This is a decent, unfocused read. Alex, the main character, is a good guy who can’t seem to make any real difference. He's a student of magic, learning to be an animist, on a quest to find his animal companion. His quest goes horribly wrong when he bonds with a rat.
However, Alex’s bond with his rat (named Mote) needs to have more importance. It’s easy to forget he’s an animist because he has this great magical connection with an animal, but seldom uses it. It only comes in handy once, maybe twice in the whole book. Otherwise it's a huge liability. What’s the point being an Animist at all if it has no impact on the story?
There seem to be many ideas and themes, but it’s unclear what it’s supposed to be about. In fact, events contradict each other. Such as, this is a world of magic, but certain scenes imply there is no magic and that science is taking over. It ruins the feeling that this is a fantasy story because the evidence disproves it. What are we supposed to believe?
Then there's the face-off with the villain. It finds Alex helpless and in need of bailing out, like every time he tries to do anything. Alex doesn’t really do anything over the whole book. Things happen around and to him but he does not affect anything. (Can you say Harry Potter?) Why is he the main character?
Overall though, Ms. Forward’s style keeps the story interesting and fun. Not many books can make me laugh out loud, but this one had a few scenes that did. I loved the insane king. I got to the point where I understood his nonsense dialogue without the interpreter. The dining hall scene is absolutely hilarious, but I wish its purpose had been clearer.
It is a very good read, but the story never decides what it wants to be about, Alex is way too passive to be the main character, and the whole idea of his magical connection with an animal has next to zero impact on the story.
With another draft or two, I believe this could’ve been great.