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Irezlie
A curse of the moon forces Irezlie to kill and survive. The question is; can she stop herself from doing this every month the moon is full? With these dark poems Irezlie slowly finds out the truth of herself and the curse.
The Cliff
The Sailor in the Sea
The Man in the Jungle
The Man In a suit of Amour
(With two endings)
The Cliff
The Sailor in the Sea
The Man in the Jungle
The Man In a suit of Amour
(With two endings)
27 pages, ebook
First published January 1, 2012
3 people want to read
About the author
Laura Young
3 books17 followersOnce upon a time a writer was found. Never before had she liked writing, or reading for that matter. It all changed when she read the Harry Potter series. From there on the reader was found. Many years later the love of writing came along.
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July 27, 2012
Irezlie, by Laura Young.
The Cliff:
The author, Young, uses magnificent imagery and wording. I can clearly picture a setting of night, a man walking upon a cliff, close to the edge of a fire-winged bird calls to him with
The opening five lines suggests that the "it" could be a phoenix, as its wings are "ablaze", though Young misspells the word as "ab laze" which made it difficult to read.
Another thing that Young does that makes the reader lose focus is changing between upper and lowercase 'I" for "its" which should be lowercase if it is not the beginning of the line.
I would suggest a quick look-over by the author to fix spelling and grammatical errors, but overall I very much enjoyed this poem.
The Sailor in the Sea/The Man in the Jungle/The Man in a Suit of Armour:
All were tied to each other, along with The Cliff. It was brilliantly joined, telling a good story. I suggest the author look over it and correct all spelling and grammatical errors as there were quite a few. Also, maybe change the font to Times New Roman font size 13.
Overall: A good piece that is worth a one-time read.
4/5
The Cliff:
The author, Young, uses magnificent imagery and wording. I can clearly picture a setting of night, a man walking upon a cliff, close to the edge of a fire-winged bird calls to him with
The opening five lines suggests that the "it" could be a phoenix, as its wings are "ablaze", though Young misspells the word as "ab laze" which made it difficult to read.
Another thing that Young does that makes the reader lose focus is changing between upper and lowercase 'I" for "its" which should be lowercase if it is not the beginning of the line.
I would suggest a quick look-over by the author to fix spelling and grammatical errors, but overall I very much enjoyed this poem.
The Sailor in the Sea/The Man in the Jungle/The Man in a Suit of Armour:
All were tied to each other, along with The Cliff. It was brilliantly joined, telling a good story. I suggest the author look over it and correct all spelling and grammatical errors as there were quite a few. Also, maybe change the font to Times New Roman font size 13.
Overall: A good piece that is worth a one-time read.
4/5
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August 13, 2012
An amazing read. Once I started it I couldn't put it down until I finished and then I had to start it again just to re-read it. :)
July 31, 2012
An amazing read.
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