been a reference guide to the many characters and how they figured in the plot.
These two additions would have upgraded my rating, as well as maybe the author making it clearer that the POV had changed from one character to another. There’s nothing wrong with multiple POV, at least, not in my opinion, but when there are so many it is essential to make it as clear as possible so that the reader can stay with it.
An interesting read for lovers of historical fiction with a medieval feel.