RATING: 3.75
PROTAGONIST: Jim Fallon and Sophia Travaskis, police detectives
SETTING: Florida
SERIES: Standalone
Walter Satterthwait has written a lot of different kinds of books, most notably the Pinkerton series set in the 1920s and a PI series featuring Joshua Croft. In PERFECTION, Satterthwait tries his hand at a serial killer thriller.
The scene of the crime is horrible, and Sarasota Police Detective Sophia Tregaskis is worried that she will embarrass herself in front of her much more experienced partner, Jim Fallon. The body is horribly mutilated; as a matter of fact, a large part of the innards are found in the bathtub. As it turns out, the victim is a woman of size whose weight has been reduced at the hands of a killer.
Defying the general profile of a serial killer wherein there is a long gap between killings, the murderer finds another target very quickly. It's at that point that Tregaskis and Fallon know that they are dealing with a serial killer. The main connection between the murders is that he is focusing on killing women of size. He doesn't seem to be operating by the standard serial killer rule book; fortunately, Sophia has some intuitive flashes that pan out.
Although some of the descriptions of what happened to the victims were rather graphic, there is an underlying sense of quirky humor to the book. For example, the killer finds his victims at a local grocery store. In one scene, he is torn between two equally alluring women, both "Wibble-Wobbles" (his term). He makes his decision of who will be an appropriate victim by what they put in their grocery cart. Hamburger Helper, Cheez Whiz, M&Ms, Ding Dongs – lots of potential. The second candidate has an equally appealing cart full of food—until she adds a healthy head of Romaine lettuce. Out of the running.
PERFECTION is not perfect, but it does have some good things going for it. The characters of Fallon and Tregaskis are nicely developed; there's an undercurrent of attraction between them, even though Fallon is much older. There are a few unexpected twists woven into the plot, although the final one involving the identity of the killer was a real stretch.