NOTICE: I tried not to give any spoilers. If other readers think I gave away too much, please let me know and I'll warn other readers.
After Richmond's acclaimed The Year of the Fog, Bantam Books republished her first novel. Bad move. The book should have been massively rewritten.
I went back and skim/scanned throughout the book to be sure I wasn't being too negative. I found the main character to be totally bland and unexplained. Even when she is in life changing situations, the author does not bring us into her--all the way through the unbelievable ending. It is almost like an author who chose a series of events and then saw a jerrymandering way to put them together. At first, I was drawn to want to get to know all of the first characters but I too soon learned that I would not get there.
As a native Alabamian, I didn't even find the characterization of Demopolis and the river worked. The two Rivers are key images for the author, but she doesn't make either work, especially in the Three Gorges situations.
Thinking back, I am wondering: What two people living together in New York during the Internet/Information explosion age would set off to China on a long cruise without having any background about what they would see? The husband has some believable characteristics but the wife only seems to notice the symptoms that hurt her (too long after any reasonable spouse would have noticed them). When he is out of sight, he is out of her mind, except as minimal "oh, if only my husband were like this," characterizations. When he is in sight, he doesn't seem to have any insight into himself.
And the "other man"! What a schuckmy guy posing as a deep and insightful fellow! The whole set up and definitely outcome is unbelievable and a letdown to this reader. The idea that he would find the wife character "strong" and "able to do X action as would no other" is just crazy.
The young girlfriend, the lesbian relationships, and the bi-ethnic family situations sound as if the author saw but didn't understand much out of Mississippi Masala. The good part is that the lovemaking scenes between two young girls was tastefully done, but the "young girl crushes" versus the committedly "lesbian" issues were barely touched. By the time I got to the playout of the murder it was so far, far clear that I expected a surprise or a deeper delving into the motivations.
It just came to me that none of these characters seem to have reasonable outcomes to their actions, although a better writing could have made them very strong.
Having said all that, I liked The Year of the Fog better than this one, but again it seemed as if the female adult's actions and insights were too surface. This book could have been made much better with a thorough re-writing rather than a re-publishing of a first novel. A great deal of the blame for that lies not just with the writer, but the editors/publishers.